Randomflyingobjects Posted May 14, 2012 Author Report Share Posted May 14, 2012 [quote name='Dr. Cakey!!' timestamp='1336928170' post='5938663'] Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm...I'm a bit conflicted. It's fun, definitely, but something about the duels. Maybe it's that every single monster has an effect to win the duel in one turn? [/quote] I see your point, on how the strongest of the monsters have extreme effects, but I'm going to need more opinions on that one. If you're talking about the Tech Faries, well, they were supposed to be really powerful opponents that pop up here and there... I'll try to look into it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
guuu1234 Posted May 15, 2012 Report Share Posted May 15, 2012 sorry i didn't comment sooner, i forgot this existed.... ANYWAY nice revisions. i can't really go in depth 'cause , well, i already have. i look forward to chapter 4 and hopefully some plot development within the next few chapters. p.s: many cards used are extremly broken...but i find it ok cuz just about every character have a broken, and they are proven to be beatable.' Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Randomflyingobjects Posted May 15, 2012 Author Report Share Posted May 15, 2012 [quote name='guuu1234' timestamp='1337043287' post='5939504'] sorry i didn't comment sooner, i forgot this existed.... ANYWAY nice revisions. i can't really go in depth 'cause , well, i already have. i look forward to chapter 4 and hopefully some plot development within the next few chapters. p.s: many cards used are extremly broken...but i find it ok cuz just about every character have a broken, and they are proven to be beatable.' [/quote]Yeah, thanks for remembering me. Thanks again for the critique, and I hope I can get chapter 4 out soon. p.s. I'm currently planning on having the duels start to flow more naturally, and I'll attempt to stay away from using the most overpowered of the cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
guuu1234 Posted May 15, 2012 Report Share Posted May 15, 2012 Glad to hear ^.^ I look forward to seeing some more standard cards you have thought up. In terms of fusion, Gem-Knight Fusion is polymerization done right, so it's just a thought for other fusion attempt with your main charcters cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Randomflyingobjects Posted July 29, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 29, 2012 After months of me slacking off and waiting for my butler to finish writing Chapter 4, he's finally... I mean, I've finally finished Chapter 4. Without further ado... BUMP! I've updated my card list with most of the new cards used in the chapter, but don't expect it to get long... only the main characters will have their decks published. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Randomflyingobjects Posted August 8, 2012 Author Report Share Posted August 8, 2012 Bump for Comments Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Randomflyingobjects Posted August 11, 2012 Author Report Share Posted August 11, 2012 Bump? Did everybody forget about this thread? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Randomflyingobjects Posted August 17, 2012 Author Report Share Posted August 17, 2012 Bump. I at least had a few readers for chapter 3... now they've all forgotten... (Am I the only on who uses the 'My Content' feature?) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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weryllium Posted October 10, 2012 Report Share Posted October 10, 2012 Yeah... I like it. Not much to say now that everything's been said, already, though. "some of the cards are overpowered" (Rainbow Flute is a perfect example) "like the fourth wall breaking" (It's pretty funny)... It's pretty cool, though, and I like how they poke a bit of fun at Jaden here. If you keep them coming, I'll keep reading them. Hoping for a Chapter 5 soon, so put that butler to work! Don't forget to keep the cards and duels realistic (sort of, not too serious) and have fun. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Randomflyingobjects Posted October 10, 2012 Author Report Share Posted October 10, 2012 Actually, I finished chapter 5 a while ago... but haven't posted it yet, because... [list] [*]I was waiting for somebody else to comment [*]I've been going back, and adding spoilers with the cards inside, so you guys don't have to go searching for the cards. [*]Because of the specific ending of this next chapter, I think I'm going to have to have two chapters at a time, in case the public ever gets demanding. [/list] Anyway, I'll finish adding the cards to chapter 4, then try posting 5, and see how that goes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Randomflyingobjects Posted October 28, 2012 Author Report Share Posted October 28, 2012 New chapter up! Bump! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
weryllium Posted November 2, 2012 Report Share Posted November 2, 2012 Ok, I just read Chapter 5. First, add the info in the card spoilers, because I'm dying to know how on earth Copper summons a 2500 ATK monster on his first turn, and what about Zeke's 2100 ATK Normal Level 4 and two Pots of Greed? Anyway, nice job, again, but kinda doubting Zeke's efficiency as a ninja/spy/whatever, if he can't keep his mouth shut. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Randomflyingobjects Posted November 3, 2012 Author Report Share Posted November 3, 2012 Well, I did, actually. If you notice, one of these : ***** is on there. The key is *=1, so the card is 4 star. Of course, he isn't allowed to attack, as his effect said, so he's sort of a wall. And easy to get around, with the rise of Xyz monsters (whose Rank I show with a '+'), all it really does is stand as a wall, and prevent MOST Level 5 and 6 cards from hitting the field successfully. About Zeke, he's more or less the arrogant type, whose purpose of being at DA is __ ________ ___ ________ ____ __________. Sorry about the blanks- I want you to have to wait for the plot to unfold, and no, I did NOT just throw him in randomly and hope that he might give me a later plot device. And yes, he is actually good when it comes to ___________ _______ ____ ___ ________ ____ _________, ___ __________ ___ ________ ______. That's his job. If you think it's odd that the spy/ninja guy gave away so much information, don't hate him for that. Or doubt him. Actually, I [i]made [/i]him give away that information, believe it or not, to advance the plot. For Zeke, I guess he just happened to get lucky, and I needed him to have those extra cards. And I'm not really caring about the banlist in this fic. As for the 2100 ATK, it's just a tough beat-stick to give the set extra power. (Code: _=a,b,c,d,e,f,g,h,i,j,k,l,m,n,o,p,q,r,s,t,u,v,w,x,y, or z) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Randomflyingobjects Posted November 6, 2012 Author Report Share Posted November 6, 2012 Bumping for comments. If I get a couple different comments, I might post Chapter 6. So, yeah. Bump. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Randomflyingobjects Posted November 24, 2012 Author Report Share Posted November 24, 2012 Obviously, I decided to post chapter 6, (hence the title) and... hope to get some new readers, I guess? This is a B.U.M.P.!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Randomflyingobjects Posted November 26, 2012 Author Report Share Posted November 26, 2012 Bumping for comments. Please? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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