Super Chaos Sonic Posted June 1, 2012 Report Share Posted June 1, 2012 I'm down with Shio being a veteran like Wielder. Good idea there Fry ^^ And I want to write Shio's chapter....it might be a while...but I will do it. Cause I'm contributing to this more so than I did with the RP...and I won't let this project fail! *ears twitch* Did someone mention....voice acting? You just played my song, Fry! Look up nightwing2199 and look at "Vids I Voice In"...then you'll have to find which voice is mine XD But when I get internet, I'll bring up a little demo of how Shio will sound, sound cool? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kōsuke Ueki Posted June 1, 2012 Report Share Posted June 1, 2012 ME!? Writing the second chapter? Ehhhh... No. Not gonna happen with Chapter 2. Xamidess isn't going to reveal himself yet. Trust me. He's a few days from that. So yeah, maybe after Akira gets all his memories back, then maybe he can make his big debut. You know, actually, screw that idea. Maybe before Akira and Shio make it to Halloween Town, Xamidess can appear. And, you can figure out how that happens on your own Fry, except that I expect his debut in this adaptation to be that of having a strong presence. Not that I'm doubting your skills, I'm just giving you something to keep in mind with his presence. And the only thing I don't like about the red one is that the colors don't look that bold. Like, if there's a red there, it should be a deep, and slightly dark, red. And if there's purple/pink on it as well, then it should be a fairly deep color. I'm actually going to recolor it with Paint, since I can't print anything, and make it look badass. Be back with it later. I'll still be around, so no worries. EDIT: Chaos, I looked at your Bleach Abridged (For God's sake, enough of the Abridged bulsh*t already!) audition and...damn. That was great. Let's hope your voice for Shio is better. And, if any of you haven't guessed, I'm gonna be doing the voice of Xamidess. Because I myself got a pretty deep voice, I decided to make his voice similar to mine, but will be as equally as strong as his presence (That is, WHEN he gets introduced in the adaptation). So, yeah, look out for that when I get around to figuring out what kind of lines he'll have. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frybread002 Posted June 2, 2012 Author Report Share Posted June 2, 2012 Hold on Tsa, it's not a matter of whether or not you want to write a chapter when you feel like it. It's a matter of whether or not you want to write someone and commit to it. As for the drawing...like I said, if you feel like you can do a better job, go ahead and be my guest. Like I said, I'm having a hard time choosing the colors and I just want to see someone's elses take on it. P.S. I'll post my audiobook idea tommorow. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Chaos Sonic Posted June 2, 2012 Report Share Posted June 2, 2012 Aww, TSA don't be hatin' on the Abridged LOL But yeah, my Shio demo should be a whole lot better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ListenToLife Posted June 2, 2012 Report Share Posted June 2, 2012 I'm sorry, but I'm gonna have to pass on the voice acting. My voice is crap and I dont really have the stuff to record anything, asides from my phone. And phones do weird sh*t when recording. And as proof reader, I'll mainly be fixing the major mistakes, and anything people would notice. If I miss it, it's probably not that big, or it's one of the English-American mixes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frybread002 Posted June 2, 2012 Author Report Share Posted June 2, 2012 Okay guys, the audio book idea will be post-pone until wensday. I currently have a thread in the video game forums that I must take of immediately. Aside from from that, I just want to know how long it will take before you finish your chapter on Shio Chaos. Cuz I really don't wanna spend more than two days on a chapter. Speaking of chapters, the one thing I want to discuss right now, is what type of worlds we will be having; So far we have Space Paranoids, Underland, and Halloween Town. We need one more world to officially start planing the plot structure and frrom what I have so far, for each day that Day that is visited, we will explore one world at a time. On Day 1, we'll explore Twilight Town with Akira and Shio going through the basic Keyblader journal. This can probably be about 3 or 5 chapters long. We'll talk a little about Akira and Shio's background and show the introduction of the new Organization XIII and the Heartless army. (Thinking Xamidess, Dragun and Ryuusaki can make a brief introduction) Day 2 will just be a bonus and explain a litle more about our KH universe. I really have no definative idea on how long the chapters will be or how many chapters we will have. However, what I am think is we can further dive into the mindset of the new Organization XIII and the Heartless army to figure out their goals. (In more detail, we can use this Day to show the intense rivalry between the Nobodies and the Heartless) Day 3 is something we can debate on, but this would be a perfect time to highlight Shio as a character and finally reveal the true intentions of the Heartless army (the basic goal to conqure Kingdom Hearts). On a side note, we may have to ask Chaos on what he wants to do with Shio and Underland. Day 4...kind of an enigma...we can either travel to Space Paranoids and finally reveal Akira's backstory or immediately go to Halloween Town and pick up the main story of REVERSED/[i]rewake[/i]. Day 5 will be a speeded up version of what happened between paged of 10-15 of the role-play. This THE plot twist of the fan-fic where we'll tell about the infighting of the Organization and it's eventual destruction. Day 6 will be excusively about Akira, Lominax, Rxadr, Lominax, and Xemanon. Personally, this is where I'm thinking were we can visit Space Paranoids and reveal Akira's back story. Day 7...well in two simple words, I think everyone can understand where I'm going...Keyblade Graveyard. Now if you guys have any questions, ask questions now. I don't want to leave anyone behind. P.S. Akira's time in Space Paranoids takes place between the movies of Tron and Tron: Legacy where Kevin Flynn was creating The Grid. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Chaos Sonic Posted June 2, 2012 Report Share Posted June 2, 2012 Well I don't have internet yet...so it may either be about July or August(don't know cause we're having a hard time with AT&T and the other internet places...^^; ). I know you would want to not spend a bit of time on a chapter...but I want to help as best as I can. Unless you all have a better idea... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frybread002 Posted June 2, 2012 Author Report Share Posted June 2, 2012 Actually, I do have a idea: You just give us the basic infomaiton that you want to tell and one of us can write it for you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Chaos Sonic Posted June 2, 2012 Report Share Posted June 2, 2012 Welll that is one thing about a writer...one person may have a different way of interpeting something than the way the other person may think. What I could try to do....is type up a rough draft on my cell and save said draft in a PM and after making the adjustments, send it to you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frybread002 Posted June 4, 2012 Author Report Share Posted June 4, 2012 Okay guys, apologizes for the late response. I was busy with another thread I have in the video game sections. Aside from that, I only have two questions: Chaos, are you about done with your chapter rough draft? RIght now I'm not looking for a complete chapter and I only need just the basic infomation of your chapter. As for my second question, I would like to remind everyone that we still need to figure out one more world for the story. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Chaos Sonic Posted June 5, 2012 Report Share Posted June 5, 2012 Sadly no I haven't...forgot that in a few days I'm going to visist family and won't be back until July 3. Sure I'll have my phone with me...but won't have a lot of time writting...^^; As for another world: 1.) Beast's Castle 2.) Olyimpus Collesium(I know I probably spelled the second word wrong...no spell check on cell ^^; ) 3.) Land of Dragons Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frybread002 Posted June 5, 2012 Author Report Share Posted June 5, 2012 Hmmm...that could be a problem...We'll it's good that we can work around it then! You Weird Guy, I don't think I ever got your opinion on this, but how does Akurix look? [url="http://apacheburger002.deviantart.com/gallery/?offset=24#/d47n3bf"]http://apacheburger002.deviantart.com/gallery/?offset=24#/d47n3bf[/url] In other news, I would like to remind everyone that I got a special suprise for everyone tomorow; not only am I gonna upload my audiobook roughdraft, but I've been working on some promational artwork for our fan-fic adaptation. So I hope you guys can wait. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ListenToLife Posted June 8, 2012 Report Share Posted June 8, 2012 [quote name='Frybread002' timestamp='1338918688' post='5952466'] You Weird Guy, I don't think I ever got your opinion on this, but how does Akurix look? [url="http://apacheburger002.deviantart.com/gallery/?offset=24#/d47n3bf"]http://apacheburger0...set=24#/d47n3bf[/url] [/quote] It looks great. You're a really good artist. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frybread002 Posted June 15, 2012 Author Report Share Posted June 15, 2012 Okay to start off here, I just want to see one thing: Because I was seriously jam-packed with soo many different things regarding YCM, I literally had a mental break-down due to the sheer number of massive projects I am currently working on. So in order to regain my insanity, I decided to take a break without telling anyone because I did not want to deal with anything! Of course, that doesn't mean I was just being lazy. I obviously did some work and so I pray you guys read them all. :] In terms of artwork, I promised a little promo for you guys and I did it....strictly speaking, it's more of a incentive if you guys want to see the rest of it. [url="http://apacheburger002.deviantart.com/"]http://apacheburger002.deviantart.com/[/url] As for the chapters, I realized we really need to figure who to make the good guys and the bad guys. So if you guys can put your heads together, I would appreciate it. (the new chapter is in Day 1 - Chapter 3) Lastly, do you guys recall the audiobook I had two weeks ago? Well here's the link to download the audio (you can also just listen to the aduio on the site itself. [url="http://www.4shared.com/mp3/q1TAqg_n/Voice_Acting_demo.html"]http://www.4shared.c...cting_demo.html[/url] Personally I don't see myself doing the narrating, as I have english-grammer problems with my words. Not only that, but I had huge problem with all of the editing and just trying to read the lines were giving my trouble. So any thoughts on this would be greatly appreciated. [Spoiler= [i]The Seven Days[/i]] [Spoiler=Day 1] -[spoiler=Chapter 1] ~Day 5~ [i]"After being here in this 'Place' for 5 days, I came to learn that I'm currently in an town named 'Twilight Town', and if I recall correctly, I was in my home country of Inu, but when that last battle occurred with the enemy country of Ninkai, there was a freak storm, and I was followed by these weird 'Shadows'. Next thing I knew, I'm here in 'Twilight Town'." I really don't remember how I got here, or where I was when it happened. All I can recall is that I was on Inu, resting my eyes, and when I opened my eyes, the next thing I realized I was in "Twilight Town". Kind of a weird name if you ask me, but if I had to choose a name; I’d suggest something like "Sunset Town" or whatever; as this town would be better known for the beautiful sunsets they have..."[/i] Writing in his journal, there was a young man sitting on the street within the marketplace of Twilight Town. Within his journal, the young man was writing down every thought and experience he had. [i]"Hehe, I really do enjoy this town. Back in Inu, you would be chased away with a broom for begging on the streets! Not only that, but Twilight Town is really, really clean. Meanwhile, Inu was extremely dirty and it was rare you'll see a flower in the street. But even then, the flower itself was dirty. If anything, what captures me the most is what's IN the town!! I mean...Well I really can’t explain the right words, but I notice people are just flipping a little switch, and BOOM! A source of light comes in from the ceilings like a light from the heaven itself!! (Think it was called a "Light bulb". In Inu, we used lanterns) It's really cool! There are many other things! [/i] [i]Although they're rather hard to explain, the real most useful one that I find helpful is a little beam of light that comes from this little plastic thing called a "flashlight!" It's really more convenient than a torch. [/i] [i]With a flashlight, you can just point and click the switch, then a light shines in the direction you point it! It takes two other little plastic things that make the flashlight work and is really light and convenient on the go. With a torch, you have to worry about burning yourself, the heat getting to your head, the weight, and the fact that it burns out on you if you use the wrong material.[/i] [i][i]Aside from the technological advances of Twilight Town, I really like this place. I can literally sleep on the streets, and not worry about a rat getting in my pack and eating my rations!! Hahahaha, of course I won't be sleeping on the streets like I used to back in Inu. If it weren't for Lance and Diego, I wouldn't be able to camp and learn how to hunt. Luckily there's a forest surrounding the town that provides excellent game to hunt and supplies for camping. Although the only bad side I can think of the flashlight is that it doesn't keep me warm like a torch, so I can't rely on it too much..."