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I read the rules, they just dont answer my question properly. I'm asking if I can have my old characters power levels on my new character. But I guess not.
I too, would like to use Kazuki again, but It gets a bit boring after a while, and I like the Idea of a new character. I'll wait to see what champster says. I'd like to get his opinion, because I'm happy with either. Besides, this took me so much effort.

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PS, Kazuki's skill was close to god mod aswell. His genjutsu was the best in the Fire Country, possibly the world, his Taijutsu was impressive enough to over power jounin level ninja and he could control some of the strongest fire element Ninjutsu. He was bloody powerful!

......on second thoughs. (Bwehehehehe >:] )

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@ KCNameless, Actually....

[quote]
- Also, Players who joined the other RPG may still have their original characters transferred here, complete with all the stats they had including techniques and items. [b]They may also choose to edit there characters as they please.[/b]
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You could just add the old stats and simply add your new character app and replace it with the old one. Like what you suggested. =P
Also, please select your Ultimate Technique. Also, you forgot the Description/Appearance part.

@ TotalObelisk, lol that's fine. [size=1]That goes for me too... =P[/size]

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So I can have this character, with Kazuki's level? Yay! So, if he's level 5, because that's what Kazuki was, that makes his AP 8 and 75 SP? I'm not sure, but I think the characters got 2 AP and 15 SP per level, unless I'm wrong or you've changed it.

In fact, after reading swift App I realised there was a lot of links to Shinobi chronicles, and that he was basically Kirimoto, so, if Swift's okay with it, I'll create Kazuki and we can play it in a similar way to Chronicles. If you're okay with that Swift?

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Here's the original Kazuki app, with some edits, the stats you put in and a possible new thing in storage if allowed? As a basic attack medium.

[spoiler=Magnet Soldier/KCNameless, Kazuki Nameni (LV 5)]

[b]Name:[/b] Kazuki Fukusawa
[b]Clan:[/b] Former member of the Kireidosu Clan
[b]Unique Ability:[/b] Shikra: Gives the User an Affinity for Illusions/Genjutsu, and allows talented users of it to use some genjutsu without Handseals. Also increases their ability to use clones. (Genjutsu cost 40% less Chakra and 20% less Fatigue. Clones cost 20% less Chakra and 10% less Fatigue.) The power of the Shikra can surpass that of other dojutsu, being able to perform even weak Genjutsu without being detected. (50% chance of Fooling Byakugan/Sharingan, and using Illusions and Clones undetected.) The Shikra is also difficult to fool when it comes to illusions, being able to detect most illusion upfront(60% Chance to negate all enemy genjutsu)
The Shikra also has the unyeilding ability to insight fear into all who look at it, giving it a chance to paralyze them with fear. (50% chance for opponent to be unable to attack, block or dodge for 1 turn. Once per battle use.)
Cost: -15 Chakra x No. of Turns. (Passive effects of the Shikra also include Large Migraines and insomnia, so 5% random chance of user being unable to Attack for 1 turn.)
[b]Age:[/b] 18
[b]Gender:[/b] Male
[b]Village:[/b] Konohagakure/Leaf
[b]Ninja Rank:[/b] Jounin
[b]Skill(s):[/b] Genjutsu, Element, Ninjutsu, Summoning, Kekkei Genkai
[b]Element(s):[/b] [img]http://images4.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20091012120335/naruto/images/thumb/b/bf/Nature_Icon_Fire.svg/18px-Nature_Icon_Fire.svg.png[/img] Fire Release
[spoiler=Appearance/Description:][img]http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o118/Kimmy_Me/anime/punkjaan-1.jpg[/img]
[indent=1]Not my image.[/spoiler]
[b]Personality:[/b] Kazuki is a strange boy, with a personality that splits almost to that of a Schizophrenic. Originally, he was a cold, rather ruthless boy with a heart for killing and emotional span consisting of calculating bloodlust and a dense, slow to rouse but vicious anger. He was a determined stead fast boy with a quick mind and a quicker blade. He was incredibly intelligent, both tactically and with his wit, and could think around any situation. He was original and skilled, in Killing techniques, or ninja techniques, or even just talking, and he could escape almost any situation with merely the blade of his tongue.
He still has all this attributes, and while on a serious mission, he is not the most reassuring character, with even his chakra giving off the feeling that it would stab you in the back without hesitation were you to go against him, but he has revealed a softer side since joining his Ninja team. Out side of serious missions, he has shown himself to be a relaxed and calm individual who loves to read and solve riddles, or merely play a bit of music. He likes to sit atop the Hokage monument occasionally and watch the clouds, though he dislikes that he rarely has enough time. His residual anger has almost completely disappeared, for his vengeance against his clan is complete, but he still has a ferocious temper when tested.
[b]History/Background:[/b] Kazuki has a similar Background to that of Neji Hyuuga. He was also born into the side branch of a large, prestigious clan within Konoha, and he was also treated as if he was the dirt on the floor when compared to the members of the main branch. He was also a highly talented Ninja, with one of the strongest of the clan’s Kekkei Genkai in 100 years, and was neglected in favour of the main branch members, whom he bore a large resentment towards. The difference between Neji and Kazuki though, was that Kazuki was treated as a mere slave, bullied and treated like dirt by his Main branch cousin, Zanuka Kireidosu. Zanuka was a large teenager, about 2 years Kazuki’s elder, and was still a Genin at age 15. However, he was the eldest son of the main branch, and was as such treated with reverence, and allowed him to believe he was incredibly strong. This was what angered Kazuki, and he vowed to defeat Zanuka, and take him down a few pegs.
Now, the events of Kazuki’s Chuunin exam were....interesting. A lot of thing’s happened during it, but by the end of it, Kazuki had achieved Chuunin rank. And this was when he got his revenge. He approached Zanuka and challenged him, revealing that while Zanuka had failed the Chuunin exam again, Kazuki had passed. Zanuka was still quite confident, so accepted the challenge. He left with a broken mind, and crippled legs, and was told he would never become a ninja. Although his mind healed, he has never healed his legs, and so was removed from the pride and joy of the Clan. But, rather than stay and be ruined like Zanuka, Kazuki abandoned the clan, finding a place of his own and being with his teammates. He followed the Hokage and his Sensei as his Idols, with no-one else to lead him, and looked towards his future as a free man.
However, after attaining Jounin rank, a full two years before his team mate, Kibuto Karamine, the Village came under attack from the unrelenting forces of the Ninnai. Like most other jounin and Chuunin rank Ninja, he fought valiantly to allow the genin to take the villagers to safety, but like most others, he couldn’t fight forever. Just as he was about to give up, and as the village was about to be over run, the Hokage released his power. The power of Hokage Hashirama was incredible to look upon; he sealed the entire Ninnai army within minutes. No-one can remember fully what type of technique he used – Kazuki himself personally believes it was an ancient Uzumaki Technique – but the village has been in awe of Hashirama’s power since then, though it took up most of the Hokage’s chakra at that point and had left the village vulnerable for a few days.
Since then Kazuki has been training incredibly alongside his teammates, watching Kibuto catch up to him an become his equal as a jounin, and waited for the chance to stop whatever was causing the Ninnai, waiting for the call to fight.
He has also recently become a lot more cold and dark, becoming more separate from his squad and violent. He can feel something coming on, and has lately been remembering his previous sensei, the Jounin Amagai, a traitor from Konoha, and has vowed again to kill him.
[spoiler=Jutsu(s):]

