Koga100 Clan Leader Posted February 14, 2012 Report Share Posted February 14, 2012 Please Let me know what you think, I'm every interested in comments (If the forum is too long for the rules let me know and I'll size it) Commander Hawki Commander Hawki's name is pronounced Hawk - eye.DESCRIPTION: Hawki Is the main commander in HTFB leading the UNSC forces on the planet they call faith in season 2. Hawki I put under stress when his men fail to hold off the Covenant, Hawki knew that they would fail but Hawki used to just consider them as numbers but adventurely he changes and creates friends. Hawki Survives most of the Story. but his end will not be said until his death comes. Hawki is honored by the UNSC force he commands. He never found love. He was a single man. He is the most powerful spartan known to develop friends and maintain a good commanding idea. His favorite friend is Private Allan. Hawki on Planet Faith is defending for the Fate of humanity, protecting the Pillar of Autum and kept the invasion of Reach slower. Hawki was the first in the winter contengicy to be attacked. Hawki held his units on them on cruiser got past them and when on the reach there began to fall of reach.AGE: 37HIGHT: 5,8SKILL: 200-1,0000SPEED: 50-100%FAVORITE WEAPON: assault rifleARMOR: Security/ katanaPhoto: (Updating) Private Allan, Stucklass DESCRIPTION: Private Allan is Hawki's most favorite friend. Allan is used by hawki to do special mission any ordinary human could not do. Allan was personally trained by Hawki. Hawki considers Allan to be the best student he had ever had. This made Allan want to conquore the covenant. Most people would be scared of Allan if they knew Allan's nature but most over-estimate him. Allan has a love life during the story but the love will most likely never survive because the covenant will possablely sepperate them. Allan is said to have been trained by the Cheif himself but Allan knows for the fact that is was a roomer that just got started because to Hawki's training. Allan believes in Christianity. Allan is the Rank of a Private though he is much stronger and deserves a higher rank but UNSC commanders wouldn't let him gain ranks above a Private. So Allan was personally trained by Hawki (I mentioned earlier) Allan Is the only one known so far that has to ability to survive the Fall of Planet Faith. You'll see more of Allan's skills has he gains more experience through hands on experienceAGE: 23HIGHT: 5,4SKILL: 59-1,0000SPEED: 75-100%FAVORITE WEAPON: Spartan Laser/ Rocket Launcher/ DMRARMOR: QCBPhoto: (Updating) Private Buffiloe, John DESCRIPTION: There is not a lot on Private Buffiloe. But I can say for now that he is in the site of some thing new that will change the UNSC forces. More info will be added after a period in season 2AGE: 29HIGHT: 4,9SKILL: 70-1,0000SPEED: 95-100%FAVORITE WEAPON: Mangnum/ sillanced S.M.G./ Warthog chain gun ARMOR: EVAPhoto: (updating) ODST Lex, Lisa DESCRIPTION: Lex is a odst her name is Lisa, but most call her Lex. She is wanting to become a spartan but her body doesn't have the requirements so she took odst training. Lex is Private Allan's troop. She and Allan are in love with each other. Allan and her are seperated a lot because of the war. Lex uses the odst Magnum the most when she battles. She is one not to mess with or you'll never want to appear in public again. She does what ever you command her to do except for personal things. now she serves for one purpose only that cannot be said until she say in later in the story.AGE: 21HIGHT: 4,7SKILL:800-1,0000SPEED: 45-100%FAVORITE WEAPON: Silanced Magnum/ ODST SMG/ FUEL ROD/ Plasma RepeaterArmor: ODSTPhoto: (Updating) ODST Minc, John DESCRIPTION: Minc is a odst. He is not mentioned in the story much. He has his own little world that gets him killed but he descovers the covenants plans but never makes it back to tell Allan or Hawki. Minc is Allan's second troop. He never succeded a mission.AGE: 20HIGHT: 6,4SKILL: 1,0000-1,0000SPEED: 12-100%FAVORITE WEAPON: None preferredArmor: ODSTPhoto: (Updating) Colonel steal Former