Black Temple Gaurdian Posted March 9, 2012 Report Share Posted March 9, 2012 [i]These are intended for a fanfiction and as such may be slightly under and/or over powered. Regardless, comments and criticisms welcome.[/i] [b]White Phoenix Dragon:[/b] * * * * * * * * Light/Dragon/Gemini This card is treated as a Normal Monster while face-up on the field or in the Graveyard. While this card is face-up on the field, you can Normal Summon it to have it be treated as an Effect Monster with this effect: ● Once per turn, if this card would be destroyed; Reduce this card's Atk and Def to 0 until the End Phase instead. 3000/2500 [b]Ashes of a White Phoenix:[/b] Spell Pay 1000 Life Points; Special Summon "White Phoenix Dragon" from your graveyard. [b]White Phoenix Healing:[/b] Spell/Continuous While you control a face-up "White Phoenix Dragon"; any damage you would take is halved. Link to comment
Randomflyingobjects Posted March 9, 2012 Report Share Posted March 9, 2012 Yes, like you said, slightly OPed, but White Pheonix Healing needs the most adjustment. In the Main Phase 2, you could use it, gain 3500 Life Points, and with it's survival effect, keep White Pheonix Dragon on the field anyway, and you suddenly gained a major advantage. I don't have a problem with White Pheonix itself, but Pheonix Healing needs to be changed to 'Tribute' instead of 'Destroy', and I'll be totally fine. Link to comment
Demon Loki Posted March 10, 2012 Report Share Posted March 10, 2012 White Phoenix Dragon: As i see it, it's underpowered. Why? Because it can only be used once. Unless you put "Until the End Phase" in it. But it still would be underpowered. Get wild dude! Ashes of White Phoenix: Cool. Don't see any problems with it. White Phoenix Healing: Cool support. Link to comment
Black Temple Gaurdian Posted March 10, 2012 Author Report Share Posted March 10, 2012 Opps >.< I did when I wrote it down. Seems to have been missed when I typed it though. As for the underpowered bit; It probably is, it's supposed to be a reincarnation of the fourth Blue-Eyes. And we know how weak he is on his own. Link to comment
duel tester Posted March 12, 2012 Report Share Posted March 12, 2012 I like this card it would work with cards like supervise ,Trade-in you get the idea.. it reminds me of Blue-eyes White dragon. Link to comment
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