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A higher Weight stat indicates a lighter, and therefore quicker to move, Keyblade. Keyblades don't work like regular swords do, so the additional weight doesn't actually increase its damage capacity in any way- lighter blades are therefore preferable.

 

I understand. I just thought that the more weight it had, the heavier it'd be.

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Aghhhh. Can't think of a way to keep high Spellpower/Power/Weight, and around 2 for Reach and Guard. Any suggestions, if this is allowed? Trying to keep highest as spellpower, then power, then weight, then reach, then guard. If guard is at 1, will it possibly break during a battle? Or just get damaged?

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Hey Kio, can you help me? :D

I'm trying to find good stats for the Keyblade and Keychain, and my character uses his speed and keyblade usually, but has powerful magic, so I'm trying to think. I want a length of around 2-3, a high weight (4-5, preferably 5), high power (4-5), and low guard's fine (1), but is Spellpower important, to my character? I'm not sure if it enhances Magic, or just frees it, so a low Spellpower stat would mean hard to use magic freely?

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My opinion only:

 

4 or 5 for any area is a bit much, as it'll significantly lower just about every other stat. Remember, with the Keychain, you only get 12 points. For a Spell and Speed user, power isn't as important, so that could be lower. If he does uses more spells than physical attacks, spellpower should be higher. Weight doesn't need to be much higher than 2, and 3 only if he banks on speed as a single attack strategy. I wouldn't go so far as to say that length is unimportant, cuz it definitely is, but it has less priority than weight or spellpower for a speed mage. Guard should be able to get away with being 1, since your character is speed based, and therefore should be capable of dodging most attacks and only blocking a few as needed. So stats should look something like this:

 

Keyblade:

Spellpower: 3

Power: 2

Guard: 1

Weight: 2

Length: 2

 

Keychain:

Power: -1

Spellpower: +2

Weight: +1

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Alright. I'm pretty sure power would be more damage, and since it's actually the keyblade stats and not your characters, you should still be able to use your spells with low power and have them still take a lot of energy. But overall power isn't really a priority for Haku. I'd consider it more a luxury, but it's your choice in the end.

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Thanks anyway Kio :D *goes to edit and repost so Hydra can see, and check*

[spoiler=App][spoiler=General]Name: Haku (

Allegiance: The Keyblade Knights

Sex: Male

Age: 19

[spoiler=Physical Description]Features: Well contoured body from staying healthy and exercising, and has a minor scar across his left arm and a more serious one on his back, from the NeoShadows attack. He has recovered, but he is a slight bit under his full potential. He hopes he can find a good Healer to help him become stronger. His eyes are a sea-blue and has sandy-blond hair, and a good-natured smile almost always. Rather than being muscled, he is slim, and can outdo most people in acrobatics. He is not too strong, but not weak either. Flexibility and acrobatics are his skills.

 

Casual Clothing: Wears a white short sleeve polo shirt with plain white buttons. The top 2-3 buttons are usually left unbuttoned. He usually wears casual, loose, but not sagging jeans. Haku sports a white armband on his left arm, down at his wrist, rather though. His whitish jacket has the Keyblade Master emblem on his back in a gold color. When unused, his armor retracts into a platinum and gold shoulderplate on his left arm.

 

Armor: A well-fitting, but light and comfortable armor with plates of platinum, with gold filigree engraved everywhere, especially on his shoulders and chest area. It is not too rigid, so it allows for easy movement, especially during battles, where absolute "acrobatics" and flexibility are necessary for him. The armor outside is tough, and only stronger, or accurate magic/strikes can damage it severely. Other blows would knock the wind out of him, but wouldn't hurt him too much.

[spoiler=History] Haku was from Radiant Garden, and when he was around age 15, his Keyblade appeared suddenly, dropping into his hands, with a divine voice saying, "You are to be a Keyblader of the Light. Wield this weapon well." You could imagine that sort of event was rare, even in Radiant Garden, and they all praised him, as he suddenly went from a school star to a near official Knight. Due to that sudden acquisition of his newfound Keyblade, the Keyblade Knights arrived, and took him to the Academy. As he trained, he found friends, who had originally been skeptical, with his original age, until he nearly blasted them out of the Academy with a surprising burst of light, after being teased, once too many times. One day, the Exam came. He followed his directions well, and the masters had noted a peculiar Light-strength in this young child, as well as an unbelievable talent for Time Magic, and Haku passed with near perfect grades, his few mistakes from being unused to the huge power of the Keyblade, and his magic. His friends did not as good, but still extraordinary, compared with others similar to them, and so, as they were given the Title of Keyblade Master, they said their farewells, and left for their own ways, hoping they would meet each oher again.

[spoiler=Personality]Haku is a very nice person, although is seen to start radiating light whenever he gets a strong emotion. He is very generous, and is unselfish, to the point, he would rather give spoils to his friends, and just be happy about the good time. Haku, is however, not naive. He will "cleanse" a person with Light energy, if they have too much negativity inside them. The cleansing is refreshing and helpful, leaving the cleansed with a sense of happiness. Haku's personality is just his nature, although it was also due to the fact he was raised in a very happy village, with spirit and laughs everywhere. He has seen his fair share of fights, and negative impressions, but his internal Light energy, combined with his friendly nature, is more than enough to resist any Darker desires.

[spoiler=Keyblade]+Name: Anima Caelum[spoiler=Stats]+Length: 1

+Weight: 1

+Power: 3

+Spellpower: 3

+Guard: 2

 

[spoiler=Description]A simple, yet powerful Keyblade of iron and iron pyrite, with his family's initials engraved on the bottom of the handle. The end of the Keyblade is a rare electrum spike.

