Keyblade War - Discord and Evil

[Asriel Dreemurr]

@Ketodama: Harmony Affinity is a bit of a problem- not because I don't want you making up affinities, but because it doesn't actually relate to a specific kind of magic. Instead, it's literally just "Darkness and Light" magic as a package deal, which goes specifically against the sort of cosmology I'm trying to set up. Affinities are always tied specifically to elements of spells, and while elements can be mixed, mixed elements aren't affinities- even if you ignore that I mentioned it's impossible to be very good at both Darkness and Light at the same time.

 

Incidentally, I'm a little weirded out that we have like four Light attuned and zero Darkness attuned so far.

 

Hmm, I can change it up to give him a darkness affinity. Problem is i don't really know what the "existing" spells for that are.

[Yosuke-kun]

For light, I don't think there's a low level spell for it, but Holy is probably the lowest.

 

You could try using these as references.

 

[spoiler=Spell Sites]

http://kingdomhearts.wikia.com/wiki/Magic#Magic_Power

 

http://kingdomhearts.wikia.com/wiki/Abilities_(Kingdom_Hearts_Birth_by_Sleep)

 

http://wikicheats.gametrailers.com/Kingdom_Hearts:_Birth_by_Sleep_-_PSP/Meld_Commands#Magic_Command

 

 

I recommend the top and bottom links. The other one is more abilities. If you're confused about the affinity of any spells, PM me.

[Asriel Dreemurr]

For light, I don't think there's a low level spell for it, but Holy is probably the lowest.

 

You could try using these as references.

 

[spoiler=Spell Sites]

http://kingdomhearts...gic#Magic_Power

 

http://kingdomhearts...Birth_by_Sleep)

 

http://wikicheats.ga...s#Magic_Command

 

 

I recommend the top and bottom links. The other one is more abilities. If you're confused about the affinity of any spells, PM me.

 

Thank you for the links, I believe I know enough to give Alexander some abilities.

 

The edited app is below.

 

[spoiler=Edited App.]

Name: Alexander

Allegiance: The Keyblade Knights

Sex: Male

Orientation: Heterosexual

Age: 24

Physical Description: Alexander is on the taller end of the spectrum, standing at just under six feet in height. As far as muscles go, his are certainly athletic but they appear to be a build better suited to a martial artist than a heavyweight boxer in that his muscles are those born of combat in a style which balances speed and strength together. A well-kept mane of copper-brown hair hangs down just past his shoulders and somehow manages to never cover his slightly angled face whit is completed in a chin covered by a pointed goatee of the same copper-brown color. His eyes are of a brown just dark enough to be mistaken for black from a distance. In the center of his upper back, a large Taijitu is tattooed.

When relaxing, he can often be seen wearing a wide brimmed hat of red-dyed leather whilst his hair hangs exclusively down the back of his neck. This hat accompanies a plain black shirt, which has recently had the sleeves cut off so that his arms are bare, and a pair of dark grey pants covering the upper portions of his black combat boots. Depending upon the weather, he can occasionally be seen wearing a red leather trench coat over the whole of his outfit to keep warm or prevent airborne particles from grating his skin. He always wears a pair of dark steel bracers which cover half of his forearms from his wrists back.

When released, his armor covers the whole of his body from head to toe as is to be expected from a Knight of the Keyblade. So far as color is concerned, it is the same dark steel as the bracers which he wears in their inactive form but is covered in various stylized swirling patterns of hammered gold. Along the top of his helmet and down the back of the neck and the center of his back plating is a long crest of spikes traveling completely down his back. His hair also grows to a much greater length and hangs out of a single gap between his helmet and neck plating in the way that Greek and Roman officers would have a horse's tail attached to the back of their helms.

