Kōsuke Ueki Posted March 14, 2012 Report Share Posted March 14, 2012 I lol'd at that idea, Kio. And talk about complicated. I mean, I could easily come up with a fairly interesting character for this, but it will take time. So, I'm currently reserving as of now. BTW Hydra, you astound me with your your large story-telling abilities. And a post-congratulations for becoming an RP Mod on the Forums. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yosuke-kun Posted March 14, 2012 Report Share Posted March 14, 2012 Eh, I'm mostly done. Just having trouble with the descriptions :/ Should be done by tomorrow if not later today. Also, I'm very serious about a Moogle world xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Asriel Dreemurr Posted March 15, 2012 Report Share Posted March 15, 2012 Is there room for someone whose Keyblade embodies light and darkness at the same time? Say, something along the lines of a staff with blades at both ends. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Kakashi Hatake Posted March 15, 2012 Report Share Posted March 15, 2012 Is there room for someone whose Keyblade embodies light and darkness at the same time? Say, something along the lines of a staff with blades at both ends.A Keyblade has light and darkness at the same time anyway, right?And I think Keyblades are just swords. :/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yosuke-kun Posted March 15, 2012 Report Share Posted March 15, 2012 So a double sided Keyblade? Sounds pretty interesting actually. App's almost done, just need a description of his Keyblade, his Personality, and a Description of the Keychain. I got all of that decided, just need to put it into words. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Asriel Dreemurr Posted March 15, 2012 Report Share Posted March 15, 2012 If you're familiar with the Warglaive of Azzinoth from World of Warcraft, that's sort of what I was thinking of. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yosuke-kun Posted March 15, 2012 Report Share Posted March 15, 2012 Never played Warcraft, but that looks pretty much like what I was thinking. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hydra of Ages Posted March 15, 2012 Author Report Share Posted March 15, 2012 ༺Nephilim༻ : There are a couple problems with your application. Firstly, your default Keyblade has a total of 12 stat points in it; trim off two, please. Secondly, the custom moves are more or less fine- but note that I said most of their techniques should be 'generic'. Haku has three very powerful, unique attacks that undoubtedly require a huge amount of skill to pull off- and he's 18, meaning he hasn't even been a Master for a year yet.I'd say it'd be acceptable to keep one of your custom moves, but fix the descriptions first please. Since this isn't a video game, things like 'stun time' and 'recharge' aren't precise, hard numbers. For the other two, you're allowed to have some simpler, perhaps lower-level techniques- might I suggest Stopga or Slowga? Pearl? Certainly not Mega Flare, which would be a Fire technique of the highest calibur; nobody without a fire affinity is getting away with that. Finally, exactly where was Haku raised? Which world? The Golden World is pretty much a gigantic metropolis, so there aren't exactly villages there, and you made no mention of the Keyblade Knights ever coming to take him away for training.For now, Not Accepted. Land of Moogles;;;; lol xD Love me them Moogles, and I thought this might help with a bit more backstory to them. Sounds good. This is actually the type of suggestion I like a lot. @TotalObelisk: Ah, excellent. Accepted. I lol'd at that idea, Kio. And talk about complicated. I mean, I could easily come up with a fairly interesting character for this, but it will take time. So, I'm currently reserving as of now. BTW Hydra, you astound me with your your large story-telling abilities. And a post-congratulations for becoming an RP Mod on the Forums. :D Reserved. And a post-thank you. Is there room for someone whose Keyblade embodies light and darkness at the same time? Say, something along the lines of a staff with blades at both ends. Sure, the Seekers of Darkness are all about experimentation like that. Just keep in mind your character can't be a dual Light/Darkness affinity to match. Default Blades typically don't embody elements at all, bar in very specific cases, you you might be better off making it a Keychain- but you can keep the Glaive-style blade appearance in default form if you like. Not all Keyblades are wielded in an identical way. @Whoever Mentioned Abilities for Keyblades: I considered it, but I ultimately thought it would make this a bit too complex since I'm not running with Abilities outside of keyblades either. If you make a good enough case, I might consider changing it so Keychain Blades can have a max stat of 10 in exchange for having some simple ability attached to them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yosuke-kun Posted March 15, 2012 Report Share Posted March 15, 2012 I figured you'd like that one better. The first was one from a KH rp I made a few years ago, just tried to make it older. It didn't turn out very well xD Anyways, app's done, but I can't post it till I get back on my laptop Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Asriel Dreemurr Posted March 15, 2012 Report Share Posted March 15, 2012 For clarity, how long ago was the schism? