MortalKombatSmoke Posted February 11, 2012 Report Share Posted February 11, 2012 [url="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/276880-murder-city-extinction-startedacceptingco-hosted-by-hotaru987-ic/"]IC[/url] Murder City: Extinction [img]http://fc06.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2012/038/4/d/murder_city_extinction_by_rjuujinaaittakage-d4ozi6i.jpg[/img] [spoiler=recap] [spoiler=Murder City] Freeborn City, a small town surrounded by mountains and a large lake. Ace detective, Tadayoshi Kurokawa ran the Freeborn Police station at age 17, the youngest head detective Freeborn has ever had. He proved himself through his negotiation skills, charisma, ability to solve seemingly impossible crimes, and his sheer determination. He had obtained a new assistant by the name of Yuki Mizao. Yuki is slightly insane, having been placed in a mental home for most of her childhood due to a very traumatic incident. She's very childish, and can be quite cynical when provoked or if she snaps. With her powers having to deal with having self mind control she always have some type of candy with her, as sugar is the only thing that can keep her calm. She came to Tadayoshi as his new assistant and partner. He was very nice to her and she was suspicious, snoopy, and kind back. Of course Tadayoshi would play pranks on the other detectives, especially Yuki, one day he even filled her desk with hundreds of suckers with her favorite flavors. These two where the greatest detective duo of Freeborn. After solving the crimes of a church burning, headed by the mob boss Luscious, using their special powers, Yuki and Tadayoshi became heroes fast. Tadayoshi could use Telepathy, read minds, and can send subliminal messages into one's mind to trick one into doing something. Weapon of choice? A semi-automatic handgun. Yuki, however, could use telekinesis, moving things with her mind, however the heavier the object the more of a strain on her body, she could also create forcefields. After using her powers she can sometimes get headaches, and suffer from blood loss. After a small concussion Tadayoshi received after a gunshot wound, weird things began to happen, soon Tadayoshi recovered. But Yuki was kidnapped by, what turned out to be, her long lost brother Raito. Tadayoshi had to trade the captive Luscious for Yuki, the transaction happened and Luscious got away. After a long stream of events, Tadayoshi was thrown into a small pit of depression, which Luscious took advantage of, and killed Tadayoshi, disposing of the body by chucking him off a cliff. One month later, Luscious was caught, Tadayoshi had a closed casket funeral, and things progressively began to turn back to normal, however Yuki began to feel the pain, but this time she had her older brother Raito by her side. A mysterious criminal appeared, his first assault was on a police officer who was found hanging with a small note written on his chest in permanent marker, about the corruption and criminal pit Freeborn became. Calling it "Murder City". Null was like smoke, not being caught easily, he evaded Yuki and Raito countless times, each murder becoming increasingly violent. However, December 4th was drawing near and Null warned the entire city that at least 600 people, more than twice the normal amount that attend, must arrive at the cathedral at the top of the hill where the ball is traditionally placed or else the entire city would pay. Yuki did not want to take a chance not believing him, so her and Raito managed to get enough people to come. Null made a flamboyant entrance spouting his normal psychobabble, He had rigged the place with weight sensitive bombs that would go off if one soul left the building before midnight, a week ago in preparation for this event, he managed to do so with his power to completely control the mind of anyone who stares into his eye, the other parts of his face where covered up. Yuki was prepared to kill him once and for all for all the crimes he's done. She snuck in a gun and pointed it at Null only for him to reveal the face of Tadayoshi. Null was an alternate being inside Tadayoshi that gave him his powers, once Tadayoshi began to go into depression, he slowly began to loose his body to Null, when he was killed by Luscious, Null took over the dead body like a parasite of sorts. He removed his robe to reveal a hole where Tadayoshi was stabbed, after more convincing, Yuki finally believed him and she couldn't shoot. However Tadayoshi managed to get in a few last words with his soul barely hanging onto his body, telling her to shoot, as it was not him she was shooting, it was a terrible person she was going to kill. However she had looked into Null's eye, and she began to fall victim to his power, but after much struggle between Null, Tadayoshi, and Yuki, she pulled the trigger, killing Null and Tadayoshi forever... [/spoiler] [spoiler=Murder City: Reincarnation] Tadayoshi Kurokawa and Yuki Minato where the best known detectives of Freeborn city. they were loved by all, stopping the famous church burning and capturing Luscious and his mob. Yuki's brother would eventually join the police force with Yuki to protect her while Tadayoshi would have fun with his underling, a private detective who's bark was as strict and mean as her bite. They all solved many crimes and even ended up face to face against a criminal master mind by the name of Kononichi. However upon a small invasion on Kononichi's island, A mysterious figure appeared that taunted Kononichi who went by the name of Null. Yuki tried to stop him before escaping and failed where Tadayoshi was later informed. Null's attacks on society did not go unnoticed, Yuki and Tadayoshi were up to their necks in work and investigation while Kononichi plotted and even almost captured Null on several occasions, however the mysterious Null consistently evaded their grasp like smoke. Null disappeared for a while which allowed Yuki and Tadayoshi to live their lives a bit, however after solving many more crimes, June rolled by and Kononichi's plans finally began to unfold, trapping Tadayoshi, Yuki, her brother Raito and Kai (Raito's friend), until Tadayoshi managed to escape and face off in a battle of wits and tactics against Kononichi. Both of them where at each other's throats, each of them countering the other's moves until in a brief moment, Tadayoshi killed Kononichi at the cost of his right arm, which broke. Things calmed down and December 4th, the Founder's Ball was a month away. Both Tadayoshi and Yuki began having strange flashes of memories they did not remember ever happening. A releasing of Luscious, a concussion, a fight, and Tadayoshi's own death. Lastly, Null, revealing himself to be Tadayoshi in front of Yuki. They couldn't make sense of their memories and Yuki confronted Null about it one night. He told her to come to the Founder's Ball and make sure that Tadayoshi wouldn't come. The 4th of December came and Yuki and locked Tadayoshi in a closet beforehand, following Null's instructions and headed for the ball without anyone else. However, once she reached it by coach, Tadayoshi managed to escape and find no coaches or taxi's anywhere. He could not run all that way in time, but he didn't know in time for what. He just knew something bad would happen. As the ball progressed, Yuki had more flashes, people dancing, bombs, and blood. Then Null made his entrance, revealing a strange device on his chest. He laughed as Yuki stood there and revealed his identity to be Tadayoshi. He explained that he comes from a different parallel universe where she killed him while he possessed Tadayoshi's body, but he used the last of Tadayoshi's energy and all the souls of Freeborn's criminals to travel to this universe and take over the body of the old chief, who went missing a while ago, and surgically morphed his face and hair to match Tadayoshi's. Yuki was scared and didn't believe him so she pointed a gun at him, however the thing strapped to his chest was a detonator, if he dies, the building blows sky high. Meanwhile it began to snow, hard, and Tadayoshi "borrowed" a horse to travel up to the ball. He gained memories, of everything.... and he knew what would happen. After Tadayoshi finally made it up to the ball, Null had already destroyed Yuki's mind with the information, psychological trauma on top of the one she already had, She didn't know what to do, and Null had looked into her eye and even began to posses her. However, thanks to Tadayoshi's influence, she could overcome it, but her gun pointed at Tadayoshi, as she was about to pull the trigger, Raito stopped her and managed to get in passed Null's line of view with some of the china that hit Yuki's hand and knocked the gun out of her hand. After saving Yuki while Raito and Kai distracted and battled Null, Tadayoshi instructed Yuki to get out of there with all the guests, She resisted at first, but then Raito forced her out while Tadayoshi, Raito, and Kai battled Null. once Yuki was far enough away, and explosion went off. the only known survivor was Tadayoshi, who barely made it out alive. After over a year of hospital treatments he was finally back to normal and Yuki and Tadayoshi left Freeborn to start their own PI detective agency together...[/spoiler][/spoiler] 20 years later... [spoiler=Plot] [spoiler=Detective Intro] dear detective, hello! I Am chief of police odo Mudo. it's a pleasure, i have Noticed much about yoUr work and i wouLd like to formaLly invite you to the Freeborn detectIve agency. your record is quite Notorious for someone of your being, you see.... freeborn's crime rate has increaseD recently and none of our current detectives can do anything about it! Most of thEm are stumped. I Need your assistance FoR wE cannot takE it anymore. the sheer aBundance Of cRimiNals is absUrdly uNnatural. you will be paiD wEll, so Remember our offer and reporT back as soon as you can. Hurry dEteCtive i don't know How yoU'll aRrive, but get here nether the less. CHief of police odo mudo[/spoiler] [spoiler=Criminal Intro] greetings... crIminAl scuM...Now i call yoU out. i know your secrets and your Lies. you wiLl pay For It dearly. Never again shall you walk the same once your secret is revealeD. My associatEs have found you quite INteresting. come to FREEBORN city, it shoUldN't be too Difficult to find, Even foR THosE like you in your... Circumstance. However, please note that if yoU fail to come to us, we will be Ready to Capture you. However if you decide to come, someone will meet you in the city limits with other criminals like you. signed, u. n. owen [/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler=How things work in freeborn] You are a criminal/detective that has been called to freeborn, all of you are out of town people and the knowledge above in the recap, some of you never heard of, others know of it by rumor, others know much of the story. However you are all to meet there and you will be given further instruction. Yet this will be no ordinary RP, you all must learn to work together in order to solve the biggest mystery yet, what happened to Freeborn... Who did it? and what... happened to you? But may I give you one warning before stepping into Freeborn.... Begin at the beginning and go on till you come to the end; then stop... Then retrace...[/spoiler] [spoiler=Apps] *= optional [spoiler=Detective] Username: Name: Alias:* Power:*(can be anything ANYTHING as long as it's not going to be a meta or god moding problem, Also no one can have the same powers, Telekinesis and Telepathy are taken. See RULES for more information). Weapon(s):* Age: 17 or older Appearance:(picture or AT LEAST 1 paragraph description) Personality: (AT LEAST 3 lines) Bio: (AT LEAST 5 lines) Crime you've solved: (Name of the crime, all details, who was involved etc. Basically why you were chosen to come to freeborn in the first place.) [/spoiler] [spoiler=Criminal] Username: Name: Alias:* Power:*(can be anything ANYTHING as long as it's not going to be a meta or god moding problem, Also no one can have the same powers, Telepathy and Raising the dead is taken. See RULES for more information). Age: 17 or older Appearance:(picture or AT LEAST 1 paragraph description) Personality: (AT LEAST 3 lines) Bio: (AT LEAST 5 lines) Crime you've commited: (Think of the best crime your character commited and write it down, who was involved EVERYTHING, prove why you were "invited" to Freeborn) [/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler=RULES][list] [*]All YCM rules apply [*]NO godmodding and NO metagaming is permited. This RP relies on secrets and discovery so metagaming and god modding would just ruin it. [*]Each person can only have a MAXIMUM of 2 characters. However, in order to keep spots open, not all 2nd apps will be accepted. [*]I am your host [*]Hotaru987 is your co-host [*]I am the equivalent to your god in making decision. [*]When I am not here, Hotaru987 shall be your god. [*]When Hotaru987 is not present we wait for one of us to return. [*]NO TWO CRIMINALS CAN HAVE THE SAME POWERS!!!! There is a list below of criminals powers taken. [*]NO TWO DETECTIVES CAN HAVE THE SAME POWERS!!!! there is a list below of detectives powers taken. [*]The Advanced clause is in full effect here. [*]If your character would loose a battle or if your character would be out-witted please do not pull a deux-ex-machina out of your hat, remember your characters is not always going to win ESPECIALLY in this RP. [*]Lastly, have fun [/list] [/spoiler] [spoiler=Powers Taken] [spoiler=Criminals] Telepathy - ??? Raising the Dead - ??? Yin/Yang(Light and Darkness) - Saransei Huriotia (Alias Known) Super Speed - Lenzer Groff (Gazelle) Pyrokenisis - [size=4][font=arial,helvetica,sans-serif]Stephanial Fredric Beauregard Copernicus Svennson Esquire XXXII (The Gentleman)[/font][/size] Leptokinesis - Minako Tsubasa (Rojo) Microwave Radiation - Black Rose[/spoiler] [spoiler=Detectives] Telepathy - ??? Telekinesis - ??? Cryomancy - ??? Counjering (Sub power: Phantom): Akio Chihara (Magus D., Illusionist Prince) Speaking to Spirits - Leon Estrali (Neol) Psychometry(Medium/Empathy) - Izna "Izzy" Rosario Emotion Transferral - Terra Marine Hypo-Hypnosis (Sub-power, Diplomacy) - Kurai Hatokime (Rai)[/spoiler] [/spoiler] [spoiler=IMPORTANT NPC'S] this list will be updated as the RP continues as not to cause spoilers [spoiler=Chief of Police Odo Mudo] A chief of Freeborn city that has invited many detectives to the city in order to help with the criminals[/spoiler] [spoiler=U. N. Owen] A mysterious man who has blackmailed MANY criminals into coming to Freeborn in order to do a job for his/her "operation" [/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler=Accepted Apps] [spoiler=Criminals] [spoiler=Black Rose] Username: Admiral_Stalfos19 Name: She is only ever called Black Rose, her full alias, or just Rose for short. Her [i]real[/i] name is unknown. Alias: Black Rose Power: Microwave Radiation (for details on how this works, you can [url="http://fringe.wikia.com/wiki/The_Cure"]click here[/url]. However, please not that it will be dramatically scaled down, to the point where it's actually survivable by all parties.) Age: 25 Appearance: [img]http://fc08.