NeoRWBY65 Posted January 8, 2012 Report Share Posted January 8, 2012 Dimensional Dragon DARK Rank 8 Dragon/Xyz/Effect 3 level 8 Dragon-type monsters Once per turn, you can detach 1 Xyz material from this card: Target 1 monster your opponent controls; equip it to this card. This card cannot inflict Direct Damage the turn this effect is activated. This card gains ATK equal to half the combined ATK of all monsters equipped to it. You can target 2 monsters that are equipped to this card: Tribute this card, then Special Summon the targets to your side of the field. ATK 3000/DEF 2800 Link to comment
101100111000 Posted January 8, 2012 Report Share Posted January 8, 2012 5 Level 8 Dragon-Type monsters... How many people do you know have more than 3 Level 8 Dragons? This card is practically impossible to Xyz Summon. Pointless in fact, it'd be hard enough trying to get 3 Dragons out, let alone 5. Aside from that, the first effect is somewhat ludicrous. I would understand if it was your monster, NOT your opponent's. And the next effect turns an already ridiculously high ATK and makes it go beyond the effect of "United We Stand". The last effect itself would be acceptable if you weren't Special Summoning every Monster equipped. 1 or 2, maybe, but not ALL of them. You practically made a broken card. It's hopeless trying to Summon that thing, let alone the fact that it would demolish your opponent if you did, unless (s)he luckily has "Man-Eater Bug", "Hane-Hane", or "Newdoria". Long story short; you need to work on the effects and the Xyz Summoning requirements alot more. Link to comment
NeoRWBY65 Posted January 8, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 8, 2012 [quote name='101100111000' timestamp='1326010403' post='5754148'] 5 Level 8 Dragon-Type monsters... How many people do you know have more than 3 Level 8 Dragons? This card is practically impossible to Xyz Summon. Pointless in fact, it'd be hard enough trying to get 3 Dragons out, let alone 5. Aside from that, the first effect is somewhat ludicrous. I would understand if it was your monster, NOT your opponent's. And the next effect turns an already ridiculously high ATK and makes it go beyond the effect of "United We Stand". The last effect itself would be acceptable if you weren't Special Summoning every Monster equipped. 1 or 2, maybe, but not ALL of them. You practically made a broken card. It's hopeless trying to Summon that thing, let alone the fact that it would demolish your opponent if you did, unless (s)he luckily has "Man-Eater Bug", "Hane-Hane", or "Newdoria". Long story short; you need to work on the effects and the Xyz Summoning requirements alot more. [/quote] Edited to make it a bit less powerful. Is that better? Link to comment
NeoRWBY65 Posted January 8, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 8, 2012 Its less powerful now, and has lessened requirements to summon it Link to comment
101100111000 Posted January 8, 2012 Report Share Posted January 8, 2012 [quote name='Tigerstar10' timestamp='1326053213' post='5754990'] Its less powerful now, and has lessened requirements to summon it [/quote] As a side note, never ignore the DEF stat of a card either. It's at 5000, still. Next, you need some OCG work, otherwise, all of this looks like a piled mess. Would you like to me to provide it? Link to comment
NeoRWBY65 Posted January 8, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 8, 2012 [quote name='101100111000' timestamp='1326057719' post='5755166'] As a side note, never ignore the DEF stat of a card either. It's at 5000, still. Next, you need some OCG work, otherwise, all of this looks like a piled mess. Would you like to me to provide it? [/quote] What needs to be corrected? I will correct it if you tell me Link to comment
101100111000 Posted January 8, 2012 Report Share Posted January 8, 2012 DEF : 2600-2900 Once per turn, you can detach 1 Xyz material from this card: Target 1 monster your opponent controls; equip it to this card. This card cannot inflict Direct Damage the turn this effect is activated. This card gains ATK equal to half the combined ATK of all monsters equipped to it. You can target 2 monsters that are equipped to this card: Tribute this card, then Special Summon the targets to your side of the field. Link to comment
NeoRWBY65 Posted January 8, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 8, 2012 [quote name='101100111000' timestamp='1326061008' post='5755253'] DEF : 2600-2900 Once per turn, you can detach 1 Xyz material from this card: Target 1 monster your opponent controls; equip it to this card. This card cannot inflict Direct Damage the turn this effect is activated. This card gains ATK equal to half the combined ATK of all monsters equipped to it. You can target 2 monsters that are equipped to this card: Tribute this card, then Special Summon the targets to your side of the field. [/quote] Do you think this would be better with 3 dragons, or 5 of anything at level 8? Link to comment
101100111000 Posted January 8, 2012 Report Share Posted January 8, 2012 Leave at 3 Dragons, 1% of duelists have 5 random Level 8 monsters, and none of them can put them all on the field. Link to comment
NeoRWBY65 Posted January 8, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 8, 2012 [quote name='101100111000' timestamp='1326061827' post='5755275'] Leave at 3 Dragons, 1% of duelists have 5 random Level 8 monsters, and none of them can put them all on the field. [/quote] Alright. Link to comment
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