Best. Armour. EVER!! (please visit. I worked hard.)

[DemonLordEspada]

So, here they are. I wanted to make an Archetype.
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[Mew 2.0]

should be "5 warrior-type monsters with 'the Ultimate' in their name"

[DemonLordEspada]

I suppose, but... Aren't you going to rate them?

[Mew 2.0]

oh, no way. That would require thinking and comparing, its much easier just to nit-pick at random OCG errors.

[DemonLordEspada]

A bit disrespectful, isn't it? I worked very hard on these cards.

[Mew 2.0]

bro, i was being sarcastic.

[VGVentus]

Hmm, I'm guessing that these cards focus on limiting your Opponent's monster's potential, which seems kinda nice.

I have only one problem, which is a big problem. It's with the Archetype's boss monster, I'm not going to sugar coat things, it's WAY too overpowered. It doesn't matter that it self destructs after three turns (By the way, the OCG is incorrect, it should say something like: "During the 3rd End Phase after this card was Summoned: Banish it, then take 3000 LP damage.), because this card will certainly destroy everything your Opponent has long before it's banished. This is because it gains the effects of all Ultimates used for it's summoning.

Think about it. It'll have 6500 ATK, the ability to attack twice, cause piercing damage and the ability to survive two atempts at destroying it through batte! Not only that, but all of your Opponent's monsters will lose 2000 ATK because of the boss possessing Greaves' effect. And that is only when you have five of the "Ultimates" in your graveyard! Also, if you combine this card with Royal Decree, nothing will be able to stop this card from winning you the game.

True, it's what you want to achieve, but achieving it with two cards?

I suggest that you nerf it's effect somewhat, how about forcing it to banish an "Ultimate" in the graveyard to gain it's effect? It still gets it's powerful effects, just not all of them.

The rest of the cards are okay in my eyes. You did a good job on making these cards!

[DemonLordEspada]

Thanks. I'll nerf the boss monster.

[Bringerofcake]

The real question is if you can get all this stuff together by the time you draw into the boss (because that's the only way to get him in the first place)

You should probably rephrase their summon conditions to

"Cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. Must first be Summoned by the effect of a "The Ultimate" monster."

That way the conditions make sense.