Frybread002 Posted March 31, 2012 Report Share Posted March 31, 2012 Point of order: That's not Keyblade Knight Armor. That's just a bodysuit with a fun tropical skirt to remind us Riku isn't all work, no play. Keyblade Knight Armor has three specifications to it:It is summoned by pressing a plate located somewhere on the Wielder's person.It protects against the Light and Darkness, but provides almost no protection against other kinds of attacks.It covers the entire body- Except for the Seekers of Darkness, who purposely detach parts so they aren't so isolated from the Darkness and Light. Ah-! ...Argh....Shot through the heart...everything going black...my only regret was that I didn't turn off the light in my office...the eletric bill...no...! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yosuke-kun Posted March 31, 2012 Report Share Posted March 31, 2012 . . . *turns off the light* There. Though it may've come out harsher than necessary, Nova's right. The main thing that bothers me is the fact that he's got Kingdom Key. I was understanding that even from the future he wouldn't be able to take another keyblade from it's wielder. Yeah, Sora and Roxas DID kinda both have it at first, but since they're the same guy anyways, they're an exception. Yes. He is rather OP'd, if for no other reason than he's younger than the other characters and still has all that power and duel-wields and stuff. I know he's OP'd too, because he reminds me of an earlier character I made back when I started RPing. I'm not insulting your story telling skills (intentionally) I'm just saying you made some bad characters this time. It happens sometimes, but you gotta fix it properly when it does. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kōsuke Ueki Posted March 31, 2012 Report Share Posted March 31, 2012 You say Nova's right when you know NOTHING of what Frybread has gone through. The story of his characters relate to an RP HE CREATED! He's using the basis of the RP he made along with me and a few other as a basis for the bio. Even though Diego wasn't in that RP, per se (There was always some references every now and then), he's purposely using these characters here as a means of adding them into the sequel RP in the making with some form of reason why he's there and what some intentions he may have.Whatever you see that you say has nothing to do with KH has to do with the stories created for that RP. You wanna know what he's talking about, either go find the old RP or wait until we adapt it into a Fan Fic. Don't be harsh towards Frybread, since you all could easily be breaking the Counter Clause (If it also applies towards anything RP related, not just Fan Fics) by merely being harsh about two applications. Just get over it. It's just two applications. Will it cause the RP to die? Will it make the story less enjoyable? NO! You're all just mad that you couldn't think of ANYTHING else more original than Frybread could, since the RP we made was in fact an original take on an extended future of completely different characters. So DROP IT!! I think I've made my point. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yosuke-kun Posted March 31, 2012 Report Share Posted March 31, 2012 Alright, I'm sorry for being harsh, and probably shoulda been more specific on what I agreed with Nova on. I understand using a character from another similar RP, but they don't really tie in with THIS RP. It was wrong to say they were bad characters, but they still don't seem to fit and Diego seems a bit OP'd for my liking. If Hydra says it's ok, then I'll trust him though, as he's the GM, not me. Also, a suggestion. Rather than use the same characters, why not use one of their ancestors? That way you can tie those characters in but still have a placing that makes sense here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kōsuke Ueki Posted March 31, 2012 Report Share Posted March 31, 2012 Hm, that's something I didn't realize at first. But I think in order to create the ancestor, you would have to create the Terra's own ancestor, the ancestor of him, or possibly maybe even farther. That in turn would possibly be very difficult. But I get what you're getting at. Also, Frybread intends on linking this story (To an extent that is and add his own things to make it stand out from this) as a means for telling Diego's story through the events he has went through and a means of changing how he is (I might be making this up, but I think Frybread might agree with me to a certain extent. I'll find out soon enough.). