Agro Posted April 8, 2012 Report Share Posted April 8, 2012 Decided to run by a Different Idea with Phantom Beasts so yeah. Here ya go. [b][color=#ffd700]Phantom Beast Torrent-Claw EARTH / Level 4 [ Beast-Warrior ] [i]The years of training in secret have strengthened his fighting prowess and gained him the title of "Phantom Knight". He excells at many skills, his best is operating the most powerful creatures created by the phantom army.[/i] ATK / 2000 DEF / 500[/color] [color=#ff8c00]Phantom Beast Spark-Crow LIGHT / Level 4 [ Beast-Warrior / Effect ] You can send this card from your hand to the Graveyard to target 1 Beast or Beast-Warrior-Type monster you control; increase its Level by 3 until the End Phase. You can banish this card from your Graveyard to target 1 face-up "Phantom Beast" monster you control; increase its level by 3 until the End Phase. The effects of "Phantom Beast Spark-Crow" can each only be activated once per turn. ATK / 1600 DEF / 0 Phantom Beast Guardian-Spirit LIGHT / Level 4 [ Beast-Warrior / Effect ] When a "Phantom Beast" monster you control attacks: You can banish this card from your Graveyard to target the attacking monster; until the End Phase, that monster is unaffected by your Opponent's card effects. If this effet is activated: Destroy 1 card on the field at the end of the Damage Step. Only one "Phantom Beast Guardian-Spirit can be banished per turn. ATK / 0 DEF / 2200[/color] Phantom Beast Smog-Dragon DARK / Rank 4 [ Beast-Warrior / Xyz / Effect ] 2 Level 4 Beast or Beast-Warrior-Type Monsters When this card is destroyed by an Opponent's card and sent to the Graveyard: Destroy up to 3 Spell or Trap cards your Opponent controls. ATK / 2800 DEF / 2400 Phantom Beast Nimbus-Falcos LIGHT / Rank 4 [ Beast-Warrior / Xyz / Effect ][/b] [b]2 Level 4 Beast or Beast-Warrior-Type Monsters[/b] [b]When this card is sent from the Field to the Graveyard, banish any Xyz material monsters attached to this card. If this card is in your Graveyard, once per turn, during your End Phase: You can return 2 banished Level 4 or lower "Phantom Beast" monster to the Graveyard to target 1 other "Phantom Beast monster in your Graveyard; Special Summon it. ATK / 1500 DEF / 2900 Phantom Beast Dusk-King DARK / Rank 7 [ Beast-Warrior / Xyz / Effect ] 2 Level 7 Monsters You can also Xyz Summon this card by using 1 "Phantom-Beast" Xyz monster that has no materials. When this card is destroyed by an Opponent's card and sent to the Graveyard: Add 1 "Phantom Beast" card from your Deck or Graveyard to your hand. ATK / 3000 DEF / 2500[/b] Skill Drain decks, GO! Link to comment
Panda29796 Posted April 8, 2012 Report Share Posted April 8, 2012 Okay... Even though you insulted me by calling me a noob... A. cool names B. I didn't read there effects, but nice stats overall: 10/10 P.S. how do you plan to make an xyz card? I'd like to know. P.S.2: i like your profile pic and sig sub PS2 A: how do you get videos on your sig Link to comment
Chiri Tsukikawa Posted April 9, 2012 Report Share Posted April 9, 2012 [quote name='Aggro' timestamp='1333914470' post='5906596'] [b][color=#ff8c00]Phantom Beast Spark-Crow[/color][/b] [b][color=#ff8c00]LIGHT / Level 4 [ Beast-Warrior / Effect ] Once per turn: You can send this card from your hand to the Graveyard to target 1 Beast or Beast-Warrior-Type monster you control; increase its Level by 3 until the End Phase. Once per turn: You can banish this card from your Graveyard to targetf 1 face-up "Phantom Beast" monster you control; increase its level by 3 until the End Phase. The effects of "Phantom Beast Shadow-Crow" can each only be activated once per turn. ATK / 1600 DEF / 0[/color][/b] [/quote] You either made a mistake with the name or the name in the effect. Also, I wouldn't say it needs to say, "Once per turn" all over the place. Just the end is fine. [quote name='Aggro' timestamp='1333914470' post='5906596'] [b][color=#ff8c00]Phantom Beast Guardian-Spirit LIGHT / Level 4 [ Beast-Warrior / Effect ] Once per turn, when a "Phantom Beast" monster you control attacks: You can banish this card from your Graveyard to target the attacking monster; until the End Phase, that monster is unaffected by your Opponent's card effects. If this effet is activated: Destroy 1 card on the field at the end of the Damage Step. ATK / 0 DEF / 2200[/color][/b] [/quote] Not all over the place but it doesn't need to be there. If it's banished, it can't be banished anyway. [quote name='Aggro' timestamp='1333914470' post='5906596'] [b]Phantom Beast Nimbus-Falcos LIGHT / Rank 4 [ Beast-Warrior / Xyz / Effect ] When this card is sent from the Field to the Graveyard, banish any Xyz material monsters attached to this card. If this card is in your