History: Alexander became a master some six years ago, having been one of Master Fennel's apprentices and bringing his teacher pride with the sheer level of mastery which he demonstrated in his young age as well as the understanding of Shadow magic which he had first begun to study while on his home world of Radiant Garden. It was there as a young boy that he first embarked on his quest to understand and, in a several hour session of digging through one of the many libraries of magical tomes, discovered three volumes containing extensive knowledge of Light and Darkness magic. It was through his studies of these magic arts that he decided to utilize the shadows, as that put him in a better position to understand the workings of all things around him, and soon he demonstrated wisdom well beyond his years. At the age of eleven, he was discovered by the Keyblade Knights and the strength of his heart was tested. Proving that he was wise of mind and strong of heart made him an ideal candidate for Knighthood and he was taken back to the Golden World and the Gilded Fortress. Through the whole seven years of his training he sought to master each aspect of the Keyblade's power to the fullest extent. Even after he had passed his Mark of Mastery exam with one of the highest scores ever seen, he continued to seek knowledge and with that knowledge understanding. As the arguments in favor of an attempt to understand the darkness and the light began, he at first aligned himself with those who sought to understand the nature of the energies of the universe and himself began researching them. He was one of those whom Master Fennel warned could be targeted because of their support, but when violence broke out he chose to stand with the Keyblade Knights out of a desire to reform the order from the inside and because of a fundamental difference between him and the seekers. All the same, he felt forever distanced from those who had once accepted him despite that none of them made any attempt to push him away. He continued his research in secret, traveling to the Border world where light and darkness came so perfectly together so that he could better study the energies from which the universe had been born.

Personality: The fundamental difference between Alexander and the Seekers is that they seek knowledge, whilst Alexander seeks understanding. The line between them is narrow, and perhaps blurred in some cases, but it exists nonetheless. From his study of Harmony magic, Alexander's inherent desire to know, understand, and achieve balance in all things was heightened. He does feel a certain distance between himself and the other Knights, given that essentially none of them have even the slightest desire to understand any of the energies of the universe and often shun such desires as treason, particularly in the aftermath of the schism. When around other Knights, he tends to avoid talking about his research due to his knowledge of how they would react to such things.

Keyblade: Empathy

+Length: 3 (applied to each of the blades)

+Weight: 1

+Power: 2

+Spellpower: 1

+Guard: 3

Description: The main thing that sets Empathy apart from other Keyblades is the fact that, centered around a hilt large enough to be easily held in two hands, it bares two blades. Each blade is a simple rod extending out an average distance, so far as Keyblades are concerned, and terminating in a simple squared-off set of teeth. The teeth on each blade are facing an opposite direction, so that by spinning it one could strike repeatedly at the same target with the teeth. Color wise, the blades are bright in the same way as finely polished steel and the Hilt is separated from each of the blades by a simple cross guard of vibrant green.

Glider Form: Empathy's Glider form is a bit of a curiosity amongst the Keyblade Knights. It takes the form of a small boat with a single mast and triangular sail and a simple rudder with which to steer it. The boat itself appears to be wooden and is bright red in coloration with the aft end flat to allow the rudder easier access to water and is of sufficient size to fit another three people in the boat with Alexander. The mast itself appears as unpainted wood, and the sail of plain white fabric. So far as weapons are concerned, this vessel is lined along the sides with automatic crossbows and bears a light Ballista near the center of the bow on a base which allows it to rotate and fire large spears at targets.

Affinity: Darkness

Combat Style: Technique

[spoiler=[b]Spells[/b]]

Dark Aura: The user rapidly opens several portals of darkness before vanishing into one and then rushing out of them to attack their enemy.

Dark Firaga: Unleashes dark energy in a searing blast.

Dark Shield: Creates a defensive barrier of pure dark energy, granting the user a few moments to regroup.

Consuming Shadows: Briefly expands and amplifies the darkness inherent in the area surrounding the user. This allows the user to vanish into the shadows, allowing for either a quick escape or a stealthy attack.

 

 

[spoiler=[b]Keychains[/b]]

+Name: Memory

+Stat Modifiers: +1 to Power and Spellpower

+Description: Memory is double-bladed, in the same way as Empathy, but with a few differences. The main difference is that, instead of being a single rod, Memory's blades are composed of three wide strands of crimson metal woven into a tight braid and terminating in a set of teeth on either side of the blade. Each set of teeth is composed of three sharp triangles, the center of which is the longest and the upper of which connects into a rounded-off top of the blade before linking into the upper tooth on the opposite side. The hilt remains the same size as it is on Empathy, but is now separated from the blades by a curved piece similar to a cross-guard on either side which attaches to the other by a straight bar with one on each side of the hilt.

