New Style Experiments

[Twenty-five Zero Oh-oh]

Trying to get back into it. Did some new stuff.

[img]http://i1216.photobucket.com/albums/dd362/25000st/060st.png[/img]

[img]http://i1216.photobucket.com/albums/dd362/25000st/061st.png[/img]

[Kakashi Hatake]

The first one has that really distracting square pattern. It just doesn't fit. Also, the lighting is off and it seems a little flat.

It is hard to tell what is going on in the second. The lighting is off and it's flat.
Also, you do that yellow scheme so much that it get's old.

[~Energy]

I really like the colours on the first I don't like the render though. Personally I think it would work better if you took the render out and made it an abstract.
The second is pretty good too but there doesn't seem to be a defined focal.

['tyleR]

I took to the time to point out my two biggest problems with the first tag by pointing them out on the image.

[IMG]http://i42.tinypic.com/35lhmxt.png[/IMG]

The part I circled was the main problem I had with the focal in general. Honestly, if it wasn't for that part looking so pasted on and unblended, I would have very little problem. Since that isn't the case though, it screws with your depth and blending of the tag altogether.

The arrow points to the fact that the c4d below it has a square cut out of it. It ruins the effect and shows how unclean the tag is in some areas.

Honestly, I liked the tag a lot when I first looked it over. Just going more in depth it needs some touch ups.

The second one turned me off because of the color scheme. Honestly, you should branch out of that zone for a while. After staying with it for so long it provides that thought that maybe you're spending too much time in the easy chair. Know what I mean?

-raiN