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Astolfo Posted April 1, 2012 Report Share Posted April 1, 2012 It's kinda funny how you rant about that stuff, when you don't seem to realize that, in most RPs, original characters are good, not just based/CP'd from another app. Also, in RPs, they don't care about whatever other story that character was "in". They're different stories for a reason, and not like a side story, or a pre/sequel. ._. And who honestly cares that it's a character from another RP that he wants to link, if that means it's a complete near-piece of trash? It doesn't make sense at all, doesn't mention the Schism, the armor's all weird, and other stuff mentioned above. I thought in RPs, they have to be more related than just having that RP weapon (if applicable), and other minor stuff (these characters having armor, but not as in contradicting what I said above). And somehow, he even messed up with the weapon. ._. How on earth does he get to duel wield? And the Kingdom Key (or whatever it's called) doesn't exist, and neither does Kingdom Come (I think). Oh hey, I have weird armor made from my heart's Darkness, that can morph, and change shape, and has a complete invulnerability to any Fire-attacks. Also, if you haven't noticed my complete weird, unrelated pile of words called a character somehow, I have an X-blade like weapon made from (a) Keyblade(s) that didn't/doesn't even exist. Oh hey. This is completely not OP'd. Oh look, you want to know why it's so freaking unrelated, and horrible? It's from/based on another character in another RP that I want to link, ignoring the obvious fact that they don't have to be linked, and probably won't. Also, this means that I can make it horrible as it is, just because I want to link it, ignoring the also obvious fact that RP characters are supposed to be original completely.._. *facedesk* To Fry: Not really trying to be really mean or bashing, but your apps are full of faults, and the reasons you keep giving aren't good enough to warrant those faults. So that's why I'm getting kinda pissed off. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yosuke-kun Posted April 1, 2012 Report Share Posted April 1, 2012 . . . Yeah. . . Uhhhhh. . . Gonna stay out of this xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hydra of Ages Posted April 1, 2012 Author Report Share Posted April 1, 2012 Don't be harsh towards Frybread, since you all could easily be breaking the Counter Clause (If it also applies towards anything RP related, not just Fan Fics) by merely being harsh about two applications. Actually, you're breaking the Jack Witt Clause (which also applies in both forums) in proxy by telling them to shut up. If you post your work in the Creative Writing forum, you open it up to public criticism; simple as that. If it degrades into namecalling or personal attacks then I will step in, but until then they're perfectly allowed to voice their opinion on other people's works. Yes, I'm saying this with my ModHat on. That said, I'd very much appreciate it if you people didn't turn this into an argument, please. You have a right to your own opinion, but keep in mind this is my thread and I prefer you didn't start to take liberties with that. Frybread, if you wouldn't mind, could you take any more conversation about your applications to PM please? Thank you in advance. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kōsuke Ueki Posted April 1, 2012 Report Share Posted April 1, 2012 Well, I'm glad to know that those rules do apply to the sub-forums as well. I didn't even want to step in. But I didn't really have much of a choice I'm sure it would still escalate even if you did try to intervene Hydra (It might have done that or it might not. Can't say for sure). I'm shocked Frybread hasn't replied to all of this yet. He's going to be very upset. I'm sure of it. Anyway, Hydra, I still am having app issues, so I'm gonna PM you eventually regarding a few things later on in the day. I won't know when, but I will PM you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Asriel Dreemurr Posted April 1, 2012 Report Share Posted April 1, 2012 Not to further the argument, but I honestly don't care if Frybread is upset. Well, scratch that. I want him to be upset, and you know why? Because when people are upset, they often try to prove whoever it was that upset them wrong. What I'm hoping happens here is that, through being upset by the heavy criticism he has received, Frybread decides to make some completely awesome characters that fit WITHIN the plot. Also, I've decided that I'll be making a second character in the name of balance. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yosuke-kun Posted April 1, 2012 Report Share Posted April 1, 2012 *taps Keto with with a peace wand* No fighting! But I see where you're going. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frybread002 Posted April 2, 2012 Report Share Posted April 2, 2012 *yawn!!*Man I'm tired!!! Need some sleep! Aside from Tsa -as he already knows what I mean - out of curiousty, have any of you guys ever seen a role-play where a person actually decided to draw out some scenes from the role-play? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yosuke-kun Posted April 2, 2012 Report Share Posted April 2, 2012 *yawn!!