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[size=8][color=#FF8C00][b]HUGE EDIT IN PROGRESS[/b][/color][/size]

Ok, so this is pretty much the concept for the game I'm making(written stage, currently. Slowly moving out of written.) Ok, so I've not decided on a name yet.

[b]Story(This needs a LOT of work.) -[/b]

[b]Essentially, the base of the story is that A Scientist named S.H.R.O.U.D or "Alvis Robert" as his original name was released his Machinations(which are basicially giant weapon robots) To try and become the ruler of the world. He practicially destroys the world with his Machinations. Eventually, Alvis dies and he converts his life into a Machination, and vanishes off the face of the planet for several years. Everyone starts rebuilding their homes in the sky now because of the pollution down on the ground. People during this time started work on a Anti-Machination device known only as "Soul Blaze" and started a Anti-Machination Group incase the Machinations ever resurfaced. [/b]

There's a whole part that needs to be added about the Other characters, but yea.

[b]Characters -[/b]

[b]Rayr[/b]
[b]Profession: 57th Time Ruler[/b]
[b]Age:27[/b]
[b]Weapon: Time Sword - Machination Killer[/b]
[b]Theme: [i]The Sword to Cut Time ~Rayr~[/i][/b]
[b][i]Forgotten Edge ~Soul Blaze Theme~[/i][/b]

[b]Rayr is well... The "Main Guy" So to speak. If you count Ayr as him, that is. Anyway, he's a Time Ruler. He often gets bored, and this leads him to wander time, looking for Other Proficient Swordswielders, because of his Incredible Swordsplay skill, He is often sent on Missions that involve destroying Machinations. Often uncaring, and sometimes somewhat rude, he usually is known by the other Time Rulers as being "Quick to Talk" He is ranked quite highly amongst the Time Rulers for his repeatedly helpful use of Sword skills. [/b]

[b]Ayr[/b]
[b]Profession:Machinaton Hunter[/b]
[b]Age:20[/b]
[b]Theme: [i]Whirlwind ~Ayr~[/i][/b]
[b][i]Soulless Tornado ~Soul Blaze Theme~[/i][/b]

[b]Originally intended to be a Backup life for Rayr. As situations changed, he became nothing more than a lackey of the Time Rulers, who constantly use him to destroy Machinations.[/b] [b]Unlike the other Time Rulers, his Weapon is a Soul Anchor, which makes him useless in combat without his Soul Blaze. He becomes Eryia's Love Intrest and the 83rd Time Ruler after Defeating S.H.R.O.U.D. And passing Rayr's test. Which causes him to say his key line:"Well, Maybe he's not so useless after all." In the alternate timeline, he dies after a Machination Dragon causes S.H.R.O.U.D's Labatory to Collapse, Meaning he never even defeated S.H.R.O.U.D, which sort of causes the end of the world and stuff in the timeline.[/b]

[b]Characters to be added(There are 35 Planned characters, albiet not all named):[/b]
[b]Eryia[/b]
[b]I.Z.[/b]
[b]S.H.R.O.U.D[/b]
[b]Eric[/b]
[b]Maximillion[/b]
[b]Lya and Tya[/b]
[b]Mr.Panda[/b]
[b]Colossus Mk.36[/b]
[b]Machination Ayr[/b]
[b]Fang[/b]
[b]Elabelle[/b]
[b]Esper[/b]




[b]There's more to write, but character profiles are boring like crap and don't matter. What matters is the gameplay.[/b]

[b]At the start of a fight, you select your Main Character and a "Soul Drive" Character. What do they do? They function similarly to assists from MVC. Only, they are much less defined and game-breaking. Soul Drive characters only determine 1 Thing: Your Soul Driver attack, which is similar to a Special Attack except it takes 1 Soul Stock from your Character. I.e: If your Soul Drive is I.Z, You'll get her Disk Install attack, which boosts your Attack Power for a short while. If your Soul Drive is Rayr, you'll get his Sword Rain Attack. Effectively, you select 1 Select Move from another character as your Soul Drive character. The only difference, is they can be knocked out, as they'll take damage too. When they're knocked out, you can no longer use Soul Driver. [/b]