[spoiler=Glider Form]The Glider turns into a spread-eagle "surfboard" shape Glider, with a cannon on the top, for Haku to scope out and fire at enemies with beams of light. The Glider itself has iron filigree at the sides, and one crystal at the top, while there are 6 boosters for stability (bottom, 2 on sides, and 3 on back). The family initials can still be seen etched on the crystal.

 

[spoiler=Affinity]Light/Time

[spoiler=Combat Style]Speed, but some may consider as slightly Technique as well.

 

[spoiler=Spell-related][spoiler=Spells]Supreme Radiance and Time Splicer.

[spoiler=Supreme Radiance Description]Like Mega Flare, but Light-oriented, and instead of one huge burst forward, it's a giant sphere of light expanding from Haku, and a second circle outside enemies, closing in to crush them. After the spheres, a spray of lasers erupt from Haku in all directions. This is a hugely powerful move that heals a decent amount. It takes a short cast time, but has a nearly takes forever to be able to gain enough energy to use again, and stuns Haku temporarily for 30 seconds, exhausted. This can only be usable once, while Haku's at full strength, and after this, he is completely drained of energy to even walk, let alone attack or cast anything else.

[spoiler=Keychain]+Name: Radiant Union[spoiler=Stat Modifiers]+1 Length

+1 Power

+1 Spellpower

-1 Weight

[spoiler=Description]The handle becomes a complex platinum handle with golden decorations engraved, and various blue orbs of light attached around the rim of the handle, glowing with a warm radiance. The blade of the Key becomes a platinum and gold mixture, flaring out, with bluish filigree, and ends up to a soft-bluish white color point, with detailed, handcrafted points for the teeth.

 

[spoiler=History]The keychain was originally a small electrum token, with his family's initials embossed upon it, and he had his Keyblade and Spells as usual, but when several NeoShadows attacked, as the Darkness spread, his youngest brother and sister were taken, and in a life changing moment, the strength of his feelings changed the token into a teardrop, dramatically enhancing his Keyblade's powers, and gave him the power to easily kill all the NeoShadows, except the extraordinarily resistant captor, which had escaped unfortunately.

 

 

 

Changed formatting and content an important amount, besides Keychain stuff.

 

If code needed for easy copy-paste: [spoiler=Code]

[spoiler="App"][spoiler="General"]Name: Haku (<3 Spirited Away)
Allegiance: The Keyblade Knights
Sex: Male
Age: 19[/spoiler] [spoiler="Physical Description"][u]Features:[/u] Well contoured body from staying healthy and exercising, and has a minor scar across his left arm and a more serious one on his back, from the NeoShadows attack. He has recovered, but he is a slight bit under his full potential. He hopes he can find a good Healer to help him become stronger. His eyes are a sea-blue and has sandy-blond hair, and a good-natured smile almost always. Rather than being muscled, he is slim, and can outdo most people in acrobatics. He is not too strong, but not weak either. Flexibility and acrobatics are his skills.

[u]Casual Clothing:[/u] Wears a white short sleeve polo shirt with plain white buttons. The top 2-3 buttons are usually left unbuttoned. He usually wears casual, loose, but not sagging jeans. Haku sports a white armband on his left arm, down at his wrist, rather though. His whitish jacket has the Keyblade Master emblem on his back in a gold color. When unused, his armor retracts into a platinum and gold shoulderplate on his left arm.

[u]Armor:[/u] A well-fitting, but light and comfortable armor with plates of platinum, with gold filigree engraved everywhere, especially on his shoulders and chest area. It is not too rigid, so it allows for easy movement, especially during battles, where absolute "acrobatics" and flexibility are necessary for him. The armor outside is tough, and only stronger, or accurate magic/strikes can  damage it severely. Other blows would knock the wind out of him, but wouldn't hurt him too much.[/spoiler] [spoiler="History"]	   Haku was from Radiant Garden, and when he was around age 15, his Keyblade appeared suddenly, dropping into his hands, with a divine voice saying, "You are to be a Keyblader of the Light. Wield this weapon well." You could imagine that sort of event was rare, even in Radiant Garden, and they all praised him, as he suddenly went from a school star to a near official Knight. Due to that sudden acquisition of his newfound Keyblade, the Keyblade Knights arrived, and took him to the Academy. As he trained, he found friends, who had originally been skeptical, with his original age, until he nearly blasted them out of the Academy with a surprising burst of light, after being teased, once too many times. One day, the Exam came. He followed his directions well, and the masters had noted a peculiar Light-strength in this young child, as well as an unbelievable talent for Time Magic, and Haku passed with near perfect grades, his few mistakes from being unused to the huge power of the Keyblade, and his magic. His friends did not as good, but still extraordinary, compared with others similar to them, and so, as they were given the Title of Keyblade Master, they said their farewells, and left for their own ways, hoping they would meet each oher again.[/spoiler] [spoiler="Personality"]Haku is a very nice person, although is seen to start radiating light whenever he gets a strong emotion. He is very generous, and is unselfish, to the point, he would rather give spoils to his friends, and just be happy about the good time. Haku, is however, [i]not[/i] naive. He will "cleanse" a person with Light energy, if they have too much negativity inside them. The cleansing is refreshing and helpful, leaving the cleansed with a sense of happiness. Haku's personality is just his nature, although it was also due to the fact he was raised in a very happy village, with spirit and laughs everywhere. He has seen his fair share of fights, and negative impressions, but his internal Light energy, combined with his friendly nature, is more than enough to resist any Darker desires.[/spoiler] [spoiler="Keyblade"]+Name: Anima Caelum[spoiler="Stats"]+Length: 2
+Weight: 2
+Power: 2
+Spellpower: 3
+Guard: 1[/spoiler]
[spoiler="Description"]A simple, yet powerful Keyblade of iron and iron pyrite, with his family's initials engraved on the bottom of the handle. The end of the Keyblade is a rare electrum spike.[/spoiler][spoiler="Glider Form"]The Glider turns into a spread-eagle "surfboard" shape Glider, with a cannon on the top, for Haku to scope out and fire at enemies with beams of light. The Glider itself has iron filigree at the sides, and one crystal at the top, while there are 6 boosters for stability (bottom, 2 on sides, and 3 on back). The family initials can still be seen etched on the crystal.[/spoiler][/spoiler][spoiler="Affinity"]Light/Time[/spoiler][spoiler="Combat Style"]Speed, but some may consider as slightly Technique as well.[/spoiler]
[spoiler="Spell-related"][spoiler="Spells"]Supreme Radiance and Time Splicer.[/spoiler][spoiler="Supreme Radiance Description"]Like Mega Flare, but Light-oriented, and instead of one huge burst forward, it's a giant sphere of light expanding from Haku, and a second circle outside enemies, closing in to crush them. After the spheres, a spray of lasers erupt from Haku in all directions. This is a hugely powerful move that heals a decent amount. It takes a short cast time, but has a nearly takes forever to be able to gain enough energy to use again, and stuns Haku temporarily for 30 seconds, exhausted. This can only be usable once, while Haku's at full strength, and after this, he is completely drained of energy to even walk, let alone attack or cast anything else.[/spoiler][spoiler="Keychain"]+Name: Radiant Union[spoiler="Stat Modifiers"]-1 Power +2 Spellpower +1 Weight[/spoiler][spoiler="Description"]The handle becomes a complex platinum handle with golden decorations engraved, and various blue orbs of light attached around the rim of the handle, glowing with a warm radiance. The blade of the Key becomes a platinum and gold mixture, flaring out, with bluish filigree, and ends up to a soft-bluish white color point, with detailed, handcrafted points for the teeth.[/spoiler]
[spoiler="History"]The keychain was originally a small electrum token, with his family's initials embossed upon it, and he had his Keyblade and Spells as usual, but when several NeoShadows attacked, as the Darkness spread, his youngest brother and sister were taken, and in a life changing moment, the strength of his feelings changed the token into a teardrop, dramatically enhancing his Keyblade's powers, and gave him the power to easily kill all the NeoShadows, except the extraordinarily resistant captor, which had escaped unfortunately.[/spoiler][/spoiler][/spoiler][/spoiler]