*Man I'm tired!!! Need some sleep! Aside from Tsa -as he already knows what I mean - out of curiousty, have any of you guys ever seen a role-play where a person actually decided to draw out some scenes from the role-play? I made one before, but I always got too far ahead of myself and changed the story, so I keep my work as a Manga-ke and my RPing at a distance now xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frybread002 Posted April 3, 2012 Report Share Posted April 3, 2012 God I hate fatigue...makes me wanna fart sometimes...*YAWN!!!* Anyhow, before I pass out from fatigued, I just wanna let you guys know...that you guys do a terrible job at making me mad...so you guys are going to have to do a bit more convincing to make me raise an eyebrow at you. Hahahaha-! ...Oh boy...nyquil starting to kick in...not good...catch you guys tommorow BUT BELIEVE ME!!! Only Tsa here knows what I'm like when I get angry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hydra of Ages Posted April 3, 2012 Author Report Share Posted April 3, 2012 Please keep the conversation limited to the RP itself, people, else I start handing out warnings. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kōsuke Ueki Posted April 3, 2012 Report Share Posted April 3, 2012 Well, you already did for me, and I apologize for how I acted Hydra. Just getting that out of the way. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Astolfo Posted April 4, 2012 Report Share Posted April 4, 2012 I already checked with Hydra, and he said this app's fine. So no raging or stuff, it seems weird guys. [spoiler=App]Name: Teiko (Kakumei, but I will explain this later)Allegiance: The Seekers of Darkness (mostly), but sometimes Keyblade Knights (I'll explain later in the RP, as he's rebelling, he sometimes briefly becomes a "Knight" before becoming a Seeker again. You'll understand when you read this.)Sex: MaleAge: 16Features: Young, pale tan-ish skin. Lithe and slightly muscular. Average height, healthy, besides a scars on his back, from the NeoShadow attack. He has recovered some of his strength, but he is still under his full potential. He hopes he can find a good Healer, that he can trust, to help him overcome that fault. His eyes were originally brownish, but now, they are a cold ice-blue. Has black hair. Usually has a grimace, or shows unhappiness in other ways. Rather than being muscled, he is slim, and can evade most of the skilled trackers. He is not too strong, but not weak either. Surprise and evasion are his specialty, along with his skills. Casual Clothing: Wears a black short sleeve t-shirt that's tight-fitting. He usually wears black pants with silver streaks on the sides. Teiko keeps a small leather bracelet on, a reminder of his past he can't seem to remember. His smooth jacket in a midnight black has the Seeker emblem emblazoned on the hood. When unused, his armor retracts into a gauntlet that encloses his right hand, with reddish highlights. Armor: A smooth, light and comfortable armor with plates of a inky black steel that seem to have crystals of light when looked at a certain angle. These plates only protect his heart, scarred areas, and any other vital areas. Anywhere else is covered by a thin cloth. Absolutely no decoration or things that are not needed. It is not too rigid, so it allows for easy movement, especially during battles, where evasion is vital for him. The armor outside is tough, and only stronger, or accurate magic/strikes can damage it severely. Other blows would knock the wind out of him, but wouldn't hurt him too much, unless they hit the scars. Teiko was from Radiant Garden, and he was the young brother of Haku. He was awed by his brother when he saw him gain his Keyblade from a mystic force, and aspired to become one as well, so he could follow in his brother's footsteps. However, tragically, this was not to be. When he was 8, NeoShadows raided Radiant Garden, and his brother came to help, but he was too late, and he and his sister were taken away by the lone NeoShadow that escaped his brother's fury. He was taken to a Seeker base, to a unique Time-affinity Seeker. This Seeker, by the name of Tempus, didn't control time as in you would think, but he was a specialty, for any of the particularly young soon-to-be Seekers or older, becoming weaker Seekers. Tempus creates a small barrier around the target, and he speeds up, or reverses time inside the barrier.This is an exclusive ability only Tempus can use, and with such powerful magic, he can not manipulate time in any other ways. Also, the downsides are, that at the most, he can only change 10 years, and it takes a long time to use and finish. Tempus saw the young 8 year old captured by the Seekers, and thought of disposing of him, but changed his opinion when he saw the fire in Teiko's eyes. He thought carefully, then made a decision. A few hours after this mini-examination, Teiko was brought to Tempus' quarters. Tempus made a decision, then began the casting of his magic. Around 30 minutes later, Tempus tired, retreated back to his room to rest. Teiko had been aged 7 years. Swiftly after this aging, the confused Teiko was rushed to a Seeker, who cast magic on Teiko to block his memory of the whole encounter of the Seekers, and was sent off to the Golden Metropolis. A patrolling Knight saw the boy wandering around, and he was curious, not sensing a Keyblade, but sensing an inexperienced, but powerful strength inside of him, the Knight took him to the place, to train for the Mark of Mastery. Teiko got over his brief memory loss, and ending up here, having fun with his peers also aiming to achieve the Mark of Mastery. A few weeks later, a brilliant Keyblade appeared to him during one of his mock battles with his peers. He was blocking a slash of a smooth rod, when the Key appeared, splitting the rod into pieces. Teiko was stunned at this, and he felt even more glad, as he could practice clashing Keyblades with his peers. 