Alpakha Posted June 30, 2012 Report Share Posted June 30, 2012 AboutThis isn't the first set i made, but this is the first post. Plz rate my cards, my ocg isn't great, and also i accept all and any non offensive criticism. All the names are in Latin and "Ferus" means fierce, savaged or untamed. I used the sitehttp://latinwordfor.com/ and NON of these pictures are mine, i found them all on deviantart.com and google images. EDIT: I fixed any OCG eerors i found, plz tell me if there's more, and balance out any oped efects, so plz reply and rate Effect Monsters Effect: During your Main Phase, if you control a face up Beast-Warrior-Type monster, you can Special Summon this card from your Graveyard by sending the top 3 cards of your Deck to the Graveyard. If this effect was used, Banish this card when it leaves the field. This card can only be used as Synchro Material for the Synchro Summon of a "Ferus" Synchro monster. Effect: You can Special Summon this card from your Graveyard by Banishing 1 "Ferus" Monster card from your Graveyard. If this card was summoned this way, Banish it when it destroyed. Once per turn, if this card destroyed a monster by battle, this card can attack 1 more time. You can only control 1 "Ferus Cruentus". Effect: When this card is send from your Deck to the Graveyard, you can Special Summon 1 level 4 or lower "Ferus" monster card from your Graveyard (except this card). When this card is Banished from the Graveyard, you can send 1 "Ferus" monster card from your Deck to the Graveyard. Effect: When a face up "Ferus" monster you control battles, you can Banish this card from your Graveyard (during the Damage Step), and have your monster gain 1500 ATK points until the End Phase. This effect can only be used during either player's turn. This effect can only be used once per turn. Synchro Monsters Effect: 1 "Ferus" Tuner monster + 1 or more non-Tuner monstersWhen this card destroys a monster by battle you can banish that monster instead of sending it to the Graveyard. If this effect was successfully used, banish 1 card from your Graveyard or Banish this card. Effect: 1 Tuner monster + 1 or more Beast-Warrior-Type monsterWhen this card attacks a Defense Position monster, inflict piercing damage to your opponent. Once per turn, if this card destroys a Defense Position monster by battle, it can attack 1 more time. Effect: 1 "Ferus" Tuner monster + 1 or more Beast-Warrior-Type monstersOnce per turn, by banishing 1 card from your Graveyard, you can Special Summon 1 level 4 or lower "Ferus" monster from your Banish Pile in Defense Position. That Special Summoned Monster card is Banished during the End Phase of this turn. This card cannot attack during the turn you use this effect. Effect: 1 "Ferus" Tuner monster + 1 or more non-Tuner Beast-Warrior-Type monstersWhen this card destroys a monster by battle, you can Special Summon 1 level 6 or lower "Ferus" monster card from your Banish Pile. During your End Phase, if this card destroyed a monster by battle this turn, you can tribute 1 other Beast-Warrior-Type monster you control to draw 2 cards. This effect cannot be used more than once per turn. Effect: 1 "Ferus" Tuner monster + 1 non-Tuner Synchro monsterIf this card were to be destroyed (except by battle), you can banish 1 "Ferus" monster card from your Graveyard instead. At the End Phase of each turn (if this card destroyed a monster by battle this turn) you can target 1 card in your opponent's Graveyard or on his/her side of the field and Banish it. Effect: 2 "Ferus" Tuner monster + 1 "Ferus" non-Tuner Synchro monsterThis card is unaffected by your opponent's Traps and monster effects. This card cannot attack unless you send the top 3 cards of your Deck to the Graveyard. During each of your End Phases, Banish 1 card from your Graveyard or otherwise Banish this card. When this card destroys your opponent's monster by battle, you can target 1 "Ferus" card in your Deck and send it to either your Graveyard or your hand. You can only control 1 "Ferus Omnipotens Deus". This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Synchro Summoning. Spells/Traps Effect: When activated, equip this card to a face up "Ferus" Monster card you control. The equipped monster gains 200 ATK points. When the equipped monster attacks, your opponent cannot activate any Spell or Trap cards. If the equipped monster is targeted by a monster's effect, target that monster, send this card to the Graveyard, then negate that target's effect(s) and destroy it. GlossaryAnimus: Courage, Vivacity, SpiritArcus: Bow (as in bow and arrows)Calco: To Tread, Trample UponCeler: Rapid, Swift, SpeedyCompello: Force, CompelCornu: HornCruentus: Bloody, Blood ThirstyCyaneus: BlueDecerto: Fight to the EndDeus: GodEffugio: Escape, Elude, Flee FromFerrum: Sword, IronFrendo: Crush, Bruise, GrindImmunda: Dirty, Foul, UncleanLacerta: LizardLupus: WolfLoricatus: Armored, Wearing ArmorMIles Militis: Warrior, KnightMucro: Dagger Ponit, Sharp EdgeNox Noctus (I took out the "Nox" in the card names): NightOmnipotens: All- Powerful, AlmightyPalma: PalmPotens: Mighty, PowerfulPusillus: Tiny, PunyQuorum: ArmySantus: Sacred, HolySpicullum: Sharp Point, Spear, Sting, DartVallum: Palisade, Earthen Wall, EntrenchmentVulnero: Wound, Injure, Harm, Hurt Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alpakha Posted July 1, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 1, 2012 Plz reply and rate ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DrunkenSage69 Posted July 1, 2012 Report Share Posted July 1, 2012 I like the set and the idea of a newer version of "Lightsworns." This set has some good possibilities but has some few minor problems which can be fixed easily:Cards need some more