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@Kio-Kun: Your character has been accepted now.

 

If guard is at 1, will it possibly break during a battle? Or just get damaged?

 

A Keyblade at 1 Guard certainly isn't particularly sturdy and wouldn't be very good for blocking. It breaking would still be unlikely, but not impossible; it could still get damaged if it sustains too many hits from something particularly powerful (say, other Keyblades), however. Also, it'll be pretty useless at blocking the damage of anything except the most basic of attacks.

 

Guard 0 blades, of course, are actually relatively easy to break (though the user can just resummon them back together) and can't block enemy attacks at all.

 

I'm not sure if it enhances Magic, or just frees it, so a low Spellpower stat would mean hard to use magic freely?

 

Spellpower indicates how easy it is to channel magical power through the Keyblade. Low Spellpower Keyblades would burn much more mana per cast, and the resulting spells would be far weaker than one with a high spellpower. In essence, it's both ease of use and potency.

 

I'm going to guess you will only make certain acceptions to characters if they are from an existing series unrelated to Kingdom Hearts, Hydra? Because I also want to create a world nased off of the world from the specific story I am choosing.

 

Shoot me a PM and we'll see.

 

App

 

You still have a Keychain going to 0 Weight.

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Posted · Hidden by Astolfo, March 16, 2012 - No reason given
Hidden by Astolfo, March 16, 2012 - No reason given

[spoiler=App][spoiler=General]Name: Haku (

Allegiance: The Keyblade Knights

Sex: Male

Age: 19

[spoiler=Physical Description]Features: Well contoured body from staying healthy and exercising, and has a minor scar across his left arm and a more serious one on his back, from the NeoShadows attack. He has recovered, but he is a slight bit under his full potential. He hopes he can find a good Healer to help him become stronger. His eyes are a sea-blue and has sandy-blond hair, and a good-natured smile almost always. Rather than being muscled, he is slim, and can outdo most people in acrobatics. He is not too strong, but not weak either. Flexibility and acrobatics are his skills.

 

Casual Clothing: Wears a white short sleeve polo shirt with plain white buttons. The top 2-3 buttons are usually left unbuttoned. He usually wears casual, loose, but not sagging jeans. Haku sports a white armband on his left arm, down at his wrist, rather though. His whitish jacket has the Keyblade Master emblem on his back in a gold color. When unused, his armor retracts into a platinum and gold shoulderplate on his left arm.

 

Armor: A well-fitting, but light and comfortable armor with plates of platinum, with gold filigree engraved everywhere, especially on his shoulders and chest area. It is not too rigid, so it allows for easy movement, especially during battles, where absolute "acrobatics" and flexibility are necessary for him. The armor outside is tough, and only stronger, or accurate magic/strikes can damage it severely. Other blows would knock the wind out of him, but wouldn't hurt him too much.

[spoiler=History] Haku was from Radiant Garden, and when he was around age 15, his Keyblade appeared suddenly, dropping into his hands, with a divine voice saying, "You are to be a Keyblader of the Light. Wield this weapon well." You could imagine that sort of event was rare, even in Radiant Garden, and they all praised him, as he suddenly went from a school star to a near official Knight. Due to that sudden acquisition of his newfound Keyblade, the Keyblade Knights arrived, and took him to the Academy. As he trained, he found friends, who had originally been skeptical, with his original age, until he nearly blasted them out of the Academy with a surprising burst of light, after being teased, once too many times. One day, the Exam came. He followed his directions well, and the masters had noted a peculiar Light-strength in this young child, as well as an unbelievable talent for Time Magic, and Haku passed with near perfect grades, his few mistakes from being unused to the huge power of the Keyblade, and his magic. His friends did not as good, but still extraordinary, compared with others similar to them, and so, as they were given the Title of Keyblade Master, they said their farewells, and left for their own ways, hoping they would meet each oher again.