+History: Memory originated as a pocket watch which Alexander's father gave him before he left home. Upon the completion of his mark of mastery exam, the pocket watch became his first Keychain as he remembered from where he had come.

 

 

[Kōsuke Ueki]

Nephilim, I think you should add an affinity that way Harmony isn't just a "Light and Darkness" package. In fact, I had the intention to do the same thing; I just didn't know how to pronounce it. Thanks for clearing that up. :D

 

In all technicality, Hydra, this could be a third affinity you can make people choose. Or better yet, why not add the Affinities of Twilight and Dawn. They ARE different in some form or way. Basically, Twilight is in fact both Light and darkness, but darkness is slight more dominant in use than Light. And Dawn is the same thing, but with only Light being slightly more dominant over Darkness instead. Just making suggestions.

[Yosuke-kun]

In all technicality, Hydra, this could be a third affinity you can make people choose. Or better yet, why not add the Affinities of Twilight and Dawn. They ARE different in some form or way. Basically, Twilight is in fact both Light and darkness, but darkness is slight more dominant in use than Light. And Dawn is the same thing, but with only Light being slightly more dominant over Darkness instead. Just making suggestions.

 

Not actually true. Twilight is described as somebody who remains neutral or in balance of light and darkness, such as Ventus. Dawn is described as somebody who uses the darkness, but for a good reason like to protect their friends, such as Terra or a better example would be Riku. At least that's one way it is.

[Kōsuke Ueki]

Well, from what I read before (And this could be how a user intended to explain it so it could be an affinity in itself), Twilight and Dawn were technical opposites. But i can see what you're saying. Thanks for clearing that up for me, Kio.

[Hydra of Ages]

"Twilight" and "Dawn" aren't affinities because there's no spell you could call a purely "Twilight" or "Dawn" spell. Nothing might work as an Affinity, but that's more the absence of either.

 

I should note there's an actual reason why I'm not allowing anyone to be in perfect balance, and it'll make sense later in the plot. Those of you who have played Birth By Sleep are probably already aware of what I'm referring to.

 

And that's a lot better, Ketodama. Alexander is accepted. Just keep in mind that as a Darkness Affine, Alexander will be regarded as suspicious by the rest of the Knights, especially if they see him actually using Darkness techniques. I'd almost suggest adding another affinity just so you have a fallback element to use while in public (perhaps Fire, given you're using Dark Firaga?), but it's no necessary if you don't want to.

[Asriel Dreemurr]

Well, Alexander is kind of a black sheep anyways. I'm not going to give him a second affinity, but I am going to alter his bio to get rid of the mention of Harmony... Speaking of which, I could probably have gotten him accepted with harmony if I'd put a tad more work into it.

 

Alright, his History has been altered into its final form.

[Yosuke-kun]

Wait, could I make a high level spell based off Sorens fighting style (Speed in this case)

[Hydra of Ages]

Wait, could I make a high level spell based off Sorens fighting style (Speed in this case)

 

Yes, this is fine. I purposely shied away from physical techniques (as I'm assuming most of them are givens), but for specific techniques it is fine.

[Asriel Dreemurr]

I hate to be this guy, but when are we starting?

[Hydra of Ages]

I'm going to give it a couple more days to see if I can't attract any more applications. Considering Kio has been banned for the week, we wouldn't be starting with a full roster anyway.

[Guest Lujan Solo]

Almost done, give me until tomorrow. Saturday if I go watch Hunger Games.

[Frybread002]

Whew...Took me 3 hours to finish...

 

Anyhow, I hope this makes the cut. And if you got any questions, I am more than welcome to answer them to best of my ability Fiendish Doctor Hydra.

