.Rai Posted April 9, 2012 Report Share Posted April 9, 2012 [IMG]http://i43.tinypic.com/34hxmdw.jpg[/IMG] Actually happy with this one, mainly because it's the most decent lighting I've done for a while. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hioco Posted April 9, 2012 Report Share Posted April 9, 2012 This is bugging me badly, but to the left, I don't know whether I'm right so please correct me if I'm wrong. It seems to me like the outline of the ship is visible, and its bugging me hahaha. Besides from that the lighting is great, the focal seems a little oversharpened/LQ, which could possibly be worked on? Great piece though man! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Rai Posted April 9, 2012 Author Report Share Posted April 9, 2012 [quote name='Hioco' timestamp='1333993467' post='5907653'] This is bugging me badly, but to the left, I don't know whether I'm right so please correct me if I'm wrong. It seems to me like the outline of the ship is visible, and its bugging me hahaha. Besides from that the lighting is great, the focal seems a little oversharpened/LQ, which could possibly be worked on? Great piece though man! [/quote] Ya, I literally just uploaded a slightly less visible version as you posted that. I'm just quickly gonna add some softbrushing there to hide it. I'll see if I can sharpen it less. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Catman25 Posted April 9, 2012 Report Share Posted April 9, 2012 Looks pretty good man. Your lighting seems off on the left side though, since you have the dark and light components of the ship side by side. Edit: Damn, ninja'd twice in one post. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Rai Posted April 9, 2012 Author Report Share Posted April 9, 2012 [quote name='+Catman' timestamp='1333993575' post='5907657'] Looks pretty good man. Your lighting seems off on the left side though, since you have the dark and light components of the ship side by side. Edit: Damn, ninja'd twice in one post. [/quote] Yup :3 K, uploaded a slightly less sharp, slightly fixed lit version. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hioco Posted April 9, 2012 Report Share Posted April 9, 2012 See now that makes me feel better :3 Awesome piece bro! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Rai Posted April 9, 2012 Author Report Share Posted April 9, 2012 [quote name='Hioco' timestamp='1333994552' post='5907673'] See now that makes me feel better :3 Awesome piece bro! [/quote] Thank you :3 Probably could have erased part of the render if I wanted to, but got lazy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hioco Posted April 9, 2012 Report Share Posted April 9, 2012 Hey it's easter, I'll let you off Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twenty-five Zero Oh-oh Posted April 9, 2012 Report Share Posted April 9, 2012 Pretty cool. I like the compo and the lighting is pretty cool. The blending is kinda off though and same with the lighting a little. The compo really works for me though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Night Posted April 11, 2012 Report Share Posted April 11, 2012 I'm utterly confused right now. It seems like everyone improved greatly over night? My main concerns with the piece is that you really should focus your lighting. Simply adding a soft brushed blob and setting it to addition, isn't helping you much. Dae seems to be suffering from this as well. Seeing as though everyone is having trouble with this, it would be helpful if we were to make a tutorial *COUGH* *COUGH*. Other than that, it's a nice improvement. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Rai Posted April 11, 2012 Author Report Share Posted April 11, 2012 [quote name='Twenty-five Zero Oh-oh' timestamp='1334008963' post='5907938'] Pretty cool. I like the compo and the lighting is pretty cool. The blending is kinda off though and same with the lighting a little. The compo really works for me though. [/quote] Yeah, the lighting was troublesome. Already had to fix it up a few times as other people pointed out. Blending, I think, was mainly to do with this awkward inner glow on the render. Really hard to fix up, so I generally just coped with it. One of the background C4Ds is bugging me, but it's minor. Thanks. [quote name=''Nw' timestamp='1334110703' post='5909650'] I'm utterly confused right now. It seems like everyone improved greatly over night? My main concerns with the piece is that you really should focus your lighting. Simply adding a soft brushed blob and setting it to addition, isn't helping you much. Dae seems to be suffering from this as well. Seeing as though everyone is having trouble with this, it would be helpful if we were to make a tutorial *COUGH* *COUGH*. Other than that, it's a nice improvement. [/quote] le showcase obviously has a fairy godmother somewhere. *cough**cough* of course. We shall discuss soon / squint I think the only major softbrushing circles I did was on the two engines of the render and the random streaks of red stuff in the background. Even that, I think was actually an effect C4D. I dunno :3 Anyway, thanks, 'Walker. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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