[b] What's the point of this? It's to give characters who don't have double jump or airdash at their disposal(Colossus Mk.36, for instance. Or Mr.Panda but he has a Dash) a Projectile or a fast attack. Some characters cannot be Soul Drive for some characters. Colossus with a Sword Rain? Hell no. The point is, your character's Attack power is transfered into the Soul Driver, so Colossus would be doing insane damage with a Sword Rain. What are soul stocks?[/b] [b]Soul Stocks are like a second super meter that you get by Performing Soul Attacks. [/b]

[b]---Bit Lazy ATM, More to be added soon--[/b]







[spoiler='Old Post']<br><strong>Soul Stock</strong><strong> -</strong><br><br><strong>Soul Stocks are a special meter that increase the more times you hit your opponent with Combo Strings or special Attacks. When you have 100 Soul Stock Points, gained from Comboing or specials, you gain 1 full soul stock. Soul Stocks can be used for EX-Type attacks, known as Soul Bursts. They consume 1 Soul Stock each.</strong><br><br><strong>Changes to Soul BlaZe -</strong><br><br><strong>Soul BlaZe now consumes 2 Soul Stocks and 75 Meter, not 100 Meter. Some characters(Rayr,I.Z.) Start in a "Psuedo-Soul BlaZe" Mode, and they can perform normal Soul BlaZe Moves without Soul BlaZe. To compensate for this, they have no Soul-BlaZe, and have extremely low health. This makes Soul BlaZe much, much more accessable. Also, your character's Aura now has a small effect on battle. Occasionally, it will "Spark" and you'll gain a slight bit of Soul Stock Points(1 Point) every time it sparks. The lightning bolt effect again depends on the character. </strong><br><br><strong>In addition, every character will gain a dash. Even characters who cannot usually dash(Mr.Panda, for instance)</strong> <strong>Will gain one. For characters like Eryia, who has 2 Jumps and a Dash, they will gain a 3rd Jump. Also, a character's quotes will be slightly different in Soul Blaze. And each character has a different win animation for winning whilst in Soul Blaze. </strong><br><br><strong>Defence -</strong><br><br><strong>Defence Options have greatly improved. Now each character has a "Guard Strength" Meter. Some Characters, Like I.Z. Have very low guard Strength, and will get guard crushed if they continue to turtle. However, when you get guard crushed, half of 1 Soul Stock gets filled automaticially, which can make getting guard crushed an advantage in certian situations. Each character also now has a "Deflect" Which allows them to deflect attacks. If you would've been guard crushed when you deflect an attack, you'll still get guard crushed, but as a Deflect leaves your Opponent vunerable, you'll probably recover before them. Each character now also can now use "Guard Attacks" Special Attacks which consume your Guard Strength meter for them. Note, if you completely drain your Guard Meter with these, it won't recover until you're guard crushed. </strong><br><br><strong>In addition, each character can spend Soul Stocks to use a special deflective counter stance that counters attacks.</strong><br><br><strong>Unlockables</strong><strong> -</strong><br><br><strong>When you first start a new save file, Each character only has 4 Colours avaliable. Obtaining achievements will unlock new colours, and collecting a good number of them will unlock specific cool extras, like Colour Customiser, Aura Colour Customiser, and other things.</strong><br><br><strong>Current list of planned achievements(In game, obvs. Not like trophies or anything)</strong><br><br><strong><em>Talk with your sword -&nbsp;&nbsp;</em>Performed a 30-Hit combo using Rayr(Unlocks Colour 5)</strong><br><strong><em>The part where I kill you - Performed Rayr's Spirit Obliterate(Unlocks Colour 6)</em></strong><br><strong><em>Cool Story, bro! - Won a match against Ayr with Rayr.