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Dark Messiah: A new age. [PG-16/OOC/Started/Those slots get eaten up fast, dont they?(Not Accepting)]


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Flandre, I did not make any sense from the first part of that post.

[color=#FF8C00][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3]"You already saw what i'm capable of, and you still worry about me?... I like you kid, you're pretty funny..."[/size][/font][/color]

If she is talking about Xelto, he never said anything, nor indicated, that he was worried.
If she was talking about someone else, then there is some serious confusion that needs to be clarified.

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Name: Forward<no last name>
Age: 23
Gender: Male
Class:[color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3]Archer[/size][/font][/color]
Personality:known for his impatience, as he repeatedly noted that he did not wish to wait or keep others waiting. He also rarely shows any emotions, and even these instances were short-lived.
Appearance:thin blonde boy,with a bow
Bio:Forward knows he's not an ordinary boy. His father thinks he's not human and it's driving him crazy. He can't be trusted not to abuse him, and lives in a mental institution. When Forward agrees to model for his father's friend, his face on billboards brings a lot of attention. Suddenly there are many people taking an interest in him, some with very unusual powers, just like Forward.
Weapons: knives, bow+ arrow<any thing>
Magic Powers: fast healing when sleeps and has lot's of energy <not easy to tire out>
Divine Powers:none
Other: wel-trained

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Magic Powers.All powerfull all seeing eyes>
The first ability of the gives the user a near 360º field of vision, except for one blind spot at the back of the neck above the third thoracic vertebra. Upon activation, the wielder is granted an automatic 50 metre field of vision around themselves.
The second ability is being able to see through solid objects, and can use a degree of telescopic sight. The distance and the degree of telescopic sight varies from person to person, and can be improved, able to see an area of 50 metres, but later increases his visual range to at least [u]1000[/u] metres, However, cannot see through certain barriers, The third and one of the greatest uses of the[b] Byakugan[/b] is the ability to see blood, blood flow, the blood circulation system inside the body with great detail as well as the colour of blood.As the eye evolves, gaining more power, this ability extends to being able to track fast-moving objects before finally giving some amount of predictive capabilities to the user, allowing them to see the image of an attacker’s next move from the slightest muscle tension in their body and counterattack or dodge without any wasted movement. However, even though the user may be able to see an attack or know it is coming, their body may not always have time to react.Naer death,It is used by the for interrogation and is capable of discerning whether an individual is lying or not and the ability granted to the wielder of the great eyes to revive the dead each time used your life span is halfed.


I lol'd so hard. Almost as hard as having billboards in a medieval rp.

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Personally speaking, I don't find the application very acceptable nor unique. For one thing, there are already like... two mages, at least, iirc. Picking a mage pretty much just lowered the unique status, and lowers the acceptability chance.

Also, the application itself is below subpar. The appearance and personality is a joke. Not enough detail.
Biography: Also a joke. Billboards? Medieval Era. No billboards or mental institutions.
Weapons. Cane. I don't know what to say honestly.
Magic powers? By the Devil, it's disgustingly over powered, and a rip off from Naruto. Even less unique.
The Divine Powers are an even bigger joke. Eat dreams and nightmares? What are you, a pokemon with a Dream Eater attack?
Other.... My gosh. This took the cake for me. Thank you, I love you now. You made me think there was nothing more to add to this application. I was wrong.

I have never seen a more ridiculous application. Truly.
And this is pure honesty. I'm not putting you down, but man. I had to be honest on this application.

And please note, I'm not in charge of application acceptances. I'm just posting my opinion.

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[quote name='Vairocana' timestamp='1333586525' post='5901974']
Magic Powers.All powerfull all seeing eyes>
The first ability of the gives the user a near 360º field of vision, except for one blind spot at the back of the neck above the third thoracic vertebra. Upon activation, the wielder is granted an automatic 50 metre field of vision around themselves.
The second ability is being able to see through solid objects, and can use a degree of telescopic sight. The distance and the degree of telescopic sight varies from person to person, and can be improved, able to see an area of 50 metres, but later increases his visual range to at least [u]1000[/u] metres, However, cannot see through certain barriers, The third and one of the greatest uses of the[b] Byakugan[/b] is the ability to see blood, blood flow, the blood circulation system inside the body with great detail as well as the colour of blood.As the eye evolves, gaining more power, this ability extends to being able to track fast-moving objects before finally giving some amount of predictive capabilities to the user, allowing them to see the image of an attacker’s next move from the slightest muscle tension in their body and counterattack or dodge without any wasted movement. However, even though the user may be able to see an attack or know it is coming, their body may not always have time to react.Naer death,It is used by the for interrogation and is capable of discerning whether an individual is lying or not and the ability granted to the wielder of the great eyes to revive the dead each time used your life span is halfed.


I lol'd so hard. Almost as hard as having billboards in a medieval rp.
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i had that in mind wel when is it open for accepting

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wow i
[quote name='Flandre Scarlet' timestamp='1333587834' post='5902014']
it also appears that the applicant can't read, it says "NOT ACCEPTING" in rather huge letters in the title...
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[quote name='Flandre Scarlet' timestamp='1333587834' post='5902014']
it also appears that the applicant can't read, it says "NOT ACCEPTING" in rather huge letters in the title...
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really did thought i just have to wait to be accepted no lie

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I'm actually reopening Apps. Cus Raine quit.

But Forward, HELL NO. Fix that app BIG TIME.

Also, NO MORE GODDAMN MAGES!! We have enough! Too many people using a sword, and too many people using magic. Any more apps need to be Archer, Assassin, or Priest(ess) class. Good god people.

Hey Katoki, great job ticking off the one guy who ACTUALLY can help <_<

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Y'know, if you look at the app example at the very beginning and compare it to his (Forward's) app, he doesn't have the required number of lines in Personality, Appearance, and the Bio.



EDIT: Just saying, I've gotten about half my app done so far.

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