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hydra of Ages Posted March 15, 2012 Author Report Share Posted March 15, 2012 For clarity, how long ago was the schism? Not terribly long. Approximately half a year, give or take a month or so. Both sides are still garrisoning up for the actual combat following the initial skirmish. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TotalObelisk Posted March 15, 2012 Report Share Posted March 15, 2012 You appear to have me down as 'TitanKing' for some reason... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hydra of Ages Posted March 15, 2012 Author Report Share Posted March 15, 2012 I blame... Nobody except myself, actually, that's just the kind of stupid mistake you make when editing a thread before you go to work. Cripes, I've been making a lot of little errors so far, I should probably get more sleep or something. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yosuke-kun Posted March 15, 2012 Report Share Posted March 15, 2012 Sleep is good for people Hydra xD You might want to take a nap or something if you're getting that little sleep. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Astolfo Posted March 15, 2012 Report Share Posted March 15, 2012 Hey Hydra, would just the 2 spells Time Splicer and Supreme Radiance be okay with you? Not sure how to word the effect for Supreme Radiance though. My guy uses Magic as a powerful tool, but mainly uses speed and his Keyblade for attacks., if so, here's my medium-armount revised App: Redited app so you can copy paste, because I edited a bit more, than needed.[spoiler=App]Name: Haku (Allegiance:The Keyblade KnightsSex:MaleAge:19[spoiler=Physical Description]Features:Well contoured body from staying healthy and exercising, and has a minor scar across his left arm and a more serious one on his back, from the NeoShadows attack. He has recovered, but he is a slight bit under his full potential. He hopes he can find a good Healer to help him become stronger. His eyes are a sea-blue and has sandy-blond hair, and a good-natured smile almost always. Rather than being muscled, he is slim, and can outdo most people in acrobatics. He is not too strong, but not weak either. Flexibility and acrobatics are his skills. Casual Clothing:Wears a white short sleeve polo shirt with plain white buttons. The top 2-3 buttons are usually left unbuttoned. He usually wears casual, loose, but not sagging jeans. Haku sports a white armband on his left arm, down at his wrist, rather though. His whitish jacket has the Keyblade Master emblem on his back in a gold color. When unused, his armor retracts into a shoulder pad on his left arm. Armor:A well-fitting, but light and comfortable armor with plates of platinum, with gold filigree engraved everywhere, especially on his shoulders and chest area. It is not too rigid, so it allows for easy movement, especially during battles, where absolute "acrobatics" and flexibility are necessary for him. The armor outside is tough, and only stronger, or accurate magic/strikes can damage it severely. Other blows would knock the wind out of him, but wouldn't hurt him too much. [spoiler=History]Haku was from Radiant Garden, and when he was around age 15, his Keyblade appeared suddenly, dropping into his hands, with a divine voice saying, "You are to be a Keyblader of the Light. Wield this weapon well." You could imagine that sort of event was rare, even in Radiant Garden, and they all praised him, as he suddenly went from a school star to a near official Knight. Due to that sudden acquisition of his newfound Keyblade, the Keyblade Knights arrived, and took him to the Academy. As he trained, he found friends, who had originally been skeptical, with his original age, until he nearly blasted them out of the Academy with a surprising burst of light, after being teased, once too many times. One day, the Exam came. He followed his directions well, and the masters had noted a peculiar Light-strength in this young child, as well as an unbelievable talent for Time Magic, and Haku passed with near perfect grades, his few mistakes from being unused to the huge power of the Keyblade, and his magic. His friends did not as good, but still extraordinary, compared with others similar to them, and so, as they were given the Title of Keyblade Master, they said their farewells, and left for their own ways, hoping they would meet each oher again. [spoiler=Personality]Haku is a very nice person, although is seen to start radiating light whenever he gets a strong emotion. He is very generous, and is unselfish, to the point, he would rather give spoils to his friends, and just be happy about the good time. Haku, is however, not naive. He will "cleanse" a person with Light energy, if they have too much negativity inside them. The cleansing is refreshing and helpful, leaving the cleansed with a sense of happiness. Haku's personality is just his nature, although it was also due to the fact he was raised in a very happy village, with spirit and laughs everywhere. He has