barsam Posted March 8, 2008 Report Share Posted March 8, 2008 *smacks* WHAT'S UP WITH THE TITLE' date=' THEN?! Well, whatever. I'd judge if I didn't specifically advise against entrants judging. I can still offer my opinions on all the cards, though: Carrobo, the Walking Root: My only big qualms are a wording error and the fact that the effect doesn't fit the card. I figure the effect isn't worded right, but I don't know how to word it myself. Hm. Good card. Draconic Hunting Instincts: The idea is that the hunting dragon finds another potential target immediately after it takes its first victim, and then preys on a separate target. I like it. Dread Armies Soldier: Man, is that sucking up! I think it's slightly overpowered, and should say "monster" instead of "creature." Other than that, it's pretty good. Beautiful Warrior Gina: It's pretty dang good. There are some OCG errors, though, and I think it's overpowered. This is what it ought to read: This card cannot be selected as an attack target. This card cannot attack your opponent's Life Points directly. If this card attacks a monster with a ATK that is higher than this card's ATK, this card is not destroyed as a result of battle (Damage Calculation is applied normally.). If a monster on your opponent's side of the field was attacked by this card, negate the attack. During your End Phase, if a monster on your opponent's side of the field was attacked by this monster, destroy it. Each time this card destroys a monster by its own effect, draw 1 card. I personally think that it should say: This card cannot be selected as an attack target. This card cannot attack your opponent's Life Points directly. If a monster on your opponent's side of the field was attacked by this card, negate the attack. During your End Phase, if a monster on your opponent's side of the field was attacked by this monster, destroy it. Each time this card destroys a monster by its own effect, draw 1 card. That way it's less overpowered. Flaming Force Bow: "Deck" should be capitalized, "Graveyard" should be capitalized, "can't not" should be "cannot," and "This card can only be equipped with "Cabal - Force Archer" should be "This card can only be equipped to "Cabal - Force Archer." Just little things like that.[/quote'] Well you did'nt Judge my card! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chevalier Posted March 8, 2008 Report Share Posted March 8, 2008 Any Spots left? If so, entry reserved, Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Supreme Gamesmaster Posted March 8, 2008 Report Share Posted March 8, 2008 It ended yesterday. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BurmysRUs Posted March 9, 2008 Report Share Posted March 9, 2008 Oh great, I can't get PMs. *grumbles* Well, I guess I'll see it in the Dread Inquisition. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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