[/i][/i] ~End~ Finishing his report on his today’s experiences, the young man put a book mark in the page and closed it shut. Sitting on his rear end cross-legged, the young man didn’t bother to heed the attention of all the other people walking past him. With all of their shopping needs and other important duties to attend to, the people of Twilight Town didn’t bother with the young man and the young man didn’t bother with them. Instead, the young man only stared at the journal and kept on staring… It was brand new with each page pure white with yellow glossy edges. The perfect definition of a mint-condition book. However the journal itself was completely bland looking. With a beige body and red trimmings, the journal had an empty white space on the front cover that labelled [font=comic sans ms, cursive]“The Property of Akira Sadisme Runner”[/font] Akira…Sadisme…Runner… Akira… Sadisme… Runner… For what felt like an eternity to him, the young man grabbed his back-pack, opened it, and stuffed his journal back into its place. Upon closing his bag, Akira Sadisme Runner, noticed another journal inside his bag and began to stare at it. Unlike his current journal that he bought five days ago…or in more correct terms, the journal he had stolen five days ago, the other journal inside his bag was more elaborately decorated, but in poor condition. With an orange body with red & gold decorations, finished off in black & white trimmings, the upper-center of the journal was a light blue and entitled [font=comic sans ms, cursive]“Property of Akira Runner”[/font] with a little label that said [font=comic sans ms, cursive]“Happy Birthday!! From Hi’hime Kazama”[/font] underneath it. Looking at the two journals, Akira grimaced and began to sulk. When comparing the two books, the brand-new stolen journal was obviously…well, “new” with only five pages written upon. Whereas, the old birthday-gift journal was completely worn out with the spine tearing apart and the pages beginning to yellow. This book further added to Akira’s depression when he noticed that there was a huge chunk of pages missing. In plain truth, ever since the day he had stolen a new journal, Akira began to write down each and every emotion he experienced in the past five days. Every time he put his journal away, he would look at the birthday gift and always fall into some kind of depression. This was something that was never new, but it always felt new to him. The missing pages themselves represented the old memories from his own home world with his own adventures. However, in the weirdest turn of events, he’d become “disconnected” from his world. This resulted in his memories of a lot of major things in his life being erased. For an average 15 year-old, there really is no need to have a lot of experiences. However, Akira was not an “average” 15 year-old as it was not so much a lack of experience, but a lack of recollection of said experiences. Whatever the case, the only real thing that Akira wanted was two things: To recover his missing memories and to return home. Whatever in the world that made him beyond “average” was well out of his means of understanding. With his missing memories and all. After a good 5 minutes had passed, the young man Akira regained his senses and finally closed his bag. He began attending to all of the difficulties around him and started to make preparations for his next meal… [font=comic sans ms, cursive]"Oh! Thank you sir."[/font] Replied Akira, the young man, who was now living off the streets in Twilight Town and had to start begging to people in order to gain the money he needed for his next meal. Unlike the other beggars in the same district as him, Akira knew how to play the crowd and get easy money. This resulted in fierce competition among the other homeless people and sometimes, brutal gang-wars were fought…But instead of shanks, illegal weapons, and a shady source of income such as drug-deals, these gang-wars were just turf-wars between homeless people who simply wanted a particular street because they had more sympathetic people willing to give them money… Fortunately for our hero (?), Akira had one ace up his sleeve: Back on his home world of Inu, Akira lived as a beggar and had coped with being homeless before. This resulted in his artistic skills of thievery, free-running, the negative attitude of life as a delinquent, and the valuable skill of vanishing from “unwanted” people. However, there was also an unexpected side to him: Humility. While living on the streets, he had no real parents or caretakers to teach him right from wrong. Despite being a delinquent and orphan, Akira eventually found a single friend that became his family. This new-found family later encouraged him to join the military at the age of 12 so as to educate him further. Through this process, he met two other kids his age that were attempting to live with similar problems to him. And through this, his ‘family’ continued to grow. With an equal sense of seeing how life is never fair and the knowledge of how moving past your problems with your head held high, Akira had been equipped with much wisdom. Not only that, but most of these gang/turf-wars were generally fought with slanderous words. So Akira had an easy time running away and coming back later to start begging. With stranger after stranger walking up to him, and dropping coins in his little makeshift bag, Akira kept responding with quotes like [font=comic sans ms, cursive]"Your donation is greatly appreciated!”[/font] or [font=comic sans ms, cursive]“Thank you Ma'am!”[/font] Whatever the case, this was his daily life for the past five days. With the daylight finally ending, Akira began to pack up his belongings; gather up all of the money given to him, go to the nearest food stand, purchase some meat and walk off towards the forest where he made camp. Walking down some alleyways and making more turns, the walk to the forest from the marketplace was about a mile long and this left Akira with a lot of time to think various thoughts. Among these thoughts, the most haunting revelation was that Akira may not ever go home, and this realisation was causing him the most grief and worry. In the past five days, he had spent every waking hour making great trips all around Twilight Town to find a road home. When that failed, he began taking extraordinary hiking adventures across the mountain side of Twilight Town, but failed. Next, he began mapping the extensive forests that surrounded Twilight Town in order to find a trial back to Inu’s borders. Naturally that also ended in failure and Akira resorted to a last-ditch effort in using the night time stars. While being extremely skilled in astrology, Akira was unable to determine his position because the stars were apparently “in the wrong place.” Walking down some alleyways and making more turns to reach his camp in the forest, Akira kept planning various methods of finding a way home, with the haunting fear that he may never travel back to his beloved Inu hanging over his mind. Even with his vast knowledge in numerous fields, the biggest fear that Akira could never realize in a billion years, was that he was on another world. [/spoiler] -[spoiler=Chapter 