seen his fair share of fights, and negative impressions, but his internal Light energy, combined with his friendly nature, is more than enough to resist any Darker desires. [spoiler=Keyblade] Anima Caelum+Length: 1+Weight: 1+Power: 3+Spellpower: 3+Guard: 2 Description: A simple, yet powerful Keyblade of iron and iron pyrite, with his family's initials engraved on the bottom of the handle. The end of the Keyblade is a rare electrum spike. Glider Form: The Glider turns into a spread-eagle "surfboard" shape Glider, with a cannon on the top, for Haku to scope out and fire at enemies with beams of light. The Glider itself has iron filigree at the sides, and one crystal at the top, while there are 6 boosters for stability (bottom, 2 on sides, and 3 on back). The family initials can still be seen etched on the crystal. Affinity: Light/TimeCombat Style: Speed, but some may consider as slightly Technique as well.Spells: Supreme Radiance, Time SplicerSupreme Radiance- Like Mega Flare, but Light-oriented, and instead of one huge burst forward, it's a giant sphere of light expanding from Haku, and a second circle outside enemies, closing in to crush them. After the spheres, a spray of lasers erupt from Haku in all directions. This is a hugely powerful move that heals a decent amount. It takes a short cast time, but has a nearly takes forever to be able to gain enough energy to use again, and stuns Haku temporarily for 30 seconds, exhausted. This can only be usable once, while Haku's at full strength, and after this, he is completely drained of energy to even walk, let alone attack or cast anything else.[spoiler=Keychain]+Name: Radiant Union +Stat Modifiers: +2 Spellpower +Description: The handle becomes a complex platinum handle with golden decorations engraved, and various blue orbs of light attached around the rim of the handle, glowing with a warm radiance. The blade of the Key becomes a platinum and gold mixture, flaring out, with bluish filigree, and ends up to a soft-bluish white color point, with detailed, handcrafted points for the teeth. +History: The keychain was originally a small electrum token, with his family's initials embossed upon it, and he had his Keyblade and Spells as usual, but when several NeoShadows attacked, as the Darkness spread, his youngest brother and sister were taken, and in a life changing moment, the strength of his feelings changed the token into a teardrop, dramatically enhancing his Keyblade's powers, and gave him the power to easily kill all the NeoShadows, except the extraordinarily resistant captor, which had escaped unfortunately. EDIT: EDITED APP AGAIN Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bury the year Posted March 15, 2012 Report Share Posted March 15, 2012 Not sure I'll be able to come up with a satisfactory character in a short enough period of time, so I'm regretfully canceling my reservation. Best of luck, y'all~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Kakashi Hatake Posted March 15, 2012 Report Share Posted March 15, 2012 Not sure I'll be able to come up with a satisfactory character in a short enough period of time, so I'm regretfully canceling my reservation. Best of luck, y'all~Me too. Sorry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yosuke-kun Posted March 16, 2012 Report Share Posted March 16, 2012 >=/ For shame you two. For shame. [spoiler=App] Name: SorenAllegiance: Knights of the KeybladeSex: MaleAge: 18Physical Description: Soren is a lean framed boy about medium height and light weight. Total, he’s about 5”10 even and weighs only 178 lbs. Although thin, he is not totally without muscle. Small but defined muscles reside on his biceps and triceps. In addition, because of his small stature and thin body, his pectoral and abdominal muscles are more defined than they would normally be. To conclude on muscularity, to say that he is buff is a grievous overstatement, but he is not without muscle. His hair is a medium colored brown, not too dark, not too light. It’s thin and wavy, falling to his shoulders in the back, and covering most of his forehead. His eyes are a vivid blue color, kind of resembling the sky. It’s rare that you see Soren frowning or looking upset, but it does happen. His shirt is thin and tight, with short sleeves. Three white strips go down either sleeve, and up to his collar, and in fact forming his collar. From his collar, a black stripe stretches down to the end of his shirt. The main shirt itself is navy blue. His pants are black silk, wide, and baggy with many folds and large pockets. The top pops up above his sash’s and belts, of which he has many of. His main belt is made of multiple silver loops intertwining between each other. His main sash is a dull blue-gray color and is linked by black strings to his belt, holding both in place. His feet are covered by black kung fu shoes with a white lining on the bottom. A black silk glove on covers his left forearm, but leaves his fingers exposed. His right arm stretched to his elbow is adorned with bandages. His right ring finger has a silver ring on it that’s matched with an ebony ring on his right middle finger. On his left shoulder rests a light blue armor pauldron with silver trimmings. When activated, his pauldron