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2012/048/7/b/random_sketches2_by_aura_selene-d4q27d5.png[/img] ^centre one, minus the horns. Image credit goes to aura-selene Personality: Rose has no memory of the events she was responsible for prior to successfully committing A Combustible Matter. She doesn't even remember committing the crime itself. And it's all because the part of her brain that was responsible for her long term memories was sawn off when her power was activated. Also sawn off was the part of the brain that once housed her emotions, which explains why she comes off as heartless and cold and emotionless. In fact, not even when one expects her to be sad, frightened or angry does she [i]actually[/i] show any form of emotion. Despite being left with a badly decomposed three-quarters of a brain, Rose still has the intellect of a normal human being, and will still remind people of that if necessary. Bio: Black Rose grew up alone, as her father had died while her mother was still 3 months pregnant with her, and her mother died giving birth. It was a cold and torturous hell, but eventually she was found about 10 years later by a demolition crew that was about to tear the building that she'd been living in apart. However, Rose was still left to fend for herself in the streets, and this [i]certainly[/i] didn't alleviate her problems with her life being so damned miserable. It wasn't until she committed A Combustible Matter that she was paid attention to in any way, shape or form, but even then, she was hunted... and she was hated. Eventually, Rose ran away from the society, or rather [i]walked[/i] away, and ended up in Freeborn, where she would, with any luck, escape all this. After all, she had no memory of committing the crime in the first, so [i]surely[/i] she'd forget about her pursuers. Only time can tell if Rose will be home free... or if she'll suffer for it. Whatever the case, police remain adamant that she's still a threat to the human population. Crime Committed: [b]A Combustible Matter[/b] This is a fresh case, that Terra Marine has also assigned herself to solve, since she was there when it happened. There are no accurate details on it yet, as Terra had to rely on her own memory, and all evidence was officially declared contaminated and unusable. But she knew that there were 58 casualties, including herself, that had to be hospitalized from high radiation levels and blood pouring out of their eyes, 14 of those of which had died at the end of the day, and she knew that Black Rose's power was the cause of all this. Whether Rose was targeting [i]anyone[/i] at the time or her power went out of control in the wrong place at the wrong time was unknown. However, getting the answer from Rose [i]herself[/i] proved to be just as possible as acquiring blood from a stone. Terra wasn't there to interview Rose, but the two officers that [i]did[/i] interview her informed that she told them she "never committed such a vile act", and the lie detector didn't go off. They also noted that Rose had a steel plate on the left side of her face, with a hole where her eye used to be so one could see what [i]exactly[/i] was blown off the first time she used her power.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Minako Tsubasa (Rojo)] Username: Hotaru987 Name: Minako Tsubasa Alias: Rojo [spoiler=Power:] [b]Leptokinesis[/b], also called [i]Nanokinesis[/i] or [i]Atomic/Molecular/Matter Manipulation[/i] is the ability to mentally manipulate molecules and to manipulate objects/subjects on a molecular level. One with this ability could change the molecules of objects to turn them into different shapes, change the properties of objects and structures, to make them more pliable, elastic, round, short, large, small or the like. The user could even possibly separate his own molecules to become intangible and phase through subjects, or separate the molecules of other subjects to vaporize, dissolve or rearrange any object/subject that one desires. The user can also imitate super speed by speeding up their molecules to move even faster. However not for very long as they could generate too much heat and combust. On the flip side, they could speed up the molecules of another object to cause that object to catch fire. [/spoiler] Age: 19 [spoiler=Appearance:][img]http://i42.tinypic.com/eqe82a.jpg[/img][/spoiler] [spoiler=Personality:] Lina is a very disturbed person. In fact she's so disturbed that it would be more accurate to ask about her[b] personalities[/b]. Whenever she is left alone she will often talk to herself, completely ignoring everyone that is around her. She hates being confined in small rooms, or being tied down. [color=#4b0082]Lina is also a bit of a masochist, in that when it comes to pain she enjoys it, and would probably go as far as to get off on it. The people living in her head go by different names. The first being Lina, which is the personality that is normally in control. She is extremely paranoid, and always talks to herself. Lina is a complete outcast of society, but out of all of the others she is the least dangerous, as she breaks down and gives up easily under pressure and can't be trusted to handle big tasks.[/color] [color=#000080]Then you have Sena, the most manipulative of all of the personalities. She has no problems using other people as shields, or killing them as long as it means her protection. So Sena is pretty much all about survival for number one. She has no comrades, no friends and just herself. Sena is extremely cold, callous and meticulous when it comes to her kills, but even so she likes to get finished as quickly as possible as to not risk getting herself in a compromising position.[/color] [color=#ff0000]The most violent of them all is Rojo. Rojo is very sadistic and messy whenever she is killing someone. Rojo always leaves her victims looking unrecognizable, and while she is doing the killing she will wear a crazed grin the entire time. She likes to be recognized and seen, always spelling her name in the blood of her victims which is why she is the one that people refer too when they speak of Lina. Rojo doesn't care about following a plan, and will do anything she has too if it means her own sick enjoyment.[/color] [color=#ff0066]Kira is probably the most dangerous of them all. Even though she isn't quite as violent as Rojo, she is very deceptive. Her personality is cheerful, bubbly and almost childlike. Because of that people won't ever suspect her, and will let their guard down around her. She even acts like a child always looking to be praised, and getting rewards for a job well done. This truth is, however, is that Kira is just as bloodthirsty and crazed as the others. The only difference is that she is a functioning psychopath. So unless she wants others to know she can fool the other people into thinking she is just a normal person. While she's killing someone she will talk to them as if they were having a normal conversation, caressing them and speaking softly with a kind smile. She doesn't mind taking orders as long as she gets to have some fun.[/color] The final personality is Minako, which is the original personality. She normally stays out of the way allowing the others to take over, but when she is out it is clear to see where her other selves get their wickedness from. Minako is very cruel, and takes pleasure in torching others before dying. She is so deranged that she makes her other personalities appear tame. She also doesn't mind taking orders and, for the most part, can also mingle in a normal society. Minako is normally silent, and unlike Lina, she can quiet the others. Despite her obviously dominant personality she allows the others to to be seen. Only a few people have seen Minako and all of those people are dead. There are certain traits all of them have in common, and that is the fact that they are very possessive. If they actually find something that they like, they will kill anything and everything that may threaten their possession. They all have a fascination with the color red, and will kill anyone over 10 years old. It's more of a preference that they have than anything. They are also extremely smart, to the point of being a genius, and well as being able to play the piano. But it's not really a major accomplishment, as most people who are off in the head often have some amazing gift.[/spoiler] Bio: Minako was always a disturbed child, even from her younger days. She never made an attempt socialize with other kids. In fact if she ever did talk to other kids she was teasing and picking on them. As she got older she became even more anti-social, and her torture escalated to small animals. By the time she was 9, she was already killing random animals, and their bodies would be found in random people's yards. In addition to that her parents were very neglectful. The only time they would pay attention to her was when they were hitting her. Whenever they weren't hitting, or neglecting her they were fighting. So for the most part Minako was always alone. It never bother her, and she went along with her normal studies all the while feeding her sadistic desire on the side. During her high school days she grew more confident and began to blackmail the students there. She never actually harmed any of them physically, but only because she didn't want to bring any unnecessary attention to herself. However, the moment that she graduated she committed her first murder, and it was on her parents. [spoiler=Grace Way Massacre] It was the day right after her high school graduation. Her parents were home, fighting as per usual. And like always their violence turned to her, however this time Minako had, had enough. She found it to be very easy to kill her parents, and was entranced by the lush, red liquid flowing from their bodies. After that she became hooked, and you could say killing people became a drug for her. Wanting to feel more of this euphoric feeling, she went to her neighbor's house and killed them as well. It was on that night that her mind split into 5 different entities. By the time she was finished she had murdered 6 different families and disappeared never to be seen again. However before she left Rojo had made her first appearance, having spelled out her name in a beautiful signature on the walls of the houses she visited that night.[/spoiler] [/spoiler] [spoiler=Lezner Groff (Gazelle)] [color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][b]Username:[/b] Ongaku Matsuri[/size][/font][/color] [color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][b]Name:[/b] Lezner (Lez) Groff[/size][/font][/color] [color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][b]Alias:[/b] Gazelle[/size][/font][/color] [color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][b]Power:[/b] Super speed, also has the ability to run up walls with enough speed. While at full speed, stopping requires wide, open space. Otherwise, he might run into something or trip.[/size][/font][/color] [color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][b]Age:[/b] 22[/size][/font][/color] [b][color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3]Appearance:[/size][/font][/color][/b] [color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][img]http://th05.deviantart.net/fs31/300W/i/2008/230/3/e/Jeb_by_fuchsiart.jpg[/img][/size][/font][/color] [font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][color=#5a5a5a][size=3][b]Personality:[/b] Quick and witty, Lezner was always the kind of guy to get stuff done fast. With this trait, some of his work goes unchecked, which did not help him in his most recent job performance. Whenever he is up against something easy, he doesn't get very serious. But when a challenge meets him, he takes delight in it and, while still not getting quite serious, he develops a strategy and executes in attempts to not get caught. He tends to get half-assed and snarky to himself and he does not play well with others, which prompts him to get revenge on whoever gets in his way.