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Arm Re-Writes GX for a 2nd time(PG) - Episode 10: Tag Duel Shenanigans

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[quote name='Pacmanexus' timestamp='1333413282' post='5899488']
Tengu running things over and not!Summones Skull's damage made me laugh.[/quote]
Since "able to run over" is basically the term for being able to destroy something in battle, I figured I would literally make that happen.
And Panic's card being called "[font=arial,helvetica,sans-serif]TOTALLYNOTSUMMONEDSKULL[/font]" pokes fun at the many re-trained cards in existence.
And the card doing random amounts of damage is a gag I'm trying to use, based on duels in Season 1.
No really, you would see Yugi's Winged Dragon Guardian of Fortress #1 take out something like Mokuba's Man-Eating Plant. Dragon has 1400. Plant has 800. Mokuba would take like 426 damage.

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[quote name='evilsoul' timestamp='1333442875' post='5899927']
great episode as always, i laughed at the "Panik was here, Arm is a loser" bit
the Tengu getting in a car bit was funny too
i can't wait to see not!BLS and not!MoBC[/quote]
Provided, I continue the gag of poking fun at retrained cards.

And the sign saying that was somewhat of a request by RAEG.

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Episode 7 is up.
After a few days of an apparent "break", I decided to do another episode again.
I felt like being a little more serious with this one, and may have been a little overly dramatic with Cyrus, but I'm trying to set-up Cyrus' brother like some kind of "Why the hell is Arm interfering in family business"-sort-of-thing, only to force Arm to go out and duel this guy.

Also, Cyrus' moodyness is explained by his brother's personality, which is in the next episode.

YES, I KNOW, I'M ACTUALLY IMPLEMENTING MY OWN CONCEPTS INTO THIS NOW.

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[quote name='Pacmanexus' timestamp='1334015056' post='5908151']
Cyrus has the best plot device cards in this thing so far. Totally.[/quote]
Because a +4, with a varying cost, is totally legit.
Not to mention, the fact his deck is loaded with crazy-ass 'Victory Machines'.....
Next episode will probably be insane, at RAEG's request.

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[quote name='guuu1234' timestamp='1334093060' post='5909248']
I love this! I really look forward to the Zane vs. Jaden parody. I mean, the ways you can make fun of Zane's impossibly consistent use of 1 monster...[/quote]
You do realize, that the plot's to these episodes still have to follow the same story-line.

So Zane is, of course, a higher-leveled boss-monster.

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[quote name='Armadilloz' timestamp='1334097545' post='5909351']
You do realize, that the plot's to these episodes still have to follow the same story-line.

So Zane is, of course, a higher-leveled boss-monster.
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Of course I do! I thought after this point in GX, Jaden Duels Zane and loses and something else happens after that. I kind of forgot the order of the duels though :/ it's been years

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[quote name='evilsoul' timestamp='1334169790' post='5910388']
i read through the whole episode, holy crap Cyrus has some lulzy plot device cards[/quote]
Cyrus uses a +4 card with a hilariously non-existant cost.

[quote name='evilsoul' timestamp='1334169790' post='5910388']also i think i noticed a mistake: after the line of CAPS it says "Jaden + Arm" was it supposed to say "Cyrus + Arm"?[/quote]
Typo.
Usually when I'm writing these, I'm thinking of how the original version went, and sometimes I forget I'm swapping characters.

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[quote name='Armadilloz' timestamp='1334284369' post='5912057']
Cyrus uses a +4 card with a hilariously non-existant cost.

Typo.
Usually when I'm writing these, I'm thinking of how the original version went, and sometimes I forget I'm swapping characters.
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Hilariously non-existant costs in fics make them more funny

yea, sometimes it happens, but they're just minor mistakes which many people overlook anyway

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WILD EPISODE 8 APPEARS!
I will be honest, trying to re-do the duel with Zane and Jaden, but between Lance and Arm, and one of them using made-up-cards, was a little tricky to figure out. But the outcome was the basically the same, if you think about it, and in terms of logic.

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[quote name='evilsoul' timestamp='1334346488' post='5912535']
That episode was just too good, and i also liked how it was Dragonite, sorry Nite Dragon - Triple that beats the main character, though it would've been more funny if Arm dropped money after he lost like in FRLG[/quote]
Look, its bad enough the teachers are potential pedophiles and steal everyone else's stuff, let alone, can legally use a flamethrower in-doors.
Students loosing money would be the least of everyone's problems.
Also, Lance as RAEG's request, as mentioned in the fic.

[quote name='Pacmanexus' timestamp='1334351083' post='5912638']
And Lance now has the best plot device.

Awesomenessness.[/quote]
The Rage-Mode card is a reference to RAEG.
I, more or less, include references like that since hes the one who wants me to write these...

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[quote name='Armadilloz' timestamp='1334352023' post='5912655']
Look, its bad enough the teachers are potential pedophiles and steal everyone else's stuff, let alone, can legally use a flamethrower in-doors.
Students loosing money would be the least of everyone's problems.
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i guess that's true, although it is unknown if Students had any money in the first place

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I thought of something just now...
Episode 9 of GX is the episode of Chumly vs his dad.
And if Chumley is replaced by someone named Koala, and [i]ONLY[/i] says "Koala"....
And since Chumley's dad is basically the same thing....
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The whole episode will likely be written in "Koala".

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Episode 9 is up.
Lets be honest, if the entire episode was written in 'Koala', then why would I even bother adding it if nobody could read it? O,o
Though that doesn't entirely give me an excuse to have KOALA and Koala have a conversation between themselves, in said language, while they duel.

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[quote name='Galaxy-Eyes Photon Dragon' timestamp='1334449551' post='5913947']
I didn't even know you posted episode 8 and 9 O_O[/quote]
Well, it helps if you pay attention to this thread more, really...

[quote name='Galaxy-Eyes Photon Dragon' timestamp='1334449551' post='5913947']Brilliant work as usual :3[/quote]
UP NEXT IS THE TAG-DUEL...
*shudders*

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[quote name='evilsoul' timestamp='1334481168' post='5914332']
the tl;dr and THIS ISN'T 4KIDS DAMN IT parts were funny[/quote]
The "tl;dr" part is only because Episode 9 doesn't really contribute to anything, except to give [s]Chumley[/s] Koala some screentime.

And again, me poking fun at 4Kids: Replacing Sake with Hot Sauce, something doesn't even come close to what it originally was.
So in [i]my[/i] version, I just simply put it as Beer, for gits and shiggles.

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