expands to cover his entire body in sky blue malachite plate armor with silver trim. The helm has two ear-like plates stretching back and down slightly, akin to how an animal may flatten their ears when they anger. The chest is more layered than the rest of the armor, to better protect from weapons like Keyblade or Heartless claws. The gauntlets are thin, more plated on the backhand, and almost completely lack finger armor. The greaves are similar, but have more plating on the shins than other areas. To top it ff, the armor appear specialized and layered for great mobility, acrobatics, and aerodynamics. Being that Soren is mostly a speed fighter, his armor is made of very light material, but sometimes sacrifices protection for speed and mobility. History: Soren was raised in the City of Neon, but wasn’t originally born there. To this day, the knowledge of his birth world remains a mystery to him. He spent the majority of his time in City of Neon without any actual home, just being shuffled back and forth between different foster homes in Brighter Lane. He eventually met a girl named Fiona. The two became friends rather fast, and eventually very close. His Keyblade presented itself to him when he was eleven, through dreams alone at first. In these dreams, he would walk through a seemingly endless staircase each leading to a different platform with strange mosaic etchings of armored men fighting with blades like his, resembling keys. Here he learned to fight with and summon his Keyblade. It didn’t physically appear until he was 12, and a member of the Knights of the Keyblade stayed in the City of Neon. Unfortunately, Heartless had arrived before the Knight. While he and Fiona were playing on Empress Hill, the Heartless assaulted them. Remembering fighting monsters similar to this in his dreams, Soren summoned his Keyblade, and defeated the Heartless. Once he did, the Knight came to the hill, and extended an invitation to to him to join the Knights of the Keyblade. He was hesitant at first, but decided to accept in the end. Leaving City of Neon was hard, as it was the only world he ever knew, but with encouragement from Fiona, and other friends, he went with the Knight and began his training. It quickly became evident to him that he was among the youngest of his colleagues, and not the most skilled, which set him back a little, but he continued to persevere, gaining the respect of some of the elders. Still, while training, he was scolded many times for many reasons. Many of the elders soon lost the respect they’d had for Soren whilehe was fifteen and sixteen, due to his excited manner and love of jokes. His talent was undeniable, but he seemed uncaring or uninterested in the Knights of the Keyblades cause. As such, the elders kept a very close eye on Soren during his training, but no darkness tempted him. During his Mark of Mastery Exam, an ally, named Zerex was greatly tempted by the darkness, which gave him a small advantage against Soren. By the end of the Exam, the elders passed Soren for his pure intent and fighting skill, as well as his ability to ward off the darkness, but denied Zerex despite his victory in combat against Soren. Enraged, Zerex tried to assault the Knights using the darkness, but was stopped by Soren. After his assault, he fled leaving a feeling of sorrow in Sorens heart. He dismissed the feeling, remembering that sorrow could lead to the darkness. Soren believes Zerex is dead or with the Seekers of Darkness now, which prompted him to attempt to search the unknown worlds and change the views of his old friend. In addition, he looked up to Master Asphodel and aspired to become like him, and was friends with his daughter. During the division in which Asphodel's wife and daughter were killed, he fought to to try and save them, but ultimately failed. His crimes were overlooked however, because he acted on friendship, and was believed to have been manipulated by Asphodel. This was before his Mark of Mastery Exam. Personality: Soren is usually happy, as very few things actual manage to anger or upset him, and always has a kind demeanor towards others. He never liked fighting, though he’s skilled and brave, occasionally cocky in some cases, such as when he protects a friend or damsel in distress. Because of his disdain and dislike of fighting, he always tries to convince the opponent, excepting when the opponent is a Heartless, that they don’t need to fight. Getting along with new people is a simple task for him, as he relishes and even excites at the opportunity to meet new people, and for the most part he can get along with anyone he meets. His main pet peeve is his inability to tolerate people who fight and kill others for sport or refuse to listen to reason and peace. In addition, he is also rather lazy when it comes to doing anything he lacks motivation for. On the flipside however, he is easily devoted to any task that greatly holds his interest or challenges his beliefs. He’s fully devoted to the Keyblade Knights cause, but as he has such a large dislike of combat, he refuses to hate the Seekers of Darkness as many Keyblade Knights do. He doesn’t anger easily, and only becomes really angry when his friends or other people are put in pain by others.