Arm Re-Writes GX for a 2nd time(PG) - Episode 10: Tag Duel Shenanigans

[~British Soul~]

[quote name='Armadilloz' timestamp='1334503689' post='5914488']
The "tl;dr" part is only because Episode 9 doesn't really contribute to anything, except to give [s]Chumley[/s] Koala some screentime.

And again, me poking fun at 4Kids: Replacing Sake with Hot Sauce, something doesn't even come close to what it originally was.
So in [i]my[/i] version, I just simply put it as Beer, for gits and shiggles.
[/quote]
as long as you have reasons then its ok

putting it as beer was a good idea anyway, also iirc KOALA had drinking problems in the japanese version

[Catterjune]

*was writing a Yu-Gi-Oh fanfic taking place in a duel academy. Protagonist uses Scraps.*
*reads this story.*

le sigh

*deletes her story*

On-topic:
I don't know where YCM got the idea that writing like ass is funny. All the basic rules of writing still apply when you're writing a humor story, except now you've got to make it funny through wit, word play, puns, irony, and other such things. The whole "let me write something [s]actually let me strike it through[/s]" brand of humour isn't all that funny to me. I dunno, I'd find it much better if Chancellor was compared to Cave Johnson subtly rather then saying "It's Cave Johnson nahjustkidding it's Chancellor".

But yeah, my review just looks like it'll boil down "THIS ISN'T FUNNY!!!" and humor is relevant or so I'm told so that's all I can really say.

[Toffee.]

[quote name='Hatcher' timestamp='1334585250' post='5915572']
*was writing a Yu-Gi-Oh fanfic taking place in a duel academy. Protagonist uses Scraps.*
*reads this story.*

le sigh

*deletes her story*[/quote]
[color=#000000][size=5][b]OH COME ON![/b][/size][/color]
Pika, your writings are always good D: [color=#fff0f5]Also, I know you were joking with that fic part[/color]

[quote name='Hatcher' timestamp='1334585250' post='5915572']On-topic:
I don't know where YCM got the idea that writing like ass is funny. All the basic rules of writing still apply when you're writing a humor story, except now you've got to make it funny through wit, word play, puns, irony, and other such things. The whole "let me write something [s]actually let me strike it through[/s]" brand of humour isn't all that funny to me. I dunno, I'd find it much better if Chancellor was compared to Cave Johnson subtly rather then saying "It's Cave Johnson nahjustkidding it's Chancellor".

But yeah, my review just looks like it'll boil down "THIS ISN'T FUNNY!!!" and humor is relevant or so I'm told so that's all I can really say.[/quote]
You were bored, weren't you.
And if Shepard really was Cave Johnson, this would easily go from GX into.... WhatthehellamIevenreading

[Toffee.]

WHELP, IT TOOK ME LONG ENOUGH TO GET OFF MY LAZY ASS, BUT EPISODE 10 + 11(I mashed them together, obviously) FINALLY EXISTS.
Oh, and you can keep any pieces of Doc. Golden that are left from the explosion, as a souvenir.

Also, yes, I destroyed Para and Dox by making them into wannabee rappers, instead of rhyming monks.
Why I did that, I have no idea. Maybe because RAEG tends to send me 'stories' of how [Yugioh or Naruto character X] became a rapper.

....
idgi

[Mutant Monster RAEG-HAPYP]

[quote name='Armadilloz' timestamp='1336328882' post='5933776']
WHELP, IT TOOK ME LONG ENOUGH TO GET OFF MY LAZY ASS, BUT EPISODE 10 + 11(I mashed them together, obviously) FINALLY EXISTS.
Oh, and you can keep any pieces of Doc. Golden that are left from the explosion, as a souvenir.

Also, yes, I destroyed Para and Dox by making them into wannabee rappers, instead of rhyming monks.
Why I did that, I have no idea. Maybe because RAEG tends to send me 'stories' of how [Yugioh or Naruto character X] became a rapper.

....
idgi
[/quote]I have no idea what your talking about. Don't listen to this guy. He's insane.

This episode was random and lulz at the same time. Ultra Rage Mode is awesome

Next episode is Chazz vs Non-Chazz Bastion I believe?

[Brinolovania]

How the hell are you ever gonna have Curus lose? His deck is so broken...

Oh, and good chapter and such.

[Toffee.]

[quote name='Pacmanexus' timestamp='1336350966' post='5934018']
How the hell are you ever gonna have Curus lose?[/quote]
He doesn't "actually" loose until episode 18.
And that's against that guy who stole Yugi's deck.
And... Well.... His deck has the ability to rearrange itself at will. So that's like the [i]ONLY[/i] way one can defeat Cyrus.

[~British Soul~]

*picks up a piece of Doc. Golden*
To be completely honest, i liked how you turned Parza and Do-X into rappers, it made them much more interesting than...their rhyming counterparts which sometimes got a tad boring.

[Toffee.]

[quote name='evilsoul' timestamp='1336386853' post='5934245']
*picks up a piece of Doc. Golden*
To be completely honest, i liked how you turned Parza and Do-X into rappers, it made them much more interesting than...their rhyming counterparts which sometimes got a tad boring.
[/quote]
Yea, I "modernized" them.
...
Sure, lets go with that.