Canopy Star - Eon Sphere Posted May 2, 2013 Report Share Posted May 2, 2013 [spoiler=Joining in the fun] Alright, OK, I'm here, even though there's no duel to correct. ... Only kidding! I don't get nearly as much of a kick out of that as you think. Onward! I must say, I was ready for Hayate to be all 'ooh, more powerful guy coming to steal the show', but Lucien actually being the 'final boss' of D-Accel is good. I was worried, because you brought Hayate back so close to the end and it seemed as if he was going to hijack the whole thing, and well, no worries there. I was a little put off by the lack of dueling. I mean, cut me some slack, I am on a Yu-Gi-Oh forum. But honestly, this still impressed me, as all your fights do. Seriously, I am really into the whole setup of fights you have, and I can't wait to see the Stage system carry over into D-Accel II. It is, by a long shot, my favourite method of combat I have read so far. I do hope that Stage V techniques are actually used in D-Accel II, because it seems that nobody can pull them off in an impressive manner. I mean, Alice got her's countered by Calion easily, and Lucien's (which seemed like an awesome end for him) got negated by Number 8, who seems to be a Guardian of some kind, using techniques called Forbidden Seals. Ooh, spooky. I also hope that more Numbers are personified, maybe as more of the residents of the mysterious Erebos. Props to you, I'm even more psyched to read D-Accel II than I was before. [/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Synchronized Posted May 3, 2013 Author Report Share Posted May 3, 2013 There was a lot of back and forth about whether or not we were going to end it with a duel. For a lot of reasons the idea was appealing, but at the same time there was no need for it. I fully understand the relevance of the duels and how useful of a plot device it can be, however the fight was the most emotional/strong way to bring this to a close. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bury the year Posted May 7, 2013 Report Share Posted May 7, 2013 Locked by request. Congrats for finishing your story. :'3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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