[spoiler=Keyblade]Keyblade: Crossed HeartLength: 2Weight: 2Power: 3Spellpower: 2Guard: 1Description: Crossed Heart is a Keyblade of fairly simple, yet elegant design. While the blade is long and 2 inches wide, the teeth are rather thick and contain most of the blades weight. As for the appearance, it’s hilt is woven of a thick wire heart colored golden with a generic keychain at the point of the heart. The generic keychain is simply a silver cross emblem that puts the blade into this for. The color scheme is simple white main, with flecks and trims of gold and blue on the tips of the teeth. The teeth are merely a series of rectangular blades connected in the middle by metal wiring.Glider Form: Rather than appearing as a vehicle or other form of glider, Crossed Heart takes the appearance of a set of intricately woven metal wings. The wings appearance is very similar to the teeth of Crossed Hearts appearance, only larger and similar to wings as well. When in this form, he has limited fighting capability, but is very fast and has a lot of stamina. It’s top speed is around 300MPH and it can go at this speed for at least three hours before it tires Soren out. As far as combat goes, the wings are capable of slashing enemies as well as firing small “feather blades” from the tips of the primary “feathers”. Affinity: Light/ElectricityCombat Style: Speed with a trace of power[spoiler=[b]Spells[/b]]Thundara – Strikes a single enemy with a powerful lightning bolt. Though it only initially strikes a single enemy, upon striking, the electricity arcs up and strikes a few enemies around the initial target dealing two thirds less damage to any struck by the splash.Haste – Upon use, the user or target greatly increases their attack speed and movement speed. The effects are only temporary. The length of the effect lasts only thirty minutes, and lessens each time the enchanted takes damage. Users and targets feel a strange feeling of weightlessness. As if gravity ceased to exist around themSalvation – Soren focus’s his light power into his keyblade, as much as possible. When the energy charged reaches a maximum, he releases it in the form of overwhelmingly powerful pillars of light, shooting towards the sky around Soren in a brilliant vision of grace. It takes a minute for Soren to charge the attack, but it deals very heavy damage, obliterating weaker or lesser Heartless and enemies, while simultaneously healing the user of a majority of their wounds. However, he cannot use this attack frequently in a single battle, as it drains the majority of his mana. [spoiler=Keychains:]Name: Sacred MemoryStat Modifier:Spellpower + 1Power +1Length -1Guard +1Description: When equipped to the Keyblade, Sacred Memories shapes the blade in a more complex made not from iron anymore, but orichalcum and sapphire. The main color is blue, with red trimming. The hilt is shaped in the likeness of a set of wings. The blade has the same feather pattern etched into it up and down it with traces of white on each feather. The teeth are the most complex part of the blade, consisting of an half inch thick wire scheme made to appear as a kind of glyph, but still doesn’t connect in a circular pattern as a normal glyph does. The actual pattern is one that Fiona made when they were young. On the tip of the hilt for one of the wings lies the keychain emblem as described in the history.History: Sacred Memory was gifted to Soren by a friend named Fiona on his home world, City of Neon. The two were very close, almost together, even at the age of 12. However, he learned of his Keyblade calling, and made the decision, against Fiona’s desire, to join the Knights of the Keyblade. So, she made a small good luck charm from a sapphire her mother gave her resembling two people embracing, and the met him on the hill near the cave they always played at when they were younger. After a while of them talking, laughing, joking, and trying not to think of how long it would be until they met again, if ever, she gave the charm to him. At first, Soren didn’t want to take it. The sapphire was the last heirloom Fiona had of her mothers, and he didn’t want to take that from her. But she insisted, saying: You were called to something greater than the norm. Nobody else is more qualified for something like this. The worlds need you to defend them, so you need to do so. While you’re gone, you’ll meet many different kinds of people. You may even forget some of us here in City of Neon. But I will never forget you. I want you to have this so that you never forget me either. Then perhaps one day, the two of us will meet again; and remember each other the way our hearts did today. Over time, Soren would hold the charm, thinking of Fiona and his other friends in City of Neon. Each memory gave him strength and helped him through the harder times of being a Keyblade wielder. As he used it more, his heart became linked to it, eventually making it compatible with his keyblade as a keychain. I may have a second or third app coming up. Also, if you're ok with it Hydra, I'd be willing to co-host it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Astolfo Posted March 16, 2012 Report Share Posted March 16, 2012 Wait, can Keychains make a