need help!spellcasters

[daniel213]

here are my spellcaster deck tell me if i need a change

[b]Monster[/b][b] 20[/b]

1x chaos sorcerer
1x summoner monks
1x effect veiler
1x flamvell magician
2x night's end sorcerer
3x apprentice magician
2x old vindictive magician
1x jester confit
2x defender, the magical knight
2x magical examplar
1x breaker the magical warrior
2x skilled dark magician
1x geomancer of the ice barrier

[b]spell 15[/b]
2x magical citadel of endymion
1x monster reborn
1x de-synchron
1x book of moon
1x magical dimension
1x secret village of the spellcaster
1x pot of avarice
1x solidarity
1x fissure
1x lighting vortex
1x allure of darkness
1x swords of revealing light
1x polymerization
1x miracle synchro fusion

[b]trap 5[/b]
3x sakuretsu armor
1x magicain circle
1x destruction jammer

[b]extra 13[/b]
1x stardust dragon
1x shooting star dragon
1x formula synchron
1x majestic star dragon
1x armory arm
2x templest magician
2x explosive magician
1x arcanite magician
1x supreme arcanite magician
1x arcanite magician / assault mode
1x stardust dragon / assault mode

please tell me everything what is wrong with my deck thx

[Tiger Tracks]

It could be worse. Try this as a starting point:

Monster: 17
2 Chaos Sorcerer
1 Black Luster Soldier - EotB
1 Endymion the Master Magician

3 Effect Veiler
3 Magical Exemplar
3 Breaker the Magical Warrior
3 Crusader of Endymion
1 Night's End Sorcerer

Spells: 18
1 Dark Hole
1 Heavy Storm
1 Foolish Burial
1 Monster Reborn
1 Miracle Synchro Fusion
3 Magical Citadel of Endymion
3 Spell Power Grasp
3 Pot of Duality
2 Terraforming
2 MST

Traps: 5
2 Solemn Warning
2 Torrential Tribute
1 Solemn Judgment

Extra: 15
3 Stardust Dragon
3 Arcanite Magician
3 Tempest Magician
3 Explosive Magician
3 Supreme Arcanite Magician