Twenty-five Zero Oh-oh Posted February 15, 2012 Report Share Posted February 15, 2012 I think I'm getting every so slightly better again. [img]http://i1216.photobucket.com/albums/dd362/25000st/059st.png[/img] [img]http://i1216.photobucket.com/albums/dd362/25000st/057st.png[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Durandamon Posted February 15, 2012 Report Share Posted February 15, 2012 I myself don't use real people 4 renders, butr this turned out nicely. The smudging to the right is kinda distracting. Maybe attract the attention more to the girl, if she's the focal of course. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chairman ali Posted February 15, 2012 Report Share Posted February 15, 2012 Doesnt really blend in that well at all. I think you need to go over the subject and render it more (render it as in define it more, I'm using art terminology @_@ sorry got used to it). Then I suggest going over the depth and fixing it because the blurring part is taking away from the perspective a lot (note: bad perspective = composition gets ruined). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twenty-five Zero Oh-oh Posted February 16, 2012 Author Report Share Posted February 16, 2012 Good to see you still around ken. Thx for the advice. I see it's overblurred on the right but not quite following you on the blending part. In the meantime, made a new tag. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
'tyleR Posted February 22, 2012 Report Share Posted February 22, 2012 That small tag is terrible, honestly. A step backward. 3: The second is cool, it has potential, but the color scheme and depth need some work, imo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ænema Posted February 29, 2012 Report Share Posted February 29, 2012 Looks really boring to me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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