guuu1234 Posted January 16, 2012 Report Share Posted January 16, 2012 Well that sure beats 5/10.and yeah i'm not used to new OCG. Do you know where can I find help on that on this site? The help section isn't very helpful in this case. . . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
·Toot Posted January 16, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 16, 2012 hm... imma try to find a link And here it is... http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/250644-konami-new-card-grammar-rules/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
guuu1234 Posted January 16, 2012 Report Share Posted January 16, 2012 Thanks a bunch Toot ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
·Toot Posted January 16, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 16, 2012 Anytime :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
101100111000 Posted January 16, 2012 Report Share Posted January 16, 2012 Bleh, lemme see if this card work out Lore: This card occupies 2 Monster Card Zones while face-up on the field. Once per turn: You can target 1 card your opponent controls; Tribute 1 monster you control, then destroy the target. If this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard: You can banish this card; inflict 700 Damage to your opponent. Massive Sub-Type: Massive monsters occupy _ Monster Card Zones while face-up on the field. They all occupy a minimum of 2 Zones, but can occupy more, normally depending on the number of monsters needed for a Tribute Summon (2 Tributes = 3 Zones occupied, 3 Tributes = 4 Zones occupied). Any other effects tend to focus on unoccupying your other Monster Card Zones (e.g. Tributing a monster, returning a monster to your Deck). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
·Toot Posted January 16, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 16, 2012 lol the 2 field space thing is pretty creative imo... i like it... but how would it help... link to the archetype?but its not too Op'ed... the scrap dragon effect is okay I guess... 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
101100111000 Posted January 16, 2012 Report Share Posted January 16, 2012 lol the 2 field space thing is pretty creative imo... i like it... but how would it help... link to the archetype?but its not too Op'ed... the scrap dragon effect is okay I guess... 7.5/10 I didn't make an Archetype actually, just thought of the effect, figured it'd be a cool Sub-Type, and voilà. As for the rest of the effect, I honestly don't figure if any other card's have the same effect, so I didn't think of Scrap Dragon when making this. :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shelds9 Posted January 16, 2012 Report Share Posted January 16, 2012 Mine was overlooked D: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Agro Posted January 16, 2012 Report Share Posted January 16, 2012 I'm going to start with Blue-Eyes and continue to edit as I read through: 6/10 I'm only giving you enough to get through since the card is a bad design. That being said, Toot is wrong about it. It's abusable for being a Machine-type monster. Personally, I think it allows Machines to be more versatile. Being Level 4 is great for a lot of things, and its abusability with Monk is something I like a lot, since It can change itself out for whatever level tuner or such you need. Plus Fortress can summon itself by discarding itself and this card, so using it's effect for that isn't really abusable. You're in. I give King Neptune a 1/10 for obvious reasons. Saxra is REALLY REALLY bad. I mean, that thing is abusable. You NS it and sack it to take whichever monster you choose. You could go after the weakest and take the strongest. That being said, it's only once per duel, but I won't go above 4/10 on it. 6/10 on the serpent. It needs some OCG work. Mainly: the tributing should be in front of the semicolon since that signifies the end of the cost and the beginning of the effect and tributing should be a cost. Look at "Phantom Dragon" for OCG on the monster zones. Note to everyone: Knowing other card effects and other cards in general is EXTREMELY helpful, as not knowing can lead to you making a card that can be abused by those cards, plus it also allows you to look at OCG (but remember that anything before Generation Force will have incorrect OCG and you'll have to edit it accordingly) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
guuu1234 Posted January 16, 2012 Report Share Posted January 16, 2012 The only hting i've learned form this site is that anything that has an effect even close to a meta-card, banned card, or limited card is instantly sh!ted on. STAY AWAY FROM META Cardmaking, no matter what drawbacks you have. ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Agro Posted January 16, 2012 Report Share Posted January 16, 2012 The only hting i've learned form this site is that anything that has an effect even close to a meta-card, banned card, or limited card is instantly sh!ted on. STAY AWAY FROM META Cardmaking, no matter what drawbacks you have. ^^That's not necessarily true, the point is that you're trying to make a new card, not a copy, and any new card can't do something that makes other cards completely OPed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
