Alice Moonflowyr Posted February 29, 2012 Report Share Posted February 29, 2012 [quote name='Admiral_Stalfos19' timestamp='1330487778' post='5847297'] Personally, I found that [i]last[/i] paragraph would've been [i]much[/i] better if it had remained blunt than as it is [i]now[/i]. Not blaming you Aisu, since you [i]did[/i] have to follow the rules... just making an observation. ... *considers borrowing DK's WarHammer so I can get revenge on Rinnie* [/quote]Exactly how I feel. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Elƒie Posted February 29, 2012 Author Report Share Posted February 29, 2012 Everyone, stop being mad at Rinnie for doing his job. I respect what he does. Plus.. I don't want this thread to become locked because you guys couldn't just accept the rules. Besides, once the Chapters are revised, I'll be releasing them on deviant art as well, so the bluntness will return there. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Admiral_Stalfos19 Posted February 29, 2012 Report Share Posted February 29, 2012 I'm not mad... entirely But yeah, [i]that's[/i] the only problem I had with the chapter [i]itself[/i]. The rest of it, and the ones further back, proved to be a nice read. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dwarven King Posted February 29, 2012 Report Share Posted February 29, 2012 [quote name='Admiral_Stalfos19' timestamp='1330487778' post='5847297'] Personally, I found that [i]last[/i] paragraph would've been [i]much[/i] better if it had remained blunt than as it is [i]now[/i]. Not blaming you Aisu, since you [i]did[/i] have to follow the rules... just making an observation. ... *considers borrowing DK's WarHammer so I can get revenge on Rinnie* [/quote] Wait. I skipped the last paragraph do to me being in the RP. Therefore, I already knew about it. Message me and tell me how it originally was?[quote name='Mistress Aisu' timestamp='1330488305' post='5847315'] Everyone, stop being mad at Rinnie for doing his job. I respect what he does. Plus.. I don't want this thread to become locked because you guys couldn't just accept the rules. Besides, once the Chapters are revised, I'll be releasing them on deviant art as well, so the bluntness will return there. [/quote] Why was so much detail left out pertaining to Ferod? :< Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alice Moonflowyr Posted February 29, 2012 Report Share Posted February 29, 2012 Oh, and there was one more thing. The way you describe the way Sinn speaks makes it sound, to me anyway, like he's kinda stupid. :l Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The White Wolf Posted March 7, 2012 Report Share Posted March 7, 2012 BUMP! I just noticed something: Akarui actually has the ability to literally breathe fire, the way you wrote it... Not so much Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Elƒie Posted March 7, 2012 Author Report Share Posted March 7, 2012 SSD: I would say something to that.. But it'd give away too much for the readers who weren't in the RP.. .__. Dworkin: Well.. When someone talks little, it kinda happens.. Also.. Stalling next chapter. 1) So Lunar (Sakuya) has time to catch up with the edits. And 2) still planning out the set up. .__. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alice Moonflowyr Posted March 7, 2012 Report Share Posted March 7, 2012 You make him talk slowly. He doesnt talk slowly, just not a lot. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The White Wolf Posted March 7, 2012 Report Share Posted March 7, 2012 THEN PM ME THIS! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alice Moonflowyr Posted March 21, 2012 Report Share Posted March 21, 2012 Sooo...are we getting new chapters? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Elƒie Posted March 23, 2012 Author Report Share Posted March 23, 2012 Yes.. Just been busy with college, planning how to lay out the new chapter and waiting for the edits to come in.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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