 

Name: "ARMOR" (unknown name, Sadisme)

Allegiance: The Keyblade Knights

Sex: N/A

Age: N/A

Physical Description:

It's facial features are a bit complexed. It has a white, silver - medium length like hair that barely touches his shoulders. But in all honesty, It's hair color was originally a golden-brownish hair color, but it has long since been worn out to a color of an old person. Although It's facial features represent an "young man's" face, It's old and heavy shading of black under It's eyes, betrays It's youthfulness and represent years of an very experience life. Much like It's Silver eyes betrays It's youthful looking qualities, It's eyes were once brown. On It's lower face, a metal plate protects It's already missing jaw. While a thin glass plate gaurds the missing lower lips that shows It's menacing teeth.

 

The rest of It's body is actually comprised of armor itself. Hence the name "Armor."

 

As for It's armor itself; the armor of..."Armor"... is actually a body suit and serves as It's..."skin". So in the srictest sense, "Armor"'s entire body is actually what It's name suggests. Armor. The features of the armor are rather bland, the entire body has a grey color, but the torso itself is completely black with light glass-body armor that covers the chest and other vital "organs" deemed importanted to "Armor"'s existence. As for It's arms, the skin of the body armor serves as a near-impregnable re-assurance for the lack of armor on It's body, with biege-colored gaurds that protect the muscles and tendons that are connected to the bone structure of "Armor" and to the suit as well.

 

When in combat, two metal plates cover the eyes of "Armor" to protect them and relay data in real-time to It. To give It additional protection, the entire face and head is encased in the same impreganable material on that is used on It's skin, but in a glass format in order to prevent over-heating of the head.

 

While not in combat, "Armor" tends to wear a simple olive-drab colored jacket (with no hoodie) and beige theme cargo pants to cover It's body (saying "he" doesn't like being in the nude). Unfortunately, "Armor" doesn't have anything to cover Its hands and feet.

 

 

History: Although commonly refered to as "It," "Armor" generally prefers to be called a "he" or "him." Because by all means, "Armor" is by no chance, a complete "Thing." To explain this mess, "Armor"'s existence must take a little step back to explain everything.

 

As a thousand years into future took place, "Armor" was created to act and serve as a bodygaurd to a Boy; Serving as his eyes and ears in a world where the Boy was forced to take a deep slumber for two years.

 

However, before his slumber was to begin, the Boy himself created "Armor" and loaned him his Heart. Making "Armor" completely whole in the process, while at the same time giving "Armor" his very own set of emotions and experiences that he could call his own. However, this was a ploy to the Boy's own end; to fool everyone else in the outside world that he was still blind to their actions while the Boy sleept. While blinded to his cunning, everyone else truly believed he was asleep and unaware, but in plain truth, the Boy's Heart was completely aware.

 

As time progressed, "Armor" begining to believe that everything he felt and experienced was truely his. But one day, while a mission for another master, "Armor" was asked; "How much of those experiences are really yours?"

 

Diego Takeda, one of the Boy's former best-friends, claimed that "Armor" stole his best friend's Heart and began an non-stop man-hunt for "Armor." Promising to completely destroy him from this universe and to gaurd his friend's Heart until he can find him once again. In time, Diego's mad obession with "Armor" finally paid off, when he finally able to track him down. Their ensuing fight, left both fighters violently injuried and opened a rift in time. With both fighters being caught in the wormhole of time...

 

Upon waking from his travel in time, "Armor" found himself in the city of Golden World with a deep cut of uncertainity in his Heart. WIth more hurt from Diego's words than his actions. Nevertheless, "Armor" spent many weeks of investigating with great dividing thoughts and uncertainity in his Heart, that he was able discovere deeper meaning behind his creator's history, his own creation, and the rage behind Diego Takeda's obession with him.

 

"Armor" began his own search for a group known as the Keyblade Knights. With high hopes that they can give him the guidance he needs. But when discovering that there was a fight against themselves a long time, "Armor" became more determined in finding them and said "Just like me, they are divded, perhaps they can give me direction.". After successfully finding them, "Armor" sent in a request to train under them as a Keyblade Apprentice with hopes that they accept him...

