Lt. Colonel Remo Posted August 6, 2012 Report Share Posted August 6, 2012 No, I mean like, Broken starts a total war against Creator that temporarily leaves the Banned split between Creator, Broken, or simply not caring about either It seems like what you said was that Ken simply spoke out against him or was only conspiring but never actually got anything done Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted August 6, 2012 Author Report Share Posted August 6, 2012 As far as it's stated in the original, yes. But considering my work is 25 years afterwards, I don't see how anything concerning Broken would come up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lt. Colonel Remo Posted August 6, 2012 Report Share Posted August 6, 2012 Perhaps Broken learned something that would be relevant to future events When are you planning on releasing the first chapter? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted August 6, 2012 Author Report Share Posted August 6, 2012 Remo to be honest I am still plotting it, though I have actually managed to get onto part two and am almost finished with that. When everything is finished being plotted [i]then[/i] I'll begin writing. So a random guess would be probably in the Fall. But back to Broken's part . . . yeah don't see how him being dead would make it any more useful, since I am assuming he did not have time to record anything; Creator also would've destroyed any evidence left behind, seeing as he wasn't caught after commiting the murder. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted August 7, 2012 Report Share Posted August 7, 2012 Weird, I recall Ken being on one of the ships during the exodus before the major war. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted August 7, 2012 Author Report Share Posted August 7, 2012 Okay you're right Broken, but he only gets a single line (8 /) Also the only other scene(s) he appears in are before the Christmas Play and trolling Chibiween; however in the latter you're just an avatar and in the prior you again get one line. So though you make appearances prior to what I've previously stated you only get a line or aren't physically there. Again I don't see how this all trumps what you're character had done in the original series, make nanobots, and being murdered. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted August 7, 2012 Report Share Posted August 7, 2012 Well, if he was me, he would've had some kind of plan. Frankly, I'd trust Creator as far as I could physically throw him. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted August 7, 2012 Author Report Share Posted August 7, 2012 Mmmm . . . but considering you were focused on making nanobots and defeating Life I'm not certain. Either way you DID die so . . . yeah . . . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted August 7, 2012 Report Share Posted August 7, 2012 I guess, kind of makes me feel better about how I bumped off Fusion in AP. Course, I still would have had a plan. Seriously, guy on a rrevenge rampage, not very trustworthy. Guy on a sub-psychotic revenge rampage? He's going ot backstab you, hard. Mind pming me the chapter? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~ P O L A R I S ~ Posted August 7, 2012 Report Share Posted August 7, 2012 BAN ME FROM YOUR CLUB I'M HANDSOME Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted August 7, 2012 Report Share Posted August 7, 2012 But don't you know, beautiful people don't get banned. People would do anything for a beautiful person. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted August 7, 2012 Author Report Share Posted August 7, 2012 [quote name='BrokenHeart15' timestamp='1344301264' post='5999546'] I guess, kind of makes me feel better about how I bumped off Fusion in AP. Course, I still would have had a plan. Seriously, guy on a rrevenge rampage, not very trustworthy. Guy on a sub-psychotic revenge rampage? He's going ot backstab you, hard. Mind pming me the chapter? [/quote] The chapter? Sorry you lost me there . . . [quote name='Lil Wayne!' timestamp='1344301339' post='5999547'] BAN ME FROM YOUR CLUB I'M HANDSOME [/quote] F*ck off troll ([sup]>>[/sup]) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted August 7, 2012 Report Share Posted August 7, 2012 Where Creator mentioned he did the dirty deed. Thar sent you the complete work of ToDEF didn't he? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted August 7, 2012 Author Report Share Posted August 7, 2012 Yes he did, just didn't know which chapter you were referring too [spoiler=Creator Admits to Murder] [i]1 week later...[/i] Nexev clenched his teeth as he stared at the television. Standing beside him was Roxas, pushing his hand against the table for support. "Nex...ever get that feeling of deja vu?" Nexev cursed under his breath. "I knew this would happen. That goddamn a*shole is undoing everything we're planning to do." "Don't you mean everything we've done?" Roxas asked. Nexev shook his head. "I'll explain in a bit. Just watch." Creator grinned at them from the television screen. He sat comfortably in the cockpit inside PROTO the Machine Emperor. The android had seated itself on top of the roof of the Tower of Any Other. Cameras surrounded it and Creator, broadcasting to the entire world. "Greetings, planet Earth. Some of you may know of me, but most of you have not. I am Enzax Aito, the former head of the Banned's Tech Division. The reason for me being the [i]former[/i] head is because the Banned is no more. Our leader died valiantly in the struggle against the Inactive, and the Inactive itself has been utterly repressed. The Banned no longer has a purpose. Or at least, that's what most of you seem to think." Roxas scowled. [i]Of course the Banned has a purpose. We want world peace.