Lieutenant DESCRIPTION: Colonel Steal is a spartan leader. He follows UNSC frigate comander ULA of Frigate 1236. Steal is like Hawki but more stronger he is the strongest alive and is the only one who can give Hawki a challenge in battle good thing there on the same side.AGE: 36HIGHT 5,6SKILL 12-1,0000SPEED: 65-100%FAVORITE WEPON: none preferedArmor: Mark 5Photo: Coming soon First Lieutenant Jocken DESCRIPTION: As far as the story has progressed Lieutenant Jocken is List M.I.A Further Information will be added as the story progresses.AGE: 24Hight 5,5SKILL: 230-10000SPEED: 65-100%FAVORITE WEAPON: Assult RiffleARMOR: Mark IVPhoto: coming soon General Hews DESCRIPTION: General Hews is currently classified as M.I.A Further information will be added as the Story Progresses.AGE: 25HIGHT: 5,5SKILL: 200-10000SPEED: 70-100%FAVORITE WEAPON: Sniper RiffleARMOR: Mark 6Photo: coming soon Commander Ula (Dead) DESCRIPTION: commander Ula in the story Halo the final battles asist Commander Hawki in his defencive lines she is know to like Hawki but she doesn't show it. She knows how to fight so don't get on here bad side.AGE: 35HIGHT: 4,9SKILL: 200-1,0000SPEED: 65-100%FAVORITE WEAPON: none preferedARMOR: ReconPhoto:coming soon PRIVATE, Hawno' DESCRIPTION: Hawno' is a elite minor he battles along side of his major, most call him private. Hawno' is a elite that likes to fight spartans to the death, so far he has not lost. He has battle Hawki once when Hawki was a srg. Hawki ran and now is a commander. Hawno' dreams of peace. what Hawno' and his major doesn't know is that spartans and elite where ment to work together. Hanwo' becomes a new rank higher than his major who raised him when Hawno's parents left him as a child.AGE: 45HIGHT:7,8SKILL: 200-2,000,000SPEED: 100-120%FAVORITE WEAPON: Plasma rifle/ Energy Sword/ Plasma pistal/ PLASMA LuancherARMOR: AssaultPhoto: (Updating) ShipMaster: Name unknown DESCRIPTION: The Shipmaster in this story is not that of the one in Halo . This shipmaster is on a different life line. He is smart, quick and knows every tactic in battle stratigies. The shipmaster dies at a point after resigning and going into retirement. but for now he commands 13432 covenant super cruise on Planet Faith. AGE: 71HIGHT:8,6SKILL:12-1,000,000SPEED: 50-100%FAVORITE WEAPON: None preferedARMOR: CommanderPhoto: coming soon MAJOR: Nonloizopilo DESCRIPTION: The Major's name is pronounced (non-lo-zi-op-i-o). Major has one troop (Hawno'). Major is the shipmaters best soldier. Major is smart and quick. He knows how to fight good. you do not want to meat him in battle. Major gets old and soon resigns, he lives to see the peace but dies soon after that. his last words : "I've never seen such a nice and clear futrure". He dies in peace. Humans and elites forever.AGE: 60HIGHT: 8,5SKILL: 40-2,000,000SPEED: 45-100%FAVORITE WEAPON: Plasma rifle/ plasma Luancher/ energy sword/ Focus rifleARMOR: CombatPhoto: (Updating) Elite Honor guard: Kiska, inowa DESCRIPTION: The name of this character is pronounced kees-ka I-now-A. Kiska, Inowa is a elite honor guard that defends some thing not even the data knows only the elites if the info were to get into Human hands they would of lost years ago.AGE: 50HIGHT: 7,9SPEED: 55-100%FAVORITE WEAPON: None preferedArmor: CommandowPhoto: None Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Koga100 Clan Leader Posted February 16, 2012 Author Report Share Posted February 16, 2012 well guess I can up it a bit just don't want to get in troubleWhy so small? I can't make out what it says Why so small? I can't make out what it says There hows that? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Koga100 Clan Leader Posted February 16, 2012 Author Report Share Posted February 16, 2012 well is the text any better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bury the year Posted February 16, 2012 Report Share Posted February 16, 2012 This is not fiction. Please read the section rules to learn what is. LOCKED. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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