My Zombie Deck - How's it doing?

[Trapspringer]

So, this is the deck I'm currently running. Any input as to improvements would be greatly appreciated!

[b][u]Hollow Ground[/u][/b]

[b]Monsters (21)[/b]
1 Dark Dust Spirit
1 Despair from the Dark
1 Double Coston
3 Giant Rat
1 Goblin Zombie
1 Paladin of the Cursed Dragon
2 Patrician of Darkness
1 Plaguespreader Zombie
3 Pyramid Turtle
1 Red-Eyes Zombie Dragon
2 Ryu Kokki
1 Spirit Reaper
1 Vampire's Curse
2 Zombie Master

[b]Spells (14)[/b]
2 Book of Life
3 Call of Mummy
1 Creature Swap
1 Dark Hole
1 Mage Power
2 Magical Mallet
1 Monster Reborn
1 Mystical Space Typhoon
2 Zombie World

[b]Traps (6)[/b]
1 Call of the Haunted
2 Compulsory Evacuation Device
1 Mirror Force
2 Zoma the Spirit

[b]Extra Deck (4)[/b]
1 Doomkaiser Dragon
2 Revived King Ha Des
1 Thought Ruler Archfiend

[Trapspringer]

Really? NOBODY wants to pick apart my deck? ...sad day.

[DARKPLANT RISING]

...Okay.

...So, just let's say this is...you know, "bad". However, that doesn't necesarrily mean you've got to change it.

We're pros. We've got the skill to turn this into a semi-competitive deck. Problem is, if all your friends are like this too, they might stop dueling you 'cause Zombies done right are rediculously strong. If you don't want that, we'd just make minor adjustments and end with it.

On the other hand, if you posted this because you can't beat your friends, and you want to get way better...just ask so.

[Resident Fascist]

2 Zombie Master
3 Goblin Zombie
1 Mezuki
2 Spirit Reaper
3 Tour Guide from the Underworld
1 Sangan
1 Plaguespreader Zombie
3 Effect Veiler
1 Black Luster Soldier - Envoy of the Beginning
1-2 Pain Painter

try something like that for monsters. Idk, I know nothing much of yugioh, but Zombies are my favorite.dek so yeah =-3

[Resident Fascist]

double post
f***ing cloudfire bullshit

[Trapspringer]

[quote name='Darkplant - VENOM' timestamp='1339505841' post='5955869']
We're pros. We've got the skill to turn this into a semi-competitive deck. Problem is, if all your friends are like this too, they might stop dueling you 'cause Zombies done right are rediculously strong. If you don't want that, we'd just make minor adjustments and end with it.

On the other hand, if you posted this because you can't beat your friends, and you want to get way better...just ask so.
[/quote]
I can give my friends a run for their money with this setup, but I would like to, you know, RANK at competitions. So any help to make this more professionally competitive would be appreciated.

[quote name='Јordan' timestamp='1339506161' post='5955873']
2 Zombie Master
3 Goblin Zombie
1 Mezuki
2 Spirit Reaper
3 Tour Guide from the Underworld
1 Sangan
1 Plaguespreader Zombie
3 Effect Veiler
1 Black Luster Soldier - Envoy of the Beginning
1-2 Pain Painter

try something like that for monsters. Idk, I know nothing much of yugioh, but Zombies are my favorite.dek so yeah =-3
[/quote]
Sadly, I have no Effect Veilers nor Pain Painters. No Mezuki either, come to think of it.

....I need to get cards...*shame*

[jabber2033]

[quote name='Trapspringer' timestamp='1339571564' post='5956265']
Sadly, I have no Effect Veilers nor Pain Painters. No Mezuki either, come to think of it.

....I need to get cards...*shame*
[/quote]

Well, Tour Guide comes in Battle Pack Epic Dawn, Effect Veilers come in the Order of Chaos Special Edition boxes. Mezuki is a common in the Ra Yellow Mega Pack. All of those three sets can be found in your local Walmart, Target, and so on. You could probably go online to Troll and Toad and buy the rest.