ike123tree Posted May 16, 2012 Report Share Posted May 16, 2012 "Yuma!"Yuma groaned and put his pillow over his head. "Yuma, get up! You will be late for class, agian!"Akari sighed and started climbing up to the atic. "YUMA!!" Yuma screamed and fell out of his hamock that he slept in. "Gee,s what is the big idea! Cant a boy get some sleep?" Yuma rubbed his eyes and started to get up. Akari grabed yuma and shook him. "Yuma, you are going to be late for class! Yuma stared at Akari blankly fo a second, then his eyes shot open. "O no, I am going to be late again! Yuma started looking franticly for his school supplies. Akari just shook her head and walked back down stairs. Yuma put on his shoes, threw on a jacket, grabed his deck, and raced down staris. "Bye Grandma!" Said yuma as he passed her down the hall. " Stupid yuma, go clean room now." Yuma heard as he ran past Obami. " I am not stupid!He yelled out the door. He ran toward school while watching the sun rise. " Hmm.. I wonder where astral is? Astral glided toward on of the gears, containg the number 61. "Interesting, very interesting."He floated toward another gear, this time containing the number 3. "Yes, my memory is almost complete, i just need 26 more numbers then i will..." Just then a bright flash occured inside astrals head, and he was viewing a differant scene. He looked around, there were six spheres orbiting a circle of twenty three orbs of light. "What is this?" Then the spheres started to shift into gold rectangle shapes with wierd writing on them. "What are theese?" Then he cought something that cought his eye. One of the orbs had an image on them. He looked closer, it looked like a man with wings and... He stopped, and stared at the orb. "These are cards." And sure enough, all of the obs started to turn into cards. "What could this mean?" Then as suddenly as he had seen the vision, it all vanished. Astral satred back at the gear and tried to figure things out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bahamut - Envoy of the End Posted May 16, 2012 Report Share Posted May 16, 2012 Please refer to the rules of this site; there is a minimum requirement for the length of the original chapter posted (this opening with chapter three for some reason?) Hopefully this will be locked by a mod before others get in with a torrent of abuse. Please note for future works:1 - When a new character speaks, start a new paragraph.2 - Have stuff actually go on/happen that is interesting for the reader.3 - This is not nothing remotely close to a chapter. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Hatcher Posted May 16, 2012 Report Share Posted May 16, 2012 LENGTHAll chapters must be at least 2 pages in MS Word with single spacing, standard margins, and size 11 Arial font. This applies to all fics, regardless of being serial or one-off. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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