Admiral_Stalfos19 Posted February 23, 2012 Report Share Posted February 23, 2012 Ugh... having trouble coming up with a biography. Anyway, I probably won't be anywhere [i]near[/i] as active as normal from tomorrow onwards, since I'll be down in the country somewhere, so yeah... do you want me to see what I can do now, or can you give me an extension? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Quiksilver Posted February 23, 2012 Author Report Share Posted February 23, 2012 You can wait, if you want. Just post it as soon as you can. In other news, the [url="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/277123-days-of-the-unown-ic-thread/"]IC Thread[/url] is now up. Wake up, get familiarized, you know. Just don't leave, because there is no way out of the room...yet. And as the thread is now up, I will no longer be accepting applications. The only ones who can still post an application are [b]Kakashi Hatake[/b], [b]Corona Ray[/b], and [b]Admiral_Stalfos19[/b]. For you three, you have only a couple of days before I stop accepting entirely, so I'd get at it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Tico~ Posted February 24, 2012 Report Share Posted February 24, 2012 [center][b]Pokémon Trainer Masaki Rinno[/b][/center] [b]AGE[/b]: 15 [b]GENDER[/b]: Male [b]LOCATION[/b]: Icirrus City (Unova) [b]MONEY: [/b]0 [b]APPEARANCE:[/b] -Body Shape: Slightly taller than average, and noticeably thinner than most boys his age. Has a decent amount of muscle. -Hair Style & Color: A bright shade of blue, with a long strand going across his face. Various bangs cut at the sides. -Eye Color: Pale orange, almost like sunset -Complexion: White, with a hint of a healthy tan -Clothing: Masaki wears a long-sleeved black shirt with a snow crystal pattern on the upper right and a pocket in the front. He also has a pair of dark blue pants with a white triangular pattern in front of the pockets that are held together with a red crisscrossed belt, and black boots. For accessories, Masaki has a red collar around his neck and a series of white bandages wrapped around his forearm (from where his shirt sleeve ends and downward). [b]PERSONALITY: [/b]Being kind-hearted by nature, Masaki believes all Pokémon should be treated with the utmost care and honesty. He will also go to near-extreme lengths to protect Pokémon from harm, as demonstrated once in his past where he dove into a lake to save a Roggenrola that had been knocked into it by a Take Down attack. That isn’t to say that he’s prissy, although it certainly can seem to be so when he’s caring for Pokémon. His caring side does present a bit of a problem though, since he also loves Pokémon battles. Masaki’s slowing getting to the point of putting this aside, but only time can tell if he can really suppress his compassion. Masaki is rather shy when first meeting people, leading his first encounters with others to be somewhat awkward especially when he makes a mistake and gets increasingly flustered. He is a good person to talk to though; as he knows when to just be silent and listen and when actual conversation is needed. He’s also the sort of person to keep getting up no matter how many times he falls; persistent to a fault, as it were. [b]BIOGRAPHY: [/b]Masaki was actually born in Nimbasa City to loving parents, and as a result, grew to be fun-loving and rather optimistic. He went around the theme parks regularly, and often attended various Pokémon battle events that were held within the city. The latter also triggered a passion for battles, which furthered more after his father allowed him to enter small tourneys held for children to have mock battles. After he turned 8, his parents decided to move to Icirrus City, where his mother had grown up. They stopped at many places along the way though, and Masaki got to see many different sorts of Pokémon, filling him with wonder and leading to his eventual declaration to become a Trainer in order to befriend these Pokémon. In a way, Icirrus City proved to be a good place for him, as it was connected to places where a variety of Pokémon lived; he could even find some right outside his home during nearly every season but winter. One day, Masaki was off to the Dragonspiral Tower, which he liked to explore, if not looking around Twist Mountain. He’d been looking around for any sign of an Emolga, which had reportedly been spotted several times around the Tower during the past few days and which he wanted to see, if only for the sake of saying he saw one. Unfortunately, he ran into a Druddigon with a foul temper that day and was chased around the tower before being cornered on one of the floors. Luckily, he was saved by a Gigalith that Masaki had encountered in Twist Mountain and had somehow wandered its way over. The Gigalith and Druddigon clashed for a long while before the Gigalith triumphed, but Masaki was touched by how a Pokémon he’d barely known (except for occasional visits) had saved him from what would’ve been otherwise a very nasty end. This brought about his change in position on the subject of how to treat Pokémon, and has led his philosophy ever since. [b]POKEMON: [/b]Deino I tried to make it so his personality would clash with Deino's behavior as a species (Deino being highly aggressive and attacking regardless of its wounds) while Masaki tries to prevent Pokemon from being hurt. Dunno if it would seem that way, though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Quiksilver Posted February 24, 2012 Author Report Share Posted February 24, 2012 [b]Corona Ray[/b] - Everything seems fine on my end. You are [b]accepted[/b]. Now, to the IC Thread GOGOGOGOGOGOGO Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Admiral_Stalfos19 Posted February 24, 2012 Report Share Posted February 24, 2012 Well... I could[i] try[/i] to get the bio done, but considering my family's having a [i]second [/i]gathering with this reunion, that's gonna be a tall order. ... I'm not gonna have another day am I? Either way, I'll see how much I can get done. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Quiksilver Posted February 25, 2012 Author Report Share Posted February 25, 2012 ...Just see how much you can get done. I'm not going to just suddenly cut you off, you still have some time left. I can understand, real life comes before the virtual world. Just...when you get a free time, try and get this done, okay? Thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Admiral_Stalfos19 Posted February 25, 2012 Report Share Posted February 25, 2012 Yeah, I'll be back home tomorrow, so I'll do as much as I can [i]now[/i] and probably finish it off then. EDIT: Bio's not [i]quite[/i] finished at this stage. I'll probably be able to extend later today. But can you assess it anyway, please? I wouldn't be happy if I finish it and you suddenly find something wrong. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Quiksilver Posted February 26, 2012 Author Report Share Posted February 26, 2012 [b]Admiral_Stalfos19 - [/b]The bio is nearly there. I'd just love a little more detail on how she grew up, who her parents were, etc. Besides that, however, there is one glaring problem... - Her personality. You spend most of it describing how she doesn't like people mentioning her weight, and one measly little sentence about how she's "kind and respectful". Um, what? Please expand on that. How does she act when her weight is not called into play? And, this isn't something you need to fix or anything, but what's with all the italics? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Admiral_Stalfos19 Posted February 26, 2012 Report Share Posted February 26, 2012 OK. I'll expand on them when I can. As for the italics... I use them all the time when I need to stress things. That's just how I roll. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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