Graveyard, once per turn, during your End Phase: You can return 2 banished Level 4 or lower "Phantom Beast" monster to the Graveyard to target 1 other "Phantom Beast monster in your Graveyard; Special Summon it. ATK / 1500 DEF / 2900[/b] [/quote] What are the Materials? [quote name='Panda29796' timestamp='1333921123' post='5906733'] Okay... Even though you insulted me by calling me a noob... A. cool names B. I didn't read there effects, but nice stats overall: 10/10 P.S. how do you plan to make an xyz card? I'd like to know. P.S.2: i like your profile pic and sig sub PS2 A: how do you get videos on your sig [/quote] P.S.2 is P.P.S. Cards made in Written Cards don't have to be made but if you want to use YugiCo or a template. and for videos just put a youtube link in the middle of this: [media][/media] But what he has in his sig is a .gif image, not a video. Link to comment
Agro Posted April 9, 2012 Author Report Share Posted April 9, 2012 [quote name='Kagari Izuriha' timestamp='1333937785' post='5907156'] You either made a mistake with the name or the name in the effect. Also, I wouldn't say it needs to say, "Once per turn" all over the place. Just the end is fine.[/quote]Thanks for pointing stuff out. [quote name='Kagari Izuriha' timestamp='1333937785' post='5907156']Not all over the place but it doesn't need to be there. If it's banished, it can't be banished anyway.[/quote]I have no idea what you're talking about. It only mentions banishing once. :\ [quote name='Kagari Izuriha' timestamp='1333937785' post='5907156'] What are the Materials?[/quote]Added. So do you have opinions on the card as well as OCG stuff? Link to comment
Chiri Tsukikawa Posted April 9, 2012 Report Share Posted April 9, 2012 [quote name='Aggro' timestamp='1333938172' post='5907170'] I have no idea what you're talking about. It only mentions banishing once. :\ [/quote] It says, "Once per turn: ... You can banish" [quote name='Aggro' timestamp='1333938172' post='5907170'] So do you have opinions on the card as well as OCG stuff? [/quote] There are some more mistakes but Idk if you'll get mad at me for pointing them out since they're so minor. Link to comment
Agro Posted April 9, 2012 Author Report Share Posted April 9, 2012 [quote name='Kagari Izuriha' timestamp='1333938387' post='5907178'] It says, "Once per turn: ... You can banish" [color=#ff0000][b]Fair enough. I'll have to do a little edit there.[/b][/color] There are some more mistakes but Idk if you'll get mad at me for pointing them out since they're so minor. [/quote]Point out the mistakes, I want my OCG to be perfect. :\ Also when I asked if you had an opinion on the cards themselves, I meant like how they would be used. Link to comment
Chiri Tsukikawa Posted April 9, 2012 Report Share Posted April 9, 2012 Minor mistakes: [quote name='Aggro' timestamp='1333914470' post='5906596'] [b][color=#FF8C00]Phantom Beast Guardian-Spirit LIGHT / Level 4 [ Beast-Warrior / Effect ] When a "Phantom Beast" monster you control attacks: You can banish this card from your Graveyard to target the attacking monster; until the End Phase, that monster is unaffected by your Opponent's card effects. If this effe[/color][color=#ff0000]c[/color][color=#FF8C00]t is activated: Destroy 1 card on the field at the end of the Damage Step. Only one "Phantom Beast Guardian-Spirit can be banished per turn. ATK / 0 DEF / 2200[/color][/b] [b]Phantom Beast Nimbus-Falcos LIGHT / Rank 4 [ Beast-Warrior / Xyz / Effect ][/b] [b]2 Level 4 Beast or Beast-Warrior-Type Monsters[/b] [b]When this card is sent from the Field to the Graveyard, banish any Xyz material[color=#ff0000]s[/color] attached to this card. If this card is in your Graveyard, once per turn, during your End Phase: You can return 2 banished Level 4 or lower "Phantom Beast" monster [color=#ff0000]from[/color] the Graveyard to target 1 other "Phantom Beast monster in your Graveyard; Special Summon it. ATK / 1500 DEF / 2900 Phantom Beast Dusk-King DARK / Rank 7 [ Beast-Warrior / Xyz / Effect ] 2 Level 7 Monsters You can also Xyz Summon this card by using 1 "Phantom-Beast" Xyz monster that has no [color=#ff0000]Xyz M[/color]aterials. When this card is destroyed by an Opponent's card and sent to the Graveyard: Add 1 "Phantom Beast" card from your Deck or Graveyard to your hand. ATK / 3000 DEF / 2500[/b] [/quote] As for how they'd be used, I don't play YGO, so I don't know. Link to comment
Randomflyingobjects Posted April 9, 2012 Report Share Posted April 9, 2012 I could see how these cards would be useful, given enough of them to construct a full deck. I liked how the Xyz monsters didn't revolve around Xyz materials like the real cards do. Link to comment
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