 

Personality: Despite being a "It", "Armor" is capable of demonstrating emotions and feelings, and still argues with himself whether or not they truely belong to him, or if he is a proxy to the boy who created him. Nevertheless, "Armor" is a mix between kind, generous, and respectful, to a person who is easily consumed by rage and hatred. So in order to find a balance of two personas, "Armor" was able to track down the Keyblade Knights with hopes that they are able to give his aimless Heart guidance. Until that day comes, he is constantly following them, like a raven who steels from the helpless old lady...

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Keyblade: Kingdom Ruination

+Length: 3

+Weight: 3

+Power: 1

+Spellpower: 1

+Guard: 2

Description: The blade itself doesn't even belong to "Armor" himself. But instead, it belongs to his creator, the Boy who created him. In terms of looks, Ruination is a sword in and out of itself. With the look of a common gear for the gaurd, two blades are used as the "spine" of the Keyblade, one for the spine and the other for an aditional weapong. While two orbs encrust the tip and base of the blade, fins protruding out of the orbs, giving Ruination the official look of the Keyblade.

 

 

Glider Form: In all honesty (and despite being from the future), "Armor"'s glider actually takes the appearance of an Eagle. Capable of firing missles from the beak of the glider, "Armor" tends to fight with another sword equiped to his asernal.

+On a side note, "Armor"'s glider can actually ungergo an metamorphous and become a part of his armor. Enabling him the ability to fly.+

Affinity: Healing

Combat Style: Speed

[spoiler=Spells:]

Aeroa Vortex: A nifty "3 in 1" spell, "Armor" can either:

- Summon an gust of air to surround him as a shield.

- Lift a single or group of enemies into the air for a quick and decisive end.

- "Armor"'s personal favourite, literally turn himself into a vapor of smoke and mist to evade an enemy's attack/capture.

 

Healing Armor: Using the technology of the future, modifications to his suit included an imeadiate recovery of wounds, more resiliency to attacks, and heightened reflexes in combat.

 

Keychains- Akira's Red Bandanna

 

 

+Name: The Red Bandanna

+Stat Modifiers: Length +1/ Weight +1/ Guard +2/ Spellpower -1/ Power -1

+Description: Breaking his creator's taboo of never wanting to change, "Armor" literally forced his creator's Keyblade to undergo an metamorphic change, as it loses all of it's characteristics and now becomes an sword of pure light. With a Red Bandanna around "Armor"'s arm...

+History: Although his heart does belong to his creator, "Armor"'s facial features was not the only thing that was taken from another person. Back in the future, there were two halves of his creator. An "Complete" and "Incomplete" half. Due to the laws of their world, both the "Complete" half and "Incomplete" half were not allowed to co-exist. How this crises as resolved, is unknown, but in a strange turn of events, "Armor" was able to take from both the "Complete" and "Incomplete" halves and resulted in an creation of "something" that was taken from two other people, and calling that "something", his own.

[Frybread002]

My second character application

 

[spoiler=Diego Takeda]

Name: Diego Takeda

Allegiance: Seekers of Darkness

Sex: Male

Age: 15

Physical Description: On Diego's homeworld, war was everything that Diego only knew. Serving only a few years proved that he was aged at a far more rapid rate then his peers...

 

Being in the military allowed him to stay very fit and stand at the 5"10 mark. But after the destruction of his homeworld, his clean shaven featues had been abandoned: His white hiar become long, wavy, and unkempt. Now adorning an right eye-patch from a fatal fight with his friend, Diego's right eye was strucked blind. Even his clothes proved to be aged as well; his black pants had aged and become considerbly dirty, while his black tank-top become rag-tagged and torn, only to be covered by an ugly black jacket that covers his torso. His black gauntless that once procted his forearms began to rust. But as for his boots, they started to rott of his feet so he switched them; the only thing that is considered "clean." In all, his entire outfite is black except for the white trimmings on his clothes.