[spoiler=Personality]Haku is a very nice person, although is seen to start radiating light whenever he gets a strong emotion. He is very generous, and is unselfish, to the point, he would rather give spoils to his friends, and just be happy about the good time. Haku, is however, not naive. He will "cleanse" a person with Light energy, if they have too much negativity inside them. The cleansing is refreshing and helpful, leaving the cleansed with a sense of happiness. Haku's personality is just his nature, although it was also due to the fact he was raised in a very happy village, with spirit and laughs everywhere. He has seen his fair share of fights, and negative impressions, but his internal Light energy, combined with his friendly nature, is more than enough to resist any Darker desires.

[spoiler=Keyblade]+Name: Anima Caelum[spoiler=Stats]+Length: 2

+Weight: 1

+Power: 2

+Spellpower: 3

+Guard: 2

 

[spoiler=Description]A simple, yet powerful Keyblade of iron and iron pyrite, with his family's initials engraved on the bottom of the handle. The end of the Keyblade is a rare electrum spike.

[spoiler=Glider Form]The Glider turns into a spread-eagle "surfboard" shape Glider, with a cannon on the top, for Haku to scope out and fire at enemies with beams of light. The Glider itself has iron filigree at the sides, and one crystal at the top, while there are 6 boosters for stability (bottom, 2 on sides, and 3 on back). The family initials can still be seen etched on the crystal.

 

[spoiler=Affinity]Light/Time

[spoiler=Combat Style]Speed, but some may consider as slightly Technique as well.

 

[spoiler=Spell-related][spoiler=Spells]Supreme Radiance and Time Splicer.

[spoiler=Supreme Radiance Description]Like Mega Flare, but Light-oriented, and instead of one huge burst forward, it's a giant sphere of light expanding from Haku, and a second circle outside enemies, closing in to crush them. After the spheres, a spray of lasers erupt from Haku in all directions. This is a hugely powerful move that heals a decent amount. It takes a short cast time, but has a nearly takes forever to be able to gain enough energy to use again, and stuns Haku temporarily for 30 seconds, exhausted. This can only be usable once, while Haku's at full strength, and after this, he is completely drained of energy to even walk, let alone attack or cast anything else.

[spoiler=Keychain]+Name: Radiant Union[spoiler=Stat Modifiers]+1 Length

+1 Power

+1 Spellpower

-1 Weight

[spoiler=Description]The handle becomes a complex platinum handle with golden decorations engraved, and various blue orbs of light attached around the rim of the handle, glowing with a warm radiance. The blade of the Key becomes a platinum and gold mixture, flaring out, with bluish filigree, and ends up to a soft-bluish white color point, with detailed, handcrafted points for the teeth.

 

[spoiler=History]The keychain was originally a small electrum token, with his family's initials embossed upon it, and he had his Keyblade and Spells as usual, but when several NeoShadows attacked, as the Darkness spread, his youngest brother and sister were taken, and in a life changing moment, the strength of his feelings changed the token into a teardrop, dramatically enhancing his Keyblade's powers, and gave him the power to easily kill all the NeoShadows, except the extraordinarily resistant captor, which had escaped unfortunately.

 

 

 

Changed formatting and content an important amount, besides Keychain stuff.

 

If code needed for easy copy-paste: [spoiler=Code]

[spoiler="App"][spoiler="General"]Name: Haku (<3 Spirited Away)
Allegiance: The Keyblade Knights
Sex: Male
Age: 19[/spoiler] [spoiler="Physical Description"][u]Features:[/u] Well contoured body from staying healthy and exercising, and has a minor scar across his left arm and a more serious one on his back, from the NeoShadows attack. He has recovered, but he is a slight bit under his full potential. He hopes he can find a good Healer to help him become stronger. His eyes are a sea-blue and has sandy-blond hair, and a good-natured smile almost always. Rather than being muscled, he is slim, and can outdo most people in acrobatics. He is not too strong, but not weak either. Flexibility and acrobatics are his skills.

[u]Casual Clothing:[/u] Wears a white short sleeve polo shirt with plain white buttons. The top 2-3 buttons are usually left unbuttoned. He usually wears casual, loose, but not sagging jeans. Haku sports a white armband on his left arm, down at his wrist, rather though. His whitish jacket has the Keyblade Master emblem on his back in a gold color. When unused, his armor retracts into a platinum and gold shoulderplate on his left arm.

