Clockwork Demon (first Card on WC section)

[Demon Loki]

I have decided to join the WC section. (because i really need more posts)

[Clockwork Demon]
**** / LIGHT / Fiend / Effect
When this Card is Summoned: Move the turn count forward by 1 turn. The turn in which this card is Summoned continues as normal.
ATK 1700 / DEF 1100

I wanted to make a support Card for "Final Countdown".
And yes, i know that is very comparable to "Pyro Clock of Destiny".
I'm probably going to make a whole set like this, so i hope you like it.

[Organized Chaos]

Welcome to WC Loki . People here aren't that bad and can be helpful on the odd occasion. Anyways, down to buisness. This card is a good idea. A monster version of Pyro Clock of Destiny. Which is LIGHT. And Fiend <3. Unfortunately, Final Countdown focuses more on Stall BUT this card would provide a beatstick while speeding up the process therefore you could probably base a Deck around this (hopefully). Tips on how to make this card better ; Change the effect to simply when it's Summoned. If it has to be Normal Summoned, it'll be slow and won't be able to abuse Stygian Security. And maybe bump up the ATK to 1900 just to make it run over things. Not much else I can say. Brilliant card, especially for your first. Hope to see more.

[Demon Loki]

[quote name='NotSoSlenderMan' timestamp='1330371642' post='5844399']
Welcome to WC Loki . People here aren't that bad and can be helpful on the odd occasion. Anyways, down to buisness. This card is a good idea. A monster version of Pyro Clock of Destiny. Which is LIGHT. And Fiend <3. Unfortunately, Final Countdown focuses more on Stall BUT this card would provide a beatstick while speeding up the process therefore you could probably base a Deck around this (hopefully). Tips on how to make this card better ; Change the effect to simply when it's Summoned. If it has to be Normal Summoned, it'll be slow and won't be able to abuse Stygian Security. And amybe bump up the ATK to 1900 just to make it run over things. Not much else I can say. Brilliant card, especially for your first. Hope to see more.
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Thank you for the advice but i will keep the ATK.

[Organized Chaos]

[quote name='Loki the Lion' timestamp='1330372425' post='5844419']
Thank you for the advice but i will keep the ATK.
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That's fine. Glad to be of service anyway. Are you making any more Final Countdown Support ?

[Demon Loki]

[quote name='NotSoSlenderMan' timestamp='1330372576' post='5844421']

That's fine. Glad to be of service anyway. Are you making any more Final Countdown Support ?
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Yes, i'll make some soon.

[Bringerofcake]

The ATK itself is fine. Like the above guy said, FC is primarily stall, but rather than say the ATK is too low, I would say that the ATK doesn't matter. You probably wouldn't summon this unless FC was already activated, so it's not like the ATK is needed for much else.

If you really wanted to break it, you would add:

"Discard this card from your hand: Add 1 "Final Countdown" from your Deck to your hand."

Oh, and welcome to WC.

[Demon Loki]

[quote name='Bringerofcake' timestamp='1330416125' post='5845848']
The ATK itself is fine. Like the above guy said, FC is primarily stall, but rather than say the ATK is too low, I would say that the ATK doesn't matter. You probably wouldn't summon this unless FC was already activated, so it's not like the ATK is needed for much else.

If you really wanted to break it, you would add:

"Discard this card from your hand: Add 1 "Final Countdown" from your Deck to your hand."

Oh, and welcome to WC.
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Maybe i will use the effect for another Card. Thanks for the idea.

Thank you.