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[quote name='Kakashi Hatake' timestamp='1334878511' post='5919376']
The entire thing is low quality. The render has white edges. The text is horrid.
It looks like nothing but text and a render pasted on top of a background.
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So if nothing good is going on, how's about commenting on the Concept aspect of it? Which he has managed to do well enough. Hell, the design is simple enough to replicate on your own in a few moments without any worry.

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[quote name='Icy' timestamp='1334880258' post='5919399']
So if nothing good is going on, how's about commenting on the Concept aspect of it? Which he has managed to do well enough. Hell, the design is simple enough to replicate on your own in a few moments without any worry.
[/quote]I'm TOTALLY new to this. How can I make this better?

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[quote name='~Spike~' timestamp='1334880349' post='5919400']
I'm TOTALLY new to this. How can I make this better?
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What program did you use, and can you send me the Render? I'll do you one better and recreate what you did with instructions.

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[quote name='~Spike~' timestamp='1334880775' post='5919408']
Currently as I do not have GIMP, and my dad has to make sure its not bad or anything, I use Corel X2.

And [img]http://i42.tinypic.com/2cys9wh.jpg[/img] thats the render.

Actually, I'm not sure it even saved properly. I get rid of the white, and it doesnt save as a render...
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You're supposed to save it as a PNG with a transparent layer. [url="http://gyazo.com/74ad62b3e27ce77801dd36f091ae7a62"]And as I worked on it and trying to recreate it in a more coherent fashion[/url], I came to the annoying conclusion that I havent worked on 2d Art for so long, I'm literally... rusty.

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[quote name='Kakashi Hatake' timestamp='1334882717' post='5919444']
Because I didn't get what he was going for. It looked like a booster pack or something.
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... So you treat it as a generic piece of art if you don't know. None of my work's have a label like Signature/Booster/etc, does that make my works under that same jurisdictions? No.

And of course I used a TechnoBG, I honestly thought that's what you did. Went with a tech BG > filtered it to be distorted like a television with poor reception. So sorry if what I did didn't help, as I couldn't replicate what you do a great enough extent. Switch over to GIMP or preferably Photoshop and concepts can be done better there.

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[quote name='teRRaByte' timestamp='1334887334' post='5919524']
Here are the problems.
>Must be .PNG, not .JPG
>If you smudge the picture, and Paste the render as layer again, It looks better.
>Nothing else I see.
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First one is a fallacy. You can save in JPG and produce great results. Most websites are saved in JPG files, do you notice the change? Not really. Problem is, you have to know how to use JPG files (jpeg13 files are okay and easy though).

Second one... Or you could restore quality by doing what I did? Refine Edge after auto selection on the white > Remove White to transparency > Duplicate Layer > Overlay 35% > Copy Visible > Apply Image > Edge Filter to minimal > Overlay again at roughly 50% > Apply Inner and Outer Glow's at 100% Normal Opacity Black. Better results, probably just as fast if you know what you're doing.

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[quote name='Icy' timestamp='1334887689' post='5919538']
First one is a fallacy. You can save in JPG and produce great results. Most websites are saved in JPG files, do you notice the change? Not really. Problem is, you have to know how to use JPG files (jpeg13 files are okay and easy though).

Second one... Or you could restore quality by doing what I did? Refine Edge after auto selection on the white > Remove White to transparency > Duplicate Layer > Overlay 35% > Copy Visible > Apply Image > Edge Filter to minimal > Overlay again at roughly 50% > Apply Inner and Outer Glow's at 100% Normal Opacity Black. Better results, probably just as fast if you know what you're doing.
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.1>.png is much clearer.
.2>Sure, whatever works for you.

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