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Chapter 8 - Mechanical Madness

It was the start of a new week and all the students were in their seats, listening eagerly in class.

"Students, today is the day of is our weekly science exam.", said Proffesor Misawa.

The students grunted unhappily.

"Rahim, please report to the Ra yellow dorm room"

All the students stared at the two speakers which were attached to the wall. Rahim walked over to the Ra yellow dorm room.

Chancellor Kingslie walked into the room, "Now class, I shall be the one doing the test with you as Bastion has something important to do".

Rahim walked into the room but it was not as he remembered, the room was filled with scientific equipment. "Rahim because of the lack of Slifer red students, somebody shall duel you and depending on the outcome of this duel !"

"I will show you how good I really am Proffesor and when you find out, this duelist I will face is not going to be happy."

Jacob, stepped forward towards Rahim and took his place on the duel field.

"Oh, no Jacob !"

"Yes its me Rahim and today we'll say if you can ..CRUSH ME !"

"Jacob, you no good .." Rahim was lost for words.

"Outside we are enemies, in here we are mearly students of the same dorm"

"DUEL". Shouted Both Students Eagerly.

"Wait kids, theirs a twist you must play with 4000 points like back in my days"

Jacob (4000) : Fine, lets kick this off. I draw and I activate "Focus Fusion" I send from my deck fusion-material monsters and summon my fusion monster but the price is I must pay 1500 during each of my end phases or the monster is destroyed. Brace yourself for my "Chimeratech Over Dragon" (DARK/Machine/Level-9/ATK : ? DEF: ?) so as I sent five monsters to the Graveyard it has 4000 ATK but I don't care cause I play De-Fusion to summon back all the monsters I used to fusion summon it.

Rahim : Oh no, even my new deck is not going to be able to defeat him.

Jacob : New deck ? Well I have the honour of being the first to crush you new deck. I Special Summon, "Cyber Dragon" (LIGHT/Machine/Level-5/ATK : 2100 DEF : 1600), "Mechanical Condor" (LIGHT/Machine/Level-7/ATK : 2500 DEF : 1700), "Steel Star-Gazer" (DARK/Machine/Level-10/ ATK : 3500 DEF : 2800), "Copper Creature" (LIGHT/Machine/Level-8/ATK : 2900 DEF : 2600) and "Barrage Barrel" (EARTH/Machine/Level-6/ATK: 2000 DEF : 1000). Next, I equip "Machine-Boost" to "Steel Star-Gazer" to increase its ATK by 900 times the amount of other Machines on my side of the field so its points increase by 3600 so it now has 7100 ATK points. Hahaha.

Rahim (4000) : I draw. Ooh nice card (smiles). I summon "Fear Fly" (DARK/Insect/Level-1/ ATK : 500 DEF : 0) and I activate his effect, so by paying 500 Life Points I can select 1 card from your hand and depending on what it is I get a cool effect. (Rahim selects a card from Jacob's hand). Yes its a ... Trap ! (The "Fear Fly" started glowing purple), if I pick a trap, I get to destroy a level 6 or lower monster that you control and increase my monsters ATK by half of the destroyed monsters ATK, until the end of this turn. So I choose to destroy your, "Cyber Dragon" (The mettalic dragon blew up" and now my "Fear Fly" has 1550 ATK. Now I play Centrifugal Field which doubles the original ATK of all level 1 monsters but they must stay in attack position. So my Fy now has 2050 ATK points and I equip it to "Prime Velocity" which increases its original ATK by 500, so its ATK now becomes 3050. So I attack "Barrage Barrel" but before that I activate "Shrink" which halves it ATK so it has only got 1000 ATK. (The small fly pummeled the huge metal barrel into the ground).

Jacob : You will pay for this.

Rahim : I set two cards and I end my turn.

Jacob (1950) : I can't summon any monsters so I guess I gotta attack, "Mechanical Condor" smash him !

Rahim : Not so fast, I activate "Dimensional Prison" so I negate the attack and your Condor is removed from play.

Jacob : I can still attack with my "Copper Creature".

Rahim : Once again I play one of my favourite, "Shrink" so now you monster has 1450 ATK and it is defeated by my weak little fly.

Jacob : Aaah (His LP decreased).

Rahim : Ha, ha.

Jacob : I attack with my "Steel Star-Gazer" which when it attacks the effect of all cards that alter the monsters original ATK are negated.

Rahim : Oh damn. (He fell to the ground)

Jacob : Haha, you stupid child, I will always be triumphant.

Rahim (500) : I draw and play my "Acid Eroder" (DARK/Fiend/Level-1/ATK : 500 DEF : 500) and when its summoned by paying half of my LP I can decrease a monsters ATK by 300 x its level. So your Star-gazer now only has 500 ATK and with the additional boosts of my Field Spell, my monster is the strongest. So attack his weak monster and win the game.

Jacob : I activate my "Steel Star-Gazers second effect, by discard 1 card from my hand I can increase its ATK by 1000 but it is destroyed during the end phase, if I do so.

Rahim : So that means you win ?

Jacob : Yes it does.

Rahim : Oh no, I lost against Jacob and I'm now going to Slifer Red.

"No your not Rahim, you have skill not as much as Jacob but skill and your staying here but for you Jacob your moved up to Obelisk Blue" said Proffesor Misawa.

Jacob left the room, knowing he will not come back.

Jacob, "Haha, that stupid teacher practically gave me the key to world domination, it was a brilliant idea for Rachet to persuade him to do so."