[/size][/color][/font] [color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][b]Bio:[/b] Lezner was always a trouble maker. During his youth (before he discovered his power) he would pick pocket passing strangers, steal from grocery/convenience stores, and even break into banks. As a destructive child, he has always made it difficult for his parents to raise him. At one point, his trouble making had gone so far as to cost the life of his own paternal grandparents, resulting in his own court session against the state and some time in jail. However, after he discovered his power, he noticed a hole in the ceiling and used the momentum of his own speed to grab hold of the edge, and he escaped. Ever since, he has been hunted down by the government, but with his power, it proved to be difficult for them. Lezner enjoyed his status of outlaw as he fled the state and found his way into Freeborn City to mark his game territory.[/size][/font][/color] [color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][b]Crime you've commited:[/b] Lezner is most notorious for escaping prison after killing his own grandparents, but his most recent big crime was robbing a nearby convenience store and setting it on fire. He received a curious phone call soon after, being informed of Freeborn City and how he can be of use there, but he found little interest in a simple city. Nonetheless, his curiosity made him catch the next flight there and see what it had to offer him.[/size][/font][/color] [color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][/spoiler][/size][/font][/color] [font=Calibri][size=3][color=#000000][spoiler=Saranesi Hurotia, Alias Known]Username: Summer Rain Name: Saranesi Hurotia Alias: Alias Known Power: Alias has a power that can relate to the forces of yin yang, opposite forces working in harmony. In this case, she is the harmony.[/color][/size][/font] [font=Calibri][size=3][color=#000000]With her right hand, she controls the power of shadows, able to contort them into semi-solid objects, and well and turning herself into a shadow and melting away from danger. However, sometimes parts of her flicker in and out when she’s a shadow.[/color][/size][/font] [font=Calibri][size=3][color=#000000]On the left hand, she has powers of light, able to blind opponents with sudden and violent flashes of light. She often uses it as a getaway plan. However, too many bursts of light can injure her right hand. Age: 17 Appearance: Alias is small. Really small. In a crowd of many people, it is impossible to see her in height, or even by any other means. Her skin is an odd mix of tan and pale, with blotches of the varying shades everywhere. This is actually a symbol of powers, and the blotches randomly shift everywhere. Her hair is and slightly odd mix of blonde and black, with her long fringe being mostly blonde and the short rest of her hair being black. Her eyes are blue and brown, the left being brown and the right being blue.[/color][/size][/font] [font=Calibri][size=3][color=#000000]Her outfit is more often than not a normal shirt and jeans with a hoodie. The color of her outfit depends entirely on her intended mission, ranging from red for murder that is bloody to black for an assassination mission involving sniper rifles. For more secretive missions that need the utmost concealment she opts for a black all over body suit with a black matching mask. The footwear is usually sneakers. She never really cares.[/color][/size][/font] [font=Calibri][size=3][color=#000000]Personality: Alias is, contrary to what others might think, really kind and cheerful. She smiles a lot, helps others when she’s not on a mission, gives large tips in cafes, everything that contradicts what a normal criminal might stand for. It is not, however, an act. She is being genuinely kind, and sometimes it pains her to kill others in the name of what she does.[/color][/size][/font] [font=Calibri][size=3][color=#000000]She is somewhat oblivious at times, seeming to drift off into a cheerful, shining world in her mind. In reality, she’s drifting into plans for the missions she has been assigned, or concocting new techniques to help her in future ventures into criminal society.[/color][/size][/font] [font=Calibri][size=3][color=#000000]Bio: Saranesi Hurotia was born and raised in England to a simple and loving family. She was an only child, and adored the attention she received from her parents. In fact, for most of her life, everything was perfect and happy. The sort of life explained in fairytales. But all fun and games had to end at some point, and it did when Saranesi was thirteen.[/color][/size][/font] [font=Calibri][size=3][color=#000000]Her father, the glue that held her family together with his smiles and corny jokes, was murdered brutally because a joke of his was taken in completely the wrong way. Her mother later committed suicide, but in a different way than most would.[/color][/size][/font] [font=Calibri][size=3][color=#000000]She got Saranesi to pull the trigger.[/color][/size][/font] [font=Calibri][size=3][color=#000000]The plan was for the mother to be sent to the same place as the father, then for Saranesi to work off the sin she’d committed by murdering her mother.[/color][/size][/font] [font=Calibri][size=3][color=#000000]She ran from her home, and encountered the criminal underground. She began to do small tasks for them – pick pocket here, robs someone there – under the mistaken influence that it would clear her name of her sin. The jobs got bigger and bigger, but Saranesi never looked back. She merely thought of meeting her parents again one day, with a clear name. [spoiler=Crime you've committed: ][/color][/size][/font] [font=Calibri][size=3][color=#000000]Loaded[/color][/size][/font] [font=Calibri][size=3][color=#000000]Her mission, codenamed as Loaded, was one of her more recent tasks set by the criminal underground. Her task was to rob one of the richest men in Europe of his priceless collection of diamonds. The task was made more difficult by the fact it was in a large locked chest with ten locks and was guarded by twenty heavily armed men with permission to shoot/threaten any person who came within metres of the chest. They even had a quadrant on standby should a group of criminals try to hijack the chest and its contents.[/color][/size][/font] [font=Calibri][size=3][color=#000000]Alias, with her short stature, had her plan perfectly concocted.[/color][/size][/font] [font=Calibri][size=3][color=#000000]She wandered over to the guards and distracted them with a nice, cheerful conversation fit for a child half her age. The guards, at that moment having a rest, were caught completely off guard by the disarming sweetness. In actuality, Alias was having an actual happy conversation, while also slipping in questions about the chest, its contents and who was guarding it. Not realizing it, the guards were telling her everything she would need to know to rob the chest.[/color][/size][/font] [font=Calibri][size=3][color=#000000]As the priceless diamonds continued on their way to its destination, Alias turned into a shadowy form and stole the ten required keys to unlock the chest. Stepping away, she blinded the guards – and subsequently everyone in the area – with a bright flash of light. While they stumbled in confusion she stole forward, unlocked the chest and hauled out several smaller boxes of diamonds, which she shoved in a bag. Grabbing all she could carry, she slipped away.[/color][/size][/font] [font=Calibri][size=3][color=#000000]Her mission raked in approximately £28430500.[/spoiler][/spoiler][/color][/size][/font] [color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][spoiler=Stephanial Fredric Beauregard Copernicus Svennson Esquire XXXII (The Gentleman)][/size][/font][/color] [color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma,helvetica,arial,sans-serif][size=3]Username: -Zecora-[/size][/font][/color] [color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3]Name: Stephanial Fredric [/size][/font][/color][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][color=#5a5a5a][size=3]Beaurega[/size][/color][/font]rd Copernicus[font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][color=#5a5a5a][size=3] Svennson Esquire XXXII[/size][/color][/font] [color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3]Alias: The Gentleman[/size][/font][/color] [color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3]Power: Pyrokenisis[/size][/font][/color] [color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3]Age: 22[/size][/font][/color] [color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3]Appearance: [Spoiler=[/size][/font][/color][color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3]Stephanial Fredric [/size][/font][/color][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][color=#5a5a5a][size=3]Beaurega[/size][/color][/font]rd Copernicus[font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][color=#5a5a5a][size=3] Svennson Esquire XXXII][/size][/color][/font] [img]http://www.deviantart.com/download/105378861/Trilby__the_Gentleman_thief_by_Crispy_Gypsy.jpg[/img][/spoiler] [font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][color=#5a5a5a][size=3]Personality: Steven thinks himself by no means malevolent. Nor does he see his actions as justified by some sob story, as he has none. Rather he does what he does because it amuses him, and that, over anything else, drives his actions in life. He considers himself more important than most others, though not in an arrogant way, but rather in the sense that his priorities come before anyone else's. He will generally refuse to do anything that doesn't get him anything in return, whether it be money, material items, or just plain pleasure. Whenever he commits crimes, however, he likes to be as kind as possible to his victims. That is to say, after breaking into somebodies house and stealing all their valuables, he may leave a rose and an apology card. However, he will almost only ever target someone who can afford to lose what it is he's stealing.[/size][/color][/font] [color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3]Bio: [/size][/font][/color][color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3]Stephanial Fredric [/size][/font][/color][color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3]Beauregard Copernicus [/size][/font][/color][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][color=#5a5a5a][size=3]Svennson Esquire XXXII was born under the name Steven Fredricson, into a fairly wealthy family in England. He lived a wonderful childhood. So long as he behaved, he would get what he wanted, he had an excellent education, on account of all the money that went into his studies. He had a fairly good social life, as well. As he grew older, he occasionally got bored with all his spare time, and decided to go into a hobby; Thievery. It started out as just small acts, nothing serious, nothing anyone would even noticed. But as he grew even older, and as he moved out from his parent's roof, his crimes escalated. He would find some of the richest people, and steal their possessions, then sell them on the Black Market, all whilst leaving a calling card with his Alias to kindly inform victims of whom they've been robbed by. He would commonly spend his newly gained riches on rather flashy pieces of furniture or jewelry, even if it would advertise even further who he was, he liked to give send out the challenge.[/size][/color][/font] [font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][color=#5a5a5a][size=3]Crime you've committed: Steven's most recent huge crime was a massive heist of the National Gallery in London. Late late at night, using his Pyrokenisis, he would light a flame on the end of his index finger, and burn a hole in the wall to enter through, using the same technique to take anything of guard. Naturally, he was caught before he could sell everything he stole, but any and all flammable pieces were never recovered, as he lit them up in a bit of spite. Soon after, he escaped from his prison in much the same way he entered the National Gallery.[/spoiler][/size][/color][/font][/spoiler] [spoiler=Detectives] [spoiler=Akio Chihara (Magus D., Illusionist Prince)] Username: Corona Ray Name: Akio Chihara Alias: Magus D., Illusionist Prince Power: Kijutsuna (Conjurer) Essentially, this ability allows the transferring of an object or person across multidimensional planes from place to place. Materializing, dematerializing, that sort of thing. There are limits to the size of the object he can affect with his ability though; something perhaps around the size of a large vending machine would be his limit. Akio also cannot transport more than five objects at a time, and even then, it takes a lot of effort. Trying to break these limits will result in the object(s) being trapped in another plane, leaving it unable to be retrieved. Akio must be in the direct vicinity of the object in question in order to dematerialize it. From then on, he can access it through a unique wormhole at any time. Genei (Phantom): Only usable when Mizuki is active, this does exactly as the name implies: it creates illusions. The size and complexity all fluctuate according to Mizuki, but are most effective when he’s at full strength. These illusions cannot cause actual harm, but they can trick another’s brain into believing damage was done and so cause them to feel pain. Weapon: Keeps around a set of knives, but more often than not uses a custom handgun Age: 17 [spoiler=Appearance][img]http://25.