Thranduil Posted August 24, 2012 Report Share Posted August 24, 2012 [quote name='Russell Taurus Oxford' timestamp='1345779977' post='6011737'] Guh, I'm having trouble trying to write Russell's dialogue. Basically, I'm trying to have him say how his father, who was in the military, received an injury that forced him to retire, then, when he was at home watching a movie with 10-year-old Russell, he fell asleep and didn't wake up. I could just type anything, but I'd like it to... sound correct, for lack of a better term.... [/quote] Try to write it from the perspective of the 10 year old boy who lost his father that day. Make the reader feel the sadness that the 10 year old Russell felt when he finally understood that his father was gone forever. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
galesonic Posted August 24, 2012 Report Share Posted August 24, 2012 [quote name='Beginning446' timestamp='1345776619' post='6011698'] Oh Kori, poor, poor, Kori...run, run, as fast as you can, you can't escape us, cause we ate the gingerbread man lol [/quote] But how could you have eaten me if I'm still...oh wait. No! You ate my younger brother! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kingdom Xathers Posted August 24, 2012 Report Share Posted August 24, 2012 [quote name='galesonic' timestamp='1345782134' post='6011751'] But how could you have eaten me if I'm still...oh wait. No! You ate my younger brother! [/quote] Carla: [color=#ff0000]"And he was delicious~<3"[/color] *pulls out a mid-sized paper bag* [color=#ff0000]"Look, I still have some leftover pieces! You want some?"[/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
galesonic Posted August 24, 2012 Report Share Posted August 24, 2012 *looks in the bag* uhh. That's not my brother. That's Yugi. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Love of Ghibli Posted August 24, 2012 Report Share Posted August 24, 2012 As you can see Carla has been pretty busy....lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Admiral_Stalfos19 Posted August 24, 2012 Report Share Posted August 24, 2012 Ugh... dunno whether I should wait for Trimage to make his move with whatsisname or TFF to godmod Atsuko's way out or anything... What to do, what to do... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kingdom Xathers Posted August 24, 2012 Report Share Posted August 24, 2012 [quote name='galesonic' timestamp='1345783230' post='6011761'] *looks in the bag* uhh. That's not my brother. That's Yugi. [/quote] Carla: *double-checks* [color=#ff0000]"... hm... figures. No wonder it tasted like expensive hair gel...."[/color] (px) Me: In other news, I'm playing Soul Calibur 5, having Russell and Carla fight it out in a CPU vs CPU match. Should be interesting. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Merci Posted August 24, 2012 Report Share Posted August 24, 2012 Yuuto: [b]GRANDPA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!![/b] Anyways I don't think Trimage will post, Admiral. And TFF is sorta busy with college too, so I can't take control of Yuuto yet until Natsu ends their duel and can't advance the Protheus-Brian miniplot either. I'm also waiting for inspiration to lengthen my Archetype Earth post. Should I go about a ritual, or just do it anticlimatically and hand 'em over? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
galesonic Posted August 24, 2012 Report Share Posted August 24, 2012 Who's sets do they have. Somehow I thought Carla would have Tira's due to her kinda having a double-sided complex Edit: go for the ritual. It makes it more important Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kingdom Xathers Posted August 24, 2012 Report Share Posted August 24, 2012 [quote name='galesonic' timestamp='1345784064' post='6011777'] Who's sets do they have? Somehow I thought Carla would have Tira's due to her kinda having a double-sided complex [/quote] Wow, you guessed right. =3 Yeah, I gave Carla Tira's Moveset (and the Femme Fatale voice, natch), while Russell has the Devil Jin Moveset, since it's, like, the only bare-fisted moveset in the game. EDIT: As of this post, Carla's beating Russell two "5-out-of-9" Matches to zero. Also, go with a ritual, M.I. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Admiral_Stalfos19 Posted August 24, 2012 Report Share Posted August 24, 2012 @MI: So basically Yuri might as well summon Critias, and have him break through the seal and kill Albtrium or whoever Trimage's guy is? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Merci Posted August 24, 2012 Report Share Posted August 24, 2012 Okay, um...ideas for the ritual please? How should Arche go about it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Love of Ghibli Posted August 24, 2012 Report Share Posted August 24, 2012 Put us inside the Seal of Orichalcos and go all Revolutionaire Girl Utena on us and grab the stones from our hearts, that would be cool I think. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kingdom Xathers Posted August 24, 2012 Report Share Posted August 24, 2012 [quote name='Beginning446' timestamp='1345785734' post='6011798'] Put us inside the Seal of Orichalcos and go all Revolutionaire Girl Utena on us and grab the stones from our hearts, that would be cool I think. [/quote] Except she already took the stones off the throne... *shrugs* SCV Update: Carla's winning 5 to 1 Russell: [color=#000080]"... she's... kickin' my @$$!!!"[/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Merci Posted August 24, 2012 Report Share Posted August 24, 2012 Admiral; probably, but just in case, just knock Albtrum unconscious. Beginning; ...actually not a bad idea. I'll send them to an Orichalcum world where they'll have to duel against an Atlantean soldier Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kingdom Xathers Posted August 24, 2012 Report Share Posted August 24, 2012 [quote name='Merciful Idiot' timestamp='1345785936' post='6011801'] Beginning; ...actually not a bad idea. I'll send them to an Orichalcum world where they'll have to duel against an Atlantean soldier [/quote] Oooh! Awesome idea =3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Love of Ghibli Posted August 24, 2012 Report Share Posted August 24, 2012 That does sound entertaining a way for Lucas to see a glimpse of Atlantis...epic indeed...will they be using Atlanteans lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Merci Posted August 24, 2012 Report Share Posted August 24, 2012 xD I dunno. Should I control the opponent, or should you guys just control them yourselves? I also need to wait for TotalObelisk and Syria to post... ._. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kingdom Xathers Posted August 24, 2012 Report Share Posted August 24, 2012 ... and the matches end at 7-to-2 in Carla's favor. Russell: [color=#000080]TT__TT[/color] Carla: [color=#ff0000]>=3[/color] EDIT: I think we should control our opponent's, that way we could get it done without so many posts. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Premier Alexander Romanov Posted August 24, 2012 Author Report Share Posted August 24, 2012 Speaking of opponents, I posted. It's good to be back. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Admiral_Stalfos19 Posted August 24, 2012 Report Share Posted August 24, 2012 Yay. Now GM Atsuko's game of chance. My ability to post [i]depends[/i] on it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Love of Ghibli Posted August 24, 2012 Report Share Posted August 24, 2012 I agree I would like to control my opponent as it were it could lead to a thrilling display. That and I wouldn't have to use The Founder lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Merci Posted August 24, 2012 Report Share Posted August 24, 2012 Well, go on then. The Seal of Orichalcos is active for both players. The fishman can indeed speak English. [quote] Now GM Atsuko's game of chance. My ability to post [i]depends[/i] on it. [/quote] TFF just went to bed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Admiral_Stalfos19 Posted August 24, 2012 Report Share Posted August 24, 2012 Bugger, he was online an hour ago >:I Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TotalObelisk Posted August 24, 2012 Report Share Posted August 24, 2012 [quote name='Merciful Idiot' timestamp='1345787028' post='6011815'] xD I dunno. Should I control the opponent, or should you guys just control them yourselves? I also need to wait for TotalObelisk and Syria to post... ._. [/quote] Yeah, sorry about that. Time-zones and what not. It was pretty late over here when the site finally got working again so I pretty must posted and went straight to bed >< Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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