2] [/spoiler] -[spoiler=Chapter 3] In the eyes of the bold and the eyes of the wise, when everything first started off, it was just thirteen people. Then in the middle came insurrection. In the end, only five remained… Lominax (VIII) Toraxko (IV) Nervax (III) Akurix (II) Rxadr (1) As a Cloaked Figure wearing a black trench coat stood atop a castle spire over looking fields and fields of empty darkness, the castle that he stood upon on was floating on a little island surrounded by a sea of darkness. Aside from the only path that stretched upon miles and miles of emptiness, the atmosphere itself was covered in darkness. Letting seconds tick by, the Cloaked Figure just stood with his arms crossed and pondered. He wasn't immortal, but for the past five years he has not aged a day and it wasn’t due to the fact that he was a Nobody. The fact stemmed from a much larger truth; as the master of time itself, the Cloaked Figure stopped his own time. Scanning the horizon for anything that was alive, the cloaked figure noticed another Man walking down the only path to the castle. Showing a little curiosity , the cloaked figure pulled out a book and began to flip through the pages. Finding the page the he was looking for, the Cloaked Figure showed a little grin and summoned a Corridor of Darkness and stepped in, appearing at the castle doors. Arriving in front of the castle, the newly arrived Man was still one-hundred yards away, allowing the Cloaked Figure enough time to remove his hood to reveal a young man in his mid twenties, with long blond hair and purple eyes that was hidden behind round-rimmed glasses. With a nice clean facial feature, the Cloaked Figured simply smiled at the man. “My, my, if it isn’t the Demon Wind Ninja, Toraxko; also known as The Winds of Chaos.” The Cloaked Figured sarcastically said to himself . Almost immediately, the Other Man stopped in his tracks and looked at the cloaked figured. From what the cloaked figured could tell, the Other Man seemed to be laughing and the next thing he realized, that the other man disappeared into the wind. Moments later, the said man reappeared right in front of the cloaked figured with a huge, evil looking grin and excitedly said “Why if it isn‘t the Stopped Clock, Nervax!” Taking two steps back, Nervax brought out two daggers and raised them towards the newly arrived Toraxko, who was wearing a hooded, black, sleeveless-jacket that was reminiscent of Nervax’s coat. Individually, they essentially had the same wardrobe, but what made him standout however, was his jacket only went down to his chest and exposed his stomach, leaving fishnets covering his bare, muscular body. This also exposed his black sweat pants that had fiery designs on it. With the matching uniforms, it was clear that both of these people belonged to the same organization. However, both Nervax and Toraxko had an apparent grudge to settle and the two fighters only looked at each other Acting first, Toraxko disappeared into the wind once again and re-appeared behind Nervax throwing a round-house kick to the head. Easily blocking the kick with his hands, Nervax turned around and met Toraxko dead in the eye. At first, the two fighters glared at each other, but that soon died why they both smiled and lowered their stances. A gesture that meant “we may be equals for now, but this fight only means you got lucky.” Looking out towards the path that led to the castle, both Nervax and Toraxko stared at the horizon. To them, they were hoping that something would happen or some extraordinary event to take place. Instead, only silence filled the air. "What will become of our Organization, Toraxko? Us, Lominax, and Akurix cannot keep it up.” Nervax asked, finally breaking the deadly silence. “We either have to band tightly, just split up, Kingdom Hearts itself if need be, or recruit members. And I do not want another member." He explained to Toraxko. "But with the third option, we might get tempted to kill one. We just got to keep low, occasionally banding with the other Nobodies to do our mission, in order to keep our Organization from withering; like a flower left alone in a dark room. That flower is us and we have to take care of it. But that, we don't have anymore. Not since Raxon was killed." "Isn't 'Chaos' all that matters Nervax? After all, you aren't even supposed to be...Isn't it out of your place talk about such things?” Toraxko responded, taking a glance towards Nervax and started to look back at the horizon. “What do you mean?” “ Our...The Organizations goal is only to achieve what we agreed to do...Kingdom Hearts…Hehehe...But that was when we had thirteen people.” “Would you please explain a bit more No. IV?” Nervax replied, with a hint of annoyance in his voice towards his comrade. Seeing how Toraxko liked to talk in riddles, many people within the Organization found it annoying. “Ever since the destruction of our leader, Rxadr, Organization literally toppled on it’s own weight and destroyed itself. Personally, I thought I was the only survivor.” “Then here’s a toast to us then Winds of Chaos.” Nervax said, while raising his fist in the “Then here’s a toast for us No. III - Nervax of the Stopped Clock.” Toraxko replied and raised his fist towards his comrade. To Toraxko, he didn’t care about anything such as world domination or Kingdom Hearts, the only thing he truly did care for, was chaos and anarchy. “In a way, at least you don’t sound like that pathetic weakling, Raxon." Toraxko began. "But who exactly was it that destroyed him?” “It was No. II - Akurix; One of the Organization members I regret not to record his data." “You have all the time in the world...But why worry about it when your time stopped?" Replied Toraxko. "Pathetic Shrimp?" A voice uttered, as a hand dropped onto Toraxko's Shoulder, seemingly out of nowhere. "You know, you are a bit cocky." The voice said, the rest of it's body appearing out of nowhere. The hand belonged to what seemed to be a young boy, roughly 14 years old, with very untidy hair. He lifted his free hand to his head and ruffled his hair a bit, walking in front of Toraxko. "And you still brag about the fact you were the one to break Raxon? You forget that I weakened him, and was going to spare him until you came along.” "Hehehehehe...Push come to shove…‘boy’. Maybe you should just watch your mouth if you want some respect, but if it wasn't for that blasted traitor Gun Xard, then maybe Raxon would still..."Exist" wouldn't he?" Toraxko replied with a grin on his face. "Besides, it was orders from No. I herself…hehehe…” Out of the entire Organization XIII, it was No. II Akurix - The Distorted Blur and No. IV Toraxko - The Winds of Chaos, who had the most hate for each other and did anything they could to destroy each other…if time and seclusion permitted. In fact, this hatred was so strong, that everyone in Organization XIII knew about it and tried their best to keep both members separated. Akurix sighed, a habit he was going to have to get rid of, and motioned for Nevarx to follow him as they started to walk into the castle (To