Vairocana Posted March 18, 2012 Report Share Posted March 18, 2012 [removed for reasons] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rustyowl Posted March 19, 2012 Report Share Posted March 19, 2012 This was very well done. I'm not exactly a very good criticizer, so I can't really give you a critique, and frankly, there isn't much I could critique anyways. It was a very good story. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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