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The Tears of The Forgotten

 

The Main Theme of "The Tears of The Forgotten"

 

http://youtu.be/9aLc3ozGr2w

 

Hi Welcome to My First RP [Not counting the Naruto One] I hope this is successful!

Read the Spoilers Please they contain all the information INCLUDING AREAS IN THE GAME!

 

[spoiler=Plot]

 

A long time ago....the warriors of the past were fighting a great war called "The War of Oricalcus".The five countries took place in this war,Azgur,Khoard-Nar,Saria,Nugul,and Necroia.Each of the five countries had one of the Master Mages..,Nair,Mage of the Mountains,Sari,Mage of the Sun,Anuk,Mage of Religion,Ter,Mage of Fire,and Kurut,Mage of the Underworld,all of them possessed the power of Oricalcus who used to belong to The Sage of Arctic.These Heroes were soon forgotten,they died along with their tears,as thus they were called The Tears of The Forgotten Mages,a new threat had been identified.The Evil Sage of Twilight is rising from his tomb..Lar..Evil Death Mages are slowly rising him, in 15 years or so..he will rise..5 years later 6 people have grown up,as thus they do not know they will be The 6 Heroes of the prophecy...The Prophecy: "Thus the heroes have been born and raised.."

"All from one of their races,as each have special powers.."

"One with the power of illusionist torture to make enemies insane"

"Another one with the power of the Ancient Arts of Necromancery"

"Thus the four other are unknown..."

"One shall die in the tomb of the west.."

"The Demon's blood one shall inherit"

"The blood of an old friend shall be used"

"The Evil Sage will be delayed,"

"As thus they have saved the day.."

"But more challenges lie ahead,as thus more shall come throughout the years..."

 

"These six heroes must save all five countries from destruction..and destroy the Evil 10 Death Mages...but also..throughout the years..they must collect The Tears of the Forgotten..."

 

"Lar will have been reborn...the old enemy of the 5 Mages..."

 

 

 

 

[spoiler=Rules]

 

1. This RP is rated PG-14 RP at your OWN risk!

2.Follow all YCM Rules!

3.No God-Modding/Powerplaying

4.No Spamming/Trolling

5.HAVE FUN!!

6.No Sexual Romance Scenes [AUTO BAN]

7.You have a chain of warnings Follow ALL Listed Rules;

WARNING>>>>>>WARNING>>>>>>Temp. Ban [24-72 Hours]>>>>>>LAST WARNING>>>PERMA BAN

 

8. Minimum Post Length – Each standard IC post should have the equivalent of at least 4 lines of text. However, a good post should have around one to two paragraphs with proper English spelling and grammar, and should have enough material for other RPers to expand and elaborate on in their own posts. (As a rule of thumb, 4 unbroken lines of text on YCM at standard size and font is roughly 100 words.)

 

9. Dialogue – Dialogue should be done in one of two ways; in quotation marks or in speech lines. Script format is prohibited, because it doesn’t allow as much description and is dull overall.

 

10. Expies – Copy-paste characters from either separate RPs or from already existing franchises, with only minor detail changes, are frowned upon. This doesn’t allow true “evolution” as a unique character.

 

11. Try not to copy from other's people's characters.

 

12.Only 6 Main Characters,First come,first serve.(I'm the guy with illusion,torture powers.)

 

13.Even though there are 6 Main characters you can also make your own battles and stories,etc.

14.This RP is supposed to be set in the fantasy middle ages so no cannons or guns.

15.Follow All of Above and as I said..HAVE FUN!!!

 

 

 

 

[spoiler= Current Story Arc]

The First Adventure Story Arc-

 

The 6 Heroes will find some sort of weird spirit as all of them are walking around,the spirits lead them to some sort of special well.

 

Other Adventurers SO FAR minding their own buisness

 

 

 

 

[spoiler=App]

 

Name: [Easy,Super Easy,Include a first and last name middle name optional]

Age: [Ages vary for the race for the 6 prophecy people,it should be in range; [16-19]...]

