EQUESIRIAN BLADES

[Guest BloodBlader]

my fan fic takes place after season 2's end.

 

so im adding a character to twilight's past

 

as well as trying to put some things in to make up for gaps in equestria's history

 

i have the idea that princess luna and celestia are as ill put god alicorns and that gods come in threes

 

im adding there parents and a three'd one as well as a brother to the princesses

 

 

the new character i have all thought out is Knight of Blades but everyone calls him Blades is a unicorn from canterlot, he be came friends with twilight before thay both went to magic school, but about a year before twilight leaves for ponyville he disappeares with no word to twilight, the story starts with him appearing at her door step in the middle of the night in a down pour.

 

 

A new enemy comes forward and is the cause of most of the troubles that have happened in equestria's history. The mane6 try to use the elements against him but with one wing he sends there attack back at them, in turn destroying the elements.

 

 

 

 

i don't know if i will but i might have Princess Celestia die saving the mane 6 and blades from something

[TeamUnitedNerds]

Grammar. That is all that needs to be said

[Guest ∂materasu]

Grammar. That is all that needs to be said

Actually, there is more to be added. This topic is illegal because:

First of all, the post needs to have the actual content of the fic, not a link to it.

Secondly, it's way too short. Each chapter must be 2 pages in length in Microsoft Word, size 10.

[TeamUnitedNerds]

I was talking about improvements, not rules, but yes. I would add more, but I don't know jack about MLP, so I can't really

[Guest BloodBlader]

ok and chapter 1 is not done yet

 

here is what i have so far

 

EQUESIRIAN BLADES

By: BloodBlader

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Chapter One: A Forgotten Blade

 

 

 

 

It was a dark stormy night in Ponyville, as Twilight Sparkle was getting ready for bed; Spike was down stairs getting a drink. “Finish up Spike, get to bed, we have a lot to do tomorrow.” Twilight called out. “I’ll be up in a minute.” Spike called back as he filled a glass with water. Twilight had jest nodded off when there came a knock at the door. Spike set down his glass and walked over to the door, “What pony would be up at this hour?” Spike muttered to himself. He opened the door, standing there was a figure in a black cloak. “Um, can I help you?” Spike asked. “Yes, is twilight still up?” the strange pony asked. “Sorry, she just went to bed.” Spike answered. “Oh well, can’t be helped. So mind if I come in out of this rain?” the strange pony asked. “Ok, but keep it down, if Twilight finds out I let somepony in at this time of the night, she’d …” Spike said ending in a large yawn. “Thanks, now Spike, you should get to bed, you have a big day tomorrow” said the strange pony coming inside and sending Spike off to bed. After Spike was upstairs the strange pony went to a bookshelf and pulled out a large book on myths and legends. He sat down and opened the book and looked thru it the whole night.

 

Twilight awoke the next morning to the sound of rustling downstairs. She got up and looked at Spike’s bed to see he was not there. “That must be Spike trying to make breakfast.” She said stretching. Once downstairs she found Spike sitting at the table waiting. “Spike, I thought you were making breakfast?” Twilight said walking up to the table. Just then three plates of pancakes magically floated out of the kitchen, one plate had pancakes with small gems in it. “Well, good morning sleepyhead.” A voice from the kitchen said.

[bury the year]

Kindly read the rules regarding chapter length. LOCKED.