[/i] "The fact of the matter is that the world's problems will never go away. Looking back on the progress of mankind has shown that despite others overcoming differences, there are still issues that divide us as a whole. This reason was why some political activists viewed Life's tyranny as a good thing. They believed that by conquering the Earth, Life had united the rest of the world with each other to work together to defeat the common enemy. Maybe that was his plan all along. After all, look how he died. A couple of [i]teenagers[/i] took him down. Maybe there's some truth to the suspicions that he [i]let[/i] himself die. These people believe Life sought world peace by sacrificing himself for the future of mankind. Normally, I wouldn't immediately shoot these theories down. Who are we to say what his true motives were? Perhaps he did have an ulterior motive." He brushed the bangs out of his eyes, scowling at the cameras. "But I know better. Life was a coward who acted solely for his self-satisfaction. For you see...he was my elder half-brother. I knew him better than anyone else. My former comrades have met him in the flesh and can attest he was heartless and cruel. As a matter of fact, I planted a nanobot on Kisune Trago, better known as Ninjew. He had knocked me out before moving on to face Life, but my specialty in inventing was nanotechnology. One of my faithful nanobots had attached itself to him without his noticing. And I reviewed the recordings. I heard Life's final moments before his death. That is how I know he was a coward. Because when you see someone in their final moments, when they think they're going to die, you glimpse at the true person they really are. And Life feared death. He genuinely believed himself to be superior to the rest of us. What a pathetic creature. "But there's more to my family's legacy. I had another half-brother, one directly related to Life. His name was Donovyn Gerra." Creator than began to explain the truth behind Donovyn and Ninjew's past to the rest of the world. As he continued talking, resentment and bitterness crept into his tone. "And so he died a martyr by my own hand. He played the part of the ruthless villain until the very end. But his death wasn't in vain, after all. Life did die in the end. But despite all that, his tyranny ruined the lives of so many people. He made Donovyn and Ninjew into tragic, historical figures. It angers me that after so much sacrifice, those who paved the way for our salvation didn't even get to witness the results. "Of course, at this point, you must all be wondering why I'm droning on and on about Life. Did I seize control of all broadcasting satellites just to deliver an overdue tirade? No. I want it made very clear that I detested Life and everything he stood for. I am different from him." "Sure you are," Nexev muttered. "Go on and spit out more of your hypocrisy, you jackass." "I am hereby declaring myself as the ruler of this world! I will see to it that my brother's vision of a better future will be fulfilled! I can't stand aside while our nations return to their former stances, bickering between themselves and impeding the progress we need to achieve peace. Every country knows they cannot function properly without a strong leader. Every military unit knows they need a reliable commander that can protect their lives while directing them through battle to achieve the goal. The world needs that strong leader, ready to shoulder the burden of all its problems. I am that leader. This is not a dictatorship that Life once held. I fully intend to work alongside all of the nation's leaders to settle our differences." "He can't be serious," Roxas gasped. "Arbitrarily going around and declaring himself as the world leader?" "Except he has an ace in the hole," Nexev replied. "I didn't realize it until I found out about Ken." "You mean how he died while working?" Roxas asked. "Didn't the autopsy show the radiation and dangerous chemicals he used to make the nanobot technology for RP. 820 had damaged his organs?" "They did say he was unproperly protected," Nexev added. "However, I knew Ken well enough. He would never be so stupid as to work without ensuring he was safe. Besides, he would ensure that whatever invention he made, it would only have reasonable drawbacks. No one who's used the nanobot power-up has suffered from radiation poisoning or anything stemming from that. I believe his death was cleverly disguised." "You're saying Creator killed him and the way he did it is how he's going to pull this off?" "Watch." Creator lifted his hand up. "You can't see it, but in my hand is the key to my success. A nanobot. Nanotechnology has so much potential for the future of mankind. It was one of my main projects that I worked on while I was in the Tech Division. Other scientists, such as Ken Broder, worked in this field and produced methods of powering the Banned into super soldiers, something that only seemed possible in a fantasy. However, I like to think that nanobots represent my philosophy. One that I've dedicated my life to and one that my brother lived by too. "It's that mankind has the potential to make the impossible, possible! Think! A mere thousand years ago, humans lived meagerly. They worked on farms, had little knowledge of the world they lived in, and barely lived past their thirties. Look how far we've all come! Life expectancy has more than doubled since then! The luckiest of us live like kings! And only certain others lack the luxury that the majority of mankind has. And our technology! Even within the past few years, we've evolved to levels we didn't even believe to have been possible. The progress that mankind has made up to this point demonstrates that there is no limit to our potential and we can only move forward from this point. I want us to skyrocket toward the future, to tap into that potential and better humanity as a whole! That is what it means to live your life! It's what it means to be a Fake Type Knight! "But back to my point. You see, I've made good use of these nanobots. I'm sure most of you have heard about the miraculous substance Alisururm and the role it played in helping to save humanity. Unfortunately, it's all gone now. But I made [i]good[/i] use of it while it was still around. My nanobots already had the ability to split themselves into two perfect copies of one another. And with Aliusurum, I was able to replicate several of my nanobots...and with each of them able to divide themselves, I sent them out until the moment was right. After a week passed, when every human was returned to