[img]http://images4.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20091012120335/naruto/images/thumb/b/bf/Nature_Icon_Fire.svg/18px-Nature_Icon_Fire.svg.png[/img] Fire Release: Phoenix Immortal Fire Technique [LV 2]
Type: Ninjutsu, Element
Detail: This technique creates small fireballs, which are spat out of the user's mouth, flying wildly in every direction and assaulting the enemy. In addition, the flames are controlled one by one with chakra, so avoiding them all is extremely, difficult.
Effect: 40 DMG to opponent.
Cost: -35 Chakra. -20 Fatigue.

Demonic Illusion: Hell Viewing Technique [LV 2]
Type: Genjutsu
Detail: This is a genjutsu that reveals the fears that dwell inside people's hearts. Everyone has an image of the one thing they wouldn't want to ever see. This genjutsu is a technique that draws forth such an image from within the heart and has one mistake it for reality.
Efffect: Opponent is unable to Attack, Block or Dodge effectively for 2 posts only by 35%.
Cost: -40 Chakra. -15 Fatigue.

Shadow Clone Technique [LV 2]
Type: Ninjutsu
Detail: Similar to the Clone Technique, this jutsu creates clones of the user. But unlike the Clone Technique, these clones are actual copies, not illusions. The user's chakra is evenly distributed among every clone, giving each clone an equal fraction of the user's overall power. The clones are capable of performing jutsu on their own and can even bleed, but will usually disperse after one or two solid blows.
Effect: Decrease 50% less damage from all attacks by 35%.
Cost: -60 Chakra. -15 Fatigue.

Demonic Illusion: False Surroundings Technique [LV 2]
Type: Genjutsu
Detail: This jutsu changes the appearance of a nearby object or area in order to disorient the opponent.
Efffect: Opponent has a 40% chance of missing his/her target when attacking for 2 posts only.
Cost: -35 Chakra. -20 Fatigue.

Demonic Illusion: Raven Streak Technique [LV 3]
Type: Genjutsu, Weaponry
Detail: Produces an Illusion that surrounds the foe with multiple Ravens, each flying past the Foe at incredible speeds, when in reality, it is a multitude of shuriken. This harms a bit, but it's main objective is to Maim the opponent.
Effect: Deals 50 DMG within 20 feet radius. Has a 50% chance of Paralyzing the opponent(s) for one turn, and has 25% chance of Paralyzing the opponent(s) for 2 turns.
Cost: -50 Chakra. -30 Fatigue.