stat 0? I thought Hydra said that 1 was minimum, or is that without Keychains only?If so... here's new app:[spoiler=App][spoiler=General]Name: Haku (Allegiance: The Keyblade KnightsSex: MaleAge: 19 [spoiler=Physical Description]Features: Well contoured body from staying healthy and exercising, and has a minor scar across his left arm and a more serious one on his back, from the NeoShadows attack. He has recovered, but he is a slight bit under his full potential. He hopes he can find a good Healer to help him become stronger. His eyes are a sea-blue and has sandy-blond hair, and a good-natured smile almost always. Rather than being muscled, he is slim, and can outdo most people in acrobatics. He is not too strong, but not weak either. Flexibility and acrobatics are his skills. Casual Clothing: Wears a white short sleeve polo shirt with plain white buttons. The top 2-3 buttons are usually left unbuttoned. He usually wears casual, loose, but not sagging jeans. Haku sports a white armband on his left arm, down at his wrist, rather though. His whitish jacket has the Keyblade Master emblem on his back in a gold color. When unused, his armor retracts into a platinum and gold shoulderplate on his left arm. Armor: A well-fitting, but light and comfortable armor with plates of platinum, with gold filigree engraved everywhere, especially on his shoulders and chest area. It is not too rigid, so it allows for easy movement, especially during battles, where absolute "acrobatics" and flexibility are necessary for him. The armor outside is tough, and only stronger, or accurate magic/strikes can damage it severely. Other blows would knock the wind out of him, but wouldn't hurt him too much. [spoiler=History] Haku was from Radiant Garden, and when he was around age 15, his Keyblade appeared suddenly, dropping into his hands, with a divine voice saying, "You are to be a Keyblader of the Light. Wield this weapon well." You could imagine that sort of event was rare, even in Radiant Garden, and they all praised him, as he suddenly went from a school star to a near official Knight. Due to that sudden acquisition of his newfound Keyblade, the Keyblade Knights arrived, and took him to the Academy. As he trained, he found friends, who had originally been skeptical, with his original age, until he nearly blasted them out of the Academy with a surprising burst of light, after being teased, once too many times. One day, the Exam came. He followed his directions well, and the masters had noted a peculiar Light-strength in this young child, as well as an unbelievable talent for Time Magic, and Haku passed with near perfect grades, his few mistakes from being unused to the huge power of the Keyblade, and his magic. His friends did not as good, but still extraordinary, compared with others similar to them, and so, as they were given the Title of Keyblade Master, they said their farewells, and left for their own ways, hoping they would meet each oher again. [spoiler=Personality]Haku is a very nice person, although is seen to start radiating light whenever he gets a strong emotion. He is very generous, and is unselfish, to the point, he would rather give spoils to his friends, and just be happy about the good time. Haku, is however, not naive. He will "cleanse" a person with Light energy, if they have too much negativity inside them. The cleansing is refreshing and helpful, leaving the cleansed with a sense of happiness. Haku's personality is just his nature, although it was also due to the fact he was raised in a very happy village, with spirit and laughs everywhere. He has seen his fair share of fights, and negative impressions, but his internal Light energy, combined with his friendly nature, is more than enough to resist any Darker desires. [spoiler=Keyblade]+Name: Anima Caelum[spoiler=Stats]+Length: 1+Weight: 1+Power: 3+Spellpower: 3+Guard: 2 [spoiler=Description]A simple, yet powerful Keyblade of iron and iron pyrite, with his family's initials engraved on the bottom of the handle. The end of the Keyblade is a rare electrum spike.[spoiler=Glider Form]The Glider turns into a spread-eagle "surfboard" shape Glider, with a cannon on the top, for Haku to scope out and fire at enemies with beams of light. The Glider itself has iron filigree at the sides, and one crystal at the top, while there are 6 boosters for stability (bottom, 2 on sides, and 3 on back). The family initials can still be seen etched on the crystal. [spoiler=Affinity]Light/Time[spoiler=Combat Style]Speed, but some may consider as slightly Technique as well. [spoiler=Spell-related][spoiler=Spells]Supreme Radiance and Time Splicer.[spoiler=Supreme Radiance Description]Like Mega Flare, but Light-oriented, and instead of one huge burst forward, it's a giant sphere of light expanding from Haku, and a second circle outside enemies, closing in to crush them. After the spheres, a spray of lasers erupt from Haku in all directions. This is a hugely powerful move that heals a decent amount. It takes a short cast time, but has a nearly takes forever to be able to gain enough energy to use again, and stuns Haku temporarily for 30 seconds, exhausted. This can only be usable once, while Haku's at full strength, and after this, he is completely drained of energy to even walk, let alone attack or cast anything else.