1 year from when Teiko first arrived at this training center, the Day had came. They would test for their Marks, and it would end in joy, or misery for each of them. Cipher, one of his 2 friends, was called out first. His friends watched in awe, as he had a Magnet/Light combo of summoning dozens of scraps of metal, then shooting them out, charged with Light. Cipher passed with flying colors obviously, but they'd have to wait until it was over to get the Grades from the Masters. Yori, the other of his two friends, was the joker and had fun with them a lot. Yori showed a unique pairing of an Ice/Light affinity. He would alter the temperature to a colder one, then freeze his enemies, finishing them off with beams of Light. Yori also would obviously pass. Then, Teiko's turn came, and he felt nervous. He felt he had an affinity for Darkness somehow, but mentioning or showing it here would be a bad idea. He chose his other affinity, Earth. He focused intensely, and suddenly, the ground exploded, easily destroying the balls of Light. Suddenly exhausted however, he collapsed into the arms of his friends, who rushed forward to help him. Somewhere in his brain, he felt that fainting wasn't going to help his score. Soon after, the Masters called them in to receive their opinions on them. Cipher passed with flying colors, although it was a bit diminished when he heard the inaccuracy of the scraps, and that it was a waste to shoot it toward nothing. He flashed his Mark with a grin at the other two. Yori passed with just as good of a grade, although diminished by the fact that if he was stronger, the temperature alteration would be unnecessary. Finally, nervously, Teiko went up to receive his score. The score was as high as his friends, and Teiko felt glad he could do it. The kind of major diminishment was the fact he pushed himself too hard, which could be risky during a battle. The 3 friends celebrated afterwards and they parted their ways. Teiko was the last to leave, and as he turned to do so, he turned smack into an obviously Dark Seeker. Teiko tried to summon his Keyblade, but it never finished. The Seeker rushed with an unnatural speed, and whacked Teiko on his head. The Seeker took him over his shoulder, then vanished into a Corridor. When Teiko woke up, he realized he saw this place somewhere, but he couldn't quite remember. The "trainer" of the Seekers to help them become one of them asked for him to summon his Keyblade, and when he refused, the trainer pushed a pressure point. Hard. After the brief moment of pain, he summoned his Keyblade, and it was taken by this Seeker scientist. He was dismissed back to his room. For the next 10 weeks, he was left alone, but he felt an incredible pain in his heart, as if someone was pouring in Darkness. On the 11th week, he was called back, and he received his Keyblade. A twisted mess of metal, jagged spikes erupt from everywhere on the Keyblade, with a handle that's a simple, smooth gunmetal grip, while the blade and teeth are simple spiked, jagged gunmetal plopped into his hands. Teiko saw this hideous corruption of his Keyblade, and fell to his knees, shocked at this new change. As he pulled it back into himself to try to "protect" it foolishly, he knew immediately something was wrong, but he couldn't stop it. The Keyblade had turned into a flurry of Darkness, and went into his heart. Teiko tried to push it out, but he realized, it seemed like it was always a part of him, the Darkness. Just as if it had been broken off and reattached, he thought in a haze, before collapsing. Groggily, Teiko woke up, and he was immediately sent to the trainer, where he was told to summon his Keyblade, and winced at the Darkness inside of him, permanently now. Seeing a lightning fast attack by the trainer, he instinctively rose his Keyblade, deflecting the powerful blow. 3 hours later, completely broken, and exhausted, he was sent back to his room, but not before a quick mind block to prevent him from remembering the session. And that's how the training sessions went for the next few months. The only way he resisted the Darkness from completely overtaking him was a small bit of his original self inside his heart, struggling to stay untainted. Teiko grew accustomed to the Darkness and his new Keyblade, and started to retaliate, in his training sessions. Amused, the trainer said to Teiko to use his