.Leo Posted March 29, 2012 Report Share Posted March 29, 2012 Visionary Adviser Light | Fairy/Effect | **** 1800 | 1000 When this card destroys a monster by battle: You can Special Summon 1 “Visionary” Monster from your Deck. It cannot attack this turn. Visionary Avenger Dark | Fiend/Effect | ** 500 | 500 You can Tribute this Monster: Special Summon 2 Level 4 or lower “Visionary” Monsters from your deck, except “Visionary Avenger.” Their effects are negated and they cannot be used for an Xyz Summon. Visionary Herald Light | Fairy/Xyz/Effect | **** 2500 | 2100 2 Level 4 “Visionary” Monsters Detach 1 Xyz Material Monster from this card: Destroy 1 Spell or Trap Card your opponent controls. Detach 2 Xyz Material Monsters from this card: Return 1 Level 4 "Visionary" monster from your Graveyard to your hand. Visionary Agent Dark | Fiend/Effect | ** 1000 | 1000 When this card is Normal Summoned: Add 1 “Visionary” Monster from your Deck to your hand. Visionary Typhoon Spell Card Discard up to 2 “Visionary” Monsters. Destroy 1 Monster your opponent controls and draw cards equal to the amount of “Visionary” Monsters discarded. Visionary Reaper Light | Fairy/Effect | **** 1900 | 1200 Once per turn: Discard 1 card from your hand; Add 1 “Visionary” Monster from your removed from play or Graveyard to your Deck. Visionary Apprentice Light | Fairy/Effect | ** 800 | 800 You can banish this card from your hand: Negate the Special Summon of an opponent’s monster. Visionary Lancer Light | Fairy | **** 1950/1900 [i]An experienced lancer who defends the mighty characters from the Visionary clan. He is known for his extreme accuracy and intelligence.[/i] Thoughts? Link to comment
shelds9 Posted March 29, 2012 Report Share Posted March 29, 2012 [quote name='Monsieur Léo' timestamp='1333050861' post='5893818'] Visionary Adviser Light | Fairy/Effect | **** 1800 | 1000 When this card destroys a monster by battle: Special Summon 1 “Visionary” Monster from your Deck. It cannot attack this turn. [b]Good card, nice, useful effect, but unoriginal because "Jurrac Guaiba" (I think)[/b] Visionary Avenger Dark | Fiend/Effect | ** 500 | 500 Tribute this Monster: Special Summon 2 Level 4 or lower “Visionary” Monsters from your deck, except “Visionary Avenger.” Their effects are negated. [b]Useful effect, but could be easily abused. More narrrowed down than Rabbit which is good, and it negates their effects, also more balanced than Rabbit.[/b] Visionary Herald Light | Fairy/Xyz/Effect | **** 2700 | 2100 2 Level 4 “Visionary” Monsters Detach 1 Xyz Material Monster from this card: Destroy 1 Spell or Trap Card your opponent controls. Detach 2 Xyz Material Monsters from this card: Destroy 1 Monster your opponent controls. [b]Very good card overall. Nice stats, good balanced effect that can help you in any way that you really need.[/b] Visionary Reaper Dark | Fiend/Effect | ** 1000 | 1000 When this card is Normal Summoned: Add 1 “Visionary” Monster from your Deck to your hand. [b]Good card, very similar to Stellar Sheratan, but it is a useful effect, so any decent deck could use it...[/b] Visionary Typhoon Spell Card Discard up to 2 “Visionary” Monsters. Destroy 1 Monster your opponent controls and draw cards equal to the amount of “Visionary” Monsters discarded. [b]Good card, the only flaw is that you ALWAYS discard 2 Visionary monsters, so you always Draw 2 cards...[/b] Visionary Herald Light | Fairy/Effect | **** 1900 | 1200 Once per turn: Discard 1 card from your hand; Add 1 “Visionary” Monster from your removed from play or Graveyard to your Deck. [b]Very good recycle effect, combined with good stats. Very good card.[/b] Visionary Apprentice Light | Fairy/Effect | ** 800 | 800 Discard this card from your hand: Negate the Special Summon of an opponent’s monster; Draw 1 card. [b]Could be abused in any Deck. Very easy to do nowadays. I don't know whether Maxx "C" is better or worse. Maybe make it so that it can't be used in any Deck at any time. That would balance it out.[/b] Visionary Lancer Light | Fairy | **** 1950/1900 An experienced lancer who defends the mighty characters from the Visionary clan. He is known for his extreme accuracy and intelligence. [b]Good "Avenger" target, but can also be searched with rabbit. NIce flavour text as well.[/b] Thoughts? [/quote] I would really like to see this Set carried through 'till it's completion. Keep up the great work! Link to comment