[img]http://images4.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20091012120335/naruto/images/thumb/b/bf/Nature_Icon_Fire.svg/18px-Nature_Icon_Fire.svg.png[/img] Blazing Fire Blade Technique [LV 4]
Type: Ninjutsu, Taijutsu, Element
Description: A Variation(And much more powerful Version) of the Kirigakure village's Spinning Ice blade technique invented by Konoha's previous Hokage, intended to counter the Ice blade technique. It was tought to the Drecel clan by the Hokage just before his death, and has been handed down to the three most talented children of each generation of the Drecel clan, aswell as every child in the main branch. However, many weilders of it have taught children not designated as the most talented. It engulfs the users hand in a blaze of flames. The user feels none of the heat of the flames, but may occasionally get burned. This technique also enhances the users speed. Like the Ice Blade technique, it is one of the most dangerous Fire Element techniques at the moment, and has many variations.
Effect: Deals 50 DMG to Opponent(s) for 2-5 turns. Has a 40% chance of burning the opponent and/or the users, dealing 15 damage a post until the fire goes out (Basically, when you decide). The user also cannot use Jutsu that require the use of two hands.
Cost: -40 Chakra X the number of turns. -40 Fatigue X the number of turns. -50 Health.

[img]http://images4.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20091012120335/naruto/images/thumb/b/bf/Nature_Icon_Fire.svg/18px-Nature_Icon_Fire.svg.png[/img] Fire Release: Fire Blade inferno [LV 2]
Type: Ninjutsu, Element
Description: This technique can only be used when Blazing fire Blade is active. The user Sacrifices the Blazing Fire Blade technique to cause an explosion, distracting the opponent and causing damage. When this is used all effects caused by the Blazing fire blade, on both the opponent and the user, are negated.
Effect: 40 DMG to opponent. Negates all effects of Blazing Fire blade. Has a 30% Chance of causing burn.
Cost: -30 Chakra. -30 Fatigue.

[img]http://images4.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20091012120335/naruto/images/thumb/b/bf/Nature_Icon_Fire.svg/18px-Nature_Icon_Fire.svg.png[/img] Concentrated Fire Blade [LV 2]
Type: Ninjutsu, Taijutsu, Element
Description: A stronger, more volatile version of the Blazing fire blade. It can only be used while fire blade is Active. It concentrates the users’ chakra into a physical form, creating a Katana out of the Chakra. This Blade can manipulate fire and is surrounded by it, and increases the Users speed and strength to nearly godly amounts. However, it lasts longer and takes much more of a toll on the user, as well as it fails to burn the opponent. Usually only used as a last resort.
Effect: 60 DMG each turn for 2-3 turns.
Cost: -45 Chakra each turn. -40 Fatigue each turn. -35 Health.[/indent]

[indent=1][img]http://images4.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20091012120335/naruto/images/thumb/b/bf/Nature_Icon_Fire.svg/18px-Nature_Icon_Fire.svg.png[/img][font=Symbol] [/font]Fire Blade Release: Infernal Doomsday Devastation. [LV 5] (Ultimate)[/indent]
Type: Ninjutsu, Element
Detail: A desperate variation of the Fire Blade technique that was unlocked in battle. It is caused by an overload of chakra on the fire blade, with causes it to grow out of proportion. It keeps devouring the users’ chakra and then explodes into a focussed, spiralling inferno, causing a large amount of damage to the surrounding environment. However, due to being caught in the middle of it, the user receives a large amount of damage.
Effect: 200 Damage to all opponents.
Cost: -150 Health, -200 Chakra, -100 Fatigue.

Demonic Illusion: False Battle Technique [LV 2]
Type: Genjutsu, Taijutsu
Description: Creates the illusion of a battle with the opponent, distracting them for either an Easy kill or a quick get away. The battle usually involves Kazuki using his Fire Blade technique, as they have all but the last hand seal the same. This is one of Kazuki's most powerful Genjutsu, and a unique one he developed himself.
Effect: 30 DMG to opponent. The opponent cannot Dodge or Block effectively for 2 posts.
Cost: -40 Chakra. -10 Fatigue.

Ninja Art: Summoning Technique (LV 1)
Detail: Kazuki's Summoning Technique allows him to summon a variety of Ninja Cats in a similar manner to Ninken, Ninja Dogs. There are many different Types of Ninja Cat, including Tracker/Scouts, assassins, archers and samurai Cats. All jutsu known by Ninja cat is leveled according to the Cat's Summoning Level. All Ninja Cats are Wind Element.
Effect: Summons an ally, Scout Cat and/or basic Ninja Cat, to aid the user for 2 turns only. Can attack opponent(s) and/or defend itself or the user.

[img]http://images3.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20091012163151/naruto/images/thumb/7/7a/Nature_Icon_Wind.svg/18px-Nature_Icon_Wind.svg.png[/img][b]Scout Cat(s)[/b]
Stats: Health: 50. Chakra: 50. Fatigue: 50
Jutsu: Temporary Paralysis Jutsu (LV 1).