[u]Armor:[/u] A well-fitting, but light and comfortable armor with plates of platinum, with gold filigree engraved everywhere, especially on his shoulders and chest area. It is not too rigid, so it allows for easy movement, especially during battles, where absolute "acrobatics" and flexibility are necessary for him. The armor outside is tough, and only stronger, or accurate magic/strikes can  damage it severely. Other blows would knock the wind out of him, but wouldn't hurt him too much.[/spoiler] [spoiler="History"]	   Haku was from Radiant Garden, and when he was around age 15, his Keyblade appeared suddenly, dropping into his hands, with a divine voice saying, "You are to be a Keyblader of the Light. Wield this weapon well." You could imagine that sort of event was rare, even in Radiant Garden, and they all praised him, as he suddenly went from a school star to a near official Knight. Due to that sudden acquisition of his newfound Keyblade, the Keyblade Knights arrived, and took him to the Academy. As he trained, he found friends, who had originally been skeptical, with his original age, until he nearly blasted them out of the Academy with a surprising burst of light, after being teased, once too many times. One day, the Exam came. He followed his directions well, and the masters had noted a peculiar Light-strength in this young child, as well as an unbelievable talent for Time Magic, and Haku passed with near perfect grades, his few mistakes from being unused to the huge power of the Keyblade, and his magic. His friends did not as good, but still extraordinary, compared with others similar to them, and so, as they were given the Title of Keyblade Master, they said their farewells, and left for their own ways, hoping they would meet each oher again.[/spoiler] [spoiler="Personality"]Haku is a very nice person, although is seen to start radiating light whenever he gets a strong emotion. He is very generous, and is unselfish, to the point, he would rather give spoils to his friends, and just be happy about the good time. Haku, is however, [i]not[/i] naive. He will "cleanse" a person with Light energy, if they have too much negativity inside them. The cleansing is refreshing and helpful, leaving the cleansed with a sense of happiness. Haku's personality is just his nature, although it was also due to the fact he was raised in a very happy village, with spirit and laughs everywhere. He has seen his fair share of fights, and negative impressions, but his internal Light energy, combined with his friendly nature, is more than enough to resist any Darker desires.[/spoiler] [spoiler="Keyblade"]+Name: Anima Caelum[spoiler="Stats"]+Length: 2
+Weight: 2
+Power: 2
+Spellpower: 3
+Guard: 1[/spoiler]
[spoiler="Description"]A simple, yet powerful Keyblade of iron and iron pyrite, with his family's initials engraved on the bottom of the handle. The end of the Keyblade is a rare electrum spike.[/spoiler][spoiler="Glider Form"]The Glider turns into a spread-eagle "surfboard" shape Glider, with a cannon on the top, for Haku to scope out and fire at enemies with beams of light. The Glider itself has iron filigree at the sides, and one crystal at the top, while there are 6 boosters for stability (bottom, 2 on sides, and 3 on back). The family initials can still be seen etched on the crystal.[/spoiler][/spoiler][spoiler="Affinity"]Light/Time[/spoiler][spoiler="Combat Style"]Speed, but some may consider as slightly Technique as well.[/spoiler]
[spoiler="Spell-related"][spoiler="Spells"]Supreme Radiance and Time Splicer.[/spoiler][spoiler="Supreme Radiance Description"]Like Mega Flare, but Light-oriented, and instead of one huge burst forward, it's a giant sphere of light expanding from Haku, and a second circle outside enemies, closing in to crush them. After the spheres, a spray of lasers erupt from Haku in all directions. This is a hugely powerful move that heals a decent amount. It takes a short cast time, but has a nearly takes forever to be able to gain enough energy to use again, and stuns Haku temporarily for 30 seconds, exhausted. This can only be usable once, while Haku's at full strength, and after this, he is completely drained of energy to even walk, let alone attack or cast anything else.[/spoiler][spoiler="Keychain"]+Name: Radiant Union[spoiler="Stat Modifiers"]-1 Power +2 Spellpower +1 Weight[/spoiler][spoiler="Description"]The handle becomes a complex platinum handle with golden decorations engraved, and various blue orbs of light attached around the rim of the handle, glowing with a warm radiance. The blade of the Key becomes a platinum and gold mixture, flaring out, with bluish filigree, and ends up to a soft-bluish white color point, with detailed, handcrafted points for the teeth.[/spoiler]
[spoiler="History"]The keychain was originally a small electrum token, with his family's initials embossed upon it, and he had his Keyblade and Spells as usual, but when several NeoShadows attacked, as the Darkness spread, his youngest brother and sister were taken, and in a life changing moment, the strength of his feelings changed the token into a teardrop, dramatically enhancing his Keyblade's powers, and gave him the power to easily kill all the NeoShadows, except the extraordinarily resistant captor, which had escaped unfortunately.[/spoiler][/spoiler][/spoiler][/spoiler]

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[spoiler=App][spoiler=General]Name: Haku (

Allegiance: The Keyblade Knights

Sex: Male

Age: 19

[spoiler=Physical Description]Features: Well contoured body from staying healthy and exercising, and has a minor scar across his left arm and a more serious one on his back, from the NeoShadows attack. He has recovered, but he is a slight bit under his full potential. He hopes he can find a good Healer to help him become stronger. His eyes are a sea-blue and has sandy-blond hair, and a good-natured smile almost always. Rather than being muscled, he is slim, and can outdo most people in acrobatics. He is not too strong, but not weak either. Flexibility and acrobatics are his skills.

 

Casual Clothing: Wears a white short sleeve polo shirt with plain white buttons. The top 2-3 buttons are usually left unbuttoned. He usually wears casual, loose, but not sagging jeans. Haku sports a white armband on his left arm, down at his wrist, rather though. His whitish jacket has the Keyblade Master emblem on his back in a gold color. When unused, his armor retracts into a platinum and gold shoulderplate on his left arm.

 

Armor: A well-fitting, but light and comfortable armor with plates of platinum, with gold filigree engraved everywhere, especially on his shoulders and chest area. It is not too rigid, so it allows for easy movement, especially during battles, where absolute "acrobatics" and flexibility are necessary for him. The armor outside is tough, and only stronger, or accurate magic/strikes can damage it severely. Other blows would knock the wind out of him, but wouldn't hurt him too much.

[spoiler=History] Haku was from Radiant Garden, and when he was around age 15, his Keyblade appeared suddenly, dropping into his hands, with a divine voice saying, "You are to be a Keyblader of the Light. Wield this weapon well." You could imagine that sort of event was rare, even in Radiant Garden, and they all praised him, as he suddenly went from a school star to a near official Knight. Due to that sudden acquisition of his newfound Keyblade, the Keyblade Knights arrived, and took him to the Academy. As he trained, he found friends, who had originally been skeptical, with his original age, until he nearly blasted them out of the Academy with a surprising burst of light, after being teased, once too many times. One day, the Exam came. He followed his directions well, and the masters had noted a peculiar Light-strength in this young child, as well as an unbelievable talent for Time Magic, and Haku passed with near perfect grades, his few mistakes from being unused to the huge power of the Keyblade, and his magic. His friends did not as good, but still extraordinary, compared with others similar to them, and so, as they were given the Title of Keyblade Master, they said their farewells, and left for their own ways, hoping they would meet each oher again.

