Desu the Blue Nerd Posted June 17, 2012 Report Share Posted June 17, 2012 [color=#0000CD]Did I miss anything or is there anything I need to change?[/color] [color=#0000CD]Prewarning: pictures are pretty big.[/color] [spoiler=Da App With Typical Desuness] [b][u]Personal Info[/u][/b] Username: #1 Fan of Super Mega Ultra Lord Of All Things Fluffy…also apparently King of all things Bright and Fluffy…**** Name: Tolv Age: 17 Gender: Male Date of Birth: June 23rd Blood Type: A Hobby(s): Anything relating to violence such as training, fighting, action movies, shows (including certain anime), and video games (in which Kat tends to be his greatest rival in). Aspect: Action [spoiler=Appearance] [img]http://wallpaper.goodfon.com/image/293578-2048x1152.jpg[/img] Tolv doesn’t actually have his hair that long. It’s basically that except with the hair that goes down so low. He wears a shorter version of the jacket that ends above his waist instead of the presumably longer standard. It should also be noted that he wears his jacket open revealing a dark blue t-shirt with a black picture resembling the chamber of a revolver on it. Like the female uniform he has the collar bent down. He tends to claim the collar up just gets in the way. Instead of the white dress pants he prefers them black. Another addition to his attire is a belt lined with bullets for his revolver along with a holster on each of his sides for his revolvers. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Personality] Tolv is known as the most aggressive of all of the members in Unit 13. He’s the most prone to use “colorful” language as some might call it and resort to violence as a way to solve problems instead of something silly like words. Despite acting in a rude and quite vicious manner Tolv’s intelligence isn’t all that inferior to the remaining members. He ranks somewhere around the middle in terms of I.Q. among the group. Despite that he has always preferred an “actions speak louder than words” philosophy in life and he has the tendency to focus on combat rather than any sort of academic work. It also explains his “stronger” language as in if he’s going to use words they might as well be the ones with the greatest impacts. A.K.A. Swear words. Of course he is not limited to them. Despite all this he’s actually very caring of the other members in Unit 13 even though he really may not seem like it in most cases and in most cases swear at them just as much as anybody else. As mentioned though words though are nearly meaningless to him compared to actions taken and he tends to prove how much he cares for his teammates in combat by always having their backs or by always being willing to help them train or sometimes join in on their personal hobbies…as long as it isn’t what he’d deem completely boring which is pretty much anything not involving violence or plenty of movement. [/spoiler] [b][u]Combat Info[/u][/b] [spoiler=Primary Weapon] [img]http://fc02.deviantart.net/fs25/i/2008/067/a/8/Beretta_Revolver_by_Z_man12.jpg[/img] He wields two twin revolvers both resembling the gun in the picture. He calls the set [b]Gemini[/b] but when he gets into more detail he’ll refer to them individually by the names[b] Castor [/b]and [b]Pollux[/b]. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Fighting Style] Out of the three ranged fighters Tolv has the highest firing rate and ammunition capacity (Kat having two bullets and Trece only having one arrow versus the six bullets that Tolv has in each of his guns). His maximum range and power of his bullets also falls in between the two. Where he really begins to fall behind the other two is his reload speed and the fact that he carries less bullets on him at all times. Because of that he has to be somewhat savvier with his ammunition which he does by spending a lot of his time in close quarters so when he shoots he’s less likely to miss and he may also engage in melee combat as to not use his bullets exclusively to gain kills or knockouts. Using two guns at one point also causes a loss of accuracy as it is difficult for the average person to have a steady aim with two guns although Tolv’s proficiency is high enough that this isn’t really that much of a problem for him anymore. In most cases he’s able to point his revolvers in two different directions and still hit some close range targets fine and then quickly switch to two other targets at close range and hit them fine. It’s when doing this at more of a longer range that things become difficult. His actual combat style is a bit unorthodox as mentioned before he mixes together melee and ranged combat so he’s constantly switching back and forth between the two. It’s actually somewhat hard to tell if he’s about to smack you across the face a bunch of times with his revolver, use a single bullet…or twelve, or just chuck his gun at your face. All of which being able to deal sometimes lethal amounts of damage but it’s obvious to say his damage caused in melee combat easily trails behind that of all the members specializing in it. Tolv has a high amount of maneuverability and movement speed that surpasses that of even Eight. He also a very high attack speed but that is surpassed by some of the other members, most notably Dis who leads in those regards but also somebody like Eight and possibly Ace. As mentioned before his actual melee strength is quite low and in intense combat he may actually fail to kill an enemy by using a melee move. Not to mention his reach with it is only slightly longer than Eight yet somewhat slower and much weaker. His defense is also incredibly low so he relies on his speed to avoid attacks. Another disadvantage he faces is one he tends to bring upon himself. As mentioned in personality he is the single most aggressive of all the members and therefore tends to be the first to jump into action even if it’s an obvious trap with a large group of enemies. It should also be noted that due to his weapon along with his combat style and willingness to fight whenever he makes a great training partner for pretty much any other member. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Secondary Weapon(s) & Equipment] [/spoiler] [spoiler=Special Techniques] Rebound- Tolv chucks or kicks his revolver at something. Afterwards the revolver will act as a boomerang and return to him unless it hits something. In that case if enough force was put into it then the revolver will rebound off the target and return to him. Refraction- Tolv fires a shot that bounces off one or many hard surfaces to hit a target. The amount of concentration and thought needed to pull off this technique scales with the amount of times the bullet bounces off a surface. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Magic] Reflection-Reflection is a magic technique that also acts as Tolv’s best source of defense. A small barrier is created for a split second that is able to completely reflect a few weaker attacks or at least least able to limit damage taken from a strong attack to a degree while still possibly reflecting some of the damage back. The skill is most effective against ranged attacks such as bullets or magic as melee attacks appear harder to reflect. [/spoiler] [/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ListenToLife Posted June 17, 2012 Report Share Posted June 17, 2012 I saw the Not-Accepting, I just also saw that it had been created about half an hour ago(when I posted), and was wondering what type of RP was full after half an hour. Anyway, I'll keep following this, merely because it seems interesting. (And to stalk every last one of you until a spot opens, kekeke >:] ) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Blu:. Posted June 17, 2012 Author Report Share Posted June 17, 2012 Desu, just excellent man... Very good app ^^ I really enjoy reading your fighting style, it's really in-depth and you mentioned some of the other characters for comparisons so bonus points for you. The overall highlights for me are fighting style, personality, and primary weapon. However, there is one thing that needs to be changed in your app and that is you cannot change the color of the dress pants. Anyways, I'll change that for you so you don't have to edit it. Accepted. KCNameless, thanks for the interest in it and you can surely follow it if you want but I'm sure there won't be any spots open any time in the future :/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ListenToLife Posted June 17, 2012 Report Share Posted June 17, 2012 I can hope! (Dont crush my dreams XD) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Blu:. Posted June 17, 2012 Author Report Share Posted June 17, 2012 Alright, pretend I didn't say anything xP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyng's Old Account Posted June 18, 2012 Report Share Posted June 18, 2012 We're waiting on, if I am correct, Aisu's to show up, no? If I haven't already said it, I adore Sei's personality (because Desu = Desu, simple as[s]s[/s]) but, without a doubt, Tolv's hair is beast; why've you got it short, Desu? Curious, is all. ...I just noticed Hotaru misspelled Trey. .__. *loads shotgun* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Desu the Blue Nerd Posted June 18, 2012 Report Share Posted June 18, 2012 [quote name='Kyng' timestamp='1340015981' post='5958623'] We're waiting on, if I am correct, Aisu's to show up, no? If I haven't already said it, I adore Sei's personality (because Desu = Desu, simple as[s]s[/s]) but, without a doubt, Tolv's hair is beast; why've you got it short, Desu? Curious, is all. ...I just noticed Hotaru misspelled Trey. .__. *loads shotgun* [/quote] [color=#0000CD]I just meant he doesn't have it that incredibly long. Not actually short.[/color] [color=#0000CD]And thanks, Blu. ^__^[/color] [color=#0000CD]I figured since his aspect is action he should be more violent due to his love for action oriented things. Kind of why I went with the basic Desu a****** kind of guy.[/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyng's Old Account Posted June 18, 2012 Report Share Posted June 18, 2012 By no means am I complaining, I love your ass...characters; they're always perky, firm, but if you smack them around enough, they'll give way. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Blu:. Posted June 18, 2012 Author Report Share Posted June 18, 2012 I agree Kyng, I really love Sei's personality, very unique and new. However, that doesn't mean old is not welcome. I was actually hoping for Desu to make a violent, a**holish character, it just makes Unit 13 that much better with all types of different personalities. Finally, I noticed Hotaru misspelled Trey as well... I'll let Kyng handle this one... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Desu the Blue Nerd Posted June 18, 2012 Report Share Posted June 18, 2012 [color=#0000CD]Yeah, I expected you wanted me to. It was a personality type missing from the rest of the bunch. I couldn't resis filling it in.[/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Elƒie Posted June 18, 2012 Report Share Posted June 18, 2012 Sorry about not having the app up yet. Yesterday was miserable: heat + sickness = FML. As for today, I just got back from the doctors. Got some anti-bods and some cough pearls. I also figured out what kinda of magic Sheva's gonna have~ X3 Got some inspiration from Fairy Tail~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Blu:. Posted June 18, 2012 Author Report Share Posted June 18, 2012 It's fine Aisu and I hope you get better really soon. I'll be looking forward to see what kind of magic you have in store for Sheva. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Elƒie Posted June 19, 2012 Report Share Posted June 19, 2012 [spoiler=Dun look! It's not done yet!][spoiler=I SAID NOT TOO LOOK!][spoiler=And yet.. You still continue..][spoiler=How long are you going to keep this up?][spoiler=...][spoiler=Fine.. You can look..][spoiler= LOL. Alright.. I really mean it, have a look.][spoiler=App (WIP)][img]http://i382.photobucket.com/albums/oo261/AisuGhost/Closeup.png[/img] [i]"If we can't even trust our parents, then who can we trust?"[/i] [b][u]Personal Info[/u][/b] Username: **** Name: Sheva Age: 17 Gender: Female Date of Birth: [acronym=no, I'm not narcissistic]Dec. 7th[/acronym] Blood Type: A+ Hobby(s): Haunted item collecting and currently learning the harp. Aspect: Trust [spoiler=Appearance][img]http://fc06.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2012/162/9/7/sheva__oc__by_nakia_valkov-d5365fs.png[/img][/spoiler] [spoiler=Personality]Being only 4' 7", Sheva is definitely sensitive about her height, but not in an "awww.. why would you say that" kind of way. Instead, Sheva's short temper goes off and she's ready to pick a fight. It's not just her height that flares up her temper, sadly. Stupidity, lack of common sense, nonsense, and a few other things tick her off. Despite often being seen as immature most of the time, Sheva actually thinks ahead and more thoroughly than most people that are twice her age. In fact, Sheva thinks way too far ahead and too thoroughly, often leading her to imagine up scenarios that are almost impossible, but still have a slight chance of happening. As for her personality, aspect wise, Sheva represents the entire coin we call trust. On one side, when Sheva trusts someone, she trusts them 110%. So far, there's only one person she completely trusts and that's Trey. With his personality and aspect, she knows Trey would never knowingly or willing betray her. On the other side of the coin, Sheva has a hard time trusting anyone, even the rest of the members of Unit 13. This leads to the grey area of Sheva's trust, the small area that binds both sides. Having grown up with Unit 13, aside from Trey, she doesn't completely trust the others, but just enough to be able to go on missions with them. Only when it's needed, of course.[/spoiler] [b][u]Combat Info[/u][/b] [spoiler=Primary Weapon][img]http://i382.photobucket.com/albums/oo261/AisuGhost/Septyni.png[/img] Septyni is special whip sword that runs on magic. When no magic is being fed into it, its a [acronym=Top one sword what it looks like]normal[/acronym] 5' sword. When magic is fed into it, however, Septyni initially breaks up into 7 segments and can then be used as the whip sword it is with a reach of 10 feet. If more magic is fed into it then what's initially needed, the seven segments will break again into a total of 14 segments with a range of 15 feet max.[/spoiler] Fighting Style: Sheva's fighting style with her whip sword is to be as close to her opponent without being within their range of attack. Like with any other whip, there's a slight recovery time Sheva has after launching an attack that can leave an a small opening for her opponent, but after fighting with this sword for her whole life, the opening is very small and she's worked out ways around this issue. Another weakness with this fighting style is the weapon itself. If both magical connectors between two segments is disturbed by a separate source of magic, the segments will fall apart from each other and takes about [acronym=10 for when its 7 segments and 20 for when its 14 segments]10-20[/acronym] seconds before the segments are rejoined. Secondary Weapon(s) & Equipment: Special Technique(s): Magic: [/spoiler][/spoiler][/spoiler][/spoiler][/spoiler][/spoiler][/spoiler][/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Blu:. Posted June 19, 2012 Author Report Share Posted June 19, 2012 I looked, and it's looking amazing so far ^^ (albeit all of this unprofessionalism in apps is kinda getting annoying. I believe Kyng is the only one who made an app in the professional matter -___-) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Elƒie Posted June 19, 2012 Report Share Posted June 19, 2012 It's only unprofessional because you LOOKED when told NOT to. XP Just sayin'.. Lol. But yeah, I'll have it finished tomorrow. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Desu the Blue Nerd Posted June 19, 2012 Report Share Posted June 19, 2012 [quote name='.:Blu:.' timestamp='1340082682' post='5959091'] I looked, and it's looking amazing so far ^^ (albeit all of this unprofessionalism in apps is kinda getting annoying. I believe Kyng is the only one who made an app in the professional matter -___-) [/quote] [color=#0000CD]What'd I do wrong? :/[/color] [color=#0000CD]Amnd the app is looking good so far, Aisu. >:3[/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Blu:. Posted June 19, 2012 Author Report Share Posted June 19, 2012 It's not that it's not finished, it's just you guys put random things in certain parts of the app, like Hotaru and Desu putting the Lord Fluffy something (I forgot) in their username and you put "Male ( ಠ____ಠ) Nah, just teasing. Sheva's a girl." in the gender part. It's just unprofessional to me :/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Desu the Blue Nerd Posted June 19, 2012 Report Share Posted June 19, 2012 [color=#0000CD]Please tell me this is another one of your jokes and you don't seriously care that much about it. [/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Blu:. Posted June 19, 2012 Author Report Share Posted June 19, 2012 I care a little bit and I can certainly do without them, but overall, it won't affect my accepting of apps of course. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Elƒie Posted June 19, 2012 Report Share Posted June 19, 2012 Thanks Desu. And Blu, I meant what I said. It's only unprofessional in a few spots because it's not done. When it is done, those'll be gone. Since the app's lacking, I like to add in those little extras to make up for it being not finished. Lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Blu:. Posted June 19, 2012 Author Report Share Posted June 19, 2012 Like I said, it bothers me a little, but I'm not going to force you guys to get rid of it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Elƒie Posted June 19, 2012 Report Share Posted June 19, 2012 Done~ [spoiler=Sheva][img]http://i382.photobucket.com/albums/oo261/AisuGhost/Closeup.png[/img] [i]"If we can't even trust our parents, then who can we trust?"[/i] [b][u]Personal Info[/u][/b] Username: **** Name: Sheva Age: 17 Gender: Female Date of Birth: [acronym=no, I'm not narcissistic]Dec. 7th[/acronym] Blood Type: A+ Hobby(s): Haunted item collecting and currently learning the harp. Aspect: Trust [spoiler=Appearance][img]http://fc06.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2012/162/9/7/sheva__oc__by_nakia_valkov-d5365fs.png[/img][/spoiler] [spoiler=Personality]Being only 4' 7", Sheva is definitely sensitive about her height, but not in an "awww.. why would you say that" kind of way. Instead, Sheva's short temper goes off and she's ready to pick a fight. It's not just her height that flares up her temper, sadly. Stupidity, lack of common sense, nonsense, and a few other things tick her off. Despite often being seen as immature most of the time, Sheva actually thinks ahead and more thoroughly than most people that are twice her age. In fact, Sheva thinks way too far ahead and too thoroughly, often leading her to imagine up scenarios that are almost impossible, but still have a slight chance of happening. As for her personality, aspect wise, Sheva represents the entire coin we call trust. On one side, when Sheva trusts someone, she trusts them 110%. So far, there's only one person she completely trusts and that's Trey. With his personality and aspect, she knows Trey would never knowingly or willing betray her. On the other side of the coin, Sheva has a hard time trusting anyone, even the rest of the members of Unit 13. This leads to the grey area of Sheva's trust, the small area that binds both sides. Having grown up with Unit 13, aside from Trey, she doesn't completely trust the others, but just enough to be able to go on missions with them. Only when it's needed, of course.[/spoiler] [b][u]Combat Info[/u][/b] [spoiler=Primary Weapon][img]http://i382.photobucket.com/albums/oo261/AisuGhost/Septyni.png[/img] Septyni is special whip sword that runs on magic. When no magic is being fed into it, its a [acronym=Top one sword what it looks like]normal[/acronym] 5' sword. When magic is fed into it, however, Septyni initially breaks up into 7 segments and can then be used as the whip sword it is with a reach of 10 feet. If more magic is fed into it then what's initially needed, the seven segments will break again into a total of 14 segments with a range of 15 feet max.