[img]http://images3.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20091012163151/naruto/images/thumb/7/7a/Nature_Icon_Wind.svg/18px-Nature_Icon_Wind.svg.png[/img] [b]Basic Ninja Cat(s)[/b]
Stats: Health: 75. Chakra: 75. Fatigue: 75
Known Jutsu: Temporary Paralysis Jutsu (LV 1).
Wind Release: Petal Dust Dance (LV 1).

[img]http://images4.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20091012120335/naruto/images/thumb/b/bf/Nature_Icon_Fire.svg/18px-Nature_Icon_Fire.svg.png[/img] [img]http://images3.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20091012163151/naruto/images/thumb/7/7a/Nature_Icon_Wind.svg/18px-Nature_Icon_Wind.svg.png[/img] Collaboration Technique: Fire among the Petals. (LV 1)
Type: Collaboration, Element, Ninjutsu, Taijutsu.
Detail: The Petal Dust Dance is performed by one of the Ninja Cats, providing a distract for Kazuki to unleash his Fire Blade.
Effect: Deals 90 DMG to opponent, Opponent unable to Dodge or Block for 1 turn(s).
Cost: -90 Chakra, -70 Fatigue, -50 Ally Chakra, -30 Ally Fatigue.[/spoiler]


[spoiler=Stats]


[[u]Attributes[/u]]


[color=lime][Health[/color]] [color=lime]495/495[/color] (75+)

[color=blue][Chakra][/color] [color=blue]475/475[/color] (75+)

[color=red][Fatigue[/color]] [color=red]350/350[/color]


[[u]General[/u]]


[Level] 5

[EXP] 1200/1500 EXP until next LV.

[Rank Reputation] Jounin - An Elite Shinobi, truly you have surpassed your teachers and on the path to becoming a greater individual within the Five Great Shinobi Villages. You have remarkable talents and people respect that and yourself.

[Faction/Village Reputation]

Konohagakure - Respected

Kirigakure - Neutral

Sunagakure - Friendly

Iwagakure - Hated

Kumogakure - Neutral

[Ryo] 0

[Skill Points] 0

[Action Points] 0/15


[[u]Pouch[/u]]


[color=olive]Kunai[/color] (2/10)
{ Sell - 250 Ryo | [color=olive]Common[/color] }
Description: A black dagger designed for thrusting, throwing and stabbing.
Effect: Automatically does 10 DMG when used.

[color=olive]Shuriken[/color] (5/10)
{ Sell - 250 Ryo | [color=olive]Common[/color] }
Description: Sharpened, four-pronged metal stars, used for throwing.
Effect: Automatically does 10 DMG when used.

[color=olive]Green Pill[/color] (2/5)
{ Sell - 250 Ryo | [color=olive]Common[/color] }
Description: A standard restoration pill.
Effect: Restores +25 HP, +15 Fatigue, +15 Chakra.

[color=orange]Smoke Bomb[/color] (2/5)
{ Sell - 900 Ryo | [color=orange]Rare[/color] }
Description: Creates a large cloud of smoke wherever it lands.
Effect: Decreases 25% less DMG taken from all attacks for 2 turns only.

[color=indigo]Armor Charm[/color]
{ Sell - 12,500 Ryo | [color=indigo]Ancient Relic[/color] }
Description: An amulet that raises Block and Dodge Skills. Just carrying this hardens your skin like rock.
Effect: +10 boost to Block Skill and +5 boost to Dodge Skill.


[[u]Gear[/u]]

[Equipped]

[color=olive]Standard Gloves[/color] ([b]Hands[/b])
{ Sell - 1,250 Ryo | Standard Set | [color=olive]Common[/color] }
Details: A simple, lightweight and flexible gloves. When worn along with the rest of the Standard set, stats increase by double.
Effect: While equipped, increases Chakra by +75. +150, if worn with all Standard Sets.

[color=olive]Standard Jounin Vest[/color] ([b]Torso[/b])
{ Sell - 1,250 Ryo | Standard Set | [color=olive]Common[/color] }
Details: A simple, yet sturdy Vest. When worn along with the rest of the Standard set, stats increase by double.
Effect: While equipped, increases Health by +75. +150, if worn with all Standard Sets.


[Storage]

Samehada: (See Champster's stat thing)
[spoiler=The story of the recieval of Samehada]
It was a dark night in Kirigakure. Clouds covered the sky, blocking out almost all light, and the mist was as thick as ever. Any resident of Kiri could tell that a storm was on the way, and a large one at that. The guards were tense, and the shadows loomed, giving the village a haunted impression. All doors were locked, and curtains were drawn, with residents huddled around the nearest fire, waiting for the storm to come and pass.
“What a night for guard duty.” One Kiri-nin muttered to the man next to him, pulling his cloak tighter. “You’d think they’d give us more than a crappy torch to help us see. I’m freezing.”
His friend chuckled half-heartedly. “At least they gave us something. Don’t be picky. At any rate, we have some heat. It could be worse.” He stated, trying to lighten the mood.
“I guess you’re right. At least we won’t have to worry about any atta...” The first ninja started, before a soft ‘thud’ came from his chest. “What happe...?” The second ninja began to ask, hearing his friend fall to the floor. He had barely stood up when another ‘thud’ sounded, and as he looked down, he saw the Kunai sticking out from his chest. Gasping his last breath, he looked up to see a shadow dash past his eyes, and fall down to the village below.