(Unlocks Colour 7)</em></strong><br><strong><em>Godlike - Beat Rayr's Arcade Mode(Unlocks Colour <img data-cke-saved-src="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/public/style_emoticons/default/icon_cool.gif" src="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/public/style_emoticons/default/icon_cool.gif" class="bbc_emoticon" alt=":cool:"></em></strong><br><br><strong><em>Gale Force 12 - Performed a EX Tempest Sword with Ayr(Unlocks Colour 5)</em></strong><br><strong><em>Zantetsuken - Performed Ayr's Spirit Obliterate(Unlocks Colour 6)</em></strong><br><strong><em>Copies can still Win - Won a match against Rayr with Ayr(Unlocks Colour 7)</em></strong><br><strong><em>Eye of the Typhoon - Beat Ayr's Arcade Mode(Unlocks Colour <img data-cke-saved-src="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/public/style_emoticons/default/icon_cool.gif" src="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/public/style_emoticons/default/icon_cool.gif" class="bbc_emoticon" alt=":cool:"></em></strong><br><strong><em>I'm Worthless... - Beat Ayr's Story Mode(Unlocks Legendary Swordsman Ayr)</em></strong><br><br><strong><em>Un-used Potential - Use all 3 Different Omni-Blade attacks with Eryia(Unlocks Colour 5)</em></strong><br><strong><em>This will Hurt... A lot. - Performed Eryia's Spirit Obliterate(Unlocks Colour <img data-cke-saved-src="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/public/style_emoticons/default/icon_cool.gif" src="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/public/style_emoticons/default/icon_cool.gif" class="bbc_emoticon" alt=":cool:"></em></strong><br><strong><em>Your Mother! - Won a match against I.Z. with Eryia(Unlocks Colour 7)</em></strong><br><strong><em>Perfect Time Godess - Beat Eryia's Arcade Mode(Unlocks Colour <img data-cke-saved-src="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/public/style_emoticons/default/icon_cool.gif" src="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/public/style_emoticons/default/icon_cool.gif" class="bbc_emoticon" alt=":cool:"></em></strong><br><strong><em>Misfortune - Beat Eryia's Arcade Mode(Unlocks Time Godess Eryia)</em></strong><br><br><strong><em>Back-up Drive - End a match with all 4 Disks using I.Z.(Unlocks Colour 5)</em></strong><br><strong><em>Delete Life.EXE - Use I.Z.'s Spirit Obliterate(Unlocks Colour 6)</em></strong><br><strong><em>Like Mother, Like Daughter - Won a Match against Eryia using I.Z.(Unlocks Colour 7)</em></strong><br><strong><em>Perfect Programming - Beat Eryia's Arcade Mode(Unlocks Colour <img data-cke-saved-src="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/public/style_emoticons/default/icon_cool.gif" src="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/public/style_emoticons/default/icon_cool.gif" class="bbc_emoticon" alt=":cool:"></em></strong><br><strong><em>Time is a mindscrew. - Beat I.Z.'s Story Mode(Unlocks Machine Drive I.Z.)</em></strong><br><br><strong><em>When all of these are complete</em></strong><br><br><span style="color: rgb(218, 165, 32);"><strong><em>Enter the Ghost Hunter - Unlocks Eric Maximillion </em></strong></span><br><br><strong>Lady Luck - Got 3 Sevens in a row using Maximillion's Ghost Dice(Unlocks Colour 5)</strong><br><strong>Ace of Ass-Kicking - Performed Maximillion's Soul Obliterate(Unlocks Colour 6)</strong><br><strong>Hey, Old Man. - Won a Match Against Eric using Maximillion.(Unlocks Colour 7)</strong><br><strong>At the end of a Rainbow - Beat Maximillion's Arcade Mode(Unlocks Colour <img data-cke-saved-src="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/public/style_emoticons/default/icon_cool.gif" src="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/public/style_emoticons/default/icon_cool.gif" class="bbc_emoticon" alt=":cool:"></strong><br><br><strong>Attractive - Won a Match with both Mya and Tya on the Screen at Once(Unlocks Colour 5)</strong><br><strong>Did that Hurt? &lt;3 - Use Mya and Tya's Spirit Obliterate(Unlocks Colour 6)</strong><br><strong>No one likes a Witch. - Won a Match against I.Z. Using Mya and Tya(Unlocks Colour 7)</strong><br><strong>Succubi of the Castle - </strong><strong>Beat Mya and Tya's Arcade Mode(Unlock Colour <img data-cke-saved-src="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/public/style_emoticons/default/icon_cool.gif" src="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/public/style_emoticons/default/icon_cool.gif" class="bbc_emoticon" alt=":cool:"></strong><br><strong>That'll just about do it. - Beat Mya and Tya's Story Mode(Unlocks Colour Edit)</strong><br><br><strong>There are waaayyy too many to list, but that's a general idea. </strong>[/spoiler]

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