Earth, each and every single one of them latched themselves into your bodies. The scary truth is that every man, woman, and child on Earth has a nanobot inside them. And I have control over each nanobot. What this means is no one may defy me. Anyone who rebels against me will die. I'll activate their nanobot and destroy their body from the inside. One such example is Ken Broder. He refused to join my cause when I offered him to be my ally and threatened to expose me. So I killed him. "I'm not proud. Ken was always an acquaintance of mine and he was a brilliant mind. It's unfortunate we lost such a brilliant scientist. But I couldn't let myself fail. Oh, I should mention this too. I have what you could call the 'master control' to all of the nanobots. It's inside my body and it's connected to every vital organs. How did I set that up, you ask? Another accomplishment of mine is crafting an artificial intelligence that alikens to our own. It lives in this machine, PROTO. And it is this artificial intelligence that exists in each of my nanobots. It's unreasonable to think I can keep tabs on six billion people, so PROTO and the nanobots will cover that end. "With that said, I do not wish to incite a conflict like Life did. I am not going to have everyone cater to my every whim. All I ask is that you offer me your cooperation. I won't threaten to kill myself to activate the master control either, I'm not a coward like Life was. However, if I'm restrained or imprisoned, PROTO will most likely act on his own and activate his connection with all the nanobots. In short, it'd be the same as assassinating me. I hope you all understand where I'm coming from. I look forward to shaping this world into a better one." He moved to shut off the transmission before grinning widely. "Oh...one last thing, people of planet Earth." He leaned his head closer so his face would take up the majority of the television screen. "You've all just lost the game." [u][i]*This is not the actual title of the chapter[/i][/u] [/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted August 7, 2012 Report Share Posted August 7, 2012 Hmm, what a pity. Course, nanotech is a two way street. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted August 7, 2012 Author Report Share Posted August 7, 2012 [quote name='BrokenHeart15' timestamp='1344303307' post='5999594'] Hmm, what a pity. Course, nanotech is a two way street. [/quote] How so? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted August 7, 2012 Report Share Posted August 7, 2012 More than one hand made the nanos. And although that hand was cut off, the progeny remains, doesn't it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted August 7, 2012 Author Report Share Posted August 7, 2012 Well you assisted in developing them, but I'm certain Creator mastered them considering he was able to make them lethal why you were just using them to enhance human potential. Not saying your character is bad or anything, but just got blindsided by Creator before you could manage anything. Now I [i]could[/i] have it where you uploaded your thoughts into a nanobot but that kind of sounds like an ass pull to me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted August 7, 2012 Report Share Posted August 7, 2012 Jake, as far as Ken went, he got less screen time than Ten Ten... the freaking ROWER has more screen time than Ten Ten. You have a character that has had no development. You can asspull anything with that. Frankly, considering clubs were factions, Ken would be loyal to a Digimon side. With a nanite that uploaded his mind, he'd craft a Digital body and insert his mind into it. Then, go nuts on the information super highway. Be a freakin A. (That doesn't mean ass, you'd only get it if you played Digimon World/Digital Card Battle) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted August 7, 2012 Author Report Share Posted August 7, 2012 Nope never played it. And when it comes to the clubs being factions you were a member of RP820 as far as I know, you possibly be a member of Fake Type Knights but not certain; though you probably are considering you worked with Creator, who was indeed a Fake Type Knight Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted August 7, 2012 Report Share Posted August 7, 2012 Never was a FTK, I was an AP though. But my main loyalty through and through was to the Digimon club. I pulled a few tricks to keep it alive. But, that I feel would be Ken's loyalty. After all, who wouldn't love nuking computer systems with Kuramon? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted August 7, 2012 Author Report Share Posted August 7, 2012 I would only if my Digimon partner was LadyDevimon . . . But no in the story you're said to have be a member of RP820. All I really could do is mention you at this point, though that might change down the road if fates allow . . . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted August 7, 2012 Report Share Posted August 7, 2012 It would be a great twist later anyways. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted August 7, 2012 Author Report Share Posted August 7, 2012 I suppose but as things stand right here and now you'll only be mentioned. But hey, mentioning is better than being forgotten completely. There are some characters that won't even get [i]that[/i] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Desu the Blue Nerd Posted August 7, 2012 Report Share Posted August 7, 2012 [quote name='Jake the Sage' timestamp='1344304576' post='5999614'] Well you assisted in developing them, but I'm certain Creator mastered them considering he was able to make them lethal why you were just using them to enhance human potential. Not saying your character is bad or anything, but just got blindsided by Creator before you could manage anything. Now I [i]could[/i] have it where you uploaded your thoughts into a nanobot but that kind of sounds like an ass pull to me. [/quote] [color=#0000CD]Actually, being able to enhance the body with nanobots sounds like a far more impressive feat that simply destroying it.[/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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