Kazuki sighed as he concentrated chakra into his feet, softening his landing. It had been a very easy entry, the darkness and the mist had hidden him from sight, and there were few guards. Still, Kiri was a powerful village, and its ninja were formidable. He knew he had to be careful. He ran across the street quickly, managing to get under the cover of a nearby alley just as it started to rain. “Great. If I meet any Nin, they’ll have an advantage.” He muttered, cursing. Shrugging, he moved down the alley, dashing across the street at the end. He continued moving throughout the village, staying away from main streets, until he had reached a large building near the centre of the village. “The Scroll Keep.” He whispered, looking up at the large building in slight awe. Inside were hundreds upon thousands of legendary scrolls, containing hidden or forbidden techniques.
Kazuki grinned and jumped up onto a nearby roof, and quickly jumping onto a ledge of the Keep, near enough to a window to be able to see inside and possibly enter, and far enough away to appear invisible.

“It’s going to be hell getting home.” One of the guards on duty inside the keep groaned. “This storm’s just gonna get worse.”
“It probably will, but what can you do?” A keeper of the scrolls stated, shrugging his shoulders as he looked out at the window. “At least you know it’ll be a quiet night.”
“It’s always a quiet night. Everyone knows you cant break in here, and any scrolls that are of any value are safely locked away in the compound out back.” The guard pointed out.

“Damn it.” Kazuki cursed, climbing above the window to a larger ledge, one he could stand on. “It’ll probably be heavily guarded.” He groaned, running around the outside of the large building.
He ran to the opposite side of the tower-like building, and was now looking down upon a long, metal building, surrounded by large walls and guarded by what appeared to be top ninja. “Sh*t, this is gonna be harder than I thought.” Kazuki muttered, jumping from the Keep to inside the walls, landing in the shadows around the edge of the walls. He was about to move positions, when a voice from above him called, “What do you want, Nin?”
Instinct reacted for him, causing Kazuki to jump away from the voice, into the centre of the compound, now surrounded by Ninja. “It seems we have a would-be thief, boys.” The voice from earlier said, jumping from the wall. He was obviously a very strong man, judging from the muscles on his revealed arms and the fact that his was swinging a large, rounded, bandaged sword with one hand effortlessly. “Capture him alive. We want to know where he’s from.” The man called.
As he finished his sentence, the surrounding ninja all reached for their weapons. Some had even started running before Kazuki grinned and made a single hand seal. He chuckled slightly as every ninja surrounding him, asides from the man in front of him, fell to the ground, clutching their heads. “What the...?” The man managed to utter, before Kazuki was upon him. Kazuki was already behind the swordsman, kunai aiming for his throat. The swordsman managed to dodge in time, rolling forwards and spinning, pointing his sword towards Kazuki.
“What did you do to them?” The swordsman asked, nodding his head towards the now unconscious guards.
“A simple genjutsu. None of them are dead, don’t worry. But they won’t be moving for a while.” Kazuki stated, chuckling. “Sadly, it takes quite a bit of chakra to perform it on that many people at once, so I left you conscious, because you’d be the most interesting to fight. Now, Hotaru Sakisoshi - wielder of Samehada, one of the swordsmen of them mist – shall we fight?” Kazuki asked, in a mocking politeness, as he threw his Kunai at Hotaru.
Hotaru easily blocked it, knocking the knife away with Samehada, then ran towards Kazuki, blue, scale-like blades erupting from the bandages of his blade. “Die, intruder.” Hotaru called, jumping then slamming his blade towards Kazuki. Kazuki easily moved out of the way, almost sliding to the right of the blade. He pressed his hand down upon the covered part of Samehada and used it to push himself upwards, allowing him to kick Hotaru. The swordsman was hit with enough force to send him and Samehada flying about 4 metres away, while Kazuki landed gracefully where Hotaru had been a few seconds before.
“Damn it. [i]Water Release: Water Shark Bomb Technique![/i]” Hotaru called, letting go of Samehada for a second, to complete the hand seals. It was all the time Kazuki needed. “[i]Fire Release: Blazing Fire Blade technique![/i]” Kazuki cried, using the sudden boost in speed to appear beside Hotaru, kicking Samehada away as he slashed for the opening. Hotaru barely had time to react, moving his right hand towards Kazuki’s fiery hand, he pushed it away, jumping backwards, further away from Samehada. He winced as he looked down at his now burnt hand, and looked up to see Kazuki picking up Samehada.
“What a blade. I can feel its Chakra, and it’s massive. I’m amazed you can wield this mighty blade at your level.” Kazuki stated, turning around to face Hotaru. “I’d use it to beat you, create a sense of Irony, but I don’t really need it to destroy you.” Kazuki explained, throwing the blade to the side. “Now then, I’ll show you something I don’t show just anyone, out of honour. After all, you are sort of a legend.” Kazuki stated, smiling, placing his right hand into a single hand seal, while his other hand covered his eyes. “[i]Shikra.[/i]” He whispered, looking up at Hotaru as he lowered his arms.
As Hotaru looked into the bright gleaming eyes, he was struck with paralyzing fear. “What is...?” He started to ask, before Kazuki appeared in front of him, the Shikra gone, but Hotaru struck with a paralyzing technique. “It’s my Kekkei Genkai, the Shikra. Feel honoured that it caused your death.” Kazuki uttered, thrusting his Kunai into Hotaru’s gut.
He watched the swordsmen slump to the ground, a pool of red flowing around the body with the rain. “Now, to get that scroll.” Kazuki muttered, grabbing Samehada off the floor. “Might aswell keep this too.” He exclaimed, grinning. His grin didn’t last long, as when he turned around to face the building he was blocked by the rest of the Swordsmen of the mist, as well as a large group of Jounin.
“You have killed our comrade. Now, you shall pay with your life.” The wielder of the Kubikiribocho stated, pointing his blade towards Kazuki. The rest of the Swordsmen followed suit. However, as they were about to attack, Kazuki’s eye’s flashed again, paralyzing the Swordsmen with fear. “I’m sorry; I don’t have enough chakra to fight the rest of you. My apologies.” Kazuki said, smiling, as his form blurred to reveal an illusion, and that he’d already disappeared.