which Nervax happily obliged as he was getting a bit weirded out by Tokarxko's presence with his talk of anarchy and chaos). "Oh, and Toraxko, you aren't a proper ninja. Your former person was a Ninja, just like I'm not a true Samurai, My former person was." Akurix stated, trying to resist swinging his blade at Toraxko's head as Nervax and he walked off. Meanwhile Toraxko remained outside and glared at him as he was walking off. Simply smirking at Akurix’s statement, The Winds of Chaos turned his attention back to the horizon and began to think of all sorts of devious things to do to Akurix if he could the chance... “Tell me Nervax…” Akurix began. “What exactly brought you to this castle?” “Heh, I’m assuming you haven’t heard the message?” Nervax responded, with an almost surprised tone. “What message?” “Seven days ago while I was out walking in the woods of a world called Twilight Town, I’d received a mysterious message regarding this castle. But the message itself was extremely vague and I had a hard time trying to find a 'particular' castle, but when I did, I was surprised to be lead to [i]Castle Oblivion[/i]…” Upon entering the main door, Nervax and Akurix entered the first of many rooms and stopped in the center of the first floor. To simply stare at the walls that were rotting away, it was clear that Castle Oblivion was falling apart; Over a thousand years when Castle Oblivion was created, it’s walls were pure white and had magnificent pillars supporting them. Today…Everything was either rotting, crumbling, or decaying away. “As for you Akurix, how did you get here?” Nervax asked while scanning the room for anything of interest. “Personally, I was wandering the stars and traveled across various worlds trying to find a place to hide, but as I was passing our [i]former base[/i],I couldn’t believe it when I noticed the [i]space[/i] around Castle Oblivion began to change.” “‘Space’?” Nervax asked. “As the Distorted Blur, I am the master of Space and I can see the 'space' of different objects in different colors. But after the Insurrection two years ago, I truly believed Organization XIII was destroyed once again. So I fled soon as I realized it’s destruction came form one of it’s one…” “[b][i]Gun Xard[/i][/b]…” Nervax immediately responded, finishing the sentence that his comrade could not. In the years following the destruction of Xemnas and his creation of Organization XIII, a new Organization XIII was created almost 1,000 years later with new members; with the same goal of obtaining Kingdom Hearts. With the World that Never Was being destroyed, a safe home world for all Nobodies was destroyed as well; As an alternative solution to their dilemma, the new Organization XIII needed a base of operations. With the discovery of Castle Oblivion still intact made by the former [i]No. IV[/i] - Gun Xard, he found two lone Nobodies roaming the empty rooms; one appeared to be human and the other Nobody was a Dusk. When Gun Xard tried to destroy it (due to it being a weakling), the human looking Nobody immediately defended the Dusk. Impressed by his bravery, Gun Xard ultimately made a deal with the human Nobody in exchange for Organization XIII using Castle Oblivion as their base of operation, the human Nobody would be granted membership of within the organization and given the title of [i]The Divine Tactician[/i] and [i]Lord of Castle Oblivion[/i]. This was over two hundred years ago and that Nobody was named Lomianax - [i]The Divine Tactician[/i]. Since then, the original Castle Oblivion had been remolded and was greatly expanded into a much larger castle that greatly overshadowed the previous Castle Oblivion. However, with the Insurrection of Gun Xard two ago, not only was the Organization cut in half, but half of the castle was destroyed as well. [b]“Friends, I am not yet dead!”[/b] A voice called out to them. [b]“Rejoice as Kingdom Hearts is still out there! Rejoice as I am still alive, still with a body and a soul! And though I, and we all, lack hearts, we still have the power to obtain Kingdom Hearts! I, Rxadr, the Master of the In-Between, have returned from darkness![/b] [/spoiler] -[spoiler=Chapter 4] [/spoiler] -[spoiler=Chapter 5] [/spoiler] -[spoiler=Chapter 6] [/spoiler] [/spoiler] [spoiler=Day 2] -[spoiler=Chapter 1] [/spoiler] -[spoiler=Chapter 2] [/spoiler] -[spoiler=Chapter 3] [/spoiler] -[spoiler=Chapter 4] [/spoiler] -[spoiler=Chapter 5] [/spoiler] -[spoiler=Chapter 6] [/spoiler] [/spoiler] [spoiler=Day 3] -[spoiler=Chapter 1] [/spoiler] -[spoiler=Chapter 2] [/spoiler] -[spoiler=Chapter 3] [/spoiler] -[spoiler=Chapter 4] [/spoiler] -[spoiler=Chapter 5] [/spoiler] -[spoiler=Chapter 6] [/spoiler] [/spoiler] [spoiler=Day 4] -[spoiler=Chapter 1] [/spoiler] -[spoiler=Chapter 2] [/spoiler] -[spoiler=Chapter 3] [/spoiler] -[spoiler=Chapter 4] [/spoiler] -[spoiler=Chapter 5] [/spoiler] -[spoiler=Chapter 6] [/spoiler] [/spoiler] [spoiler=Day 5] -[spoiler=Chapter 1] [/spoiler] -[spoiler=Chapter 2] [/spoiler] -[spoiler=Chapter 3] [/spoiler] -[spoiler=Chapter 4] [/spoiler] -[spoiler=Chapter 5] [/spoiler] -[spoiler=Chapter 6] [/spoiler] [/spoiler] [spoiler=Day 6] -[spoiler=Chapter 1] [/spoiler] -[spoiler=Chapter 2] [/spoiler] -[spoiler=Chapter 3] [/spoiler] -[spoiler=Chapter 4] [/spoiler] -[spoiler=Chapter 5] [/spoiler] -[spoiler=Chapter 6] [/spoiler] [/spoiler] [spoiler=Day 7] -[spoiler=Chapter 1] [/spoiler] -[spoiler=Chapter 2] [/spoiler] -[spoiler=Chapter 3] [/spoiler] -[spoiler=Chapter 4] [/spoiler] -[spoiler=Chapter 5] [/spoiler] -[spoiler=Chapter 6] [/spoiler] [/spoiler] [/spoiler] [b]”[/b] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kōsuke Ueki Posted June 16, 2012 Report Share Posted June 16, 2012 I say you did a pretty good job, up until you began to repeat yourself (This is me talking about what I listened to in the "preview" given before choosing to download the link). And you know what, I'll try to it myself, and I'll ask about what you all think. Be back tomorrow guys. Later! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frybread002 Posted June 22, 2012 Author Report Share Posted June 22, 2012 Okay guys, sorry for the delayed response. I spent this past week re-reading the entire role-play and planning future chapters. While I was reading/planning, I came across an pretty interesting idea regarding voice-acting; voice-acting audtions. I already had a long post planned to write down and propose to you guys...but today is one of those days where I'm tired of typing freakishly long posts. However, there is on thing I really need to talk to you guys. How would all of you guys feel if I were to expand F.A.R. Studios/Productions? In terms of planning and writting the story, we can get it done with just the three of us, but with all of these ideas flying around, I am personally swamped with a lot of things, that I forget what I'm doing most of the time. That being said, I want to hold an voice-acting audition where we can recruit voice-actors and artists that can help us with a lot of things. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ListenToLife Posted June 23, 2012 Report Share Posted June 23, 2012 *4 of us. Me, You, Swift and Chaos. And, as said before, I wont be taking part in any voice acting things. Sorry. Anyway, the (written)Chapter's a bit jumpy, don't you think? It seems like you've tried to copy a bunch of things word for word from the RP, when it just doesn't seem to fit. For example, you introduce Akurix with him saying - "Pathetic Shrimp?" - as he did in the RP. However, Toraxko never mentioned anything about Akurix rather than asking who killed Raxon, which kinda makes Akurix's entrance a bit wishy-washy. Y'get what I'm saying? D'you want me to try and edit it a bit? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Chaos Sonic Posted June 23, 2012 Report Share Posted June 23, 2012 Well I won't be much help to you guys(still working with getting internet), But I am willing to voice Shio ^^ so don't give my character away! XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frybread002 Posted June 24, 2012 Author Report Share Posted June 24, 2012 [quote name='KCNameless' timestamp='1340470727' post='5961468'] *4 of us. Me, You, Swift and Chaos. And, as said before, I wont be taking part in any voice acting things. Sorry. Anyway, the (written)Chapter's a bit jumpy, don't you think? It seems like you've tried to copy a bunch of things word for word from the RP, when it just doesn't seem to fit. For example, you introduce Akurix with him saying - "Pathetic Shrimp?" - as he did in the RP. However, Toraxko never mentioned anything about Akurix rather than asking who killed Raxon, which kinda makes Akurix's entrance a bit wishy-washy. Y'get what I'm saying? D'you want me to try and edit it a bit? [/quote] Weird Guy, that is why I love you. Any changes and mistakes you want to correct, I'm all up for it. As for this expansion idea of mine, the way it works is to simply recruit a few people to help us with the creative side of the fan-fic; that would include voice acting, art-work, and just basic editing skills (both writing and artistically speaking). So before I go ahead with any decisions, I want your guys personal opinions on it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kōsuke Ueki Posted June 24, 2012 Report Share Posted June 24, 2012 Well, I'll be joining this, no doubt about that. Only because I'll need something to do as my boredom is rising. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frybread002 Posted June 25, 2012 Author Report Share Posted June 25, 2012 Alrighty then Tsa, I will be looking forward toward your involvment. As for other news, the only way this thread can succeed, is whether or not you guys are willing to help me with it full time. That being said, the way it will work is each of us will take part one of three sections of the thread: Voice Acting, Artwork, and Spelling&Grammer. Personally, I can take charge of Artwork and as for the other two sections, I am hoping that any volunteers will come forward. P.S. Nameless, what's the progress of the chapter? Are you finish editing it yet or you haven't started yet? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ListenToLife Posted June 28, 2012 Report Share Posted June 28, 2012 Sorry, bogged down with a mix of GCSE Revision, Coursework, homework, band/music practise among many other things. Hard to find time. I'll definitely be able to look through it tomorrow. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ListenToLife Posted July 6, 2012 Report Share Posted July 6, 2012 It's finished, BTW. Just getting Fry to check through it for a second. P.S. Like the new name Fry? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frybread002 Posted July 6, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 6, 2012 [quote name='DaWeirdGuy' timestamp='1341615024' post='5968865'] It's finished, BTW. Just getting Fry to check through it for a second. P.S. Like the new name Fry? [/quote] Sigh...I liked KCNamless a lot better... I say go for it Nameless. Post that chapter, as it's about time I have to update TFF and Monsieur Iliaster of our progress. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ListenToLife Posted July 7, 2012 Report Share Posted July 7, 2012 [quote name='LowDog002' timestamp='1341618115' post='5968889'] Sigh...I liked KCNamless a lot better... I say go for it Nameless. Post that chapter, as it's about time I have to update TFF and Monsieur Iliaster of our progress. [/quote] It was your nickname! I'll end up changing it back anyway though. ¬_¬ [spoiler=Chapter 3 (Edited Draft)] In the eyes of the bold and the eyes of the wise, when everything first started off, it was just thirteen people. Then in the middle came The Insurrection. As it came to the end, only five remained… Lominax (VIII) Toraxko (IV) Nervax (III) Akurix (II) Rxadr (I) A cloaked figure – adorned with naught but a simple black trench coat, the symbol of the once great Organisation - stood atop a castle spire, over looking fields and fields of empty darkness; the castle that he stood upon on floating upon a small island, surrounded by a sea of darkness. Aside from the only path that stretched through the miles and miles of emptiness, even the atmosphere itself was layered in shadows. Letting seconds tick away, the cloaked figure merely stood with his arms crossed and pondered through his memories and thoughts, silent and lonely, his mind older than his body. He wasn't immortal, but for the past five years he had not aged a day and not just because of what he was: a Nobody. The fact stemmed from a much larger truth; as the master of time itself, the cloaked figure stopped his own time. A simple task for one such as himself. He scanned the horizon, alert for the slightest notion of anything that was alive, and spotted another man walking down the only path to the castle. Showing a little curiosity, the cloaked figure pulled out a book and began to flip through the pages. Stopping at one certain page in particular, the cloaked figure showed a little grin and summoned a Corridor of Darkness; stepping through so as to appear at the castle doors. Arriving in front of the castle - the newly arrived man roughly one-hundred yards away now - the cloaked figure removed his hood, revealing a young man in his mid twenties, long blond hair framing his face and shining purple eyes, hidden behind round-rimmed glasses. The cloaked figured simply smiled at the man, though it was hardly sincere. “Well, if the Winds of Chaos haven’t appeared once more; unpredictable as always.” The cloaked figure joked, chuckling slightly as he stowed the Book back into its hiding place beneath his cloak. “What brings you to the Castle now, Toraxko?” Almost immediately, ‘Toraxko’ stopped in his tracks, turning to look at his fellow cloaked figure, the rim of the hood only revealing a wide grin. From what the cloaked figure could tell, Toraxko seemed to be laughing, and before he could react, the hooded man disappeared into the wind. Moments later, the said man reappeared, startling The Cloaked Figure as he materialized in front of him, a huge, evil looking grin adorning his face. Chuckling, Toraxko hissed