[/spoiler] Fighting Style: Sheva's fighting style with her whip sword is to be as close to her opponent without being within their range of attack. Like with any other whip, there's a slight recovery time Sheva has after launching an attack that can leave an a small opening for her opponent, but after fighting with this sword for her whole life, the opening is very small and she's worked out ways around this issue. Another weakness with this fighting style is the weapon itself. If both magical connectors between two segments is disturbed by a separate source of magic, the segments will fall apart from each other and takes about [acronym=10 for when its 7 segments and 20 for when its 14 segments]10-20[/acronym] seconds before the segments are rejoined. Secondary Weapon(s) & Equipment: Besides Septyni, Sheva also carries a steel crown, a skull, a seahorse shaped ocarina, and a king chess piece that's half black half white. Special Technique(s): Red Ribbon- As a finishing move, Sheva will wrap Septyni around the opponent and give it a quick tug, shredding the opponent into ribbons. [spoiler=Magic]When Sheva was young, she came across a strange pocket watch that was haunted by a spirit of a groom who died when he tripped down a flight of stairs as he checked his watch to make sure he would reach his wedding in time. Well, we all know how that turned out.. Since finding that watch, Sheva began to collect objects that were haunted. She eventually came across an item that was actually cursed and somehow, Sheva was able to make a contact with the demon that cursed it. Now, instead of learning spells, Sheva saves her magic energy to summon out her demonic familiars. So far, out of her huge collection, she only has 4 demons which are listed in ascending power. [url="http://i825.photobucket.com/albums/zz178/JazinKay/Demons/bgfhjdsgbfdsga.jpg"]Ningyo[/url]: Ningyo is actually a fairly powerful mermaid demon. But due to the fact that she needs to be near/in water, her usefulness places her at the bottom of the list for strength. Manipulating water, Ningyo is able to move it to her will. She can even have it boil or freeze into her ice, if she wished. To summon Ningyo, Sheva must play a specific melody on the seahorse shaped ocarina she carries around. Once Ningyo is out, as long as Sheva plays the ocarina and has magical energy, Ningyo will stay out; usually 30 minutes max, assuming Ningyo doesn't use up Sheva's magic energy too fast to boil/freeze the water. [url="http://i825.photobucket.com/albums/zz178/JazinKay/Demons/gfdsabgjfdshdf.jpg"]Haiiro[/url]: Haiiro was the first demon Sheva came across. Manipulating holes in the dimensions, Haiiro is able to teleport himself, attacks or objects around. Usually, he does this in ways that mimic the moving abilities of chess pieces like the Knight, Bishop, and Rook. To summon out Haiiro, Sheva must cut the king chess piece straight down the middle, separating the black from the white. She must then proceed to cut them up into diamonds. From there, the diamonds begin to glow, grow and rearrange themselves into the body shape of Haiiro as the rest of his body pop out from there. Using Sheva's magical energy to manipulate the dimension holes, as long as he doesn't get carried away with how often or how heavy/strong the object/attack he teleports, he generate stays out for about 30 minutes as well during combat. If Sheva has him out for company or [acronym=due to his wide range of knowledge]advise[/acronym], he can stay out almost for 8 hours. [url="http://i825.photobucket.com/albums/zz178/JazinKay/Demons/bfdsafdsDFS.png"]Agari[/url]: An evil witch-doctor that was reincarnated into a demon, Agari is one of the trickier demons to summon. Taking the [acronym=the one he's holding in the pic]skull[/acronym], Sheva must then fill the skull with her magical energy until it begins to crack. From there, she tosses it into the air and Agari emerges from the Underworld to catch the skull and uses it power his dark magic. Depending how Sheva packed the magic into the skull, the skull with allow Agari to use magic for 15 minutes if she quickly and loosely packed the magic into the skull. If Sheva took her time and packed it with condensed down energy, Agari has stayed out for an hour one time. From there, once the skull is drained of magic energy, Agari will either go back, or he'll stay and watch the rest of the fight. [url="http://i825.photobucket.com/albums/zz178/JazinKay/Demons/fdbgbfgxbnxf.png"]Ryuuhime[/url]: Being a demon dragon, Ryuuhime is the strongest demon Sheva has a contract with. She's also the most dangerous demon for Sheva to summon. In order for Sheva to summon Ryuuhime, she must place the crown on her head and let Ryuuhime possess her body. From there, both Sheva's body and Septyni are transformed as Ryuuhime takes over. After that, Sheva must be careful on what she lets Ryuuhime do and how much of her magical energy gets drained before attempting to take back control. With Ryuuhime having the love of fighting, destruction and blood, she's never willing to go back to the Underworld. This'll lead to a fight of will between Sheva and Ryuuhime and if Sheva is too worn out from the amount of magical energy that she lost because of Ryuuhime and if Sheva ever loses this battle of will, lets say it'll be the last thing Sheva will ever do.. [/spoiler][/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Blu:. Posted June 19, 2012 Author Report Share Posted June 19, 2012 App's amazing, love all of your summons Aisu, especially Ryuuhime and I'm not just saying that because she has big boobs... ^^' Accepted~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Elƒie Posted June 19, 2012 Report Share Posted June 19, 2012 Thanks Blu. n_n And yay~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Blu:. Posted June 19, 2012 Author Report Share Posted June 19, 2012 Now off to go do something drastic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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