Arriving back in Konoha a full week later, he was told that although he had failed his mission to steal a scroll containing powerful techniques, he had done something almost as good by stealing the great sword Samehada, and that he could keep the blade. [/spoiler]


[[u]Perks[/u]]

[b]Will of Fire[/b]
Requirements: Born/Reside in the Leaf Village
With the Will of Fire Perk, you gain an additional 10+ points to the Element Skill.

[b]Sensei[/b]
Requirements: Jounin
With the Sensei Perk, you gain an additional 20 Health/HP each time you LV up and a 5+ bonus to your Chakra Control Skill.

[b]Chakra Whiz[/b]
Requirements: LV 2
With the Chakra Whiz Perk, you gain an additional 50+ Chakra/CP.

[b]Genius Prodigy[/b]
Requirements: LV 3
With the Genius Prodigy Perk, you gain an additional +10 points to both Ninjutsu and Chakra Control Skills.

[b]Unlimited Rage![/b]
Requirements: LV 5
With the Unlimited Rage! Perk, your Skills are raised by 10+ whenever your Health drops 25% or lower and instantly adds 15% additional DMG to all Skills.

[b]Unbreakable[/b]
Requirements: LV 4
With the Unbreakable Perk, you gain an additional 15% overall DMG resistance in all Skills.


[[u]Skills[/u]]


Ninjutsu: 30 (Major & Genius Prodigy Perk Boost +20) [ Chakra use reduced by 10%. ]
Taijutsu: 20 (Minor Boost +5) [ Additional 5% DMG bonus. ]
Weaponry: 10 [ Additional 10% DMG bonus. ]
Kekkai Genkai: 15 [ Additional 10% DMG bonus. ]
Chakra Control: 30 (Sensei & Genius Prodigy Perk Boost +10) [ Chakra use reduced by 10%. ]
Summoning Jutsu: 5
Poison: 5 (Unbreakable 15%) [ Poison DMG is reduced by 15%. ]
Medical Arts: 5
Block: 20 (Minor & Armor Charm +15. Unbreakable 15%) [ Taijutsu DMG is reduced by 25%. Weaponry DMG is reduced by 20%. ]
Dodge: 20 (Major & Armor Charm Boost +15. Unbreakable 15%) [ Ninjutsu DMG is reduced by 25%. Kekkai Genkai DMG is reduced by 20%. ]
Element: 20 (Minor & Will of Fire Perk Boost +15. Unbreakable 15%) [ Additional 5% Element DMG bonus. Element DMG is reduced by 15%. ]
Luck: 10 [ 5% Chance. ]
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Okay, I guess I'm done but I'm not entirely happy with it. Just lemme know if anything needs changing...