 

As for his armor, it is actually comprised of the Darkness that is inside of his Heart. So in the strictest sense, his armor is alive: Creating a thin layer of a body suit that is very resilient to many attacks, his faces is covered by a black metal face mask that proctets his nose, jaw and mouth. A little neck bracer is given to support his neck in combat. While his chest is well procted with more black armor, that leaves the stomach unprocted to give him more movement. As for his arms, the gauntles on his arms literally mutate and become a full set of black armor for his arms, that have fins stick out of the forearms. While his shoulders only have a simple pauldron to proctet them. Finally, as for his legs, a pair of black grieves appear and pieces for his theighs are equally protected. Fins purtrude of the shins for a menacing appearance, and his waist is covered by a ligt tassest that is highly flexible.

 

In all, his clothing is black with white trimmings. While his armor is metallic black with white trimmings, creating beautiful illusions and light displays whenever the light of a sunset (or other color related things) are reflected off his armor, given his black armor, a hint of depressing red...

 

 

+Side Note/ his clothes and armor naturally proctect him from any fire-type attacks.+

 

[spoiler=History:] Born a thousand years into the future, Diego's homeworld was rough and brutal. With war constantly on the talks of diplomacy, everywhere you turned, everwhere you looked, there was constant fear on everyone's faces. What made it worse was that Diego home country was living in the middle of six other countries, so yesterday's friends became today's enemy, and turned to tommorow's neutral friend.

 

Aside from his home-world, his family was gifted with the powers to manipulate mankind's greatest ally; Fire (and in some cases, Lighting itself). However, his family also had a curse to give him as well; the manipulation of Time itself.

The reason for the gift and the curse was simply to balance the two's imbalance of each other. Meaning, the gift of Fire meant to have something that is so...unloyal, but greatly dedicated to it's cause that it is like a child you need to protect. Whereas, the curse of Time meant that you were driven mad to the brink of a total mental meltdown, that you were completely overwhelmed of the different possibilities of time itself...

 

Then, there was the curse of an spirit named Anubis. Made completely of Darkness, Anubis was an spirit entity that helped governed the laws of the natural world on their home-world. Not being of good or evil, Anubis's sole job was to simply guide those who had died to next life, and to help maintain balance on their world.

 

How he ended up in Diego is somthing of an enigma, but when their home-world was over-run with Heartless (which lead to the eventual destruction of their home-world), Diego and Anubis were the only survivors left. Saving only enough land to make a small little island, Diego didn't felt imprisoned or anger towards the Heartless. But instead, felt joy because his world didn't have to suffer any longer. Instead, he only felt alone. To ease his suffering, Anubis summoned an mysterious portal out of nowhere. Walking through it, Diego -along with Anubis - began to travel many worlds in the universe of the future as a Keyblader. Realizing many truths and having many questions as well, Diego learned the existence of a Thing named "Armor."

 

Unknown on the exact thoughts of his existence, Diego learned that "Armor" had the Heart of his former best friend - who had died a long time ago, inside of him. Grief strucked and angered, Diego began his mad obssession with "Armor" and with the belief that his friend was still alive.

Eventually, his search paid off, when Diego was finally able to confront the Thing named "Armor."

 

"How much of those experiences are really yours?" Asked Diego. "Because that Heart doesn't belong in a Fake like you! Because your Heart belongs to the Heart of my Greastet Friend!!!"

 

Using every technique that both fighters ever had, the fight between "Armor" and Diego was bloodly. There was no clear victors, as both figthers violently injuried each other to point where they couldn't stand. But Diego had more card up his sleeve and summoned an massive rift in Time. Literally creating an diminsion to another time, Diego's mad obession toward's "Armor" back-fired when he was caught in the storm itself...

 

Found unconscious on the World of Oblivion, Diego learned of the Seekers of Darkness and begged to train under them, after having his wounds treated by them. So for now, he can only hope that they accept him...

 

 

Personality: Diego was always alone. Not because of something tragic like his family dying. But because he wanted it that way. The reason was simple; inside of his heart, an spirit of heavy darkness known as Anubis resided in his heart. The second, was because of his family curse, the ability to manipulate Time itself. This led Diego to stay away from other for fear of hurting anyone comming close to him.