best magic, and in a flurry of motion, he activated 2 spells, 1 briefly after the other. A swarm of tentacles held the trainer in position for a few seconds -enough for the 2nd to be devastating- and then an explosion erupted from the ground as the tentacles retracted, throwing the trainer into the air, before spikes of Darkness shot through the cracks. The trainer, protecting himself with a barrier, landed back down, with a grunt. He saw where the tentacles had touched, a small bit of Darkness had formed, but was now receding -too weak he assumed- and was impressed and "happy" Teiko's magic as well had showed Darkness. Training Teiko to use the Keyblade and magic strengthened both over time. After a particularly grueling session, in a puddle of sweat, and some blood, he recognized the struggling bit of consciousness again, and how it started to clash with his Darkness. The clashing produced a miniature explosion of power, and a Keychain was formed, of the detonation. It was a small heart, with a small portion white, but the rest blackish and purple. As he saw the results of his rebellion -albeit a small one- he said to himself, "I shall defeat the Darkness, and claim back my own purity. I am... Teiko...Kakumei!" As he later realized, the fighting portion of his consciousness of his past meant instability with the rest of his mind, so he tried to quash it -however trading the small Light for his dominant Darkness- , and he could usually keep the resistant portion down, although a few times, he became tormented with the struggles inside of him. On 1 full moon he said to himself, "Is the... only reason... for my existence.... to torment and destroy...? I can feel a peculiar urge... to resist it... but it leads to nothing... Darkness...? Or... resist...?" [spoiler=Keyblade stuff]+Name: Tainted Heart+Length: 2+Weight: 1+Power: 2+Spellpower: 3+Guard: A twisted mess of metal, jagged spikes erupt from everywhere on the Keyblade. The handle is a simple, smooth gunmetal grip, while the blade and teeth are simple spiked, jagged gunmetal. The Glider turns into a spread-eagle "surfboard" shape Glider, with a control panel on the top, for Teiko to scope out and fire at enemies with beams of Darkness that burns slowly, from 6 cannons, on the underside of the wings (3 on each side). The Glider itself has a smooth dome of obsidian on the top, while there are 6 boosters for stability (bottom, 2 on sides, and 3 on back). Hints of light can sometimes be seen in the obsidian's murky depths. Affinity: Darkness/EarthCombat Style: Mostly Technique, with hints of Power and Speed. [spoiler=Spell related]Spells: Taectonic Explosions, Tenebrous Whips, and Naturae Corrupt Taectonic Explosions: Teiko locks on his enemy, and any ground within a 50 foot radius of the enemy explodes, throwing him up into the air, with spikes of Dark energy smashing through (randomly though, no precision), to attempt to impale the enemy soon after. This is however, quite tiring, although Teiko tries to hide it. And in addition, this can only be used if there is earth on the ground to 10 feet below the surface. The less earth available also, the weaker. This originally was the move Teiko used to obtain his Mark, although much weaker, and without the Darkness.Tenebrous Whips: A flurry of whips explode from Teiko's body, swirling around him, and locking on and lashing/tying around anything within it's reach. A peculiar aspect of this, is, if you are in contact with the Dark Whips for a long enough period of time, is a patch of Darkness will expand from where it touches, trying to turn it on the owner. The whips "burn" on contact, but retract after a short period of time. The more the Darkness reigns in his mind, the more powerful this move. This is Teiko's signature move.A finishing game-ender, this is extremely difficult for Teiko to achieve enough energy to use this. This is a very rare move because of that issue. All things within a mile of Teiko start to rot, and as the original crumbles to dust, a shadow-version of it replaces it, that he can completely manipulate at will. This is usually for non-humans, but it can affect humans as well. In Teiko's tainted mind, he aspires to change the whole world into a shadow version. Using the magic is extremely hard as it is, let alone manipulate them right after the spell. The downside is this can only be used if there is earth on the ground to 10 feet below the surface. The less earth available also, the weaker. Keychain:+Name: Darkness Revolt/Revolution (in his Darkness, Revolt, but later on, name becomes Revolution) +1 Length+1 Power+1 Spellpower-1 GuardA twisted blade of metals, and Darkness, it is a malevolent-looking blade with spires of obsidian steel jutting out. The handle is a outline of a burning fire, but in black and purple, instead of the normal reddish-yellow color. The razor-sharp blade of the Keyblade extends from a gaping "mouth" of smooth, grey spikes. The first few inches of the blade are studded with 3 blackish crystals, and 1 small crystal, with a glowing