Not shure if this card efict is phrased correctly

[pfaccioxx]

I don't think this card efict is phrased correctly, could someone help me fix it plz?

Whenever a player loses LP place 1 Life Force Counter on this card. Also place 1 extra Life Force Counter for every 200 LP lost. Increase this card's original ATK power is equal to the number of life force counters on this card times 50.

[pfaccioxx]

[quote name='Ghost Ryder' timestamp='1330547414' post='5848137']
When a player loses any Life Points, place 1 Life Force Counter on this card for each 200 Life Points lost. For each Life Force Counter placed on this card, this card gains 50 ATK.

I reckon.

[b]Edit:[/b] Also, this thread doesn't belong in this section. There's a reminder for you. I believe this thread belongs in the 'Written Cards' section. This 'Question & Help' is for issues with browsing on the website etc.
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not quite what I had in mind

I want the effect to activate whenever someone loses life-points, but I also want it's 2ed part to activate whenever someone loses 200 LP or more, so for Ex.
a Player lose's 500 LP, This monster would gain 1 counter from it's insel effect, but also a 2 counters from it's effect's secondary part making 3 counters in total

EDIT: also I've asked questions like this before on this form for a few of my ouder cards and evin had the effect fixed by a moderator and so far your the only person who's sead that I posted in the wrong section

[Ghost Ryder]

When a player loses any Life Points, place 1 Life Force Counter on this card for each 200 Life Points lost. For each Life Force Counter placed on this card, this card gains 50 ATK.

I reckon.

[b]Edit:[/b] Also, this thread doesn't belong in this section. There's a reminder for you. I believe this thread belongs in the 'Written Cards' section. This 'Question & Help' is for issues with browsing on the website etc.