 

But after his friend's death, he'd became fixated on it and paranoia started to eat away his mind.

 

He won't stop until he can either destory "Armor" or take "Armor" back into their own time, then destroy him there.

 

Keyblade: Kingdom Key + Kingdom Come = The Night's Lance

+Length: 2

+Weight: 4

+Power: 2

+Spellpower: 1

+Guard: 1

Description: Although the Kingdom Key and Kingdom Come Keyblades are two seperate blades at heart, but in actuality, they're just one Keyblade itself. As it forms a double bladded Kebylade. Meaning that the Keyblade takes the shape of a staff.

 

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The Kingdom Key retains it original shape, color, and powers. Meanwhile, it's counter brethen, is a completely black Keyblade (except for it's white guard) that neither unlocks or locks. It can neither destory, like it's cousin Kingdom Ruination. Instead, Kingdom Come is a keyblade that can only protect.

 

Glider Form: Just like his homeworld, Diego keeps it simple. No fancy fins or color patters. Retaining the shape of a bike, Diego has it jet black with a metallic finish and white trimmings.

 

Affinity: Time and Darkness

Combat Style: Technique

[spoiler=Spells:]

Kyocene: Using his latent/natural powers over Time itself, Diego uses the power of his armor and the darkness of Anubis jointly to enable his eyes goes to a hazy, milk-white color (or in other words, his eyes have the appearance of being blind), so he can see his opponent in a dream-state and literally manipulate time in his mind (so he either can slow-down or increase the speed of an incomming bullet in his mind in order to dodge it), literally warp Time around him to slow down/speed up his opponent, or look into the eyes of his opponent, see their history and turn every negative thing about his opponentm into a weapon of mass fear to their minds (or use his own personal experiences as well).

+Side Note/ At the cost of greatly wearing down his body phsyically in a matter of mere seconds, Diego literally becomes blind for a prolonged state of time depending on how long he uses the Kyocene+

 

Death's Envoy: Using the power of Anubis and his Kyocene, Diego must get point-blank range of his opponent, where he can safely grab his immobile opponent. Then have Anubis physically manifest behind him and impale both him (Diego) and his opponent to grab their Heart and violently crush it.

 

Lighting's Revenge: Channels all of his powers to create an lighting bolt in his hand, then charges at light-speed to spear his opponent in the chest at. But due to it's high speed, the accuracy of this attack is practially 00.1% when used alone. But when used jointly with his Kyocene, the success of his attack dramaitcally raises to 45% chance of hitting. Even still, Diego can only do his final attack at a great distance away from his oppoent in order to build momentum and raise the attack to it's maxium potential.

 

 

 

Keychains- A sliver of his own Heart.

+Name: King of Kingdoms

+Stat Modifiers: Guard -1/ Spellpower -1/ Length +2/ Power +2

+Description: Out of all Keyblades in the known universe, King of Kingdoms, is one of the few Keyblades to have no change what so ever. As the two Keyblades now become seperate to enable Diego to become a dual-wielding Keyblade Wielder. With Kingom Key having an lighting bolts shooting wildly out of it, while Kingdom Come has flames dancing in a calm manner around it.

+History: Having the natural abilities to manipulate fire and lighting at Heart, Diego doesn't need to be adept at magic to controll it. While his abilities at manipulating Time takes more control than anything else, it is actually his history of being alone that enabled him to dual wield a keyblade. From his hate filled obession with his friend, to the protective over-seerer of his home, Diego keeps a maintained balance of the two forces.

 

 

[Asriel Dreemurr]

Requesting accepted apps spoiler update.

 

Also, FryBread, if you've got healing as an Affinity you can't have another one.

[Hydra of Ages]

Requesting accepted apps spoiler update.

 

Request accepted. Feel free to call me out for being lazy.

 

@Frybread- Oh boy, where to start. Well, let's just cut to the chase: Your biography is too complicated. No, seriously.