[spoiler=Keychain]+Name: Radiant Union[spoiler=Stat Modifiers]+1 Length+1 Power+1 Spellpower-1 Weight[spoiler=Description]The handle becomes a complex platinum handle with golden decorations engraved, and various blue orbs of light attached around the rim of the handle, glowing with a warm radiance. The blade of the Key becomes a platinum and gold mixture, flaring out, with bluish filigree, and ends up to a soft-bluish white color point, with detailed, handcrafted points for the teeth. [spoiler=History]The keychain was originally a small electrum token, with his family's initials embossed upon it, and he had his Keyblade and Spells as usual, but when several NeoShadows attacked, as the Darkness spread, his youngest brother and sister were taken, and in a life changing moment, the strength of his feelings changed the token into a teardrop, dramatically enhancing his Keyblade's powers, and gave him the power to easily kill all the NeoShadows, except the extraordinarily resistant captor, which had escaped unfortunately. Changed formatting and content an important amount, besides Keychain stuff. If code needed for easy copy-paste: [spoiler=Code][spoiler="App"][spoiler="General"]Name: Haku (<3 Spirited Away) Allegiance: The Keyblade Knights Sex: Male Age: 19[/spoiler] [spoiler="Physical Description"][u]Features:[/u] Well contoured body from staying healthy and exercising, and has a minor scar across his left arm and a more serious one on his back, from the NeoShadows attack. He has recovered, but he is a slight bit under his full potential. He hopes he can find a good Healer to help him become stronger. His eyes are a sea-blue and has sandy-blond hair, and a good-natured smile almost always. Rather than being muscled, he is slim, and can outdo most people in acrobatics. He is not too strong, but not weak either. Flexibility and acrobatics are his skills. [u]Casual Clothing:[/u] Wears a white short sleeve polo shirt with plain white buttons. The top 2-3 buttons are usually left unbuttoned. He usually wears casual, loose, but not sagging jeans. Haku sports a white armband on his left arm, down at his wrist, rather though. His whitish jacket has the Keyblade Master emblem on his back in a gold color. When unused, his armor retracts into a platinum and gold shoulderplate on his left arm. [u]Armor:[/u] A well-fitting, but light and comfortable armor with plates of platinum, with gold filigree engraved everywhere, especially on his shoulders and chest area. It is not too rigid, so it allows for easy movement, especially during battles, where absolute "acrobatics" and flexibility are necessary for him. The armor outside is tough, and only stronger, or accurate magic/strikes can damage it severely. Other blows would knock the wind out of him, but wouldn't hurt him too much.[/spoiler] [spoiler="History"] Haku was from Radiant Garden, and when he was around age 15, his Keyblade appeared suddenly, dropping into his hands, with a divine voice saying, "You are to be a Keyblader of the Light. Wield this weapon well." You could imagine that sort of event was rare, even in Radiant Garden, and they all praised him, as he suddenly went from a school star to a near official Knight. Due to that sudden acquisition of his newfound Keyblade, the Keyblade Knights arrived, and took him to the Academy. As he trained, he found friends, who had originally been skeptical, with his original age, until he nearly blasted them out of the Academy with a surprising burst of light, after being teased, once too many times. One day, the Exam came. He followed his directions well, and the masters had noted a peculiar Light-strength in this young child, as well as an unbelievable talent for Time Magic, and Haku passed with near perfect grades, his few mistakes from being unused to the huge power of the Keyblade, and his magic. His friends did not as good, but still extraordinary, compared with others similar to them, and so, as they were given the Title of Keyblade Master, they said their farewells, and left for their own ways, hoping they would meet each oher again.[/spoiler] [spoiler="Personality"]Haku is a very nice person, although is seen to start radiating light whenever he gets a strong emotion. He is very generous, and is unselfish, to the point, he would rather give spoils to his friends, and just be happy about the good time. Haku, is however, [i]not[/i] naive. He will "cleanse" a person with Light energy, if they have too much negativity inside them. The cleansing is refreshing and helpful, leaving the cleansed with a sense of happiness. Haku's personality is just his nature, although it was also due to the fact he was raised in a very happy village, with spirit and laughs everywhere. He has seen his fair share of fights, and negative impressions, but his internal Light energy, combined with his friendly nature, is more than enough to resist any Darker desires.[/spoiler] [spoiler="Keyblade"]+Name: Anima Caelum[spoiler="Stats"]+Length: 1 +Weight: 1 +Power: 3 +Spellpower: 3 +Guard: 2[/spoiler] [spoiler="Description"]A simple, yet powerful Keyblade of iron and iron pyrite, with his family's initials engraved on the bottom of the handle. The end of the Keyblade is a rare electrum spike.