signerleo Posted June 9, 2012 Report Share Posted June 9, 2012 The year is 2022...It was 1 year ago that Yusei beat Z-ONE and saved the world, but not everyone was happy that Z-ONE was defeated. A man in the shadows, who had seen the whole duel, went to work on fixing Z-ONE's machine. His work completed, the man said, "I will jump to the future and return with Dark Signers to create a new Yliaster!" Meanwhile, not much had changed for the Signers...Leo found himself a girlfriend named Ashley, and Luna had begun seeing Lester. Yusei, with the power of the Crimson Dragon, was able to rescue his friend Bruno from the death course; reuniting Team 5D's. Things couldn't be going better for them, in fact, Jack had just challenged Yusei to a rematch. "I'll make the first move, Yusei," said Jack."Now hold on, you guys! You're going to have put the duel on hold," yelled Trudge, riding up next to them. "The Ghost is back and he has a message for you Signers! It seems he's not alone either - he's got that Jack doppelganger with him too!""So what?", said Jack, cocky as ever, "we'll just beat those chumps again.""That's not all, Jack, it seems you're not the only one with a clone. There's one of Akiza that looks like the Black Rose Witch, one of Leo, Luna, Crow, Yusei, and even Ashley!" Trudge was having just as hard a time believing it as they were. "What? No way! How did the Ghost do that?," asked Leo."Well, Leo," Trudge responded, "the Ghost was controlled by Primo before, so I bet he has something to do with it."Luna turned to Ashley, "He's right." Soon after, Leo duels the Ghost and wins. Yusei, Jack and Crow are able to beat their clones, however, Leo, Luna, Akiza and Ashley are defeated; forced into bed to recover."Leo, Luna, Ashley, Akiza, you four are going to have to master Accel Synchro if you hope to defeat your clones. If you can't, you'll wind up defeated again, and this time, you might not make it back," said Yusei."I hope Luna and the others will be ok," said Lester."They will be fine," said Crow,"soon." The four recover and Luna, Akiza and Ashley manage to defeat their clones. Leo had begun to face off against his."You cannot defeat me, you have yet to master Delta Accel Synchro. The same with those other fools, you can barely manage Accel Synchro! And even if you did manage to beat me, it's not like you can save the city, the master has Dark Signers and Yliaster on his side, and they're a lot stronger than the ones you fought before!" -In this RP, the Dark Signers have returned along with Yliaster. It wont be the same members you all know, but you may use any character from the show including the old Yliaster and Dark Signer members. Yusei - Stardust DragonJack - Red Dragon ArchfiendCrow - Black-Winged DragonAkiza - Black Rose DragonLuna - Ancient Fairy DragonLeo - Life Stream DragonAshley (OC) - Red Blizzard Dragon If you lose your duel with a Dark Signer, you can only be knocked out. I want to make it right so everyone can stilll use their character. You can get a rematch with a Dark Signer if you want to, but not right after losing.You have to wait a bit, first.You can use any cards from, the show or manga, and you can also use made up cards. The first Dark Signer is named Toby, the other 8 have not been picked yet.Go ahead, join in, pick who you want play as and what Dark Signer you want to face.Your original characters can join too. They can either help the Signers, or side with the Dark Signers, it's up to you. This RP is rated PG - 13. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Expelsword Posted June 10, 2012 Report Share Posted June 10, 2012 Before you write a story, make sure you can speak the language you are writing in. The year is 2022...It was 1 year ago that Yusei beat Z-ONE and saved the world, but not everyone was happy that Z-ONE was defeated. A man in the shadows, who had seen the whole duel, went to work on fixing Z-ONE's machine. His work completed, the man said, "I will jump to the future and return with Dark Signers to create a new Yliaster!" Meanwhile, not much had changed for the Signers...Leo found himself a girlfriend named Ashley, and Luna had begun seeing Lester. Yusei, with the power of the Crimson Dragon, was able to rescue his friend Bruno from the death course; reuniting Team 5D's. Things couldn't be going better for them, in fact, Jack had just challenged Yusei to a rematch. "I'll make the first move, Yusei," said Jack."Now hold on, you guys! You're going to have put the duel on hold," yelled Trudge, riding up next to them. "The Ghost is back and he has a message for you Signers! It seems he's not alone either - he's got that Jack doppelganger with him too!""So what?", said Jack, cocky as ever, "we'll just beat those chumps again.""That's not all, Jack, it seems you're not the only one with a clone. There's one of Akiza that looks like the Black Rose Witch, one of Leo, Luna, Crow, Yusei, and even Ashley!" Trudge was having just as hard a time believing it as they were. "What? No way! How did the Ghost do that?," asked Leo."Well, Leo," Trudge responded, "the Ghost was controlled by Primo before, so I bet he has something to do with it."Luna turned to Ashley, "He's right." Soon after, Leo duels the Ghost and wins. Yusei, Jack and Crow are able to beat their clones, however, Leo, Luna, Akiza and Ashley are defeated; forced into bed to recover."Leo, Luna, Ashley, Akiza, you four are going to have to master Accel Synchro if you hope to defeat your clones. If you can't, you'll wind up defeated again, and this time, you might not make it back," said Yusei."I hope Luna and the others will be ok," said Lester."They will be fine," said Crow,"soon." The four recover and Luna, Akiza and Ashley manage to defeat their clones. Leo had begun to face off against his."You cannot defeat me, you have yet to master Delta Accel Synchro. The same with those other fools, you can barely manage Accel Synchro! And even if you did manage to beat me, it's not like you can save the city, the master has Dark Signers and