Piercer of the Heavens Posted May 22, 2012 Author Report Share Posted May 22, 2012 I posted. Sorry about the long wait. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ListenToLife Posted May 22, 2012 Report Share Posted May 22, 2012 So, do you want me to post intense attack yet? Or wait a bit? Because I'm unsure when to. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cray-Crow Posted May 22, 2012 Report Share Posted May 22, 2012 woo.looks like Acedia's going down. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Piercer of the Heavens Posted May 22, 2012 Author Report Share Posted May 22, 2012 You could do it now if you want. Im okay with it. Lets let the other RPers decide whether they wish to continue gang up on him, or just finish him off. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ListenToLife Posted May 23, 2012 Report Share Posted May 23, 2012 Need to give him an insane power up really. Cant have one of the ultimate Nightmares going down that easily, easier than the spiders. Need to make it a challenge. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Admiral_Stalfos19 Posted May 24, 2012 Report Share Posted May 24, 2012 I agree with KC. The [i]first[/i] boss battle in an RP/game is supposed to be the easiest, not the um... second (I think that's the number that Acedia's at, considering the giant spider from before is actually counted as a boss) Maybe if Acedia suddenly manages to freeze time [i]just[/i] before a pile of attacks surge towards him and kill him :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Bad Pennar Posted May 24, 2012 Report Share Posted May 24, 2012 Or the "Acedia" we're fighting could be a fake, because it's just like a Slothie to send someone to do their own dirty work... even if it is a fake of their own self Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gαr Posted May 24, 2012 Report Share Posted May 24, 2012 [quote name='Flandre Scarlet' timestamp='1337829405' post='5945878'] Or the "Acedia" we're fighting could be a fake, because it's just like a Slothie to send someone to do their own dirty work... even if it is a fake of their own self [/quote] That...actually makes sense. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ListenToLife Posted May 24, 2012 Report Share Posted May 24, 2012 The fake Idea sounds really good. This guy we're fighting doesn't seem to look like what I'd picture 'Sloth' as(I picture sloth as fat), and I doubt the lazy personality would allow him to fight up front. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cray-Crow Posted May 24, 2012 Report Share Posted May 24, 2012 oh dang.i smells a twist. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Reinforce Posted May 24, 2012 Report Share Posted May 24, 2012 Damn, where are my spoilers when I need them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord of Chaos Posted May 24, 2012 Report Share Posted May 24, 2012 Would like to reserve a student if possible. Im working on the app right now having some trouble (haven't done this in a few years forgive me plz) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Piercer of the Heavens Posted May 25, 2012 Author Report Share Posted May 25, 2012 [quote name='Flandre Scarlet' timestamp='1337829405' post='5945878'] Or the "Acedia" we're fighting could be a fake, because it's just like a Slothie to send someone to do their own dirty work... even if it is a fake of their own self [/quote] I feel like I'm making this RP too predictable. [quote name='Lord of Chaos' timestamp='1337901198' post='5946322'] Would like to reserve a student if possible. Im working on the app right now having some trouble (haven't done this in a few years forgive me plz) [/quote] As long as you can have it before Acedia is defeated I can fit your character into the story. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Bad Pennar Posted May 25, 2012 Report Share Posted May 25, 2012 The Aura was predictable, The Fake had me thinking for a LONG while about why "Acedia" was going down too easily, Given Nancy's in her Nightmare Hand form, but Acedia should at least put up more of a fight than THAT Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cherz Posted May 25, 2012 Report Share Posted May 25, 2012 You gotta a point, flandre. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Balenille Posted May 25, 2012 Report Share Posted May 25, 2012 [b][u]Personal Information[/u][/b] [b]Character Name: Balenille[/b] [b]Gender:[/b] Male [b]Age:[/b] 15 [b]Personality:[/b] Balenille has a very active personality, always able to get along with most people. Some may find him annoying, though he cares little of what others think of him. Due to a prefference of peace, he believes more in talking his way out of conflicts, though he will fight if he must. Though he has an active personality, he is times calm, though he has a hyper side. Dyslexia also causes him to sometimes get very frustrated when he speaks, as sometimes people look at him as if he is insane, unable to make sense of what he has just said. [b]Biography:[/b] Balenille was born on a small island the off coast of California, though most don't know about this island. His father walked out on his mother when he was only two weeks old, so he knows and cares for very little of his father. Balenille has been to the school his entire school life, though too young to remember when he moved there. Diagnosed with Dyslexia at a young age, he has come to understand just how much it impacts his life. Being the only child in his entire family, he can sometimes get access to things that others his age wouldn't be able to get. When he was twelve, he took a trip to visit his grandparents. His mother decided that she would have him fly there. He hasn't gotten on a plane since, after having a near death experience when the plane took a crash landing. Lately, he has been having dreams of being able to control the element of lightning, training with it, able to conjure it straight from his body. [b]Fears: Flying[/b] [b]Appearance:[/b] Balenille is an even six foot in height. Like his mother, he has hazel eyes with flecks of violet around the pupils. He keeps his dark brown hair short, due to a horrible cow lick if he doesn't. He has the build of a football player, with broad shoulders and large calf and forearm muscles. His chest is broad. His face is round, with many scars from acne. Generally seen with pants, very rarely wearing shorts as his legs are very hairy. With long legs and arms, he has a farther reach with things then most. Most of his shirts are of a darker color, generally to match his tanned skin. Though, underneath his clothes, hes