The Snapshot Chronicles: A Minecraft Fanfiction

[TOM 3.5]

This is my first real fanfiction. Please critic and tell me how I can do better. It would also be a help is someone was willing to help edit/proofhead. I might have to make this PG-13 as there might be some slight gore later on.

Disclaimer:[spoiler Disclamer]I don't own Minecraft. Mojang and its respective owners do. I also don't claim Herobrine. Herobrine is a creation of a MC Creepypasta.

 

 

[spoiler Prologue]“Hey Mark guess what?” said Leo.

“What?” curiously asked Mark.

” The new Minecraft Snapshot got released today”, excitedly said Leo.

“Oh cool. What is in the new MC Snapshot Leo?” asked Mark.

“Well we got a new ore and now we have editable books” said Leo.

“That’s awesome. What is the new ore and is there anything else?” asked Mark.

“The new ore is emerald and we use that ore to trade with the villagers.” said Leo.

“Finally, we can now trade with the villagers after so many people saying it was going to be in the next snapshot.” said Mark.

“I know right?” said Leo.

“Right man.” said Mark.

“Well I’m going to play the new snapshot and see if there is anything else that has been changed.” said Leo.

“Bye Leo.” said Mark.

“Bye Mark” said Leo.

*Beep* *Beep* *Click* Leo then went to his computer and downloaded the new snapshot client. He made sure to back up his .minecraft beforehand so he wouldn’t lose any of his save files. Leo than carefully put the new Minecraft.jar in the bin folder. He then clicked the copy and replace button. Leo then started up Minecraft and logged in. He then created a new world with the new bonus chest and large biome setting. The world loaded and he found himself in what appeared to be a flat grassy field. Leo look confused at the screen. “Wait a minute. I thought I put Large Biome feature. Oh well, it must be a glitch.” thought Leo. Suddenly he saw something in the distance. It appeared to be the player. Leo looked closer and saw it had white eyes that appeared to be filled with darkness and terror. Leo’s face turned from confusion to fear. The entity started sprinting towards Leo. As the entity came close fog followed behind it. Leo then vigorously rubbed his eyes. When he opened his eyes again he only saw a sign. The sign read “niaga teem llahs eW”

 

[VLE]

I like this!

More chapters, now!

[TOM 3.5]

@VLE Thanks. I appreciate you like this and I am working on the first official chapter but it would be faster if I had someone to edit/proofhead. It would also help if I had a beta reader who could help me make the chapters as good as possible. So you may have to wait a bit before a new chapter.

[Hydra of Ages]

Fails to satisfy initial length requirements.

 

And before anybody (else) brings it up, that is not a prologue.

 

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