Yliaster on his side, and they're a lot stronger than the ones you fought before!" -In this RP, the Dark Signers have returned along with Yliaster. It wont be the same members you all know, but you may use any character from the show including the old Yliaster and Dark Signer members. Yusei - Stardust DragonJack - Red Dragon ArchfiendCrow - Black-Winged DragonAkiza - Black Rose DragonLuna - Ancient Fairy DragonLeo - Life Stream DragonAshley (OC) - Red Blizzard Dragon If you lose your duel with a Dark Signer, you can only be knocked out. I want to make it right so everyone can stilll use their character. You can get a rematch with a Dark Signer if you want to, but not right after losing.You have to wait a bit, first.You can use any cards from, the show or manga, and you can also use made up cards. The first Dark Signer is named Toby, the other 8 have not been picked yet.Go ahead, join in, pick who you want play as and what Dark Signer you want to face.Your original characters can join too. They can either help the Signers, or side with the Dark Signers, it's up to you. This RP is rated PG - 13. Please study these corrections if you are actually interested in writing a story. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest TheFinalFan Posted June 10, 2012 Report Share Posted June 10, 2012 Also, what do we know about this Ashley chick?Who the hell is she, and how does she fit into all of this? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ListenToLife Posted June 10, 2012 Report Share Posted June 10, 2012 Plus, either wrong section, or you need to read the section rules. You need the app, rules, etc, etc, and the plot really needs some help with. We need to not backseat mod though guys. Should let Rinne handle this really. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
signerleo Posted June 10, 2012 Author Report Share Posted June 10, 2012 what you tlaking about there other rp posted here os this is right place and ashley the charater am useing and to that is how right ok am disbalsed do my hands i cant do it any better then if you tooking it out on me for not being being able to do good am disbaled that jsut plan mean not nice at all and my story is einglhs that is eingflsh hwo can you not under stnad that iv ben to many other palce they all udnerstnad me try udnerstnad me am disablle ok this best i can give me broke dude i read all that but being disbaled make thing hard on me dont have any ieda how to post any if that you aks how my charater fit in she jsut do she duelst all duelst fit in way cant you guys took an easy on me am disabled you dont be mean about it :cry: you realy hurt my feeling tlaking about bad my stroy try my best i give my all this what get in return am relly sed now am disabled guys way cant you be nice how can this be work form this rp form i saw ohter rp post here so this is right form you no you ben nice about like said am disabled i made my charater ashley signer every who watch yugioh 5d knows what signer is so how can you not no how she fits in like said ahsley is my charater that am usein what more do you need to know about hershe signershe she age as leoshe live in the city what more do you need to signer vs dakr signer and that is rex good win siad so in yugioh 5d Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ListenToLife Posted June 10, 2012 Report Share Posted June 10, 2012 1) How were we supposed to know? 2) You cant use that as an excuse. I'm sorry for you, but you cant just not tell us, post it, and then expect us to be all sympathetic and give you some slack.3) It's english, yes, but very bad english. No grammar, bad spelling.4) I wasn't saying anything about that anyway. I was talking about the fact you haven't looked over the section rules. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Expelsword Posted June 10, 2012 Report Share Posted June 10, 2012 You can take all the time in the world you need to type messages.Your story wasn't so bad, it's just that it gives the impression that you don't care at all, the way you "typed" it. If you really are disabled, I suggest you check outhttp://lmgtfy.com/?q=windows+sticky+keys That alone will improve your capitalization grammar. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
signerleo Posted June 10, 2012 Author Report Share Posted June 10, 2012 il fix it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yosuke-kun Posted June 10, 2012 Report Share Posted June 10, 2012 As mentioned before, it's a decent story, but it's missing some necessary rp sections. A character creator form for one. Also, forgive me if I'm wrong, but I don't think you're really disabled, and take great offense if you're lying, since I have a friend who actually is disabled. More importantly, if you are disabled, wouldn't it be better if we told you what you did wrong and treated you as one of the other site members? That aside, they didn't treat you bad, and none of them were really mean. They treat other people here just as bad because that's how we get better. That aside, you type a lot for someone who's disabled, and hey, I might be wrong, and I heavily apologize if I am wrong in my accusations, but your typing patterns change way too frequently. It seems like one second you're able to type gramatically correct and/or all correct spelling, then it changes back which draws even more suspicion. Now... I calmed down a bit... back to before. If you need help with making the character application, feel free to ask one of the mods or other members for help (probably not me though cuz of my whole tyraid there). There all nice enough to help out if you're willing to let them and take a little criticisms from them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bury the year Posted June 10, 2012 Report Share Posted June 10, 2012 Please review the rules of the RP section before you post a thread, including adding all the necessary sections. LOCKED. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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