guuu1234 Posted January 16, 2012 Report Share Posted January 16, 2012 I see what you're saying. My card is abusable as a change of heart, which that in itself is already overpowered in today's game. combine that with ithe fact that it's easily searchable with Tour Guide, Sangan, or will get it's effect triggered with cards like foolish burial, dark grepher, aramageddon knight, etc. it becomes too powerful. Hmm good advice, i guess i'll have to start thinking outside the box. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ENMaker Posted January 16, 2012 Report Share Posted January 16, 2012 Ok sent the other 30 points..........*grumble* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Agro Posted January 16, 2012 Report Share Posted January 16, 2012 Ok sent the other 30 points..........*grumble*Post 30 times like a normal person, you'll be fine. :\ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Astolfo Posted January 16, 2012 Report Share Posted January 16, 2012 Another one:When this card is in your Graveyard, you can banish the top card in your deck; Special Summon this card to your side of the field.Wtf? Get some tuner, sync, ss this, sync again, sync again/ or xyz, then ss, then sync, etc .-.Also, want to join, but not top 50 in most points thing, and I don't think 50 friends. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zextra Posted January 16, 2012 Report Share Posted January 16, 2012 Wtf? Get some tuner, sync, ss this, sync again, sync again/ or xyz, then ss, then sync, etc .-.Also, want to join, but not top 50 in most points thing, and I don't think 50 friends.Oh, hey Stumble :3And one of the things on the "achievement list" is being Level 4 or higher, which you are. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Astolfo Posted January 16, 2012 Report Share Posted January 16, 2012 Oh, one of the following. XD I thought all.Zexy, tell me how to emboss the card name on PSD templates like a baws. :333Oh and can I haz ur template? :333 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zextra Posted January 16, 2012 Report Share Posted January 16, 2012 Aggro's gonna kick me out for spam, so...[spoiler=:3]By emboss you mean like this? Well, I'm not telling![spoiler=lol, jk. Here you are:]http://imageshack.us...0823174953.png/http://imageshack.us...0823175021.png/http://imageshack.us...0823175042.png/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Astolfo Posted January 16, 2012 Report Share Posted January 16, 2012 Tanks Zexy! But I can't get the color right and I'm OCD with this kinda stuff. Do you have the number thingamajigs for the color (too lazy to remember what they're called)?Just tried it, but still looks weird ;~; Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
·Toot Posted January 16, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 16, 2012 Aggro's gonna kick me out for spam, so...[spoiler=:3]By emboss you mean like this? Well, I'm not telling![spoiler=lol, jk. Here you are:]http://imageshack.us...0823174953.png/http://imageshack.us...0823175021.png/http://imageshack.us...0823175042.png/Oooo spam... I'm telling... wait its my club o.O lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
·Toot Posted January 16, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 16, 2012 Here is my entry. Note: I am not very familiar with the new OCG... Also, what is the fee? Cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. Cannot be Special Summoned except while there is exactly 2 LIGHT monsters and 2 DARK monsters. Once per turn during your Main Phase 2: You can Banish 1 LIGHT monster and 1 DARK monster from your Graveyard; destroy 2 cards your opponent controls, and discard 1 card from their hand.It doesn't state where the monsters have to be to summon it... in the grave? Both of the effets are a bit much... maybe destroy 1 card and discard 1? making it during the main phase doesn't help very much :36/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zextra Posted January 16, 2012 Report Share Posted January 16, 2012 For that particular card, the HTML code is #664100.As for the templates, I will release them once I:a.) put some finishing touches inb.) organizing them in proper template formc.) upload them Oooo spam... I'm telling... wait its my club o.O lol Toot, it's a contest :PAnd you're too nice to kick me out :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Agro Posted January 16, 2012 Report Share Posted January 16, 2012 Shaddup and let Daddy handle this toot. Zextra and Stumble, if you are not posting something that is either entering you into the contest or has something direct to say about the contest, then don't spam. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zextra Posted January 16, 2012 Report Share Posted January 16, 2012 Shaddup and let Daddy handle this toot. Zextra and Stumble, if you are not posting something that is either entering you into the contest or has something direct to say about the contest, then don't spam.About what I expected... Sorry, Aggro Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
·Toot Posted January 16, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 16, 2012 I knew it was a contest O.o Shaddup and let Daddy handle this toot. Zextra and Stumble, if you are not posting something that is either entering you into the contest or has something direct to say about the contest, then don't spam.:o :I Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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