light. The teeth of the blade are gunmetal with obsidian-edge tips, and the head of the Keyblade is a sharp, fine spike. (In Revolution, it looks more like: A smooth blade of platinum and obsidian steel, it represents the clashing of Darkness, and Teiko's original self. The handle is a dual mixture of shined platinum and hard obsidian, with a greyish handle running through the middle. The razor-sharp blade of the Keyblade extends from a gaping "mouth" of smooth, grey spikes. The first few inches of the blade are studded with 2 blackish crystals, and 2 pure, rainbow colored crystals, with a glowing light. The teeth of the blade are gunmetal with obsidian-edge tips and platinum spikes with golden edges. The head of the Keyblade is a sharp, fine spike in a twisting unicorn-horn like mix of platinum and obsidian.) History: The keychain was originally a mixture of blood and sweat, after a particularly grueling session, where the first small bit of his mind was reclaimed, when he was in a puddle of the 2. This however unfortunately meant, that as the small fragment began to rebel, the whole originally Dark mind started to clash upon itself, creating his torment. This unstable rebellion's explosive detonation created the symbol of his heart. A nearly completely black and purple heart, except a small portion of white in the lower left hand portion (the whitish portion expands and the blackish portion retracts, both are slightly though, so it seems more half and half, of twisting black and white throughout the heart when it becomes Revolution). The Seekers have noticed a mental change in Teiko, and are curious, although some can guess why, and have an even stronger idea, when they see the Keychain. However, as a young, but powerful Seeker, he continues to be used, even if they detect "rebellion". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jackel The Mad Posted April 5, 2012 Report Share Posted April 5, 2012 Can I still join? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yosuke-kun Posted April 8, 2012 Report Share Posted April 8, 2012 Hate to be a noodge,but is this gonna start soon? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hydra of Ages Posted April 8, 2012 Author Report Share Posted April 8, 2012 Actually, yes. I've just been avoiding the forums for the past few days to focus on my end of term projects. We start on Tuesday. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yosuke-kun Posted April 9, 2012 Report Share Posted April 9, 2012 Ah, don't worry about it, I along with plenty others, can totally understand xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Asriel Dreemurr Posted April 9, 2012 Report Share Posted April 9, 2012 I'll have to get that second app in before Tuesday then. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Asriel Dreemurr Posted April 14, 2012 Report Share Posted April 14, 2012 Name: SophiaAllegiance: Seekers of DarknessSex: FemaleOrientation: undecidedAge: 22Physical Description: Sophia may not be the most attractive woman in the universe, but she is far from being the ugliest. She stands just a few silver hairs above five foot four in height, and those hairs are tied back into a tight and ordered bun. Her face is sharply angled, almost elven in appearance, and bears almond-shaped eyes of brightest green that always seem to be peering into the very soul of whatever or whoever is before her. Her brow is angled inward slightly, giving her a constantly tense appearance. Her skin is dark, almost ebony in color, and shimmers ever so slightly in the light. She is built in the way of one who is used to exercise with great weight, but her feminine figure is not compromised and she has just the right curves to be on the attractive side of average.Normally, she can be seen wearing a snugly fitted green tunic with sleeves that go all the way down to her wrists. Accompanying this are a pair of similarly fitted gray pants and a pair of sandals upon her feet worn without socks. Her tunic is kept tight around her waist by a thick leather belt bearing only a simple buckle. Over this getup, she wears a white cloak with a hood large enough to cover the whole of her head which is worn up more often than down. When down, it exposes the Celtic-style braided silver circlet which wraps around her head and presses against the skin of her forehead.At times when her armor comes forth, it completely replaces her normal clothing. Her arms from the elbow down become covered with form-fitting silver plates, upon which braided patterns are engraved, with backward-facing spikes on the elbows. Her legs are similarly clad, the knees bearing spikes and heavy silver plate covering them from there down. Her torso is almost entirely uncovered, her average breasts being covered by their own set of well-fitted plate and a bikini-bottom set of plates covering her, well, nether regions. Her head and neck are almost entirely uncovered, with the exception of her braided circlet which has become a jagged crown.History: Sophia was born into poverty, and grew up