Race:[Elves,Warlocks,Humans,Drows,Etc.. ask for hybrids AND NO WEREPYRES]

Weapons:[You can have up to 5 Weapons;Be realistic assassin's should NOT have Big swords]

Powers:[it Varies as I said before try to be realistic,no stupid powers,and all four Elements are accepted if your an Elementist,if not only 1 Element.It Varies, up to 2 powers]

 

Personaility:[3 Lines at Least,describe your character as best as you can]

 

Appearance:[i Suggest Spoiling this along with your Bio;Photo or Vivid Description [Or Both]

 

Bio:[As I said Spoil this with your Bio or alone at LEAST 4 lines please]

 

Skills:[Things such as Stealthy,Speedy,Strong,Insane,etc.Up to 3]

 

*No Werepyres please*

*Copy And Paste the App,remove everything in brackets*

 

 

 

 

[spoiler=Accepted Prophecy Character Apps]

[spoiler=Aragon45000's App]

Name: Suki Narimora

Age:18

Race:Half-Demon Half-Human [Though Not Aware of it though]

 

Weapons:A Black Encrusted Chain Sickle with a beautiful silver blade,Dark Blue encrusted ninja like armor [When in battle] Black short-sleeve under in light grey armor with dark blue pants [in Peace/Casual] Throwing Knives,Silver Sword

 

Powers: Power of the Prophecy; Power of Illusionist Torture;This sending the enemy trapped into a torture of mind this power would affect the enemy in the mind instead of the body causing the enemy to die of the brain or make them go insane. The state of the power could be in any form as in burning in black fire,being stabbed multiple times chained to wall,Crows eating them slowly and slowly,and many other torture like mind attacks,the only weakness to this would be blindness and not to look the user in the eyes..

 

Personality: Suki is a calm person when in peace perfect to hang around with but in battle he's a demon [sometimes literally] he also will fight without his armor if needed most of the time he doesn't need it,all he needs is his eyes,he never had many friends either,because of his powers,it feels more like a curse to him,he wishes to have friends,but he knows that he will someday..

 

 

[spoiler=Appearance]

 

[spoiler=Battle Suit]

 

http://media.giantbo...swa_hattori.jpg

 

 

 

 

[spoiler=Casual]

 

http://1.bp.blogspot...Uchiha+Anbu.jpg

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Skills:Stealthy,Speedy,Strong.

 

[spoiler=Bio]

 

Suki was born into a family of farmers in Azgur. As a kid he was happy and carefree working with his parents by helping them plant seeds and plow.Later when he was 10,at night,his family was murdered all he saw was a man covered all in black holding some sort of staff.He moved in with his uncle and aunt who where normal citizens in Azgur he would always help aunt with chores,living with pain and sorrow until the end of his life. At Age 13 the same man broke into his uncle's and aunt's home,but this time he was wearing his light grey armor,his silver sword sheathed behind his back,unexpectedly his eyes turned red,black comma shaped figures around his pupil,he would see himself torturing the intruder,continuously pecked at crows,eventually he let go,the man collapsing barely to escape alive in a figure of shadow,he would then know his power,but not about the prophecy.Up until now he still lives with pain and sorrow..he still lives with his uncle and aunt,clueless about the prophecy.....

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

[spoiler=My App]

 

Name: Suki Narimora

Age:18

Race:Half-Demon Half-Human [Though Not Aware of it though]

 

Weapons:A Black Encrusted Chain Sickle with a beautiful silver blade,Dark Blue encrusted ninja like armor [When in battle] Black short-sleeve under in light grey armor with dark blue pants [in Peace/Casual] Throwing Knives,Silver Sword

 

Powers: Power of the Prophecy; Power of Illusionist Torture;This sending the enemy trapped into a torture of mind this power would affect the enemy in the mind instead of the body causing the enemy to die of the brain or make them go insane. The state of the power could be in any form as in burning in black fire,being stabbed multiple times chained to wall,Crows eating them slowly and slowly,and many other torture like mind attacks,the only weakness to this would be blindness and not to look the user in the eyes..