in depth OCG work (such as saying "sent to the Gravyard" instead of just "Grave")Some minor grammar problemsLook over your Synchro Monsters. Some are a little OPed in my opinion.I really like your idea and the pics a lot. They fit well for the archetype. If you need help with OCG, just PM me and I'll do my best :). Overall: 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alpakha Posted July 2, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 2, 2012 Thx, lol i put grave cua well i'm lazy and i remember seeing some cards that say grave instead of graveyard. Thx for the help with OCG, i rlly appreciate and i'll try to make syncs less oped can u plz tell me which? Edit: I made some changes, then the website went funky again o.0 and more changes to come. Plz tell me which cards specifically need changing thk you :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sportzfreak430 Posted July 2, 2012 Report Share Posted July 2, 2012 This looks really well put together. You clearly put a lot of time into it :) I like it! Also, where did you get the pictures? EDIT: Found it, never mind haha. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sora1499 Posted July 2, 2012 Report Share Posted July 2, 2012 I like them! They seem well thought out and balanced. Except for maybe Cruentus. I could foresee someone taking advantage of its spammy regeneration effect. Maybe you could change it to be like "500 LP and 1 'Ferus"" or something. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jakeman541 Posted July 2, 2012 Report Share Posted July 2, 2012 i like all of them because none of them are super powerful and they are all balanced. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alpakha Posted July 2, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 2, 2012 Cards edited, some cards have tiny detail changes (like new conditions to activate effects or grammar) while others were heavily changed (though they still have their original effects, just watered down). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alpakha Posted July 4, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 4, 2012 Bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Alpakha Posted July 6, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 6, 2012 Bump, anymore comments people xP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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luciferthegreat Posted July 11, 2012 Report Share Posted July 11, 2012 nicei really thought you tied the theme in well good work. Btw love the artwork! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alpakha Posted July 17, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 17, 2012 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
homerunbom12 Posted July 19, 2012 Report Share Posted July 19, 2012 Another great set by you...great job Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alpakha Posted July 21, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 21, 2012 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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DrunkenSage69 Posted July 22, 2012 Report Share Posted July 22, 2012 I saw the changes you made. Great job on the OCG fixes, most of them are near perfect. I can't wait to see another set by you man. Keep up the good work :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alpakha Posted July 22, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 22, 2012 I saw the changes you made. Great job on the OCG fixes, most of them are near perfect. I can't wait to see another set by you man. Keep up the good work :DThank you, also, the finished sets forum is filled with a bunch of my cards.....the few top rows maybe... xP. I might fine tune the ocg as i see where i made many errors, and i will ignore future posts telling me to fix my ocg as i will once i stop procrastinating :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DrunkenSage69 Posted July 22, 2012 Report Share Posted July 22, 2012 Thank you, also, the finished sets forum is filled with a bunch of my cards.....the few top rows maybe... xP. I might fine tune the ocg as i see where i made many errors, and i will ignore future posts telling me to fix my ocg as i will once i stop procrastinating :PThank you, also, the finished sets forum is filled with a bunch of my cards.....the few top rows maybe... xP. I might fine tune the ocg as i see where i made many errors, and i will ignore future posts telling me to fix my ocg as i will once i stop procrastinating :PLol alright man I'll go check them all out.BTW, I <3 ponies XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alpakha Posted July 22, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 22, 2012 Lol alright man I'll go check them all out.BTW, I <3 ponies XD Thx dude, just for that i (maybe) got ur back the next time u need me. also /)........... bronies unite! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alpakha Posted July 24, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 24, 2012 WHy is the FS forum so dead =P, bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DrunkenSage69 Posted July 26, 2012 Report Share Posted July 26, 2012 WHy is the FS forum so dead =P, bumpBecause people can't find good images or are too lazy to make them lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BoomSlang Posted July 26, 2012 Report Share Posted July 26, 2012 I love this set i love the first card alot becaue it has a cool effect that you could use in many ways the sycros banishing effects are really cool but you should give the normals some banishing effect i give u a 9 :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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