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_lzgdqqMLsI1qhf7s4o1_500.jpg[/img] Because he appears a few years younger than he really is, oftentimes people find it somewhat difficult to take him seriously. Akio doesn’t mind much though, as he prefers that people underestimate him so they let down their guard. [/spoiler] Personality: Akio believes that he shouldn’t change who he is for anyone else’s sake, and often acts with less maturity than someone of his age ought to have. He also displays a casual, happy-go-lucky attitude even when he ought to be serious, which frustrates a lot of people. Even so, despite his outer naïveté, he’s a lot more thoughtful on the inside than he’d like to reveal. At seemingly random times, his entire personality will do a 360, and Akio gains a creepier aura to him. He also becomes somewhat sadistic and loses much of the former cheerfulness he had. In this state, it is not actually Akio who is doing this, but Mizuki, a supposed “twin” who dwells within the mind of Akio and emerges whenever he sees fit. As a result of no one knowing this fact, many are often confused by why he does such drastic changes and believe him to be bipolar. Bio: Akio grew up in a moderately wealthy family. His father worked in a bank, while his mother was part of some technological company. For the most part, Akio was an obedient child and his parents were fine with leaving him alone at times, since he always followed their directions of what not to do. He also had his older brother to take care of him, so it worked out fine. Then, when Akio reached the age of eleven, Mizuki emerged. The details of the event were never clear to Akio himself, but from what he could gather of its aftermath (as well as the few details Mizuki revealed) Mizuki had apparently arranged a private meeting with another student that had recently been giving Akio a hard time. Mizuki had then created an illusion of a gun and shot himself with it, to seemingly no effect. He then turned the gun on the other student and slowly put it to his head while his finger ever so gradually inched toward the trigger. By the time this ordeal was near over, the boy was in near hysterics and when Mizuki actually fired…well, you can imagine. The terrorized student had no recollection of the incident, strangely enough, and so Akio is the only one who knows of the truth behind this. Ever since Akio was young, he’d always been a fervent admirer of people who fought for justice. It may have come about as a result of watching too much anime, but his parents encouraged him to do what he wanted to do in life. And so, after an incredible stroke of luck with solving the case Rampant Blade, Akio became a detective. Crime solved:[spoiler= Rampant Blade] A highly skilled assassin was at large, killing off a group of seemingly random targets. Every single victim died with a knife directly through a major artery. When Akio heard about this case through a person he knew in the police force, he asked for the files pertaining to the previous five victims. After reading through them, he saw that they had all once been part of the same company, and all within the same branch as well. Paranoid company boss killing off former employees in order to keep trade secrets intact? That wasn’t the main point, though; getting the assassin was. In an incredible stroke of luck, Akio happened to be at the scene when another person was killed. The assassin hadn’t bothered with any sort of fancy getup or concealment because the police were never around in time to catch him before the hit and run was over. Not this time, though. With a handgun he “borrowed” from the police that morning, Akio shot the man, downing him. He then pinned him down and using Mizuki’s illusions, kept him cuffed there until the cops came about. After that point, Akio aided in the interrogation for a while, but the guy wouldn’t talk. In a last-ditch attempt, Mizuki took over and used the terrorizing tactic. With Mizuki’s sadistic imagination, it wasn’t long before the assassin told all he could. Several other arrests later, the case was over and Akio’s role in it landed him his job as a detective. [/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler=Kurai Hatokime (Rai)] Username: The Swift Assaulter Name: Kurai Hatokime Alias: Rai Power:[spoiler=Powers][list=1] [*][b]Hypo-Hypnosis[/b]: This is a weaker form of the average form of Hypnosis as it is meant as a means of getting the truth of one specific topic that also a main focus. It's basically self-explanatory when it comes to this power, other than the time it takes to hypnotize someone takes longer than usual. Now for side effects, it usually revolves around the slight tightening of muscles in his lower back, arms or legs. There could also be some signs of blurred vision every now and then, but that alone can be rare. Either way, it's what Rai uses first, and if it fails, he uses his second power as a Plan B. [*][b]Diplomacy[/b]: By merely using both his index and middle fingers from either hand and touching someone's forehead, Rai can temporarily neutralize someone's brain waves from eye contact for about 3 minutes in order to make it easier to get the truth. However, it has it's set backs. Firstly, this could easily lead to giving him slight migraines for short periods of time that slow him down. Second, if he tries to do his other power after doing Diplomacy, the set back of that unnamed power may slightly increase from being temporarily blinded to being partially paralyzed in different parts of the body, along with some muscle spasms if he's lucky. He might also be seen with either one of his hands trembling (Be it the opposite hand of the one he used Diplomacy for). [/list] [/spoiler]Weapon(s): .44 Magnum w/ 2 magazines in total, along with a katana similar to this:[spoiler=Katana (Ignore the man in the pic)][img]http://www.swordsswords.com/ProductImages/s/Last_Samurai_Sword_2.jpg[/img][/spoiler]Age: 20 Appearance:[spoiler=Appearance][img]http://th07.deviantart.net/fs70/PRE/i/2010/265/e/3/male_detective_by_hyozanryu08-d2z8j6m.jpg[/img][/spoiler]Personality: Although silent at certain times, Rai has a gentle and compassionate heart. He always has that smile that always seems to lighten the mood when it came to serious situations that needed to be toned down. He always is the one you could go to for help or to have comfort you when in a very bad situation. However, he can be serious at times, especially when he is just about to find the solution to the case. He is usually the one who would want to kill somebody, but would have the will to break the urge and spare their life, allowing that person to be arrested. However, if he is given the go-ahead and his will to break the urge is weak, he will do the killing blow no problem. Sometimes that will can break completely, and he becomes cold and dark, wanting only to find and kill the culprit. And when it comes to his powers, that can make his job so much easier than it is believed to be. Bio: Rai was born in a poor family. He barely knew his parents because they were supposedly murdered, as it was said by the detectives of Kyoto. He was orphaned at the age of 3 and had very little memories of his parents, other than one memory in which is a complete blur, something that he wishes he knew how to make it clear. At age 10, while still being in an orphanage, had believed that sometime during that year he would get adopted. And weirdly enough, he did. He was adopted by a former Kyoto detective, named Kuro Hatokime. He was in his 50s and had retired early, since he knew he couldn't have been able to keep up with the new crimes going on every day. That's where Rai got his real name from. His real name, Kurai Hatokime, is the same name as Kuro's grandson who had died 5 years ago. And over the next 8 years, Kuro taught Rai how to be a successful detective in Japan. When the time came (Which was when he was almost 19), he decided to join a detective agency, the same agency in which Kuro retired from. It was then during his first case he discovered his Hypo-Hypnosis power. At first, it didn't help that well, only at certain moments did it work, until his Diplomacy power finally kicked in. This actually helped solve a few cases with ease after he got all the Intel needed for them. Rai was a natural, and eventually, his nickname finally kicked in and that's what everybody had called him by from that point on. Then, when his third case came in, something inside him had some familiarity involved with it. It was a cold case from 16 years ago (Rai was 19 at the time). In one way or another, he actually found out that he might have lost his parents because they were either murdered or committed suicide. He believed the former was true since he would knew his parents wouldn't do that and leave his only child behind. And because of one piece of evidence, he found the one location that they could search in order to find the killer. 3 days later, he was caught and brought to justice. Why he did it, they'll never know, since the killer remained silent throughout everything, including his interrogation and sentencing, which was life in prison for second-degree murder. Rai became 20 the day before the killer was sentenced, and around that same time, mainly after the sentencing, he received a letter giving him a chance to solve cases in another city. After learning a few languages, including English, he accepted the invitation and took the next flight out the next day and prepared to solve a new case, one that could easily be the biggest he has done so far. But he had this feeling. As if someone from his past was going to come back and haunt him. Staying on his toes, Rai sets out for a new adventure. Crime you've solved:[spoiler=The Next Door Killer]This is a cold case that started when Rai was 3. He was the only victim, but never had any memory of what happened, so his chances of finding the killer seemed very slim. When Rai's original relatives (Uncles, Aunts, cousins, family friends, etc.) were interrogated, they didn't know anything, except for one. Rai was fairly suspicious about one family friend of his parents: Makuta Jinpai. Somehow, he knew that he wasn't telling the truth entirely. When he used his Hypo-Hypnosis power on him, he was fairly close to getting something. So he switched it up. And when he put his Diplomacy powers to the test, he broke and gave away enough information to lead to an object that belongs to someone around the time of the murder even to this day. When Makuta told Rai about a license plate and its number, he matched it to a car and a house. After obtaining the address of said house, Rai got a match with a house that was next door to where the crime scene took place. When Rai interrogated Makuta again, he gave Rai a name. Rin Hikaru. Then they checked who is currently living at that house at the moment, and the name was a match. When Rai and the rest of his team went to arrest Hikaru, he wasn't anywhere to be seen. And then, he came from behind and almost shot down an officer. Rai had him at gun point. The last thing that Rai ever heard from his before he was taken down and arrested was, "I should've killed you back then, Kibuto." Kibuto was his name before being adopted by Kuro. A week later, he was brought to court and convicted of second-degree murder. Because so, his maximum sentence would have been death. But they just went with life in a maximum security prison. Rai felt as though he had finally avenged his parents and finally faced his past, so that he can now live peacefully in the future. And that's around the same time he got the mysterious letter. Pray things turn out better in Freeborn City than Kyoto.