more or less alone on the streets of Golden World's Shining City. She wasn't really one to trust anyone, and she was completely unaware that the Keyblade Knights even existed. It wasn't until one day, her eleventh birthday as it happened, when she found herself confronted by a pair of particularly large lowlifes. Through her sheer desire to save herself, she managed to manifest her Keyblade and, using the power granted from it, defeated those two. It was then that she was discovered by Master Fennel, and as an eleventh birthday present she was accepted into the Keyblade Knights. Under her new master, she quickly learned to utilize her Keyblade to its fullest extent and she aced her Mark of Mastery exam, graduating in the same class as Fennel's other student Alexander. When the first hintings of disagreement began to show in the ranks of the Knights, she kept herself out of the arguments. That is, until blows were struck and Fennel lay dead upon the floor. She joined in with the Seekers of Darkness with the intention of obtaining vengeance for the death of her master.Personality: Sophia is, to put it mildly, an intense person. Whenever she has a task before her, she focuses entirely upon it and allows nothing to distract her, leaving little time for her to socialize with those around her. On the few times that she isn't focusing all of her attention onto some task or another, she prefers to relax on her own through meditation and mostly avoid contact with others. Despite this, she does want very much to know the comfort and company of a family. She does not see any sort of reformation as an option when dealing with the Keyblade Knights, the only option available for anyone who aligns themselves against her being total destruction. She is merciless in battle, pulling no punches and not allowing her foe to exit alive if she can help it.-Keyblade: Staunch Guard+Length:1+Weight:1+Power:1+Spellpower: 3+Guard: 4Description: Staunch Guard is a rather curious blade, not only because of its relatively small size. The blade itself is composed of two cylindrical rods set perpendicular to each other and connected at the center. On either end of each rod is a set of three triangular teeth set to point counter-clockwise. In the center, where the two connect, there is a large spherical gem glowing with a magical aura. The metal components of the blade are bright silver in coloration, shimmering in any amount of light.Glider form: When in the form designed for travel between worlds, Staunch Guard takes on a form completely to the contrary of its name. It transforms into a helicopter similar in form to an Apache Gunship. Rather than having missile launchers or a cannon on the underside of the nose, there are a set of crystal tubes through which spells can be projected. Given it's form, it is incredibly fast thus allowing for short travel times between worlds.Affinity: Fire, IceCombat Style: Speed[spoiler=Spells]Fira: Unleashes a moderate burst of flames at the enemy.Firaga: Unleash a searing blast of flames.Firaga Break: Let loose an intense conical blast upon those in front of you.Firaga Burst: One large orb of flame is released into the air, before raining smaller ones down upon the area.Blizzara: An icy wind blows forth, carrying with it biting snow.Blizzaga: A freezing gale rushes forth, carrying freezing rain and hail.Aqua Splash: An enemy is splashed with icy water which freezes over them.Blizzaga Storm: A mighty, freezing gale comes into being around the user and buffets all those near them with freezing rain and hail. Keychains:+Name: Mystic Lance+Stat Modifiers: -2 Guard, +2 Length, +1 Spellpower+Description: Mystic Lance has a rather plain cross-guard with a simple hand-and-a-half hilt down from it. Each bar of the cross is a long key bearing downward-facing squared off teeth at the ends. From the center of the cross-guard two rectangular rods extend up to their ends which bare downward-angled sets of triangular teeth. The rods bear a gap between them, and are joined at the top by a brightly glowing crystal cut in the shape of two rectangular pyramids fused together. Coloration wise, the blade is a tie-dyed mix of gold, silver, crimson, and ice-blue which are constantly in motion across the surface.+History: Mystic Lance began it's life as a small lance broken off of a toy jouster, which is the only tie that Sophia has with her family. It became her first Keychain shortly after she left the Keyblade Knights to join with the Seekers of Darkness and symbolizes the bond that she hopes to one day form with a new family. IT'S FINALLY DONE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Asriel Dreemurr Posted April 14, 2012 Report Share Posted April 14, 2012 Don't mean to seem impatient...but you didn't forget about this did you Hydra? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghoulish Posted April 15, 2012 Report Share Posted April 15, 2012 This still accepting/alive? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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