[spoiler=Personality]Haku is a very nice person, although is seen to start radiating light whenever he gets a strong emotion. He is very generous, and is unselfish, to the point, he would rather give spoils to his friends, and just be happy about the good time. Haku, is however, not naive. He will "cleanse" a person with Light energy, if they have too much negativity inside them. The cleansing is refreshing and helpful, leaving the cleansed with a sense of happiness. Haku's personality is just his nature, although it was also due to the fact he was raised in a very happy village, with spirit and laughs everywhere. He has seen his fair share of fights, and negative impressions, but his internal Light energy, combined with his friendly nature, is more than enough to resist any Darker desires.

[spoiler=Keyblade]+Name: Anima Caelum[spoiler=Stats]+Length: 2

+Weight: 1

+Power: 2

+Spellpower: 3

+Guard: 2

 

[spoiler=Description]A simple, yet powerful Keyblade of iron and iron pyrite, with his family's initials engraved on the bottom of the handle. The end of the Keyblade is a rare electrum spike.

[spoiler=Glider Form]The Glider turns into a spread-eagle "surfboard" shape Glider, with a cannon on the top, for Haku to scope out and fire at enemies with beams of light. The Glider itself has iron filigree at the sides, and one crystal at the top, while there are 6 boosters for stability (bottom, 2 on sides, and 3 on back). The family initials can still be seen etched on the crystal.

 

[spoiler=Affinity]Light/Time

[spoiler=Combat Style]Speed, but some may consider as slightly Technique as well.

 

[spoiler=Spell-related][spoiler=Spells]Supreme Radiance and Time Splicer.

[spoiler=Supreme Radiance Description]Like Mega Flare, but Light-oriented, and instead of one huge burst forward, it's a giant sphere of light expanding from Haku, and a second circle outside enemies, closing in to crush them. After the spheres, a spray of lasers erupt from Haku in all directions. This is a hugely powerful move that heals a decent amount. It takes a short cast time, but has a nearly takes forever to be able to gain enough energy to use again, and stuns Haku temporarily for 30 seconds, exhausted. This can only be usable once, while Haku's at full strength, and after this, he is completely drained of energy to even walk, let alone attack or cast anything else.

[spoiler=Keychain]+Name: Radiant Union[spoiler=Stat Modifiers]-1 Power

+2 Spellpower

+1 Weight

[spoiler=Description]The handle becomes a complex platinum handle with golden decorations engraved, and various blue orbs of light attached around the rim of the handle, glowing with a warm radiance. The blade of the Key becomes a platinum and gold mixture, flaring out, with bluish filigree, and ends up to a soft-bluish white color point, with detailed, handcrafted points for the teeth.

 

[spoiler=History]The keychain was originally a small electrum token, with his family's initials embossed upon it, and he had his Keyblade and Spells as usual, but when several NeoShadows attacked, as the Darkness spread, his youngest brother and sister were taken, and in a life changing moment, the strength of his feelings changed the token into a teardrop, dramatically enhancing his Keyblade's powers, and gave him the power to easily kill all the NeoShadows, except the extraordinarily resistant captor, which had escaped unfortunately.

 

 

 

Changed formatting and content an important amount, besides Keychain stuff.

 

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[spoiler="App"][spoiler="General"]Name: Haku (<3 Spirited Away)
Allegiance: The Keyblade Knights
Sex: Male
Age: 19[/spoiler] [spoiler="Physical Description"][u]Features:[/u] Well contoured body from staying healthy and exercising, and has a minor scar across his left arm and a more serious one on his back, from the NeoShadows attack. He has recovered, but he is a slight bit under his full potential. He hopes he can find a good Healer to help him become stronger. His eyes are a sea-blue and has sandy-blond hair, and a good-natured smile almost always. Rather than being muscled, he is slim, and can outdo most people in acrobatics. He is not too strong, but not weak either. Flexibility and acrobatics are his skills.

[u]Casual Clothing:[/u] Wears a white short sleeve polo shirt with plain white buttons. The top 2-3 buttons are usually left unbuttoned. He usually wears casual, loose, but not sagging jeans. Haku sports a white armband on his left arm, down at his wrist, rather though. His whitish jacket has the Keyblade Master emblem on his back in a gold color. When unused, his armor retracts into a platinum and gold shoulderplate on his left arm.