[spoiler=Kasumi Harukara]
[b]Difficulty:[/b] Chounin
[b]Name:[/b] Kasumi Harukara
[b]Clan Description:[/b] The Harukara clan are a rather small clan having been crippled by a bout of illness some time ago. Of the remaining members, Kasumi is the youngest female and is often overprotected by others from her clan for fear that she may get killed, thereby putting the clan that much closer towards dying out.
[b]Unique Ability:[/b] Vapour shaping. The Harukara clan specialize in mist related Jutsu’s, using them not only for physical combat but to disorientate their opponents.
[b]Age:[/b] 15
[b]Gender:[/b] Female
[b]Village:[/b] Kirigakure
[b]Faction:[/b] None
[b]Ninja Rank:[/b] Genin
[b]Skill(s):[/b] Genjutsu, Weaponry, Chakra Control, Dodge & Element
[b]Element(s):[/b] Water release, Wind release
[spoiler=Appearance][img]http://i43.tinypic.com/f298ix.jpg[/img][/spoiler]
[b]Personality:[/b] Kasumi has an almost child-like curiosity and a fascination for any small creature, most of the time it seems like her thoughts are completely elsewhere and will almost always speak in very short sentences, which usually have very little to them, and speaks in a slow and dreamy way, sometimes even pausing between words. Most of the time she's docile, easily distracted and perfectly harmless, it can either be hard or easy to provoke her into fighting, just plain attacking her isn't enough to make her fight back, however simply crushing a bug or killing a small animal is enough to make her go crazy. She likes any small living creature the smaller it is, the more she'll like it. Mostly she's fond of flying insect or small mammals. She's values the life of any small creature highly and will go so far as to take on anyone regardless of strength simply because they crushed a single butterfly.
[b]History/Background:[/b] Kasumi’s clan was once one of the more prominent clans from Kirigakure, however several generations ago the clan was all but wiped out due to a combination of many of its members dying in battle or falling ill from a sudden illness spreading throughout the clan, dwindling their numbers significantly. By the time Kasumi was born the clan was all but gone, with only a handful of members remaining.

Being the youngest female member of her clan Kasumi was constantly watched and protected during her childhood and hardly ever interacted with anybody outside of her own clan members. She developed a very melancholy personality, even during her years of training hardly ever speaking to anybody else except in passing.

Due to her isolation from most others her age Kasumi instead grew fond of the company of animals and insects, showing a strange fascination for them at a young age when most others might be scared or repulsed by them, her fascination with them eventually grew into obsession when she once came across a group of children attacking a bird’s nest, Kasumi responded by attacking the group violently and almost killing them before her caretakers could intervene. Since that incident the clan has kept an even closer eye on Kasumi, now because of her potential for violence as well as their own dwindling numbers.

[spoiler=Jutsu's]

Hidden Mist Technique [LV 1]
Detail: This displacement technique is a specialty of the Ninja from Kirigakure, where one causes a mist to spring forth by lifting up some water, then goes in and out of sight at will from within the pearly-white realm. The mist's thickness is controlled by the amount of chakra kneaded into it.
Effect: Opponent has a 15% chance of missing his/her target when attacking for 2 posts only.
Cost: -25 Chakra.

[Ultimate Technique] Solid Mist Technique [LV 5]
Type Element, Ninjutsu
Detail: Uses a nearby water source or natural fog to create a makeshift weapon for the user to defend themselves with. The effect only lasts as long as the user can maintain it at which point the created weapon returns to its original form.
Effect: Weaponry Damage is increased by 20%/Decreases 20% less damage attacks by 25% chance.
Cost: -100 Chakra. -50 Fatigue

Water Clone Technique [LV 1]
Type: Element, Ninjutsu
Detail: The Water Clone Technique is similar to the Shadow Clone Technique except it creates clones out of water. Like other solid clone techniques, the clones can be used to perform tasks the user is unable or unwilling to do for themselves. The range of the clone is limited however, as it cannot travel very far from the original body without losing control.
Effect: Decreases 30% less damage taken from all attacks by 25% chance.
Cost: -30 Chakra. -10 Fatigue.

Body Flicker Technique [LV 1]
Type: Ninjutsu
Detail: This jutsu is a high-speed movement technique, allowing a ninja to move short to long distances at an almost untraceable speed. To an observer, it appears as if the user has teleported. A puff of smoke is occasionally used to disguise the user's movements. It is accomplished by using chakra to temporarily vitalise the body and move at extreme speeds.
Efffect: Decreases 30% less damage taken from Ninjutsu attacks by 25% chance.
Cost: -25 Chakra. -25 Fatigue.

Wind Kunai Blade
Type: Element, Ninjutsu, Weaponry
Detail: The user exhales wind chakra onto a Kunai which expands into a sharp blade shaped like a scimitar which can penetrate a human body with ease. One advantage with this is that it retains both the light weight and versitility of the knife while gaining the length of a sword.
Effect: Weaponry damage is increased by 10% for 2 posts only.
Cost: -30 Chakra.

Clone Technique [LV 1]
Type: Genjutsu
Detail: This technique creates intangible copies of the user. The clones are simply illusions and will dissipate when they come into contact with something. The illusions can be seen through by the Byakugan and the Sharingan.
Efffect: Decreases 30% less damage taken from Taijutsu attacks by 25% chance.
Cost: -25 Chakra. -25 Fatigue.

Wind Release: Whirlwind Fist [LV 1]
Type: Element, Ninjutsu
Detail: The user delivers a punch that releases a giant, adaptable whirlwind.
Effect: Taijutsu damage is inceased by 10% for 2 posts only.
Cost: -30 Chakra.

