Spirit of DMG Posted November 23, 2012 Report Share Posted November 23, 2012 Evil spirit? I'm guessing it's either Life refusing to die, or that crazy guy who died laughing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lt. Colonel Remo Posted November 23, 2012 Report Share Posted November 23, 2012 [quote name='Deuce Gorgon' timestamp='1353633969' post='6075924'] that crazy guy who died laughing. [/quote] You're going to have to be a lot more specific Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nathanael D. Striker Posted November 23, 2012 Report Share Posted November 23, 2012 I didn't read the original DEF, so I'm clueless. Anyway, I'll make a secondary topic. How was Thanksgiving for you guys? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thar Posted November 23, 2012 Report Share Posted November 23, 2012 Gotta say, Jake, despite my lack of DEF knowledge, so far that short story is very intriguing. I'm only half way through it right now, but I'm definitely considering finishing it before you get DEF II finished and posted. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spirit of DMG Posted November 23, 2012 Report Share Posted November 23, 2012 Remo, remember that scene where Creator killed his half-bro? Well, technically he did, but more like Donovyn was wounded and fell off the building, and in the midst of maniacal laughter perished. Anyway, I just read the whole thing in an hour and a half. Gotta say, it was quite interesting. Ouja Boards are bad news. I coulda told them that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Headmaster Monokuma Posted November 23, 2012 Report Share Posted November 23, 2012 [quote name='Jake the Sage' timestamp='1353631528' post='6075895'] Hello Dane, good to see you have remained the same as always. You didn't like the story that much I suppose? [/quote] Story was far too supernatural based. While the original DEF did have hints and pieces of it, it was mostly realistic besides technology and exaggerations. Generally, if you want to write a continuation or spin-off of something, it pays to keep it in the same vein of literature as the original. I doubt I'll read it if the rest of it is in the same line of work as that small bit. It's not that it was bad, not at all. It just isn't up to my tastes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thar Posted November 23, 2012 Report Share Posted November 23, 2012 Just finished it. That was intense, I must say. Several grammar errors assuming from hasty writing, but a fun read nonetheless. I have to ask, though... the last part with that memory... was that a memory a part of DEF? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iCherry Posted November 23, 2012 Report Share Posted November 23, 2012 Never read DEF, probably never will. I don't even understand how the hell I was put in it. To answer Striker, I don't celebrate Thanksgiving, so I don't give any bothers. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted November 23, 2012 Author Report Share Posted November 23, 2012 [quote name='Captain Remo' timestamp='1353633739' post='6075920'] So is the evil spirit an entirely new character or is this a character who died in DEF during the Inactive War? [b]The character is someone who died during the Inactive War[/b] And if I'm not mistaken, there is an armed force known as the 'Free Army' or something to that tune? [b]In the story the original rebel group known as "the Banned" changed to "The Freed" once Life was defeated and Emperor Aito disappeared[/b] [/quote] [quote name='Deuce Gorgon' timestamp='1353633969' post='6075924'] Evil spirit? I'm guessing it's either Life refusing to die, or that crazy guy who died laughing. [/quote] [b]I believe you are referring to Alan Deustodo who claimed he'd come back as the D. Onem[/b] [quote name='Stone Cold Loki' timestamp='1353641423' post='6076000'] Gotta say, Jake, despite my lack of DEF knowledge, so far that short story is very intriguing. I'm only half way through it right now, but I'm definitely considering finishing it before you get DEF II finished and posted. [/quote] [b]Thank you[/b] [quote name='Deuce Gorgon' timestamp='1353644809' post='6076018'] Remo, remember that scene where Creator killed his half-bro? Well, technically he did, but more like Donovyn was wounded and fell off the building, and in the midst of maniacal laughter perished. [b]Oh okay so that was how Donovyn was killed. I only knew that Creator killed him. But there was also the person I said above.[/b] [/quote] [quote name='Colress' timestamp='1353644890' post='6076019'] Story was far too supernatural based. While the original DEF did have hints and pieces of it, it was mostly realistic besides technology and exaggerations. Generally, if you want to write a continuation or spin-off of something, it pays to keep it in the same vein of literature as the original. I doubt I'll read it if the rest of it is in the same line of work as that small bit. It's not that it was bad, not at all. It just isn't up to my tastes. [/quote] [b]Well Dane sorry it's not your taste. Like I said I'll add a bit more of the supernatural but it wont be so over the top like the short story was. Yes there will be things here and there yet like in the original I'll have it explained so it makes sense[/b]. [quote name='Stone Cold Loki' timestamp='1353651033' post='6076047'] Just finished it. That was intense, I must say. Several grammar errors assuming from hasty writing, but a fun read nonetheless. I have to ask, though... the last part with that memory... was that a memory a part of DEF? [/quote] [b]Those who got possessed sometimes had "flashbacks" of the person who had possessed them. I know one person had a flashback and you got to see the experience through that spirit's eyes. One of the flashbacks even tells you the identity of the "evil spirit" if you looked hard enough.