[u]Armor:[/u] A well-fitting, but light and comfortable armor with plates of platinum, with gold filigree engraved everywhere, especially on his shoulders and chest area. It is not too rigid, so it allows for easy movement, especially during battles, where absolute "acrobatics" and flexibility are necessary for him. The armor outside is tough, and only stronger, or accurate magic/strikes can  damage it severely. Other blows would knock the wind out of him, but wouldn't hurt him too much.[/spoiler] [spoiler="History"]	   Haku was from Radiant Garden, and when he was around age 15, his Keyblade appeared suddenly, dropping into his hands, with a divine voice saying, "You are to be a Keyblader of the Light. Wield this weapon well." You could imagine that sort of event was rare, even in Radiant Garden, and they all praised him, as he suddenly went from a school star to a near official Knight. Due to that sudden acquisition of his newfound Keyblade, the Keyblade Knights arrived, and took him to the Academy. As he trained, he found friends, who had originally been skeptical, with his original age, until he nearly blasted them out of the Academy with a surprising burst of light, after being teased, once too many times. One day, the Exam came. He followed his directions well, and the masters had noted a peculiar Light-strength in this young child, as well as an unbelievable talent for Time Magic, and Haku passed with near perfect grades, his few mistakes from being unused to the huge power of the Keyblade, and his magic. His friends did not as good, but still extraordinary, compared with others similar to them, and so, as they were given the Title of Keyblade Master, they said their farewells, and left for their own ways, hoping they would meet each oher again.[/spoiler] [spoiler="Personality"]Haku is a very nice person, although is seen to start radiating light whenever he gets a strong emotion. He is very generous, and is unselfish, to the point, he would rather give spoils to his friends, and just be happy about the good time. Haku, is however, [i]not[/i] naive. He will "cleanse" a person with Light energy, if they have too much negativity inside them. The cleansing is refreshing and helpful, leaving the cleansed with a sense of happiness. Haku's personality is just his nature, although it was also due to the fact he was raised in a very happy village, with spirit and laughs everywhere. He has seen his fair share of fights, and negative impressions, but his internal Light energy, combined with his friendly nature, is more than enough to resist any Darker desires.[/spoiler] [spoiler="Keyblade"]+Name: Anima Caelum[spoiler="Stats"]+Length: 2
+Weight: 2
+Power: 2
+Spellpower: 3
+Guard: 1[/spoiler]
[spoiler="Description"]A simple, yet powerful Keyblade of iron and iron pyrite, with his family's initials engraved on the bottom of the handle. The end of the Keyblade is a rare electrum spike.[/spoiler][spoiler="Glider Form"]The Glider turns into a spread-eagle "surfboard" shape Glider, with a cannon on the top, for Haku to scope out and fire at enemies with beams of light. The Glider itself has iron filigree at the sides, and one crystal at the top, while there are 6 boosters for stability (bottom, 2 on sides, and 3 on back). The family initials can still be seen etched on the crystal.[/spoiler][/spoiler][spoiler="Affinity"]Light/Time[/spoiler][spoiler="Combat Style"]Speed, but some may consider as slightly Technique as well.[/spoiler]
[spoiler="Spell-related"][spoiler="Spells"]Supreme Radiance and Time Splicer.[/spoiler][spoiler="Supreme Radiance Description"]Like Mega Flare, but Light-oriented, and instead of one huge burst forward, it's a giant sphere of light expanding from Haku, and a second circle outside enemies, closing in to crush them. After the spheres, a spray of lasers erupt from Haku in all directions. This is a hugely powerful move that heals a decent amount. It takes a short cast time, but has a nearly takes forever to be able to gain enough energy to use again, and stuns Haku temporarily for 30 seconds, exhausted. This can only be usable once, while Haku's at full strength, and after this, he is completely drained of energy to even walk, let alone attack or cast anything else.[/spoiler][spoiler="Keychain"]+Name: Radiant Union[spoiler="Stat Modifiers"]-1 Power +2 Spellpower +1 Weight[/spoiler][spoiler="Description"]The handle becomes a complex platinum handle with golden decorations engraved, and various blue orbs of light attached around the rim of the handle, glowing with a warm radiance. The blade of the Key becomes a platinum and gold mixture, flaring out, with bluish filigree, and ends up to a soft-bluish white color point, with detailed, handcrafted points for the teeth.[/spoiler]
[spoiler="History"]The keychain was originally a small electrum token, with his family's initials embossed upon it, and he had his Keyblade and Spells as usual, but when several NeoShadows attacked, as the Darkness spread, his youngest brother and sister were taken, and in a life changing moment, the strength of his feelings changed the token into a teardrop, dramatically enhancing his Keyblade's powers, and gave him the power to easily kill all the NeoShadows, except the extraordinarily resistant captor, which had escaped unfortunately.[/spoiler][/spoiler][/spoiler][/spoiler]

 

 

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Holy s***, my internet has sucked for the past few days. That is how I explain the lateness of my submission of my app. Also, I can change factions if necessary, I only picked The Keyblade Knights to keep the numbers even.

 

Name: Alexander

Allegiance: The Keyblade Knights

Sex: Male

Orientation: Heterosexual

Age: 24

Physical Description: Alexander is on the taller end of the spectrum, standing at just under six feet in height. As far as muscles go, his are certainly athletic but they appear to be a build better suited to a martial artist than a heavyweight boxer in that his muscles are those born of combat in a style which balances speed and strength together. A well-kept mane of copper-brown hair hangs down just past his shoulders and somehow manages to never cover his slightly angled face whit is completed in a chin covered by a pointed goatee of the same copper-brown color. His eyes are of a brown just dark enough to be mistaken for black from a distance. In the center of his upper back, a large Taijitu is tattooed.

When relaxing, he can often be seen wearing a wide brimmed hat of red-dyed leather whilst his hair hangs exclusively down the back of his neck. This hat accompanies a plain black shirt, which has recently had the sleeves cut off so that his arms are bare, and a pair of dark grey pants covering the upper portions of his black combat boots. Depending upon the weather, he can occasionally be seen wearing a red leather trench coat over the whole of his outfit to keep warm or prevent airborne particles from grating his skin. He always wears a pair of dark steel bracers which cover half of his forearms from his wrists back.

When released, his armor covers the whole of his body from head to toe as is to be expected from a Knight of the Keyblade. So far as color is concerned, it is the same dark steel as the bracers which he wears in their inactive form but is covered in various stylized swirling patterns of hammered gold. Along the top of his helmet and down the back of the neck and the center of his back plating is a long crest of spikes traveling completely down his back. His hair also grows to a much greater length and hangs out of a single gap between his helmet and neck plating in the way that Greek and Roman officers would have a horse's tail attached to the back of their helms.