 

I don't mean it's too well written. I mean you're involving time travel, a master tactician, "Seraph Pods", split and incomplete entities and vaguely defined macguffins in a plot that's already overgrown and Kudzu as it is- and that's just with ARMOR's application alone- looking at Diego's gives me headaches at fitting the logistics of this into the roleplay world, especially since Diego has a gamut of broken abilities.

 

To put it more simply, your background is the type of sidequest that is obviously attempting to overshadow the main quest, especially since I intend the Kingdom Key to be a major element in the story here. My advice? Just take the characters and write the fanfiction they're more suited to being in than trying to wrench them in here.

 

Also, more minor details: Healing affinity can only be solo, Deigo is unrealistically young for his power (keep in mind 18-year-olds would be the youngest and most inexperienced Masters here) and somehow he's capable of manipulating Time more fully than even the most powerful Time Mages without even being Time Affine- or indeed, even knowing a single spell relating to time in any way, and ARMOR has no way of travelling between worlds.

[Frybread002]

Hmmm...Alright, cool. So, taking you up on your advice, if I were to re-edit my character applications, would they then be accepted? Because one of the difficulties I seriously had with the overall character applications, was just the lack of guidance I had. So I all I really did was just try my best to interprete the rules of the role-play, based on the accepted characters that was on the first page, and I guessed I blew it. Case and point, I noticed that your characters a had crud-ton of infomation and so I just assumed that you were the type to want a lot of infomation.

 

But aside from that, does my question still stand? If I were to re-do my applications, then would my characters be accepted?

 

P.S. I pray that Tsa can vouch for me, but is it possible to use a picture for characters appearance? I have a tendacy to draw out my own characters design and like to showcase them physically, instead of verbally.

[Hydra of Ages]

There's always an open invitation to submit an edited application. I don't think I've ever had to to tell somebody to stop trying to submit a character, period.

 

I'm not entirely certain how you got "invent time-travel plot" from the information on the first page. Yes I'd like to emphasise I'd like a ton of information- but be discriminatory. There's a difference between a character bio explaining how a character grew up and developed within the confines of the story and just trying to write your own story and poorly link it to the existing one.

 

Write something involving the Schism, like everyone else has; that's the crux of the plot, and characters should be linked to that event in some way. You don't have to be exactly like everyone else, but take cues when appropriate- a time-travel prodigy with a dual-wielded keyblade from the future who happens to be several years younger than everyone else is at obvious odds with everyone elses' applications.

 

As for the picture? If you draw it yourself and include all the necessary details (armor, clothing and features) to a satisfactory extent, then fine, I'll make an exception. Personally I'd still prefer a written description, given that this is a text-based roleplay and I'd prefer to hear how you describe your own character in your own words.

[Frybread002]

Alright cool...but...what's a Schism?

[Hydra of Ages]

Here's a link to an obscure website that can give you all the answers you need.

[Frybread002]

Whoa-ho-ho! What I meant, was what was the Schism about? Because for all I know, I only read two essays about two different fractions who have different ideals. Some other infomation about the Kingdom Hearts universe and that's about it. I really wasn't aware of a plot. Because like I said, I only read infomation about two groups with different ideals, which in turn got me confused, because I didn't really have anything to go off of, but the history for two groups and a few character applications. I wasn't aware of how important the Schism was.

[Kōsuke Ueki]

It's the one thing that keeps this plot together. I wish I can vouch for you, man, but until you're at least close to getting the bios and ideas of your characters correct, I'm just going to wait it out. Sorry. Also, my app is coming up soon. Personality and everything related to me Keyblade and Abilities is becoming a b*tch at this point (Damn Writer's Block!). I'll get over it, though.

[Frybread002]

Hmmm...Alright, thanks Tsa. Now I have a clearer goal on what I'm doing.

[Asriel Dreemurr]

Hey Frybread. From everything I've read involving your comments after the criticism you've been getting it sounds like you didn't entirely understand the plot. Given how both "essays" as you described them give information about the schism as almost the exactly last piece of information you can guess that it's a pretty important thing. That's just the way essays work, you put what you want the reader to come away from it with at the very end.