very pale. [b][u]Combat Information[/u][/b] [b]Appearance:[/b] When in Combat, he wheres leather armor. A scabbard at his side and a bow a crossed his back. A cape flowing with lightning running along the edges. [b]Weapon: [/b]A simple double edged sword with a sapphire on the butt of the hilt and in the direct middle where the blade and hilt meet. A long bow with a spider silk threaded string. Though this bow has small runes in the side enchanting it. [b]Abilities/Technique(s):[/b] If it involves lightning, he can generally do it, with in reason of course. [b][u]Other Information[/u][/b] Not much to tell here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ListenToLife Posted May 25, 2012 Report Share Posted May 25, 2012 Not my place to say, but I feel you need to cast more detail onto the power/ability section, and explain where the weapons come from, the relevance, how he retrieves them in battle, etc. Or else you've just got a random and unnecessary sword and a bow with no where to put them or get them from. And just having them for the sake of it approaches Gary Stu-ism. Also, explain what you mean by 'enchanting it', when you were talking about the Bow. And why Spider Silk thread for the bow string? It'd be useless. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Piercer of the Heavens Posted May 26, 2012 Author Report Share Posted May 26, 2012 [quote name='Balenille' timestamp='1337926118' post='5946565'] [b][u]Personal Information[/u][/b] [b]Character Name: Balenille[/b] [b]Gender:[/b] Male [b]Age:[/b] 15 [b]Personality:[/b] Balenille has a very active personality, always able to get along with most people. Some may find him annoying, though he cares little of what others think of him. Due to a prefference of peace, he believes more in talking his way out of conflicts, though he will fight if he must. Though he has an active personality, he is times calm, though he has a hyper side. Dyslexia also causes him to sometimes get very frustrated when he speaks, as sometimes people look at him as if he is insane, unable to make sense of what he has just said. [b]Biography:[/b] Balenille was born on a small island the off coast of California, though most don't know about this island. His father walked out on his mother when he was only two weeks old, so he knows and cares for very little of his father. Balenille has been to the school his entire school life, though too young to remember when he moved there. Diagnosed with Dyslexia at a young age, he has come to understand just how much it impacts his life. Being the only child in his entire family, he can sometimes get access to things that others his age wouldn't be able to get. When he was twelve, he took a trip to visit his grandparents. His mother decided that she would have him fly there. He hasn't gotten on a plane since, after having a near death experience when the plane took a crash landing. Lately, he has been having dreams of being able to control the element of lightning, training with it, able to conjure it straight from his body. [b]Fears: Flying[/b] [b]Appearance:[/b] Balenille is an even six foot in height. Like his mother, he has hazel eyes with flecks of violet around the pupils. He keeps his dark brown hair short, due to a horrible cow lick if he doesn't. He has the build of a football player, with broad shoulders and large calf and forearm muscles. His chest is broad. His face is round, with many scars from acne. Generally seen with pants, very rarely wearing shorts as his legs are very hairy. With long legs and arms, he has a farther reach with things then most. Most of his shirts are of a darker color, generally to match his tanned skin. Though, underneath his clothes, hes very pale. [b][u]Combat Information[/u][/b] [b]Appearance:[/b] When in Combat, he wheres leather armor. A scabbard at his side and a bow a crossed his back. A cape flowing with lightning running along the edges. [b]Weapon: [/b]A simple double edged sword with a sapphire on the butt of the hilt and in the direct middle where the blade and hilt meet. A long bow with a spider silk threaded string. Though this bow has small runes in the side enchanting it. [b]Abilities/Technique(s):[/b] If it involves lightning, he can generally do it, with in reason of course. [b][u]Other Information[/u][/b] Not much to tell here. [/quote] All is okay except for what Nameless pointed out. I'm pretty sure you materialize the weapons once you transform. Since it is based of your dreams the spider silk tread is fine, pushing it but fine. You do need to explain the enchanting part, what does the enchanting do to it, etc. Your power is kind of vague. Specifiy a little more and it will be fine. So for now not accepted. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cherz Posted May 27, 2012 Report Share Posted May 27, 2012 We need more posts in the IC, PIERCER, JUST POST!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Bad Pennar Posted June 1, 2012 Report Share Posted June 1, 2012 NVM, Misread I'm actually gonna have her change back to normal soon, Especially since the hands lack any sort of order to follow Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cherz Posted June 1, 2012 Report Share Posted June 1, 2012 Sakura thanks you 2. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gαr Posted June 1, 2012 Report Share Posted June 1, 2012 [quote name='Flandre Scarlet' timestamp='1338582067' post='5950471'] I've already started to get to Sakura Garazza [/quote] I was only trying to help. No harm done. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Admiral_Stalfos19 Posted June 2, 2012 Report Share Posted June 2, 2012 Sorry, just had to deal with an RP that blew up in my face while I was off-line =/ ... EDIT: So anyway, Casey just made the most offensive taunt she could think of. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Bad Pennar Posted June 6, 2012 Report Share Posted June 6, 2012 Before you start complaining, The "Your underling was more Powerful" is simply a ruse to try to get Acedia to try to Leeroy her, Which, even if she's weakening, is NEVER a good idea... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ListenToLife Posted June 6, 2012 Report Share Posted June 6, 2012 1) Flandre, you're seriously OPing and Mary-sueing Nancy. It's going over the top. Try to tone it down a little, take a breather, and let someone else do the work for once. Stop all out attacking, or I swear I will go Zombie/Skeleton Ape-sh*t on you! 2) My guy now apparently has 4th wall awareness for this last post. XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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