 

Personality: Suki is a calm person when in peace perfect to hang around with but in battle he's a demon [sometimes literally] he also will fight without his armor if needed most of the time he doesn't need it,all he needs is his eyes,he never had many friends either,because of his powers,it feels more like a curse to him,he wishes to have friends,but he knows that he will someday..

 

 

[spoiler=Appearance]

 

[spoiler=Battle Suit]

 

http://media.giantbo...swa_hattori.jpg

 

 

 

 

[spoiler=Casual]

 

http://1.bp.blogspot...Uchiha+Anbu.jpg

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Skills:Stealthy,Speedy,Strong.

 

[spoiler=Bio]

 

Suki was born into a family of farmers in Azgur. As a kid he was happy and carefree working with his parents by helping them plant seeds and plow.Later when he was 10,at night,his family was murdered all he saw was a man covered all in black holding some sort of staff.He moved in with his uncle and aunt who where normal citizens in Azgur he would always help aunt with chores,living with pain and sorrow until the end of his life. At Age 13 the same man broke into his uncle's and aunt's home,but this time he was wearing his light grey armor,his silver sword sheathed behind his back,unexpectedly his eyes turned red,black comma shaped figures around his pupil,he would see himself torturing the intruder,continuously pecked at crows,eventually he let go,the man collapsing barely to escape alive in a figure of shadow,he would then know his power,but not about the prophecy.Up until now he still lives with pain and sorrow..he still lives with his uncle and aunt,clueless about the prophecy.....

 

 

 

 

 

 

Here are all the areas for all the countries,PM me for more ideas.

[spoiler=Azgur]

 

The Fields of Azgur-These fields are usually where farmers dwell,rarely do monsters show up

 

Azgurnia-The Main city of Azgur,It's a big bustling castle town with many shops,taverns,and statues.

 

The Border-This is the border between Azgur and Saria,both great allies now,tolls are necessary to pass through the border

 

The Iron Bar-The Main Tavern in Azgurnia

 

The Bronze Medallion-The Main Blacksmith in Azgurnia

 

The Well-The Place where the 6 heroes will meet up,also a place where to throw in bronze coins to wish,in Azgurnia

 

Nigur & Rugin-The Twin cities 10 miles south of Azgurnia

 

The Old Tavern-Main Tavern in Nigur & Rugin,on the border of the two towns

 

The Golden Hand-Main Blacksmith in Nigur & Rugin,on the border of the two towns

 

 

 

[spoiler=Necroia]

 

The Swamp of Necromancers-An evil but famous swamp right in the middle of Necroia

 

Necro-Tar - So far the only known city in Necroia,enemy of Azgur

 

The Iron Hinge- Main Blacksmith in Necro-Tar

 

Tavern of Necra-Main Tavern in Necro-Tar

 

 

 

 

[spoiler=Saria]

 

Sacred Grove-A Beautiful forest that has a secret passage leading into the grove,rumors say that one of the mages were buried there

 

Nevle-The only city in Saria,it streaches 75% of the country,also famous of Elves

 

Elva-Statue of a Female elf,in center of Nevle

 

Maru-Takana -Elvish for The Main Tavern,Main Tavern in Nevle

 

Plunot-Neri -Elvish for Silver Hand,Main Blacksmith in Nevle

 

Forest of Peace-Where most Wood elves live now,it is suggested to go here for healing.

 

The Border/Field of Adventures-The Border is near the Field of Adventures;the city people say is where all the adventurers in Saria started their adventure.

 

 

 

[spoiler=Khorad-Nar]

 

The Great Western Desert-It Covers 60% of Khorad-Nar,a desert where you see caravans moving to and fro

nasty sandstorms come twice a year,luckily

 

Khorad-Nur - The Main city in Khorad-Nar,it's a bustling town with many markets and caravans

 

Nuru-Kanar - The Main Tavern in Khorad-Nur

 

The Great Jhen - This is a statue which lies in the middle of Khorad-Nur.