[/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler=Izna "Izzy" Rosario] Username: Hotaru987 Name: Izna "Izzy" Rosario Alias:* [spoiler=Power:] Psychometry - Also known as token-object reading, is the act of seeing the history of an object through touch. It's done by connecting to the emotions and energy that is surrounding that object. It can even be done to other people, in which she will see the past of that person, but only if that person is thinking about it at the time of contact and the memory has strong emotions attached to it. After using this power she has the tendency to faint, collapse or become physically and emotionally drained. Izzy has to always be consciously aware of herself as to not use this ability accidentally. In order to lessen the wrist she is always wearing black gloves. Medium - This was more of a side effect of the psychometry ability. If an object has an extremely strong emotion attached to it, and an event happens that is similar to the event that happened to attach that residual energy to it, then she could channel that person's spirit through her body. She could also have spirits of the dead speak through her, but she cannot talk directly to the spirits. It's the same side effects as her Psychometry, but to a stronger degree. She may also behave differently until the residual effects wear off. Empathy - Another side effect ability thanks to her primary power. This ability she cannot turn on or off, so she is always being bombarded by different emotions. She can however block the stimuli of emotions with music. Sometimes she may act upon it, but it is never intentional. So even though the situation may be a happy one, she may show anger or sadness because of some other person. [/spoiler] Weapon(s): 1 Pistol Age: 19 [spoiler=Appearance:][img]http://i39.tinypic.com/oa6ph1.jpg[/img][/spoiler] Personality: Izzy is a rather rebellious late teen, who says and does what she think is right. Because of that she doesn't have many friends, but she doesn't care. In fact she think it's better to be alone, because of her powers. Another reason why she would rather be alone is because of her Empathy ability. It's not something she can turn off, so usually her own emotions are influenced by the people around her. That makes her seem emotionally unstable which causes more people to think she is strange. Izzy is also smart, extremely smart. Though she isn't considered a genius, she already holds two degrees and can speak 3 languages. Even so, she is considerably naive when it comes to relations with the opposite sex. Another side effect of her powers, is that she has become an insomniac. At the most she may get 2 hours of collective sleep per week. The reason is because she suffered from severe night terrors, most of them having to do with past cases she's solved. It's because of everything that she's seen that she doesn't believe in a g-d, but contradictory to that she does believe that there is a higher power that is regulating everything. [spoiler=Bio:] Izzy was born to a very low class family, who had to work to their bones just so they could live paycheck to paycheck. It's because of that she didn't have everything that other kids her age had. She was very understanding of their situation, and never asked for anything. She was always given hand-me-down things, but even then she never did complain. Izzy felt that the least she could do for her parents was be a good child. They already had a lot of other things to worry about. When it was time for her to go to school, she went to the cheapest school in the area since her parents couldn't afford much. Izzy was 6 years old when her powers began to manifest. When she told her parents about the weird things happening to her, instead of thinking her a freak like some people would have done, they stood by her. However, they told her that it would be best if she kept her strange abilities to herself, which she did. During her school days she worked her ass off. Even in her earliest memory of going to school she always did her best. She stayed out of trouble, and made sure to excel in everything she did. During middle school, she went out for as many sports as possible hoping to get scholarships for anything she possibly could. Izzy's GPA by then stayed at a constant 4.0. Izzy even managed to get ahead, and was already in college by the time she was 15, an impressive feat for anyone. Now ever since she was young she had always liked police officers, and detective kind of stuff. She also knew that there was quite a bit of money in that line of work, and she wanted to make her parents life a lot easier than it was. So with that she set her sights on becoming a detective, going to school for 2 years without breaks - other than holidays - and by the time she was 16 years she acquired her first degree in criminal justice, and was going for her second in Law. Now a detective, she sends most of her money to her parents, who now live in a nice house and don't have to work as much as they once did. It was around the time she turned 19 when she got the letter from the Freeborn Detective agency to be a part of their special division of detectives.[/spoiler] Crime you've solved: The Lost Boy: This was one of the first cases that Izzy had ever worked on. It was a highly popular case, in saying that it was all over the news. There wasn't a single person who hadn't heard of this lost boy. He was kidnapped by an unknown man. Though she was still relatively new to the detective force, they had pretty much everyone working on that case. Everyone thought it was a lost cause, until they suddenly found a teddy bear that was reported to be with the boy upon his abduction. Now mind you it was already a week into the case, and up until that there hadn't been any other leads on the boy. So you can imagine all of the press that small little teddy bear received. Even so, a lot of people had already lost hope on finding the boy alive. Now Izzy hadn't told anyone of her ability, but she knew that if she could get a hold of that bear then she could probably find that boy, depending on how long the bear had been with him through the whole ordeal. Izzy then made the decision to tell the boss about her ability. With that she took the bear and with her ability she was able to lead the entire team right to where the boy was. The boss kept her ability out of the papers, but he did make sure that the credit for finding the boy went to Izzy.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Terra Marine] Username: Admiral_Stalfos19 Name: Terra Marine Alias: Dread Lock Power: Emotion Transferral Weapons: A couple of Sawn-Off Shotguns, which she keeps concealed. Age: 17 [spoiler=Appearance:][img]http://th07.deviantart.net/fs70/PRE/i/2012/043/7/3/why_____by_urbanno-d4pi5an.png[/img] ^image credit goes to Urbanno[/spoiler] Personality: Terra tries to be a tough girl, but in reality she's rather unstable with her emotions, and goes through them as quickly as one can flip pages in a book. She can easily go from happy in moment, to sad the next, then angry a third moment and fearful a fourth, just as an example. However, if there's a single feeling that Terra would ever stick with for [i]any[/i] length of time, it would be guilt for her mother's death, in which she remains adamant is her own damn fault. Terra also has a bad habit of holding onto grudges, especially against herself. Unfortunately, with her being so young, [i]on top of[/i] only discovering her power recently, Terra has vast difficulties controlling the power, and will often activate it by mistake... sometimes with disastrous consequences to boot. Bio: Once upon a time, Terra Marine used to be easy to parent; even more so than any of her other siblings. That was until puberty hit her at the age of 12, which would've been reasonably late for a girl. But she was going through puberty so quickly that she was fully developed by the time her 14th birthday came around. It was then that her emotions started going haywire, and it was because of [i]that[/i] that she suddenly changed from the easiest sibling to parent to the most difficult. A couple years later, Terra discovered she was capable of transferring her emotions, but that proved more of a curse than a blessing. The first time she discovered it, she was crying over a boyfriend she had cheating on another girl, and was seriously thinking about killing herself. At that time, her mother was driving her home when all of a sudden, she stopped the car, and mindlessly got out and jumped off the bridge they were driving on. Terra tried to jump after her, but was stopped by a policewoman who she ended up angrily berating for getting in her way. From that day forth, she literally became a walking mass of barely organized chaos, but her powers were [i]finally[/i] put to good use when she solved Dead Eye's Glance, a case that had every law enforcement officer on his or her nerves. Now though, a chance to start over in Freeborn awaits her. Crime Solved: [b]Dead Eye's Glance[/b] A military-trained sniper was on the loose, murdering a number of civilians without leaving any forensic evidence behind. In truth, there wasn't even a body to be found or any traces of blood. Ergo, the victims were merely reported as missing persons that were never found. In the end, law enforcement officers threw in the towel, and the case was never solved until 20 years later, when Terra came into the picture. She wasn't signed into the case, and she wasn't even a [i]detective[/i] at the time she decided to investigate. Terra only wanted to know if one of the victims "went missing" because of her emotion transferral powers. After a scouring of the entire city, Terra noted a blood-stained tarpaulin laid out flat in a back alley and proceeded to take a sample, unaware that tarpaulin was a trap laid out by the sniper. Suddenly, whilst she was taking photos of the scene laid in front of eyes, the sniper opened fire, only to knock the phone she was using to take the pictures with out of her hand, which had been shot by the bullet. Terra took the sample and ran for it, but the two of them had somehow met up in the same place later that morning. Terra was feeling guilty that her powers were responsible for her mother's death, and that guilt had suddenly transferred to the sniper, who later confessed his murders to the police. He's now sentenced in Death Row.[/spoiler] [/spoiler] RESERVED: Heart of the Swarm TitanKing [/spoiler] [spoiler=My Apps] [spoiler=Leon Estrali] Username: MortalKombatSmoke Name: Leon Estrali Alias: Neol Power: Speak to spirits, he can contact spirits from the otherworld for help and advice, but he must be in a meditative state. [spoiler=Weapon(s):] dual Small Swords [img]http://www.trueswords.com/images/prod/c/TS-TCS88SMS_540.jpg[/img][/spoiler] Age: 21 [spoiler=Appearance:] [img]http://quizilla.teennick.com/user_images/D/DA/DAR/DarkAngelAlchemist13/1199186522_otAnimeGuy.jpg[/img][/spoiler] Personality: Leon is very intense, not on purpose but he can get really creapy real fast. He looks like a smooth talker and a smart one, however he can go a bit too far sometimes. Leon is ambitious and can be narrow midned, but once he's in his meditative state he can begin to put the pieces of the puzzle together. There hasn't been one criminal that escaped his grasp once he puts his mind to it and that's how he likes it. He is also very religious and will do anything for his faith. Bio: Leon was born in Spain and raised in a chaotic household. His mother was insane, literally, she was in a mental hospital for attempting accidental suicide, claiming she could fly. His father was the nastiest person after Leon's mother left, he became a violent drunkard, however Leon's older brother, Fransisco, protected him, as he could overpower their father. However, one night his father had enough and smothered Fransisco in his sleep. Leon panicked when he saw what was happening, he closed his eyes and locked himself in his room, trying to forget what he just saw... He was a mere 10 year old boy who didn't know what to do. Suddenly someone spoke to him, a voice that said, Run. It said it agian, Run, it repeatidly told him to run until, he opened his eyes, a gun was in his hand... and His father was dead on the floor. Then the voice screamed at him, RUN!!!! He ran with fear out the door until a preist caught him. He lived with him and some monks at a church until he began solving crimes on the side. He would now bring his religous detective skills to Freeborn in order to fufli what he believes is his destiny. [spoiler=Crime you've solved:] The Bolivian Necktie. It was Leon's first official case outside of Spain, he had visited South America on an invite from an old "family" friend who would send him money from time to time as a kid to help him support himself while living with the priest. Leon was brought there to see if he could solve this problem, or mystery. Deep within Bolivia, the leader of a large cult called the "Anti-Alcohol Bolivian Front" or the AABF, had commmited suicide, or was murdered. No one knew. It was impossible to tell. The man, Patrik DelForge, was found in his room with nothing on but a necktie and some stretch marks on his neck, indicating that the necktie chocked him to death. At first it was assumed he was chocking himself for sexual pleasure, but there was no sign that he was masturbating at the time. So Leon first examined the body, to discover a small indentation on his neck that was not like the others, it was more like a needle than a gouge like the other marks where. After more research, Mr. DelForge was sedated at the time, so he was murdered. Then, after contacting the spirits of the afterlife, they guided him to some apartment in the city near where the incident occured. Leon discovered that three people had moved out in the past few days, after investigating each and every one he discovered that two of them would have easy access to a injectible sedative. After more research he learned that one of them worked under DelForge in the AABF but as a radical amongst the group. He dind't want Alcohol gone in Bolivia, so, he broke into his apratment, helped him prepare for his speech later that day, and pulled the necktie tight, cutting off air before sedating him and stabbing his throat several times. He left as quickly as he came, no witnesses where around.[/spoiler][/spoiler] [/spoiler] [spoiler=Sound Track so far] [url="http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bMM-zBBWecs&feature=related"]1. Opening[/url] [url=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6LkDDHglrrI]2. Oncoming Knowledge[/url] [url=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Nb5KDbuK4PY]3. Awakening[/url][/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrystalCyae Posted February 11, 2012 Report Share Posted February 11, 2012 Interesting. Don't get a chance at Murder/Detective stories much. BTW, nice codes. Me like Imma go make app quick sticks so I don't miss a chance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thar Posted February 11, 2012 Report Share Posted February 11, 2012 Quick reserve. I remember making something similar, like GTA based, but it got shut down from assumption of it being too mature for the young audience on the forum. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kōsuke Ueki Posted February 11, 2012 Report Share Posted February 11, 2012 A murder mystery with powers? Talk about a good mix. I'll be reserving a detective. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrystalCyae Posted February 11, 2012 Report Share Posted February 11, 2012 [sub]I made my application, hopefully it's up to standard.[/sub] [sub]I did research to find approx how much her best crime raked in.[/sub] [font="Calibri"][size="3"][color="#000000"][spoiler=Saranesi Hurotia, Alias Known]Username: Summer Rain Name: Saranesi Hurotia Alias: Alias Known Power: Alias has a power that can relate to the forces of yin yang, opposite forces working in harmony. In this case, she is the harmony.[/color][/size][/font] [font="Calibri"][size="3"][color="#000000"]With her right hand, she controls the power of shadows, able to contort them into semi-solid objects, and well and turning herself into a shadow and melting away from danger. However, sometimes parts of her flicker in and out when she’s a shadow.[/color][/size][/font] [font="Calibri"][size="3"][color="#000000"]On the left hand, she has powers of light, able to blind opponents with sudden and violent flashes of light. She often uses it as a getaway plan. However, too many bursts of light can injure her right hand. Age: 17 Appearance: Alias is small. Really small. In a crowd of many people, it is impossible to see her in height, or even by any other means. Her skin is an odd mix of tan and pale, with blotches of the varying shades everywhere. This is actually a symbol of powers, and the blotches randomly shift everywhere. Her hair is and slightly odd mix of blonde and black, with her long fringe being mostly blonde and the short rest of her hair being black. Her eyes are blue and brown, the left being brown and the right being blue.[/color][/size][/font] [font="Calibri"][size="3"][color="#000000"]Her outfit is more often than not a normal shirt and jeans with a hoodie. The color of her outfit depends entirely on her intended mission, ranging from red for murder that is bloody to black for an assassination mission involving sniper rifles. For more secretive missions that need the utmost concealment she opts for a black all over body suit with a black matching mask. The footwear is usually sneakers. She never really cares.[/color][/size][/font] [font="Calibri"][size="3"][color="#000000"]Personality: Alias is, contrary to what others might think, really kind and cheerful. She smiles a lot, helps others when she’s not on a mission, gives large tips in cafes, everything that contradicts what a normal criminal might stand for. It is not, however, an act. She is being genuinely kind, and sometimes it pains her to kill others in the name of what she does.[/color][/size][/font] [font="Calibri"][size="3"][color="#000000"]She is somewhat oblivious at times, seeming to drift off into a cheerful, shining world in her mind. In reality, she’s drifting into plans for the missions she has been assigned, or concocting new techniques to help her in future ventures into criminal society.[/color][/size][/font] [font="Calibri"][size="3"][color="#000000"]Bio: Saranesi Hurotia was born and raised in England to a simple and loving family. She was an only child, and adored the attention she received from her parents. In fact, for most of her life, everything was perfect and happy. The sort of life explained in fairytales. But all fun and games had to end at some point, and it did when Saranesi was thirteen.[/color][/size][/font] [font="Calibri"][size="3"][color="#000000"]Her father, the glue that held her family together with his smiles and corny jokes, was murdered brutally because a joke of his was taken in completely the wrong way. Her mother later committed suicide, but in a different way than most would.[/color][/size][/font] [font="Calibri"][size="3"][color="#000000"]She got Saranesi to pull the trigger.[/color][/size][/font] [font="Calibri"][size="3"][color="#000000"]The plan was for the mother to be sent to the same place as the father, then for Saranesi to work off the sin she’d committed by murdering her mother.[/color][/size][/font] [font="Calibri"][size="3"][color="#000000"]She ran from her home, and encountered the criminal underground. She began to do small tasks for them – pick pocket here, robs someone there – under the mistaken influence that it would clear her name of her sin. The jobs got bigger and bigger, but Saranesi never looked back. She merely thought of meeting her parents again one day, with a clear name. [spoiler=Crime you've committed: ][/color][/size][/font] [font="Calibri"][size="3"][color="#000000"]Loaded[/color][/size][/font] [font="Calibri"][size="3"][color="#000000"]Her mission, codenamed as Loaded, was one of her more recent tasks set by the criminal underground. Her task was to rob one of the richest men in Europe of his priceless collection of diamonds. The task was made more difficult by the fact it was in a large locked chest with ten locks and was guarded by twenty heavily armed men with permission to shoot/threaten any person who came within metres of the chest. They even had a quadrant on standby should a group of criminals try to hijack the chest and its contents.[/color][/size][/font] [font="Calibri"][size="3"][color="#000000"]Alias, with her short stature, had her plan perfectly concocted.[/color][/size][/font] [font="Calibri"][size="3"][color="#000000"]She wandered over to the guards and distracted them with a nice, cheerful conversation fit for a child half her age. The guards, at that moment having a rest, were caught completely off guard by the disarming sweetness. In actuality, Alias was having an actual happy conversation, while also slipping in questions about the chest, its contents and who was guarding it. Not realizing it, the guards were telling her everything she would need to know to rob the chest.[/color][/size][/font] [font="Calibri"][size="3"][color="#000000"]As the priceless diamonds continued on their way to its destination, Alias turned into a shadowy form and stole the ten required keys to unlock the chest. Stepping away, she blinded the guards – and subsequently everyone in the area – with a bright flash of light. While they stumbled in confusion she stole forward, unlocked the chest and hauled out several smaller boxes of diamonds, which she shoved in a bag. Grabbing all she could carry, she slipped away.[/color][/size][/font] [font="Calibri"][size="3"][color="#000000"]Her mission raked in approximately £28430500.[/spoiler][/spoiler][/color][/size][/font] [font="Calibri"][size="3"][color="#000000"] [/color][/size][/font] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Admiral_Stalfos19 Posted February 11, 2012 Report Share Posted February 11, 2012 Screw it, reserving. Although I've got too many RPs that I'm [i]already[/i] a part of Haven't decided whether to be a detective or a criminal though. Not entirely sure which is best. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Tico~ Posted February 11, 2012 Report Share Posted February 11, 2012 Reserving if you don't mind. Will go with being a detective for now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hotaru987 Posted February 11, 2012 Report Share Posted February 11, 2012 its looking good! Glad to see people signing up! ^^ Also in the powers taken add Psycometry(Medium/Empathy) for the detective. The Medium and Empathy aren't different powers, but just within the branch of Psycometry.@Rain: I must say I really like your app. The powers are interesting as well. As for as I'm concerned it's an ok from me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MortalKombatSmoke Posted February 11, 2012 Author Report Share Posted February 11, 2012 [quote name='Ongaku Matsuri' timestamp='1328934936' post='5809903'] Quick reserve. I remember making something similar, like GTA based, but it got shut down from assumption of it being too mature for the young audience on the forum. [/quote] That's Alright If it makes you feel any better this is technically a third installment to a, RP series, now a trilogy XD so it already has a history of success, this is just a bit different and a tad mroe dark [quote name='The Swift Assaulter' timestamp='1328937335' post='5810015'] A murder mystery with powers? Talk about a good mix. I'll be reserving a detective. [/quote] Reserved [quote name='Summer Rain' timestamp='1328938514' post='5810036'] [sub]I made my application, hopefully it's up to standard.[/sub] [sub]I did research to find approx how much her best crime raked in.[/sub] [font=Calibri][size=3][color=#000000][spoiler=Saranesi Hurotia, Alias Known]Username: Summer Rain Name: Saranesi Hurotia Alias: Alias Known Power: Alias has a power that can relate to the forces of yin yang, opposite forces working in harmony. In this case, she is the harmony.[/color][/size][/font] [font=Calibri][size=3][color=#000000]With her right hand, she controls the power of shadows, able to contort them into semi-solid objects, and well and turning herself into a shadow and melting away from danger. However, sometimes parts of her flicker in and out when she’s a shadow.[/color][/size][/font] [font=Calibri][size=3][color=#000000]On the left hand, she has powers of light, able to blind opponents with sudden and violent flashes of light. She often uses it as a getaway plan. However, too many bursts of light can injure her right hand. Age: 17 Appearance: Alias is small. Really small. In a crowd of many people, it is impossible to see her in height, or even by any other means. Her skin is an odd mix of tan and pale, with blotches of the varying shades everywhere. This is actually a symbol of powers, and the blotches randomly shift everywhere. Her hair is and slightly odd mix of blonde and black, with her long fringe being mostly blonde and the short rest of her hair being black. Her eyes are blue and brown, the left being brown and the right being blue.[/color][/size][/font] [font=Calibri][size=3][color=#000000]Her outfit is more often than not a normal shirt and jeans with a hoodie. The color of her outfit depends entirely on her intended mission, ranging from red for murder that is bloody to black for an assassination mission involving sniper rifles. For more secretive missions that need the utmost concealment she opts for a black all over body suit with a black matching mask. The footwear is usually sneakers. She never really cares.[/color][/size][/font] [font=Calibri][size=3][color=#000000]Personality: Alias is, contrary to what others might think, really kind and cheerful. She smiles a lot, helps others when she’s not on a mission, gives large tips in cafes, everything that contradicts what a normal criminal might stand for. It is not, however, an act. She is being genuinely kind, and sometimes it pains her to kill others in the name of what she does.[/color][/size][/font] [font=Calibri][size=3][color=#000000]She is somewhat oblivious at times, seeming to drift off into a cheerful, shining world in her mind. In reality, she’s drifting into plans for the missions she has been assigned, or concocting new techniques to help her in future ventures into criminal society.[/color][/size][/font] [font=Calibri][size=3][color=#000000]Bio: Saranesi Hurotia was born and raised in England to a simple and loving family. She was an only child, and adored the attention she received from her parents. In fact, for most of her life, everything was perfect and happy. The sort of life explained in fairytales. But all fun and games had to end at some point, and it did when Saranesi was thirteen.[/color][/size][/font] [font=Calibri][size=3][color=#000000]Her father, the glue that held her family together with his smiles and corny jokes, was murdered brutally because a joke of his was taken in completely the wrong way. Her mother later committed suicide, but in a different way than most would.[/color][/size][/font] [font=Calibri][size=3][color=#000000]She got Saranesi to pull the trigger.[/color][/size][/font] [font=Calibri][size=3][color=#000000]The plan was for the mother to be sent to the same place as the father, then for Saranesi to work off the sin she’d committed by murdering her mother.[/color][/size][/font] [font=Calibri][size=3][color=#000000]She ran from her home, and encountered the criminal underground. She began to do small tasks for them – pick pocket here, robs someone there – under the mistaken influence that it would clear her name of her sin. The jobs got bigger and bigger, but Saranesi never looked back. She merely thought of meeting her parents again one day, with a clear name. [spoiler=Crime you've committed: ][/color][/size][/font] [font=Calibri][size=3][color=#000000]Loaded[/color][/size][/font] [font=Calibri][size=3][color=#000000]Her mission, codenamed as Loaded, was one of her more recent tasks set by the criminal underground. Her task was to rob one of the richest men in Europe of his priceless collection of diamonds. The task was made more difficult by the fact it was in a large locked chest with ten locks and was guarded by twenty heavily armed men with permission to shoot/threaten any person who came within metres of the chest. They even had a quadrant on standby should a group of criminals try to hijack the chest and its contents.