Twenty-five Zero Oh-oh Posted April 12, 2012 Report Share Posted April 12, 2012 yh, 2 tags. Good to see showcase going again. [img]http://i1216.photobucket.com/albums/dd362/25000st/065st.png[/img] [img]http://i1216.photobucket.com/albums/dd362/25000st/066st.png[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Simping For Hina Posted April 12, 2012 Report Share Posted April 12, 2012 RBS. Random Box Syndrome. The first one has an awkward transition from left to right. The render is a little bit LQ. The lighting it kind of awkward in it aswell. The second one is interesting I love the compo and feel. Blending could use some work though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Night Posted April 12, 2012 Report Share Posted April 12, 2012 You heard right. The first is atrocious, scrap. Nothing more. The second has possibly the best atmo I've seen in a while. The high sharpness works well, but It's a bit too bland for my taste. Definitely a hot piece though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Catman25 Posted April 12, 2012 Report Share Posted April 12, 2012 RBS has to be my favorite thing about your work man. I for one cannot pull it off. But yeah as said, I really like 2nd. Very crisp looking. :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kakashi Hatake Posted April 12, 2012 Report Share Posted April 12, 2012 Still love the random boxes. Can you PM me the psd for the second one or tell me how to get that color effect? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chairman ali Posted April 12, 2012 Report Share Posted April 12, 2012 Yeah not liking the offset effect you're adding to those tags, makes it really washed out. The first one is pretty bland, could go with more sudden lighting effects. They have to be sudden to look good since its pretty much a background thing rather than a subjective artwork. Work on the colours as well. Such a tone of blue doesn't go with that tone of purple. I suggest a more vivid and an out there purple (or you could switch to orange, it would look rather nice just becareful with the tone of orange you're using). Second one I really dislike. The transition of the place to place doesn't work. It takes a lot from the composition. I'd say you'd be better off keeping the door and taking out the office because proportionally it isn't correct. One place is kind of bigger than the other so its creating a weird perspective look. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twenty-five Zero Oh-oh Posted April 12, 2012 Author Report Share Posted April 12, 2012 THx for the comments. @Ken: How do you control your colors? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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