velvenishe Posted February 29, 2008 Report Share Posted February 29, 2008 Hey everyone! Been checkin out the forum and saw the written card section so I decided to throw this idea out there. I tried to make it as balanced as possible but it might still be unbalanced. So check it out and tell me what u think. Rights of Rebirth (Continuous Spell Card) Once per turn, during your Standby Phase, by paying 1000 life points, send one monster from your deck to your Graveyard to Special Summon one monster in your Graveyard to your side of the field in face-up Defense Position. Monsters Special Summoned by this effect cannot be tributed for a Tribute Summon during the turn they are Special Summoned. Effects of Effect Monsters Special Summoned by this effect are negated. Monsters sent from the deck to the Graveyard by this effect cannot be Special Summoned from the Graveyard while this card is active. If there are no monsters in your Graveyard that you can Special Summon, this card is destroyed. When this card is removed from the field, remove from play all monsters Special Summoned by this effect. changes r in bold Link to comment
SpazzeOut Posted February 29, 2008 Report Share Posted February 29, 2008 i like the idea i don't know how many other people will but i do. and it's pretty well balanced i guess Link to comment
velvenishe Posted February 29, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 29, 2008 thanx. is there anything i can edit to make it better u think? Link to comment
Guest Black Fang Posted February 29, 2008 Report Share Posted February 29, 2008 so.. is it a staller or some sort? 8/10 Link to comment
Guest Ixigo Posted February 29, 2008 Report Share Posted February 29, 2008 An uber-deck thinner combined with a slightly nerfed Monster Reborn without maintainance cost? Add maintainance cost at least 1000 LP / round. Link to comment
SushiTheLegend Posted February 29, 2008 Report Share Posted February 29, 2008 I don't really think the maintainance cost is really needed to be honest...since you can't revive the monsters you send from your deck by it's effect...but meh. Link to comment
velvenishe Posted February 29, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 29, 2008 i seriously considered putting in a cost but i decided not to because there are quite a few drawbacks already. Not being able to sacrifice first turn, negating the effect of a summoned effect monster. However there are quite a few monsters that can make use of this effect. Its like a continuous foolish burial somewhat...so i may put in a cost... Link to comment
Guest Ixigo Posted February 29, 2008 Report Share Posted February 29, 2008 People seriously need to learn the difference between "restriction" and "drawback". Your card has no drawbacks, only restrictions. And with a card this powerful, restrictions aren't enough. Link to comment
velvenishe Posted February 29, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 29, 2008 I added a small cost. I don't think it needs a cost higher than 800 because of the many "RESTRICTIONS" it has. If anyone has a good reason why it should have a higher cost just let me know. Link to comment
Herr Kanin Posted February 29, 2008 Report Share Posted February 29, 2008 I like it, though it may be a bit unbalanced. I remade it (i'm not very experienced though)and here it is: Once per turn, by paying 1000 Life Points, send one monster from your Deck to your Graveyard to Special Summon one monster in your Graveyard to your side of the field in face-up Defense Position. Monsters Special Summoned by this effect cannot be tributed for a Tribute Summon. Effects of Effect Monsters Special Summoned by this effect are negated. Monsters sent from the Deck to the Graveyard by this effect cannot be Special Summoned from the Graveyard. If there are no monsters in your Graveyard that you can Special Summon, this card is destroyed. When this card is removed from the field, remove from play all monsters Special Summoned by this effect. What do you think? I PM-ed you the card. Link to comment
velvenishe Posted February 29, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 29, 2008 I like it' date=' though it may be a bit unbalanced. I remade it (i'm not very experienced though)and here it is: Once per turn, by paying 1000 Life Points, send one monster from your Deck to your Graveyard to Special Summon one monster in your Graveyard to your side of the field in face-up Defense Position. Monsters Special Summoned by this effect cannot be tributed for a Tribute Summon. Effects of Effect Monsters Special Summoned by this effect are negated. Monsters sent from the Deck to the Graveyard by this effect cannot be Special Summoned from the Graveyard. If there are no monsters in your Graveyard that you can Special Summon, this card is destroyed. When this card is removed from the field, remove from play all monsters Special Summoned by this effect. What do you think? I PM-ed you the card.[/quote'] OK i'm gonna fix this card. i like the idea quoted above but there are 1 or two things i'm gonna change... Link to comment
Lucas Maximus Posted March 1, 2008 Report Share Posted March 1, 2008 7/10 great idea. ^_^ Give more detail on the card though such as: Level, ATK / DEF, Card Rarity... Link to comment
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