excitedly, “Why if it isn‘t the Stopped Clock, Nervax!” Taking two steps back, Nervax brought out two daggers and raised them towards the newly arrived Toraxko, who was wearing a hooded, black, sleeveless-jacket that was reminiscent of Nervax’s own cloak. They essentially had the same wardrobe, but what made Toraxko stand out was that his jacket only went down to his chest, exposing his well toned abdomen, leaving naught but light fishnet armor to cover his bare, muscular body. This also exposed his black sweat pants, covered in fiery designs. With the matching uniforms, it was clear that both of these people belonged to the same organization. However, despite not having an actual hatred or rivalry among each other, it was common practise for them to fight, and as such they immediately descended into a brawl, a sort of test for each other. Acting first, Toraxko disintegrated - vanishing into the wind once again - and re-appeared behind Nervax, throwing a strong kick. Easily blocking the kick with the backs of his fist, Nervax turned around and met Toraxko dead in the eye. Moving fast, he ran to the side and threw a dagger towards Toraxko’s face. In a movement that was more instinct than training, the Ninja’s hand moved, flashing towards the knife so as to catch it as it flew. They fought for another 5 minutes - equalling each other in almost every move - neither getting a single hit, before they calmed down. At first, the two fighters glared at each other, but that soon died down as they both smiled and lowered their stances. A gesture that meant “we may be equals for now, but this fight only means you got lucky.” Looking out towards the path that led to the castle, both Nervax and Toraxko stared at the horizon. To them, they were hoping that something would happen or some extraordinary event to take place. Instead, only silence filled the air. "What will become of our Organization, Toraxko? We, Lominax, and Akurix cannot keep it up alone.” Nervax asked, finally breaking the deadly silence. “We do not have many choices. Either we have to band together tightly, just split up - Kingdom Hearts itself if need be - or recruit members. And I do not want another member." He explained to Toraxko. "We might get tempted to kill one, as we seem to do a lot." He sighed. "I guess we have just got to keep low, occasionally banding with the other Nobodies to do our missions, in order to keep our Organization from withering; like a flower left alone in a dark room. That flower is us and we have to take care of it. But I guess that’s a hopeless dream now. We don't have hope anymore. Not since Raxon was killed." "Hope? Why would we need hope? The fall of the Organisation is what we need; after, isn’t it only Chaos that matters?” Toraxko responded, taking a glance towards Nervax, a mad grin creeping up his face. “Besides, we’re not meant to be, not meant to exist. You need not worry yourself about such things. We’ll be gone soon, like dust in the chaotic wind.” “What do you mean?” “ Our - The Organization’s - goal is only to achieve what we agreed to do...Kingdom Hearts…Hehehe...But that was when we had thirteen people.” “Would you please explain a bit more No. IV? You speak like a trickster; riddles forever addle your meaning.” Nervax replied, with a hint of annoyance in his voice towards his ‘comrade’, if you could call the maniac a comrade. Seeing how Toraxko liked to talk in riddles, many people within the Organization had found it annoying. Now, well, they still found it annoying. There just weren’t many people. “Ever since we lost Raxdr, our leader, The Organisation literally toppled on its own weight and destroyed itself. Personally, I thought I was the only survivor originally.” Toraxko answered, surprisingly happy for one talking about destruction. “Then here’s a toast to us then, Winds of Chaos. To the Survivors of the great fall.” Nervax said, offering Toraxko a simple glass of cider and raised his own hand, a full glass already held there. “Remind me how you got that glass of cider. I forget the powers of those I do not wish to kill.” “Don’t tell me you forgotten about my Books of Records? I thought that certain power would’ve interested you.” Nervax stated, his eyebrows rising suspiciously. He thought for a moment, then shrugged. It would pass the time. “As a master of time, I’ve personally recorded every experience I have ever encountered and record them in my book; whether it be an event in history, combat statistics, or a simple date. All I need to do is just imagine it and my book re-materializes it.” “An interesting power. Let us toast to it, No. III, Nervax of the Stopped clock. And hope it can serve us well.” Toraxko replied and raised his glass towards his comrade. Although he didn’t usually seem it at first sight, nor at this moment, Nervax knew that Toraxko didn’t truly care about anything such as world domination or Kingdom Hearts, nor did he leave time to remember the powers of the unworthy or the irrelevant, which is what Nervax knew he was grouped among. There was only one thing that interested him - the only thing he truly did cared for at all - was chaos and anarchy. “In a way, at least you don’t sound like that pathetic weakling, Raxon. But who exactly was it that defeated him? I can never remember the details, except that I finished the job.” Toraxko added, draining the glass. “It was No. II - Akurix; One of the only Organisation members I have not recorded the data of, to my regret." Nervax answered, sighing as he finished his own drink. “I worry that I am becoming lax.” “You have all the time in the world; why do you worry about something like that?" Replied Toraxko, chuckling slightly. They stood there for another few minutes, ‘enjoying’ the scenery (Or lack thereof), waiting for something, though neither knew exactly what. “You just gonna stand around all day?” A young voice echoed, the dry tone making the moment feel even duller. “Because we’ve got some kind of reason to be there, and your chatter isn’t speeding up the situation.” As the voice finished, a hand emerged from what seemed to be a crack in the air, which started to grab at what seemed to be nothing. However, after a few minutes it grabbed a hold of... something, and pulled the air into what seemed to be a fold in space. Emerging from the fold was what appeared to be a young boy, roughly 14 years old appearance wise, with very untidy hair white hair, spiking out at random places. As the boy placed both feet on the ground, his samurai styled cloak flowing behind him, his unusual corridor snapped shut violently behind him. He sighed and turned to face Toraxko, his dull eyes barely registering his rival’s existence. “Raxon would’ve served us much better had he been allowed to live. I spared him for a reason.” Akurix stated; his tone rather bland and nonchalant. “You’re just a beast; a wild animal, yet to be caged.” "Hehehehehe...Push comes to shove…‘boy’. I’d advise you just watch your mouth if you want some respect. But I guess that if it wasn't for that blasted traitor Gun Xard, then maybe Raxon would still..."Exist" wouldn't