 

Kari-Koro-The Main Blacksmith in Khorad-Nur

 

Nariko Village - Probably the only terrain thats grass,this town has no blacksmith

 

Kanara-Naimar - The Main Tavern in Nariko Village

 

 

 

[spoiler=Nugul]

 

Nira - The Main town in Nugul,this is considered as another castle town,but a smaller one,its streets are paved with stone

 

Lugun-The Main Blacksmith in Nugul,only blacksmith that can forge The Legendery Torturer's Sword

 

Lugin - The Main Tavern in Nira

 

Zermakeiya - The City closest to Azgur,this city has the only tavern that knows about one of the mages

 

Zeerma- Main Blacksmith in Zermakeiya

 

Zari-Main Tavern in Zermakeiya

 

Amreez Village - City 4 Miles West to Zeerma,strangely has no taverns or blacksmiths..

 

General Sundries Shop - Where you can usually buy supplies for journeys

 

Vacant Houses - Used like a hotel,50 Gold pieces for permanent buying,15 gold pieces for renting per Vacant houses

 

 

 

Next are the Alliances for each of the five countries

 

[spoiler= Country Alliances]

 

Azgur -- Saria [Ally] -- Khorad-Nar [Neutral,discussing Alliance] -- Necroia [Enemy] -- Nugul [Enemy]

 

Saria -- Azgur [Ally] --Khorad-Nar [Neutral,discussing Alliance] -- Necroia [Enemy] -- Nugul [Enemy]

 

Khorad-Nar -- Saria [Ally] -- Azgur [Neutral,discussing Alliance] -- Necroia [Enemy] -- Nugul [Neutral]

 

Necroia -- Nugul [Ally] -- Khorad Nur [Enemy] -- Saria [Enemy] -- Azgur [Enemy]

 

Nugul -- Necroia [Ally] -- Khorad Nur -- [Neutral] -- Saria [Enemy] -- Azgur [Enemy]

 

 

 

 

Almost done! Here is the last spoiler these are where the countries are located!

 

[spoiler=Location]

 

The whole world is divided into five countries;Azgur,Saria,Khorad-Nar,Necroia,and Nugul.

Starting with Azgur, it is located to the very east of the imaginary land box,it covers 30% of the map,making it a strong ally.Saria covers the other 30% of the map,it is located in north from Azgur.Necroia and Nugul cover 20% of the map together,they are in the middle of the land making them vulnerable to attacks from any countries.Last but not least we have Khorad-Nar,Khorad-Nar is located to the very west,bordering with Necroia.The rest is water and unexplored land other lands might come soon!

 

 

 

 

 

Thank you,be sure to join and remember 5 more slots for prophecy characters!

P.S Sorry that i could not make a map for the Locations it wouldn't let me!

 

Oh Here's another rule I WANT to leave out here NO NECROBUMPING > :( I worked really hard on this RP. Aaaand... I hope I don't get banned for this -.-\

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Guest Charlotte The Witch

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I'm sorry. I don't understand what you mean.

In fact, that's my main issue with this RP.

It's very hard to understand anything because of the errors.

I would suggest switching to Firefox. It has a built-in spellchecker.

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Guest Ongaku Matsuri

Guest Ongaku Matsuri

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Have you not listened to Charlotte's advice? Fix you're grammar and overall quality of the original post.

 

Regardless, bumping the thread 4 times in a row usually means that no one is interested in joining. As far as I've seen, you've done the same thing for a few others with little difference in success. So my advice would be to either let it die or have it locked to avoid it being necrobumped.

 

I hope I'm not backseat modding by posting this. If so, Rinne, I apologize.

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Chaotic Angel Newbie

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What's with all the bumps and bad grammar? And this thread looks like it's been necro'd.

 

My suggestion: Remake another one and reinvent it. It looks like no one will join this, and I don't intend to either.

 

Without further ado, do you have any questions about this before I get someone to lock this?

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