Demonic Illusion: False Surroundings Technique [LV 1]
Type: Genjutsu
Detail: This jutsu changes the appearance of a nearby object or area in order to disorient the opponent.
Efffect: Opponent has a 20% chance of missing his/her target when attacking for 2 posts only.
Cost: -30 Chakra. -5 Fatigue.[/spoiler]

[spoiler=Stats]

[Attributes]

[b][[color=#ff0000]Health[/color]] [color=#ff0000]200[/color]/[color=#ff0000]200[/color][/b]

[b][b][[color=#0000ff]Chakra[/color]] [color=#0000ff]150[/color]/[color=#0000ff]150[/color][/b]

[b][[color=#00ff00]Fatigue[/color]] [color=#00ff00]150[/color]/[color=#00ff00]150[/color][/b][/b]

[General]

[Level] 1

[EXP] 0/100 EXP until next LV.

[Ryo] 5,000

[Skill Points] 0

[Action Points] 0/5

[Pouch]

Kunai {3/3}
{ Common }
Description: A black dagger designed for thrusting, throwing and stabbing.
Effect: Automatically does 10 DMG when used.

Green Pill
{ Common }
Description: A standard restoration pill. Pretty common.
Effect: Restores +25 HP, +15 Fatigue, +15 Chakra.

Smoke Bomb
{ Rare }
Description: Creates a large cloud of smoke wherever it lands. Rare.
Effect: Decreases 25% less DMG taken from all Attacks for 2 posts.

[Gear]

None

[Perks]

Rookie
Requirements: Genin
With the Rookie Perk, you gain an additional +10 HP each time you LV up and a +5 permanent bonus added to your Luck Skill.

[Skills]

Ninjutsu: 20 (+15)
Taijutsu: 0
Genjutsu: 20 (+15)
Weaponry: 0
Kekkai Genkai:
Chakra Control: 20 (+15)
Summoning: 0
Medical Arts: 5
Block: 5
Dodge: 20 (+15)
Element: 20 (+15)
Luck: 20 (+15 (Rookie))
Construct: 0[/spoiler]
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It's actually quite a good app, and a fascinating character. But you do realise you dont have a single Jutsu that does any damage?

Champster, I have an Idea. You seem to have sort of thought about it already, but it seems kind of mis-matched. A basic attack. You have made it so that characters have to rely on weaponry and Jutsu, and have made it so that when Characters no longer have enough Fatigue/Chakra to attack, and have no available Items, they are completely hopeless. What you need is a basic attack that costs little or nothing, which causes minimal damage. I've already sort of intergrated it into my Kazuki app, with a basic Katana as an equipped weapon that does ten damage, but I reckon you need a section in the shop, with the Gear/equipment, for Weaponry.
For example, the basic fist attack, an attack with no equipped weapon, could do 5 damage.
Different weapons equipped do different effects, such as:
Fans do a less damage, but attack all enemie(Basic Fan does 3 damage, but attacks all enemies.)
Flails(And similar) Do weak damage, but attack multiple enemies.(Basic Flail(Or whatever) Does 5 DMG and attacks 2 enemies.)
Large shuriken do Medium ranged damage, or lesser Melee(Basic large shuriken does 7 Ranged or 4 Melee)
Katana do Large Melee Damage(Basic Katana does 10 damage.)
Knuckles do Large Melee Damage and count as Taijutsu rather than Weaponry(Basic Knuckles does 10 damage)

There could be other stuff, such as bows and stuff, but I thought these were basic.
And if you want them to cost, I'd advise it be a small amount of Fatigue, from 5-10.

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[color=#6B6B6B][font=Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif][size=3]Apologies. Been renovating the house recently. Anyway alright, [i]Double C4[/i]. And b[/size][/font][/color][color=#6B6B6B][font=Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif][size=3]oth Apps accepted and have been added under the Character section. And yes, KCNamless, I've also thought of it too. Give me some time before I can implement this [i]Base Attack[/i] idea.[/size][/font][/color]

[color=#6B6B6B][font=Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif][size=3]Anyways, now that we have 4 people already we should be able to begin either tomorrow or on Sunday. =D[/size][/font][/color]

[color=#6B6B6B][font=Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif][size=3]Also, one last thing. The "Ninja Slot Machine 3000" and its prizes will change tomorrow. So go ahead and play already if you want to, because the price of Ryo in order to play it will definitely change also. =P [/size][/font][/color]

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No, its already been updated, along with the Ryo you used for the machine. Here is the information of the item you received...

[color=red]ANBU Metal Leg Guards[/color]
{ 1x | Sell for [i]15,000[/i] Ryo | Anbu Set | [color=red]Unique[/color] | Requires: LV 4 }
Details: Black and grey in color, this armor is seen worn by members of the ANBU Black Ops. When worn along with the rest of the ANBU set, stats increase by double.
Effect: While equipped, you gain an additional 30 Points to Health, Chakra and Fatigue each time you Level up. 60 each, if worn with all ANBU Sets.

Since you're currently not LV 4, you cannot use it. You may choose to sell it if you wish, or simply keep it until you reach the certain amount of LV required so you may equip it. =)

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[spoiler=The Machine spins and reveals the hidden prize behind number 2...]

You got [i]2,000[/i] Ryo
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[spoiler=The Machine spins and reveals the hidden prize behind number 17...]

You got [i]4,000[/i] Ryo
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Hmm, bad luck I suppose. =/

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