Funky6399 Posted April 9, 2012 Report Share Posted April 9, 2012 [img]http://fc09.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2012/100/1/8/link_forum_signature_by_funky6399-d4vofzp.png[/img] [IMG]http://i1141.photobucket.com/albums/n594/sagepure11/Link.png[/IMG] Sorry if bad pic DA is still messing images up but CnC away Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hioco Posted April 9, 2012 Report Share Posted April 9, 2012 This could really use some work mate. One of my main rules for tag making is to never centre the focal. So try not to do that? Also, the overlayed effect doesn't do the piece justice, I suggest trying out maybe a different style? The piece looks very distorted and doesn't blend very well. If I was you I'd follow a few tutorials, grasp a certain style and experiment? All you can do is improve really, so stick to it, you have potential! Just need to learn a few tricks and take a few tips? Nice try though mate, as I said just carry on making tags and grasp a few styles! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Funky6399 Posted April 9, 2012 Author Report Share Posted April 9, 2012 ok i had a hard time with this render because it had hard-to-make-a-tag flow Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hioco Posted April 9, 2012 Report Share Posted April 9, 2012 If that's your problem just try a different render? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Funky6399 Posted April 9, 2012 Author Report Share Posted April 9, 2012 well i like the cartoony feeling of the render and i could not find anything like it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hioco Posted April 9, 2012 Report Share Posted April 9, 2012 Perhaps next time just try something new. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Funky6399 Posted April 9, 2012 Author Report Share Posted April 9, 2012 alright i like using Game renders but i will try people renders Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hioco Posted April 9, 2012 Report Share Posted April 9, 2012 Just experiment using different renders and styles. A good way to do that would be to look around for tutorials. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twenty-five Zero Oh-oh Posted April 9, 2012 Report Share Posted April 9, 2012 I actually like the overall shapes and IMO the focal placement is fine. Work on your colors and effects though. It would also be helpful to grasp the concept of lighting asap. Lighting is what makes everything go together. Lastly, ease up on the black brushing on the sides. It looks slightly abrupt and unnatural. Perhaps try setting that brushing on soft light. If you can, stay away from too much pitch black. Try working with c4d's. They are relatively easy to get the hang of as randomly spamming them can be quite effective. They be a lot of fun too. If you don't have any yet, try getting the contents following pack. [url="http://stinky666.deviantart.com/art/378-Pack-ALL-C4Ds-Added-126650930?q=gallery%3Astinky666%2F254984&qo=1"]http://stinky666.deviantart.com/art/378-Pack-ALL-C4Ds-Added-126650930?q=gallery%3Astinky666%2F254984&qo=1[/url] Good luck Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Funky6399 Posted April 9, 2012 Author Report Share Posted April 9, 2012 i never put in a C4D so i will try that but should it be a dark or a bright onejust added C4Dbump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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