[/color][/size][/font] [font=Calibri][size=3][color=#000000]Alias, with her short stature, had her plan perfectly concocted.[/color][/size][/font] [font=Calibri][size=3][color=#000000]She wandered over to the guards and distracted them with a nice, cheerful conversation fit for a child half her age. The guards, at that moment having a rest, were caught completely off guard by the disarming sweetness. In actuality, Alias was having an actual happy conversation, while also slipping in questions about the chest, its contents and who was guarding it. Not realizing it, the guards were telling her everything she would need to know to rob the chest.[/color][/size][/font] [font=Calibri][size=3][color=#000000]As the priceless diamonds continued on their way to its destination, Alias turned into a shadowy form and stole the ten required keys to unlock the chest. Stepping away, she blinded the guards – and subsequently everyone in the area – with a bright flash of light. While they stumbled in confusion she stole forward, unlocked the chest and hauled out several smaller boxes of diamonds, which she shoved in a bag. Grabbing all she could carry, she slipped away.[/color][/size][/font] [font=Calibri][size=3][color=#000000]Her mission raked in approximately £28430500.[/spoiler][/spoiler][/color][/size][/font] [/quote] I like her already~ Accepted Nice call Hotaru. [quote name='Admiral_Stalfos19' timestamp='1328943792' post='5810128'] Screw it, reserving. Although I've got too many RPs that I'm [i]already[/i] a part of Haven't decided whether to be a detective or a criminal though. Not entirely sure which is best. [/quote] That's alright Stalfos, it's nice to have your back in this ^^ [quote name='Corona Ray' timestamp='1328943931' post='5810132'] Reserving if you don't mind. Will go with being a detective for now. [/quote] Reserved~ [quote name='Hotaru987' timestamp='1328946853' post='5810147'] its looking good! Glad to see people signing up! ^^ Also in the powers taken add Psycometry(Medium/Empathy) for the detective. The Medium and Empathy aren't different powers, but just within the branch of Psycometry. @Rain: I must say I really like your app. The powers are interesting as well. As for as I'm concerned it's an ok from me. [/quote] Will do Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thar Posted February 11, 2012 Report Share Posted February 11, 2012 [spoiler=app] [color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][b]Username:[/b] Ongaku Matsuri[/size][/font][/color] [color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][b]Name:[/b] Lezner (Lez) Groff[/size][/font][/color] [color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][b]Alias:[/b] Gazelle[/size][/font][/color] [color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][b]Power:[/b] Super speed, also has the ability to run up walls with enough speed. While at full speed, stopping requires wide, open space. Otherwise, he might run into something or trip.[/size][/font][/color] [color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][b]Age:[/b] 22[/size][/font][/color] [b][color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3]Appearance:[/size][/font][/color][/b] [color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][img]http://th05.deviantart.net/fs31/300W/i/2008/230/3/e/Jeb_by_fuchsiart.jpg[/img][/size][/font][/color] [font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][color=#5a5a5a][size=3][b]Personality:[/b] Quick and witty, Lezner was always the kind of guy to get stuff done fast. With this trait, some of his work goes unchecked, which did not help him in his most recent job performance. Whenever he is up against something easy, he doesn't get very serious. But when a challenge meets him, he takes delight in it and, while still not getting quite serious, he develops a strategy and executes in attempts to not get caught. He tends to get half-assed and snarky to himself and he does not play well with others, which prompts him to get revenge on whoever gets in his way.[/size][/color][/font] [color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][b]Bio:[/b] Lezner was always a trouble maker. During his youth (before he discovered his power) he would pick pocket passing strangers, steal from grocery/convenience stores, and even break into banks. As a destructive child, he has always made it difficult for his parents to raise him. At one point, his trouble making had gone so far as to cost the life of his own paternal grandparents, resulting in his own court session against the state and some time in jail. However, after he discovered his power, he noticed a hole in the ceiling and used the momentum of his own speed to grab hold of the edge, and he escaped. Ever since, he has been hunted down by the government, but with his power, it proved to be difficult for them. Lezner enjoyed his status of outlaw as he fled the state and found his way into Freeborn City to mark his game territory.[/size][/font][/color] [color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][b]Crime you've commited:[/b] Lezner is most notorious for escaping prison after killing his own grandparents, but his most recent big crime was robbing a nearby convenience store and setting it on fire. He received a curious phone call soon after, being informed of Freeborn City and how he can be of use there, but he found little interest in a simple city. Nonetheless, his curiosity made him catch the next flight there and see what it had to offer him.[/size][/font][/color] [color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][/spoiler][/size][/font][/color] [color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3]Edited.[/size][/font][/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MortalKombatSmoke Posted February 11, 2012 Author Report Share Posted February 11, 2012 [quote name='Ongaku Matsuri' timestamp='1328973884' post='5810407'] [spoiler=incomplete app] [color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3]Username: Ongaku Matsuri[/size][/font][/color] [color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3]Name: Lezner (Lez) Groff[/size][/font][/color] [color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3]Alias: Gazelle[/size][/font][/color] [color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3]Power: Super speed, also has the ability to run up walls with enough speed.[/size][/font][/color] [color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3]Age: 22[/size][/font][/color] [color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3]Appearance:[/size][/font][/color] [font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][color=#5a5a5a][size=3]Personality: Quick and witty, Lezner was always the kind of guy to get stuff done fast. With this trait, some of his work goes unchecked, which did not help him in his most recent job performance. Whenever he is up against something easy, he doesn't get very serious. But when a challenge meets him, he takes delight in it and, while still not getting quite serious, he develops a strategy and executes in attempts to not get caught. He tends to get half-assed and snarky to himself and he does not play well with others, which prompts him to get revenge on whoever gets in his way.[/size][/color][/font] [color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3]Bio: [/size][/font][/color] [color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3]Crime you've commited: (Think of the best crime your character commited and write it down, who was involved EVERYTHING, prove why you were "invited" to Freeborn)[/size][/font][/color] [color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][/spoiler][/size][/font][/color] [color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3]The only thing missing is the Appearance, Bio, and Crime Committed. I'll try to finish it soon.[/size][/font][/color] [/quote] So far seems legit~ Anyway, I wanted to bring up the Super Speed, don't be abusing that power k? put some imitations or a side effect on it, like Leon can only be in that spiritual phase while he's defensless in a meditative state, I will not require this of ALL powers just of certain ones. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Admiral_Stalfos19 Posted February 11, 2012 Report Share Posted February 11, 2012 Hmm... now that I think about it Raising the Dead would be a cool power to have (the only thing I can think of that would be better than that would be Mind Control, but that would be OP'ed, wouldn't it?) Only one question: Can I use it as a detective ability? Or is it a criminal ability only? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MortalKombatSmoke Posted February 11, 2012 Author Report Share Posted February 11, 2012 [quote name='Admiral_Stalfos19' timestamp='1328993845' post='5811081'] Hmm... now that I think about it Raising the Dead would be a cool power to have (the only thing I can think of that would be better than that would be Mind Control, but that would be OP'ed, wouldn't it?) Only one question: Can I use it as a detective ability? Or is it a criminal ability only? [/quote] oh no, that power is taken XD sorry for the confusion, "???" means an unknown character has it. Or a character that hasn't been introduced yet. Sorry! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Admiral_Stalfos19 Posted February 11, 2012 Report Share Posted February 11, 2012 I only have one thing to say in response to that: [img]http://graphicnovel.zachwhalen.net/sites/graphicnovel.zachwhalen.net/files/17189-130475-RageFace2png-620x.jpg[/img] ... can I still have Mind Control? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hotaru987 Posted February 11, 2012 Report Share Posted February 11, 2012 [spoiler=finished] Username: Hotaru987 Name: Izna "Izzy" Rosario Alias:* [spoiler=Power:] Psychometry - Also known as token-object reading, is the act of seeing the history of an object through touch. It's done by connecting to the emotions and energy that is surrounding that object. It can even be done to other people, in which she will see the past of that person, but only if that person is thinking about it at the time of contact and the memory has strong emotions attached to it. After using this power she has the tendency to faint, collapse or become physically and emotionally drained. Izzy has to always be consciously aware of herself as to not use this ability accidentally. In order to lessen the wrist she is always wearing black gloves. Medium - This was more of a side effect of the psychometry ability. If an object has an extremely strong emotion attached to it, and an event happens that is similar to the event that happened to attach that residual energy to it, then she could channel that person's spirit through her body. She could also have spirits of the dead speak through her, but she cannot talk directly to the spirits. It's the same side effects as her Psychometry, but to a stronger degree. She may also behave differently until the residual effects wear off. Empathy - Another side effect ability thanks to her primary power. This ability she cannot turn on or off, so she is always being bombarded by different emotions. She can however block the stimuli of emotions with music. Sometimes she may act upon it, but it is never intentional. So even though the situation may be a happy one, she may show anger or sadness because of some other person. [/spoiler] Weapon(s): 1 Pistol Age: 19 [spoiler=Appearance:][img]http://i39.tinypic.com/oa6ph1.jpg[/img][/spoiler] Personality: Izzy is a rather rebellious late teen, who says and does what she think is right. Because of that she doesn't have many friends, but she doesn't care. In fact she think it's better to be alone, because of her powers. Another reason why she would rather be alone is because of her Empathy ability. It's not something she can turn off, so usually her own emotions are influenced by the people around her. That makes her seem emotionally unstable which causes more people to think she is strange. Izzy is also smart, extremely smart. Though she isn't considered a genius, she already holds two degrees and can speak 3 languages. Even so, she is considerably naive when it comes to relations with the opposite sex. Another side effect of her powers, is that she has become an insomniac. At the most she may get 2 hours of collective sleep per week. The reason is because she suffered from severe night terrors, most of them having to do with past cases she's solved. It's because of everything that she's seen that she doesn't believe in a g-d, but contradictory to that she does believe that there is a higher power that is regulating everything. [spoiler=Bio:] Izzy was born to a very low class family, who had to work to their bones just so they could live paycheck to paycheck. It's because of that she didn't have everything that other kids her age had. She was very understanding of their situation, and never asked for anything. She was always given hand-me-down things, but even then she never did complain. Izzy felt that the least she could do for her parents was be a good child. They already had a lot of other things to worry about. When it was time for her to go to school, she went to the cheapest school in the area since her parents couldn't afford much. Izzy was 6 years old when her powers began to manifest. When she told her parents about the weird things happening to her, instead of thinking her a freak like some people would have done, they stood by her. However, they told her that it would be best if she kept her strange abilities to herself, which she did. During her school days she worked her ass off. Even in her earliest memory of going to school she always did her best. She stayed out of trouble, and made sure to excel in everything she did. During middle school, she went out for as many sports as possible hoping to get scholarships for anything she possibly could. Izzy's GPA by then stayed at a constant 4.0. Izzy even managed to get ahead, and was already in college by the time she was 15, an impressive feat for anyone. Now ever since she was young she had always liked police officers, and detective kind of stuff. She also knew that there was quite a bit of money in that line of work, and she wanted to make her parents life a lot easier than it was. So with that she set her sights on becoming a detective, going to school for 2 years without breaks - other than holidays - and by the time she was 16 years she acquired her first degree in criminal justice, and was going for her second in Law. Now a detective, she sends most of her money to her parents, who now live in a nice house and don't have to work as much as they once did. It was around the time she turned 19 when she got the letter from the Freeborn Detective agency to be a part of their special division of detectives.