CMRenji Posted March 11, 2012 Report Share Posted March 11, 2012 Got some new brushes, new fonts and followed a pretty easy tut. I have a feeling that it lacks depth and some other issues, but I'll let you guys decide. [img]http://img252.imageshack.us/img252/6209/rukiatag.png[/img] CnC is appreciated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lunar Origins Posted March 11, 2012 Report Share Posted March 11, 2012 That's a bit large, don't you think? Anyways, this reminds me of my first experiments. I remember making a Black/White Rukia tag. I'm no expert, but this seems really unfinished. The render, I feel, stands out a little too much. The text placement leaves a bit to be desired, too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
£>-ShådøwBøx-<3 Posted March 11, 2012 Report Share Posted March 11, 2012 It's pretty good, the glow around Rukia blends well, although she seems to not blend very well with the colors.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Rai Posted March 11, 2012 Report Share Posted March 11, 2012 The text doesn't really /do/ anything for the piece. I'd much rather a fractal or something be placed in its place instead. The background seems just a little squashed or stretched too. It's just a bit...plain. Can't really think of massive amounts though, but I'd first say get rid of the border. It's kinda distracting. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CMRenji Posted March 11, 2012 Author Report Share Posted March 11, 2012 [quote name='Sakuya' timestamp='1331504503' post='5866578'] That's a bit large, don't you think? Anyways, this reminds me of my first experiments. I remember making a Black/White Rukia tag. I'm no expert, but this seems really unfinished. The render, I feel, stands out a little too much. The text placement leaves a bit to be desired, too. [/quote] I recently adjusted my computer's resolution, so I suppose I probably did make it too big. I had a feeling it didn't look quite done. And I am still very poor at working with text. I really need to work on placement. [quote name='.Rai' timestamp='1331504836' post='5866591'] The text doesn't really /do/ anything for the piece. I'd much rather a fractal or something be placed in its place instead. The background seems just a little squashed or stretched too. It's just a bit...plain. Can't really think of massive amounts though, but I'd first say get rid of the border. It's kinda distracting. [/quote] Meh, as I said, I suck at working with text. I honestly don't like using C4ds or fractals much, since I can't find a reliable place to find them. If someone could show me a good place to find them, it would be greatly appreciated. I didn't save a layered version of this tag, so I won't be able to make changes to it. But I'll remember your guys' advice when I make another tag. Thanks for the help. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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