A small light shined onto the Sacred Beasts, this was the final stage of their evolution.

 

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Rahim VS Jacob.

The sacred beasts evolving

Could things get any weirder ?

Find out next time on Yu-Gi-Oh! Eternal Chaos.

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Chapter 9 - Teacher Terror

All of the gang were in the Ra yellow dorm having a party as they were celebrating the birthday of one of the students and half of the school was invited. The room was filled with happiness and laughter ; smiles on everybody's faces, it was like the whole Jacob incident wasn't happening.

Meanwhile, Jacob was laughing to himself and looking at the three cards in front of him but he knew the cards were not for him but for his master. His master would not last for ever so he thought he deserved the new cards but somebody else was their who might take his place, Rachet undercover shadow duelist, meglomaniac extrordanaire. Jacob growled at Rachet but Rachet did not care, "Hey kid, leave world domination to the big boys !"

"I'm 18 you know !", protested Jacob

"Aah, good for you little boy "

The entire room rumbled and a cloud of mist filled the air, "Now you two stop fighting you know, I am the one who will be exacting my revenge on Duel Academy, I have a job for you Rachet ; go and stur up some trouble in the academy ."

"Glad too", replied Rachet and he vanished.

The gang were telling jokes and playing games, until a strange green-blue flash of light came through the window of the room.

"What the ... ?" said Yaden.

"What the hell is that" shouted Yank

"That ? I want to shed a tear, I'm no that I'm a he !", said Rachet.

"Hey teach, why are floating and sending light waves through the room ?" asked Yaden.

"Because I am working for the Great One, he shall stop the evil of Duel academy and shall save us all."

"This is another of those brain-washing cults, isn't it ?", asked Rahim.

"Oh, how dare you speak like that about the Great One !", Rachet said angrily.

The glass in the room started to shatter, the doors flew off into the walls. Rachet laughed evily.

"Stop this nonsense Rachet, it is illogical for these things to happen and in the name of science I must stop you. At that moment Jacob (now wearing his Obelisk Blue uniform) stepped infront of Bastion and said, "Oh please Misawa, you think you can stop us !"

A blue-grey sphere launched itself from Jacobs palms, Bastion tried to dogde but he saw that the sphere was just a trick.

"You can't trick my with that."

"I can't but I can scare you, and when you feel unhappy I'm happy!", said Jacob.

Chancellor Kingslie, was in his office he casualy walked up to the window where he saw a giant portal opening in the sky. The chancellor ran to the dorms, with a crew of teachers and workers asking the children to leave the academy. A fleet of boats came to pick the children up, it looked like the end of the world, the students were being evacuated. He got to where the gang were, "All of you get out; pretend the two lunatics aren't here."

"Lunatics ?!, I'm so hurt" said Rachet

Everyone ran from the building. "Take this route, its quicker" said Chancellor Kingslie. The gang ran towards the volcano and were about to ran down the path, but Univer had different ideas he had the portal insight and from the top of the volcano it seemed easy to reach. His friends ran towards him trying to stop him but they were too late the gang, and everything else on the island got swept away. Only a few kids who were on the boats, stayed and they were frozen solid by the extraordinary sight.

"Univer, you do know that you have just sucked the entire academy into a portal right ?" said Rahim

"Yeh, yeh and wait whats that tower up their ?", Univer pointed at a giant futuristic skyscraper.

"It seems like we are in the same world but now we are looking at it from a different persepective." said Bastion.

A tall well dressed man, came towards them and said, "No this is not the same persepective this is the future ."

"But if you are living it, then shouldn't this be the present!" said Bastion.

"Oh, you are clever ; our city needs somebody like you." said the man.

At that time, somewhere in the city, Jacob and Rachet were roaming the lands. "Jacob, look this is the future of Domino City, if we get enough energy to release the Great One into this world, we can destroy it and Earth will have a bleak future."

"What about us ? " said Jacob.

"Remember the Great Ones promise that he will keep us safe in his new world."

"Man that kid was right, this does sound abit like a brain-washing cult" said Jacob.

The gang were looking at the sleak and shiny machines of the so called future. "Tell us, why are we here", said Yank.

"Wha, what do you mean ?"

"Its either because of you or your people, why are we here !" shouted Yank.

"Well its because theirs a a great evil they call it the Great One !"

"The Great One...

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The gang have got themselves into a new world and their prime target is the Great One. Or are they its target ?

FIND OUT NEXT TIME.

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Well for know all the characters will just be randomly speaking BUT I am coming up with a new idea of sagas, which I will randomly choose a character and have 3 or 4 episodes based around them.

But everybody will get their fair share of the lime light in teh meantime.

So by about ep 13 Yaden will be getting a big part.

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[spoiler=Chapter 10 - Challenge from the future pt1. Yank VS Yank]

The gang are looking around the city but are terrified to see a gang of people who look so similar to them but older, destroying part of the city.

The gang of people are the future of the gang and unless the gang defeat their future they will grow into it. All seems well when the future gang challenge their past form to a duel. It seems that the future of Yank has gained more skill in dueling but maybe Yank will pull through and defeat the future of himself...

 

 

Its gonna be cool.

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Hmmm, pretty sweet so far man, I like this, but, awww, dang, I can't complete a duel alone! lol

Though, I don't like the jaden alexis love thing, ugh, got annoying XD

Anyway, pretty sweet, Though, I would like my guy to duel more XD

 

So, good job overall ^_^

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