he?" Toraxko replied with a grin on his face. "Besides, it was orders from No. I herself…hehehe… I could hardly say no.” It was obvious merely from this cold welcoming that the rivalry between these two was large. Out of the entire Organization XIII, from its beginnings to the present, not one rivalry had yet matched the hatred that existed between No. II Akurix - The Distorted Blur and No. IV Toraxko - The Winds of Chaos. Each had tried to destroy each other on many occasions, and would continue to fight as often as possible, when time and seclusion permitted. Neither had managed to ever gain a significant victory, thought every battle ended with much destruction and much resentment and contempt. In fact, this hatred was so strong, that everyone in Organization XIII knew about it and tried their best to keep both members separated. Akurix sighed, a habit he was going to have to get rid of, and motioned for Nervax to follow him as they started to walk into the castle, ignoring Toraxko as if he was a child, despite their appearances showing the opposite. He had always been the calm in their rivalry, the cold bite that shunned Toraxko with indifference. “He’s always over the top, that ‘Ninja’. Merely a fake, that’s what he is. A reminder of what once was.” Akurix muttered, lowering his head and shaking it once. He sighed once more and continued on his way, followed by Nervax. Meanwhile Toraxko remained outside and simply smirked at Akurix’s statement, chuckling to himself. Behind those dark eye, who knew what chaotic thoughts swirled. “Tell me Nervax…” Akurix began. “What exactly brought you to this castle?” “Heh, I’m assuming you haven’t heard the message?” Nervax responded, with an almost surprised tone. “What message?” Akurix asked, his face a rather child-like appearance, confused. “Seven days ago while I was out walking in the woods of a world called Twilight Town, I’d received a message regarding this castle. But the message itself was extremely vague and I had a hard time trying to locate this place – even with my skills. I see you merely followed us.” Nervax chuckled, lifting his head to watch the ever closer doors. “[i]Castle Oblivion[/i]... A legend in its own right.” Upon stepping through the main doors, Nervax and Akurix found themselves within the first of many rooms and stopped once they reached the centre to simply stare at the walls that were rotting away. Over a thousand years ago Castle Oblivion was created; its walls pure white and magnificent pillars supporting them. Today, everything was rotting and crumbling, the remnants of a once Grand palace. “It’s depressing.” Akurix noted, surveying the area closely. “That it is.” Nervax agreed, nodding complacently. “As for you Akurix, how did you get here? I would presume you’d followed us...?” Nervax asked while scanning the room for anything of interest. “Personally, I was wandering the stars and travelling through the vast turmoil of space, trying to find a place to stay.” Akurix started. “The space around this section seemed to be distorted, an interesting phenomenon, I must say.” “Space?” Nervax asked. “I am the Distorted Blur, remember. I am the master of the Spatial Realms, as you are of the Temporal Realms.” Akurix stated, in a tone that, though his face revealed nothing, a person familiar with him would recognise as brighter; the equivalent to a laugh for Akurix. There was a long pause while the two surveyed their surroundings, Akurix discovering a set of relatively clean Armchairs for them to rest upon while they conversed, though little conversation passed between them. “It has been awhile since the Organisation last met, has it not? Though I would hardly call us an Organisation anymore... Not since that day.” Nervax stated, breaking the uncomfortable silence that hung between them. “Aye it has. The Insurrection. A hellish day that was.” Akurix nodded, turning to look at the gloomily empty fireplace that sat against the wall. “How he could do that... If I had feelings, I would’ve been chilled to the bone. That man...” “[i][b]Gun Xard[/b][/i]…” Nervax immediately responded, finishing the sentence that his comrade could not. The silence fell once more... In the years following the destruction of Xemnas and his Organisation XIII, the surviving Nobodies were left in despair; with no leaders to command them and no purpose to fulfil, they fell into disillusioned chaos. It wasn’t for another 1000 years that any reappeared capable to command the hordes, to restore their goal: Kingdom Hearts. Raxdr: the newest commander of the Nobodies, leader of the revived Organisation. With the World that Never Was desolated - the only safe home world for all Nobodies destroyed as a result - an alternative solution to their predicament was sought, the new Organization XIII needed a base of operations. With the discovery of Castle Oblivion, surprising still intact, made by the then No. IV - Gun Xard, relief spread through the Nobody population. While he was there, he found two lone Nobodies roaming the empty rooms; one a humanoid, the other a mere dusk. As Gun Xard attempted to destroy the dusk (A mere weakling in Gun Xard’s opinion, easily replacable), Lominax intervene, risking his life to defend the Dusk. Impressed by his bravery, Gun Xard ultimately made a deal with Lominax; in exchange for the Organisation’s use Castle Oblivion as their base of operations, Lominax would be granted place within the Organization’s XIII. Upon accepting this offer, Lominax was given the title of [i]The Divine Tactician[/i] and [i]Lord of Castle Oblivion[/i]. This was over two hundred years ago. Since then, the original Castle Oblivion had been remolded and was greatly expanded into a much larger castle that greatly overshadowed the previous Castle Oblivion. However, when the Day of the Insurrection came, and with it the rebellion of Gun Xard and his lackeys, much of the Castle had been destroyed, carnage reigning throughout the empire of the Nobodies. Nobodies were once again scattered, the Organisation was torn in half and chaos ruled. The two ‘friends’ shivered as they remembered that fateful day, a hint of human emotion reaching both of them as the revisited their memories of the fire, destruction and the cries of dying Nobodies. They re-watched the battle of Gun Xard and Raxdr, watched as each fell, watched as their master was sealed away, paralyzed in the deepest of sleeps. Akurix was the first to awake from the visions; his normally dull eyes gleaming, a dark fire raging inside them. Before he was able to speak, though, a familiar voice tore through their skulls. Nervax smiled as it spoke. [b]“Friends, I am not yet dead!”[/b] The voice called, the power reaching out to all Nobodies. [b]“Rejoice as Kingdom Hearts is still out there! Rejoice as I am still alive, still with a body and a soul! And though I, and we all, lack hearts, we still have the power to obtain Kingdom Hearts! I, Rxadr, the Master of the In-Between, have returned from darkness!”[/b][/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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