[/spoiler] Crime you've solved: The Lost Boy: This was one of the first cases that Izzy had ever worked on. It was a highly popular case, in saying that it was all over the news. There wasn't a single person who hadn't heard of this lost boy. He was kidnapped by an unknown man. Though she was still relatively new to the detective force, they had pretty much everyone working on that case. Everyone thought it was a lost cause, until they suddenly found a teddy bear that was reported to be with the boy upon his abduction. Now mind you it was already a week into the case, and up until that there hadn't been any other leads on the boy. So you can imagine all of the press that small little teddy bear received. Even so, a lot of people had already lost hope on finding the boy alive. Now Izzy hadn't told anyone of her ability, but she knew that if she could get a hold of that bear then she could probably find that boy, depending on how long the bear had been with him through the whole ordeal. Izzy then made the decision to tell the boss about her ability. With that she took the bear and with her ability she was able to lead the entire team right to where the boy was. The boss kept her ability out of the papers, but he did make sure that the credit for finding the boy went to Izzy.[/spoiler] Don't look cause you'll be disappointed. @Admiral: I don't think it's a good idea to allow mind controlling, because that can open windows for godmodding. The only way I would say yes to that is if, when you explain your power, you put a considerable weakness to it as well as - before using it on anyone (Rper or notable NPC) You PM the owner of that character and ask if it would be ok to use it on them. To what extent, and how much strength were you planning on having the mind control ability? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Admiral_Stalfos19 Posted February 11, 2012 Report Share Posted February 11, 2012 Hmm... yeah mind control's too good. Scratch that. Let's see, what else is a good power that isn't badly overused...? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MortalKombatSmoke Posted February 12, 2012 Author Report Share Posted February 12, 2012 Yeah, even with the main villan he can't truly control minds, he's the one with Telepathy, the criminal, but he can influence them to a great extent. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hotaru987 Posted February 12, 2012 Report Share Posted February 12, 2012 @Smoke: Ongaku finished his app. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MortalKombatSmoke Posted February 12, 2012 Author Report Share Posted February 12, 2012 thanks hotaru [quote name='Ongaku Matsuri' timestamp='1328973884' post='5810407'] [spoiler=app] [color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][b]Username:[/b] Ongaku Matsuri[/size][/font][/color] [color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][b]Name:[/b] Lezner (Lez) Groff[/size][/font][/color] [color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][b]Alias:[/b] Gazelle[/size][/font][/color] [color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][b]Power:[/b] Super speed, also has the ability to run up walls with enough speed. While at full speed, stopping requires wide, open space. Otherwise, he might run into something or trip.[/size][/font][/color] [color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][b]Age:[/b] 22[/size][/font][/color] [b][color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3]Appearance:[/size][/font][/color][/b] [color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][img]http://th05.deviantart.net/fs31/300W/i/2008/230/3/e/Jeb_by_fuchsiart.jpg[/img][/size][/font][/color] [font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][color=#5a5a5a][size=3][b]Personality:[/b] Quick and witty, Lezner was always the kind of guy to get stuff done fast. With this trait, some of his work goes unchecked, which did not help him in his most recent job performance. Whenever he is up against something easy, he doesn't get very serious. But when a challenge meets him, he takes delight in it and, while still not getting quite serious, he develops a strategy and executes in attempts to not get caught. He tends to get half-assed and snarky to himself and he does not play well with others, which prompts him to get revenge on whoever gets in his way.[/size][/color][/font] [color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][b]Bio:[/b] Lezner was always a trouble maker. During his youth (before he discovered his power) he would pick pocket passing strangers, steal from grocery/convenience stores, and even break into banks. As a destructive child, he has always made it difficult for his parents to raise him. At one point, his trouble making had gone so far as to cost the life of his own paternal grandparents, resulting in his own court session against the state and some time in jail. However, after he discovered his power, he noticed a hole in the ceiling and used the momentum of his own speed to grab hold of the edge, and he escaped. Ever since, he has been hunted down by the government, but with his power, it proved to be difficult for them. Lezner enjoyed his status of outlaw as he fled the state and found his way into Freeborn City to mark his game territory.[/size][/font][/color] [color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][b]Crime you've commited:[/b] Lezner is most notorious for escaping prison after killing his own grandparents, but his most recent big crime was robbing a nearby convenience store and setting it on fire. He received a curious phone call soon after, being informed of Freeborn City and how he can be of use there, but he found little interest in a simple city. Nonetheless, his curiosity made him catch the next flight there and see what it had to offer him.[/size][/font][/color] [color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][/spoiler][/size][/font][/color] [color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3]Edited.[/size][/font][/color] [/quote] Hmm..... Looks good... Yup all seems in order Accepted~ oh FYI, I was going for more of a letter, everyone got a letter XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thar Posted February 12, 2012 Report Share Posted February 12, 2012 [quote name='MortalKombatSmoke' timestamp='1329019327' post='5811969'] oh FYI, I was going for more of a letter, everyone got a letter XD [/quote] A letter came but he threw it out, so they ended up calling him. Guess I should've mentioned that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MortalKombatSmoke Posted February 12, 2012 Author Report Share Posted February 12, 2012 [quote name='Ongaku Matsuri' timestamp='1329020466' post='5811974'] A letter came but he threw it out, so they ended up calling him. Guess I should've mentioned that. [/quote] that's fine as long as we don't have evryone throwing out their letters. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Admiral_Stalfos19 Posted February 12, 2012 Report Share Posted February 12, 2012 Alright, I've decided on my character the ability that Nick Lane has in Fringe; the ability to transfer her emotions to other people. Username: Admiral_Stalfos19 Name: Terra Marine Alias: Dread Lock Power: Emotion Transferral Weapons: A couple of Sawn-Off Shotguns, which she keeps concealed. Age: 17 [spoiler=Appearance:][img]http://th07.deviantart.net/fs70/PRE/i/2012/043/7/3/why_____by_urbanno-d4pi5an.png[/img] ^image credit goes to Urbanno[/spoiler] Personality: Terra tries to be a tough girl, but in reality she's rather unstable with her emotions, and goes through them as quickly as one can flip pages in a book. She can easily go from happy in moment, to sad the next, then angry a third moment and fearful a fourth, just as an example. However, if there's a single feeling that Terra would ever stick with for [i]any[/i] length of time, it would be guilt for her mother's death, in which she remains adamant is her own damn fault. Terra also has a bad habit of holding onto grudges, especially against herself. Unfortunately, with her being so young, [i]on top of[/i] only discovering her power recently, Terra has vast difficulties controlling the power, and will often activate it by mistake... sometimes with disastrous consequences to boot. Bio: Once upon a time, Terra Marine used to be easy to parent; even more so than any of her other siblings. That was until puberty hit her at the age of 12, which would've been reasonably late for a girl. But she was going through puberty so quickly that she was fully developed by the time her 14th birthday came around. It was then that her emotions started going haywire, and it was because of [i]that[/i] that she suddenly changed from the easiest sibling to parent to the most difficult. A couple years later, Terra discovered she was capable of transferring her emotions, but that proved more of a curse than a blessing. The first time she discovered it, she was crying over a boyfriend she had cheating on another girl, and was seriously thinking about killing herself. At that time, her mother was driving her home when all of a sudden, she stopped the car, and mindlessly got out and jumped off the bridge they were driving on. Terra tried to jump after her, but was stopped by a policewoman who she ended up angrily berating for getting in her way. From that day forth, she literally became a walking mass of barely organized chaos, but her powers were [i]finally[/i] put to good use when she solved Dead Eye's Glance, a case that had every law enforcement officer on his or her nerves. Now though, a chance to start over in Freeborn awaits her. Crime Solved: [b]Dead Eye's Glance[/b] A military-trained sniper was on the loose, murdering a number of civilians without leaving any forensic evidence behind. In truth, there wasn't even a body to be found or any traces of blood. Ergo, the victims were merely reported as missing persons that were never found. In the end, law enforcement officers threw in the towel, and the case was never solved until 20 years later, when Terra came into the picture. She wasn't signed into the case, and she wasn't even a [i]detective[/i] at the time she decided to investigate. Terra only wanted to know if one of the victims "went missing" because of her emotion transferral powers. After a scouring of the entire city, Terra noted a blood-stained tarpaulin laid out flat in a back alley and proceeded to take a sample, unaware that tarpaulin was a trap laid out by the sniper. Suddenly, whilst she was taking photos of the scene laid in front of eyes, the sniper opened fire, only to knock the phone she was using to take the pictures with out of her hand, which had been shot by the bullet. Terra took the sample and ran for it, but the two of them had somehow met up in the same place later that morning. Terra was feeling guilty that her powers were responsible for her mother's death, and that guilt had suddenly transferred to the sniper, who later confessed his murders to the police. He's now sentenced in Death Row. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grunt Issun Posted February 12, 2012 Report Share Posted February 12, 2012 I'll certainly have to reserve a criminal, and get making an App as soon as possible. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MortalKombatSmoke Posted February 12, 2012 Author Report Share Posted February 12, 2012 [quote name='-Zecora-' timestamp='1329065724' post='5812688'] I'll certainly have to reserve a criminal, and get making an App as soon as possible. [/quote] okay Man we need some detectives XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grunt Issun Posted February 12, 2012 Report Share Posted February 12, 2012 [font="tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif"][color="#5a5a5a"][size=3]Hmm... Would Limited Control over Time be acceptable?[/size][/color][/font] [font="tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif"][color="#5a5a5a"][size=3]As in, not being able to reverse time, or travel through it, but moreso just like slowing it down.[/size][/color][/font] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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