.Leo Posted March 29, 2012 Author Report Share Posted March 29, 2012 Thanks. Typhoon also allows you to discard 1 because you might only have 1 Visionary monster in your hand. Link to comment
shelds9 Posted March 29, 2012 Report Share Posted March 29, 2012 Oh, I missed the "up to" part. This makes it very good and original! Once again, nice job. Link to comment
Anbu-of-Sand Posted March 29, 2012 Report Share Posted March 29, 2012 [quote name='Monsieur Léo' timestamp='1333050861' post='5893818'] Visionary Adviser Light | Fairy/Effect | **** 1800 | 1000 When this card destroys a monster by battle: Special Summon 1 “Visionary” Monster from your Deck. It cannot attack this turn. [b]A good beat stick, and helps with the swarming of your other Visionaries. No Level restriction somewhat worries me, but I'll assume they're low Levels. Being LIGHT makes it good with cards like Honest as well. Seems pretty solid. One thing I should add though is with the wording, the Special Summon is mandatory; is this intentional?[/b] Visionary Avenger Dark | Fiend/Effect | ** 500 | 500 Tribute this Monster: Special Summon 2 Level 4 or lower “Visionary” Monsters from your deck, except “Visionary Avenger.” Their effects are negated. [b]This card also seems to have a mandatory effect, which means you have to Tribute it as soon as it is Summoned to get out 2 Level 4 or lower Visionaries, Deck should also be capitalized. It's a much more balanced Dino Rabbit in my opinion. Once again though, you may need to revise the wording.[/b] Visionary Herald Light | Fairy/Xyz/Effect | **** 2700 | 2100 2 Level 4 “Visionary” Monsters Detach 1 Xyz Material Monster from this card: Destroy 1 Spell or Trap Card your opponent controls. Detach 2 Xyz Material Monsters from this card: Destroy 1 Monster your opponent controls. [b]The wording once again Is it possible I can choose to detach 2 of its Material in order to pop to Spells / Traps instead of a monster?[/b] Visionary Reaper Dark | Fiend/Effect | ** 1000 | 1000 [b]When this card is Normal Summoned: Add 1 “Visionary” Monster from your Deck to your hand. Simple card is simple. The name, Type, and Attribute however in my opinion contrast the effect. Shouldn't it be from the Graveyard if it's a Reaper?[/b] Visionary Typhoon Spell Card Discard up to 2 “Visionary” Monsters. Destroy 1 Monster your opponent controls and draw cards equal to the amount of “Visionary” Monsters discarded. [b]This card is simple yet flexible. Let's you dump dead draws and get some new draws. Popping a monster is pretty nice as well.[/b] Visionary Herald Light | Fairy/Effect | **** 1900 | 1200 Once per turn: Discard 1 card from your hand; Add 1 “Visionary” Monster from your removed from play or Graveyard to your Deck. [b]Another Herald? Change the name please Perhaps make this Vision Reaper and give the old Reaper a new name? The card is nice recycling and can even save your monsters that may have been Banished through say, BLS. Not to mention it's a nice best stick.[/b] Visionary Apprentice Light | Fairy/Effect | ** 800 | 800 Discard this card from your hand: Negate the Special Summon of an opponent’s monster; Draw 1 card. [b]'You can discard...' Anywho, reminds me of Effect Veiler. It's a nice simple card that is splashable, and can fetch you a free draw. Feels like there should be some sort of restriction though. Perhaps you can't Special Summon during your next turn?[/b] Visionary Lancer Light | Fairy | **** 1950/1900 [i]An experienced lancer who defends the mighty characters from the Visionary clan. He is known for his extreme accuracy and intelligence.[/i] [b]A beat stick with some nice lore. Could be ran for fodder and of course, a beater. Nothing else to say really.[/b] Thoughts? [/quote] For now all I have to say is they may need some OCG fixing here and there. I'll give an overall review soon enough. Link to comment
.Leo Posted March 29, 2012 Author Report Share Posted March 29, 2012 [quote name='Anbu-of-Sand' timestamp='1333061628' post='5894089'] For now all I have to say is they may need some OCG fixing here and there. I'll give an overall review soon enough. [/quote] Yeah, ever since they added ":" and ";", OCG has kinda been annoying for me since I haven't made cards in a while. I will revise the wordings as well to make them non mandatory. Link to comment