[/b] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nathanael D. Striker Posted November 23, 2012 Report Share Posted November 23, 2012 Oh no, creepy Santa Jake is back! New topic, who's ready for Christmas? The music is on, the ads are ready, decorations are up, and I'm ready. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted November 23, 2012 Author Report Share Posted November 23, 2012 I'm definitely not ready. I have a lot of my family to still buy for- the only person l have completed is my father Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nathanael D. Striker Posted November 23, 2012 Report Share Posted November 23, 2012 I wonder who's running this year's Secret Santa. I still have the gift Opal gave me last year. And I may buy small stuff for my foster family. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spirit of DMG Posted November 23, 2012 Report Share Posted November 23, 2012 Not really ready. Of course, in my position, the only thing I really can do is Christmas-ize my profile. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nathanael D. Striker Posted November 24, 2012 Report Share Posted November 24, 2012 I don't know what I'm going to do for Christmas on YCM. Any ideas? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spirit of DMG Posted November 24, 2012 Report Share Posted November 24, 2012 You could always photoshop a Santa hat onto that guy in yor sig. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Simping For Hina Posted November 24, 2012 Report Share Posted November 24, 2012 Just going to stand there and watch the snow fall. I kind of miss the Christmas Logo now though. I will probably be listening to more music than expected if anything. And I get cards. Probably am going to change my sig around to fit the spirit if I really care. I care more about my birthday coming than silly ol' Christmas. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spirit of DMG Posted November 24, 2012 Report Share Posted November 24, 2012 interesting. When is your birthday again? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thar Posted November 24, 2012 Report Share Posted November 24, 2012 Hey DD, did you happen to read Jake's short story yet? You play a pretty interesting role. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Simping For Hina Posted November 24, 2012 Report Share Posted November 24, 2012 December 23rd. I really never thought you knew my birthday though... OH, I also have my second year anniversary coming up. Don't want to miss that! [quote name='Stone Cold Loki' timestamp='1353725959' post='6076578'] Hey DD, did you happen to read Jake's short story yet? You play a pretty interesting role. [/quote]I haven't. Guess I'll start reading now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CinnamonStar Posted November 24, 2012 Report Share Posted November 24, 2012 So I'm back. Yeah, always looking forward to Christmas, but I basically have Christmas spirit all year long. Not sure how to explain. But might be why some people think I'm constantly on a cloud of high or something. But there was no Thanksgiving here, we don't celebrate that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thar Posted November 24, 2012 Report Share Posted November 24, 2012 Yeah, that's cause your country wasn't discovered by Pilgrims, Opal. Is there something related to the foundation of your country that you celebrate? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Simping For Hina Posted November 24, 2012 Report Share Posted November 24, 2012 I went to the original sight of the First Thanksgiving just today. It was a blast. Every country has their own traditions and holidays, they also celebrate them differently. In Italy, Santa doesn't exist.' Thar, you pet, link meh to it. I am too lazy to scour the internet. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thar Posted November 24, 2012 Report Share Posted November 24, 2012 Here you are mast- *ahem* Here. http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/283142-ycmaker-hotel/page__st__2240#entry6063811 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nathanael D. Striker Posted November 24, 2012 Report Share Posted November 24, 2012 No Santa in Italy? Are they crazy or something? How can you have a Christmas without Santa? Anyway Don, I will not put a hat on my current sig. I may find something Christmas related. I may just put the gift Opal gave me last year. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted November 24, 2012 Author Report Share Posted November 24, 2012 So Thar did you find anything funny in the story? Comments or suggestions? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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