[/spoiler][spoiler="Glider Form"]The Glider turns into a spread-eagle "surfboard" shape Glider, with a cannon on the top, for Haku to scope out and fire at enemies with beams of light. The Glider itself has iron filigree at the sides, and one crystal at the top, while there are 6 boosters for stability (bottom, 2 on sides, and 3 on back). The family initials can still be seen etched on the crystal.[/spoiler][/spoiler][spoiler="Affinity"]Light/Time[/spoiler][spoiler="Combat Style"]Speed, but some may consider as slightly Technique as well.[/spoiler] [spoiler="Spell-related"][spoiler="Spells"]Supreme Radiance and Time Splicer.[/spoiler][spoiler="Supreme Radiance Description"]Like Mega Flare, but Light-oriented, and instead of one huge burst forward, it's a giant sphere of light expanding from Haku, and a second circle outside enemies, closing in to crush them. After the spheres, a spray of lasers erupt from Haku in all directions. This is a hugely powerful move that heals a decent amount. It takes a short cast time, but has a nearly takes forever to be able to gain enough energy to use again, and stuns Haku temporarily for 30 seconds, exhausted. This can only be usable once, while Haku's at full strength, and after this, he is completely drained of energy to even walk, let alone attack or cast anything else.[/spoiler][spoiler="Keychain"]+Name: Radiant Union[spoiler="Stat Modifiers"]+1 Length +1 Power +1 Spellpower -1 Weight[/spoiler][spoiler="Description"]The handle becomes a complex platinum handle with golden decorations engraved, and various blue orbs of light attached around the rim of the handle, glowing with a warm radiance. The blade of the Key becomes a platinum and gold mixture, flaring out, with bluish filigree, and ends up to a soft-bluish white color point, with detailed, handcrafted points for the teeth.[/spoiler] [spoiler="History"]The keychain was originally a small electrum token, with his family's initials embossed upon it, and he had his Keyblade and Spells as usual, but when several NeoShadows attacked, as the Darkness spread, his youngest brother and sister were taken, and in a life changing moment, the strength of his feelings changed the token into a teardrop, dramatically enhancing his Keyblade's powers, and gave him the power to easily kill all the NeoShadows, except the extraordinarily resistant captor, which had escaped unfortunately.[/spoiler][/spoiler][/spoiler][/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yosuke-kun Posted March 16, 2012 Report Share Posted March 16, 2012 I edited my app to include a connection to Asphodel. Not much, but it's something. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hydra of Ages Posted March 16, 2012 Author Report Share Posted March 16, 2012 Not sure I'll be able to come up with a satisfactory character in a short enough period of time, so I'm regretfully canceling my reservation. Best of luck, y'all~Me too. Sorry. Sorry to hear that, you two. You're still welcome any time if you change your minds. ...Soren... I may have a second or third app coming up. Also, if you're ok with it Hydra, I'd be willing to co-host it. Nephilim's right, in that a stat 0 Keyblade isn't allowed at the moment. In the future I'll probably release that restriction on Keychains, but keep in mind that 0 in a stat offers unique disadvantages beyond just the stat. A 0 Weight keyblade, for example, would become essentially a two-handed weapon, with all the loss of dexterity that implies. Speed-based characters would probably feel the disadvantage from that the most, so keep that in mind. Outside of that, the app looks great. Make the edit and you're accepted. I'm not looking for any co-hosts at the moment, but thanks for the offer. ... Same problem here, of course. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yosuke-kun Posted March 16, 2012 Report Share Posted March 16, 2012 Wait, the more weight you have the better? I thought it was reversed xD I ok, I'll change it. EDIT: Kay, fixed I think. We'll be able to learn new spells as we go right? Also, the co-host offer's on the table should you need one in the future. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TotalObelisk Posted March 16, 2012 Report Share Posted March 16, 2012 I think what he's saying is that the lower the stat, the heavier the weapon is, and thus how hard it is to lift/swing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hydra of Ages Posted March 16, 2012 Author Report Share Posted March 16, 2012 I think what he's saying is that the lower the stat, the heavier the weapon is, and thus how hard it is to lift/swing This is exactly so. A higher Weight stat indicates a lighter, and therefore quicker to move, Keyblade. Keyblades don't work like regular swords do, so the additional weight doesn't actually increase its damage capacity in any way- lighter blades are therefore preferable. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Astolfo Posted March 16, 2012 Report Share Posted March 16, 2012 Oh, didn't realize XD I'll edit ASAP, because I'm busy right now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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