History: Alexander became a master some six years ago, having been one of Master Fennel's apprentices and bringing his teacher pride with the sheer level of mastery which he demonstrated in his young age as well as the understanding of a unique style of magic which was apparent. That style of magic was simply given the name "Harmony" and his knowledge of it originated with his home in Radiant Garden. It was there as a young boy that he first embarked on his quest to understand and, in a several hour session of digging through one of the many libraries of magical tomes, discovered three volumes containing knowledge of the ancient and rare magic. Through his studies of Harmony, he started to understand how all things were connected and soon demonstrated wisdom well beyond his years. At the age of eleven, he was discovered by the Keyblade Knights and the strength of his heart was tested. Proving that he was wise of mind and strong of heart made him an ideal candidate for Knighthood and he was taken back to the Golden World and the Gilded Fortress. Through the whole seven years of his training he sought to master each aspect of the Keyblade's power to the fullest extent. Even after he had passed his Mark of Mastery exam with one of the highest scores ever seen, he continued to seek knowledge and with that knowledge understanding. As the arguments in favor of an attempt to understand the darkness and the light began, he at first aligned himself with those who sought to understand the nature of the energies of the universe and himself began researching them. He was one of those whom Master Fennel warned could be targeted because of their support, but when violence broke out he chose to stand with the Keyblade Knights out of a desire to reform the order from the inside and because of a fundamental difference between him and the seekers. All the same, he felt forever distanced from those who had once accepted him despite that none of them made any attempt to push him away. He continued his research in secret, traveling to the Border world where light and darkness came so perfectly together so that he could better study the energies from which the universe had been born.

Personality: The fundamental difference between Alexander and the Seekers is that they seek knowledge, whilst Alexander seeks understanding. The line between them is narrow, and perhaps blurred in some cases, but it exists nonetheless. From his study of Harmony magic, Alexander's inherent desire to know, understand, and achieve balance in all things was heightened. He does feel a certain distance between himself and the other Knights, given that essentially none of them have even the slightest desire to understand any of the energies of the universe and often shun such desires as treason, particularly in the aftermath of the schism. When around other Knights, he tends to avoid talking about his research due to his knowledge of how they would react to such things.

Keyblade: Empathy

+Length: 3 (applied to each of the blades)

+Weight: 1

+Power: 2

+Spellpower: 1

+Guard: 3

Description: The main thing that sets Empathy apart from other Keyblades is the fact that, centered around a hilt large enough to be easily held in two hands, it bares two blades. Each blade is a simple rod extending out an average distance, so far as Keyblades are concerned, and terminating in a simple squared-off set of teeth. The teeth on each blade are facing an opposite direction, so that by spinning it one could strike repeatedly at the same target with the teeth. Color wise, the blades are bright in the same way as finely polished steel and the Hilt is separated from each of the blades by a simple cross guard of vibrant green.

Glider Form: Empathy's Glider form is a bit of a curiosity amongst the Keyblade Knights. It takes the form of a small boat with a single mast and triangular sail and a simple rudder with which to steer it. The boat itself appears to be wooden and is bright red in coloration with the aft end flat to allow the rudder easier access to water and is of sufficient size to fit another three people in the boat with Alexander. The mast itself appears as unpainted wood, and the sail of plain white fabric. So far as weapons are concerned, this vessel is lined along the sides with automatic crossbows and bears a light Ballista near the center of the bow on a base which allows it to rotate and fire large spears at targets.

Affinity: Harmony

+Harmony is a style of magic which, until recently, has been a lost art. It draws its power from the desire of the user to understand the world and universe around them. Harmony focuses primarily on the enhancement of the user's ability and the disruption of spells cast by enemies. Because of its nature, Harmony allows for easier casting of both Darkness and Light spells.

Combat Style: Technique

[spoiler=[b]Spells[/b]]

Harmonious Incantation: Temporarily increases the speed and strength of the user, allowing for greater acrobatic feats as well as quicker and harder strikes.

Consuming Shadows: Briefly expands and amplifies the darkness inherent in the area surrounding the user. This allows the user to vanish into the shadows, allowing for either a quick escape or a stealthy attack.

Barrage of Light: Several quick bursts of light akin to high-intensity LASER beams are unleashed. Though each one does a fair bit of damage, all together they could quickly cripple a foe or worse.

 

[spoiler=[b]Keychains[/b]]

+Name: Memory

+Stat Modifiers: +1 to Power and Spellpower

+Description: Memory is double-bladed, in the same way as Empathy, but with a few differences. The main difference is that, instead of being a single rod, Memory's blades are composed of three wide strands of crimson metal woven into a tight braid and terminating in a set of teeth on either side of the blade. Each set of teeth is composed of three sharp triangles, the center of which is the longest and the upper of which connects into a rounded-off top of the blade before linking into the upper tooth on the opposite side. The hilt remains the same size as it is on Empathy, but is now separated from the blades by a curved piece similar to a cross-guard on either side which attaches to the other by a straight bar with one on each side of the hilt.

+History: Memory originated as a pocket watch which Alexander's father gave him before he left home. Upon the completion of his mark of mastery exam, the pocket watch became his first Keychain as he remembered from where he had come.

 

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@ ༺Nephilim༻: Yeah, that's fine now. Haku's Accepted.

 

@Ketodama: Harmony Affinity is a bit of a problem- not because I don't want you making up affinities, but because it doesn't actually relate to a specific kind of magic. Instead, it's literally just "Darkness and Light" magic as a package deal, which goes specifically against the sort of cosmology I'm trying to set up. Affinities are always tied specifically to elements of spells, and while elements can be mixed, mixed elements aren't affinities- even if you ignore that I mentioned it's impossible to be very good at both Darkness and Light at the same time.

 

Incidentally, I'm a little weirded out that we have like four Light attuned and zero Darkness attuned so far.

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