Galkin Posted June 7, 2012 Report Share Posted June 7, 2012 Chimera of the Red Lotus Level 4 Effect Beast/ EARTH ATK: 2300 DEF: 1800 "This card cannot be be Normal Summoned, Special Summoned or set unless you control a face-up Normal Monster. If this card is removed from the Field by an opponent's card effect while you control a face-up Normal Monster: add 1 Normal Monster from your Deck to your Hand." [b]Lamia of the Red Lotus Level 2 Effect Reptile/ EARTH/ Tuner ATK: 500 DEF: 1000 "If you control a face-up non-effect Monster: once per turn, during either player's turn, you can target 1 monster your opponent controls; take control of that target, until the end phase. If you activate this effect: you cannot Special Summon any monster(s) except for "Red Lotus" monsters during this turn. If the only monster you control (Except this card) are face-up Normal Monster: your opponent cannot target this card for an attack."[/b] Witch of the Red Lotus Level 1 Effect Spellcaster/ EARTH ATK: 800 DEF: 400 "Once per turn, you can tribute 1 Normal Monster; target 1 card on your opponent's side of the Field and/or Hand, reveal them if necessary. If the targets are Monster Cards with 1500 or more ATK: send them to the Graveyard. If you control 2 or more face-up Normal Monsters: Card effects cannot be activated in response to the summon of this card or the activation of its effect." [b]Goblin of the Red Lotus Level 3 Effect Beast-Warrior / EARTH ATK: 800 DEF: 1300 "This card cannot be Special Summoned. If this card is Normal Summoned or flipped face-up while you control a face-up non-effect monster: draw 2 cards. You cannot summon an effect monster (except this card) during the turn this card is summoned or flipped face-up. While this card is face-up on the Field: Normal Monsters cannot be targeted by your opponent's card effects.[/b]" Ultimatum of the Red Lotus Quick-play Spell Card "If a face-up non-effect you control is targeted by an opponent's card effect: your opponent selects and activates 1 of the following effect(s):[list] [*]Special Summon 1 non-effect Monster from your Extra Deck. [*]Destroy all Spell and Trap cards your opponent controls." [/list] [b]Death Trap of the Red Lotus Trap Card "Activate only if you control at least 3 "Red Lotus" or Normal Monsters including at least 1 "Red Lotus" Monster. Destroy all monsters your opponent controls. If you control 2 or more face-up "Red Lotus" monsters: your opponent cannot activate the effect(s) of effect monsters they control in response to the activation of this card."[/b] Keeper of the Red Lotus Level 9 Synchro Warrior/ EARTH ATK: 3100 DEF: 3100 1 tuner Monster + 1 non-tuner non-effect Monster + 1 non-tuner Monster While this card is face-up on the Field: face-up non-effect monsters you control are unaffected by your opponent's card effects. Once per turn, you can Special Summon 1 level 6 or lower Normal Monster from your Deck." Corrections, balancing, *commenting* would be greatly appreciated Link to comment
Galkin Posted June 8, 2012 Author Report Share Posted June 8, 2012 This is not a bump, just a reminder that bumping is awesome [spoiler='']BUMP[/spoiler] Link to comment
Bahamut - Envoy of the End Posted June 9, 2012 Report Share Posted June 9, 2012 Chimera... isn't too bad actually. 2500 is excessive because that's Meklord territory, but 2200-2300 isn't too excessive for that effect. Maybe not for both ATK and DEF though. Lamia: A tuner with a free steal, I don't like. Goblin: A draw card (and plus 1) should have weaker stats, and not a further addition of choice to boot. Restirctions are nice though. A nuke, with a swarm effect if you stop it from nuking? BURN IT! BURN IT WITH FIRE!! Keeper of the Red Lotus is good. Probably doesn't need to be non-generic (and from the looks of its wording, double tuning?) Mixed bag overall, but indications of improvements in your skills. Take heart. Link to comment
Galkin Posted June 10, 2012 Author Report Share Posted June 10, 2012 All your comments have been noted and are been looked over. (In other words, I'm working on the fixes) Changes: Chimera has had its ATK and DEF nerfed. Lamia was restricted so you can't Special Summon any monsters except for "Red Lotus" monsters the turn you activate its effect. Goblin had its ATK and DEF nerfed as well as its last effect changed to a general protection against targeting effects. Death Trap's last effect was changed to provide some protection against effect monsters. Keeper was made generic (Lamia is no longer a specific required tuner). Link to comment
Bahamut - Envoy of the End Posted June 10, 2012 Report Share Posted June 10, 2012 Ah right, missed that bit about Lamia. Chimera and Golbin look better now, and so does Keeper. Link to comment
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