prototype1000 Posted February 13, 2012 Report Share Posted February 13, 2012 This story takes place in the city of Duellopolus, a futurestic city that is know for it's two power supply towers, these towers have created an infinite supply of power for the city and its devices. Dueling is the most popular form of gaming in the city because it's non-violent, and the winners usually play in the touranments for money and glory, and thus cards are taken a lot more seriously because it can make duelist from an amateur to a wealthy man in the touranments, cards can also be traded for others cards and money. Our hero is call Yeagar, an average duelist who isn't interested in major touranments, but was only interested in dueling because of how his ancestors were experts in the dueling field. One day Yeagar passes by a Card Bank, a Card bank is used to store cards for the richer duelists who don't not even want to care about protecting the cards themselves. Yeagar sees an explosion at the card bank and a man in a black mask and outfit runs out with a bag full of cards and a duel disk on his arm. In the city of Duellopolus, terrorists and robbers tend to use duel disks to set off mines and other devices if the duel disk is the right model. Yeagar luckily has a spare duel disk and deck in his backpack and uses a electro-magnet device to connect his duel disk with the robber, the robber is unable to move with the duel disk on his arm because the device is designed to electrocute anyone who takes the affect duel disk off, so Yeagar and the Robber engage a duel. Yeager 4000 Turn 1 "My move"I summon Olympic Defender in defense mode. Def 2000"and I set a card face-down." Robber 4000 Turn 2"I activate the spell blaze accelerator from my hand, I also activate pyro soul, everytime a pyro monster is sent from my hand to the graveyard you take 300 damage," I activate my accelerator eff, I discard volcanic shell from my hand to destroy your defender," Defender is destroyed.Yeagar takes 300 damage from soul,Yeager 3700."I activate the effect of my volcanic shell from my graveyard, I pay 500 life to add another shell from my deck to my hand."Robber 3500"I activate life-mine, now I discard another volcanic shell from my hand to activate this card. Now if I inflict effect damage to you, the effect damage is doubled." I activate the spell card soul of fire so I banish volcanic doomfire from my deck to inflict 1500 damage to you, and due to life-mine the damage is double, along with pyro soul, you take another 300 damage, but you get to draw a card due to soul of fire.Yeagar 200Now I pay another 500 life points to add my final volcanic shell from my deck to my hand.Robber 3000I summon volcanic shell in defense mode. Def 0I also set two cards face-down and end my turn. Yeager 200 Turn 3I summon Olympic Spearer from my hand Atk 1500Robber "I activate my trap", summon demise, when you summon a monster, you take damage equal to its level x 400, I win. Yeagar " I activate my trap" life-balance since our life points have more than a 3000 difference both of our life points become 1000.Yeagar 600Olympic Spearer attacks your volcanic shell, and due to spearer's eff you take piercing damage, Robber " I activate my trap, ring of destruction, and I target your spearer, now both of us take 1500 damage. Yeagar 0Robber 0Tie "To be continued" Creator note " I will reveal more about Yeagar's origins in future chapters, including longer duels, and more characters if the viewers like this topic." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bahamut - Envoy of the End Posted February 13, 2012 Report Share Posted February 13, 2012 Sigh. Read this. http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/255950-ycm-creative-writing-forum-rules/ And since I'm here, read the first chapters of these too. http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/261201-yu-gi-oh-the-wanderer-chapter-11-up/ http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/251715-yugioh-hidden-legacy-descent-into-darkness-ch-27-the-fire-inside-part-2-posted-reps-for-constructive-advice/ http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/232937-yu-gi-oh-dead-zone-chapter-62-up/ That's not to make you feel inferior or small or anything, that's to show you some examples of what a fic should look like, in terms of build up to and during duels. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bury the year Posted February 14, 2012 Report Share Posted February 14, 2012 Saw it this morning, but was on my iPod and forgot how to lock threads there. Ergo, LOCKED. Read the rules and PM me a revised edition to unlock it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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