.Rai Posted March 29, 2012 Report Share Posted March 29, 2012 Why on earth does Visionary Herald have 2700 ATK, as well as built-in S/T [b]and [/b]monster destruction ._. I'm more concerned about that 2700 ATK more than anything. Should be like 2500 max. Why on earth does Visionary Avenger even exist? It's pure bad design. If you're trying to somewhat make some sort of witty satire on brokenness in the current meta, you're doing well. But I doubt you are. Why on earth does Visionary Apprentice even exist? It's another 3 mini-Solemn Warnings that are also Upstarts. That are generic. The rest are pretty balanced though. If a little contrived. Link to comment
.Leo Posted March 29, 2012 Author Report Share Posted March 29, 2012 [quote name='.Rai' timestamp='1333063840' post='5894148'] Why on earth does Visionary Herald have 2700 ATK, as well as built-in S/T [b]and [/b]monster destruction ._. I'm more concerned about that 2700 ATK more than anything. Should be like 2500 max. Why on earth does Visionary Avenger even exist? It's pure bad design. If you're trying to somewhat make some sort of witty satire on brokenness in the current meta, you're doing well. But I doubt you are. Why on earth does Visionary Apprentice even exist? It's another 3 mini-Solemn Warnings that are also Upstarts. That are generic. The rest are pretty balanced though. If a little contrived. [/quote] True. I will look into editing them now. Link to comment
Anbu-of-Sand Posted March 29, 2012 Report Share Posted March 29, 2012 [quote name='Monsieur Léo' timestamp='1333063794' post='5894147'] Yeah, ever since they added ":" and ";", OCG has kinda been annoying for me since I haven't made cards in a while. I will revise the wordings as well to make them non mandatory. [/quote] "You can" is a big one too; in my opinion the main thing that makes a card effect optional. And do you plan on adding more anytime soon? I'm not sure if I should my review now or later once more Spells / Traps get added. Link to comment
.Leo Posted March 30, 2012 Author Report Share Posted March 30, 2012 I changed up some of the cards so they are not as broken as they would have been previously. Link to comment
Anbu-of-Sand Posted March 30, 2012 Report Share Posted March 30, 2012 [quote name='Monsieur Léo' timestamp='1333050861' post='5893818'] Visionary Avenger Dark | Fiend/Effect | ** 500 | 500 You can Tribute this Monster: Special Summon 2 Level 4 or lower “Visionary” Monsters from your deck, except “Visionary Avenger.” Their effects are negated and they cannot be used for an Xyz Summon. [b]The drawback you gave it hindered it in my honest opinion. This only leaves Synchros as a last resort, and they're somewhat dead now. I'd find another drawback replacement if I were you. Also, Deck should be capitalized.[/b] Visionary Herald Light | Fairy/Xyz/Effect | **** 2500 | 2100 2 Level 4 “Visionary” Monsters Detach 1 Xyz Material Monster from this card: Destroy 1 Spell or Trap Card your opponent controls. Detach 2 Xyz Material Monsters from this card: Return 1 Level 4 "Visionary" monster from your Graveyard to your hand. [b]Seems like a nice Alternative to popping a monster. It could be now be an option on what XYZ you should get out instead of a must, since it's no longer a popping monster entirely. Now you can choose to get out this card because your opponent is stacking up on Spells and Traps or your Graveyard is getting full of monsters, or getting out something else. A suggestion though: Since you're using 2 XYZ Materials for the price of 1, maybe make it so you can detach two to Special Summon 1 from your Graveyard instead? Seems more reasonable in my opinion.[/b] Visionary Agent Dark | Fiend/Effect | ** 1000 | 1000 When this card is Normal Summoned: Add 1 “Visionary” Monster from your Deck to your hand. [b]You changed the name [/b] Visionary Reaper Light | Fairy/Effect | **** 1900 | 1200 Once per turn: Discard 1 card from your hand; Add 1 “Visionary” Monster from your removed from play or Graveyard to your Deck. [b]You changed the name [/b] Visionary Apprentice Light | Fairy/Effect | ** 800 | 800 You can banish this card from your hand: Negate the Special Summon of an opponent’s monster. [b]More reasonable. This way it's splashable, but a bit more harder to recycle since it gets Banished.[/b] [/quote] Overall I'd say most of the changes are pretty solid. Good job Link to comment
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